高中英语2025届高考建议信写作指导.doc
高考英语建议信写作指导【任务呈现】假定你是李华，你收到你班交换生Alex的电子邮件，他下个月要在中国旅游10天，他在跟团游和独自旅行问题上犹豫不决，想听一下你的建议。请你根据以下要点给他回复一封电子邮件：1.向对方提出旅行方式建议并说明理由；2.希望采纳建议并表达祝愿。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【写作步骤】一、任务分析1.审题：确定文章的人称和时态根据写作任务可知，李华需要在跟团游和独自旅行问题上向Alex提出建议，故人称以第二人称为主；时态以一般现在时为主。2.确定文章结构此建议信的正文可以分为三段。第一段：表明收到对方邮件，并向对方提出旅行方式的建议；第二段：陈述理由；第三段：希望对方采纳建议并表达祝愿。二、词语、句子罗列1.词语(1) 关于；至于 as for(2) 旅行方式 ways of traveling(3) 其一；一方面 for one thing(4) 其二；另一方面 for another(5) 给某人机会做某事 give sb.the chance to do sth.(6) 作决定 make decisions/make up ones mind (7) 独自地；独立地 on ones own(8) 在某种意义上；在某种程度上 in a way(9) 体验一个地方 experience a place(10) 确保安全 make sure of ones safety 2.句子(1) 关于旅行方式，我建议你选择独自旅行。As for ways of traveling, I suggest that you choose to travel alone.(2) 一方面，你将有更多的自由来探寻你感兴趣的地方。For one thing, youll have more freedom to explore the places that interest you.For one thing, youll have more freedom to explore the places that you are interested in.(3) 另一方面，独自旅行给了你更加了解自己的机会。For another, traveling alone gives you the chance to learn/know more about yourself.For another, youll have/get the chance to learn/know more about yourself by traveling alone.(4) 在某种意义上，独自旅行是体验一个地方最有趣和最流行的方式之一。In a way, traveling alone is one of the most interesting and popular ways to experience a place.(5) 你一定要记住，独自旅行时重要的是确保安全。You must remember its important to make sure of your safety when youre traveling alone.三、扩充要点，连词成句Dear Alex, Im excited to learn that you are going to travel in China for ten days next month.As for ways of traveling, I suggest that you choose to travel alone.For one thing, youll have more freedom to explore the places that interest you.For another, traveling alone gives you the chance to learn more about yourself.Youll learn to be more independent and make decisions on your own.In a way, traveling alone is one of the most interesting and popular ways to experience a place.Last but not least, you must remember its important to make sure of your safety when youre traveling alone.I hope youll find this suggestion useful.Wish you a pleasant journey. Yours sincerely, Li Hua【套用句式】开头段I am sorry to hear/learn that There are some advice/tips/suggestions for you.You asked me for my advice/suggestions on , and I will try to make/give you some advice/suggestions.I am writing in reply to I am writing to share my suggestions with you.Now Im writing to give you some advice/suggestions.I am writing to express my views about In my opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following advice/suggestions.As far as Im concerned/From my point of view, you should When it comes to , I would like to suggest 主体段For one thing For another /On the one hand On the other hand In the first place/First/FirstlySecondly/Second/Besides/In addition Whats more/Last but not least I would like to advise/suggest that I think it would be helpful if you could In my opinion, youd better/you may as well It would be a good idea if Why not ?结尾段I hope that you will find these suggestions/this advice helpful/practical/useful.I hope you can take my advice/suggestions into account/consideration.I would be more than happy to see your improvement in I would be ready to discuss this matter with you in detail.If there is anything else I can do for you, please let me know as soon as possible.If you need more help, please let me know.2
