届高三英语二轮复习书面表达专项练习（21）名题精练.docx

要求如下：L从以上两种做法中选择一种；2.以具体事例阐述你选择的理由。注意：短文中，不得以任何形式透露地区、学校、同学姓名等真实信息。否则，按考试作弊行为认定。(8)写作一(满分15分)请就以下话题，按要求用英文写作。If you could give your younger self one piece of advice, what would you say?要求：(1)作出回答并说出理由；(2)词数不少于60； (3)在答题卡上做答。【参考答案及解析】Dear Ms Cher,I'm Li Huaa student from Class2Grade 3. I'm writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer.I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability, communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public.As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua彳薪】本题考查提纲作文。本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示可知需要结合“英语文化节”的一则招募 启事写一封应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；2、that句型、插入语besides等,根据写作要点从三个方面写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子 的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。文中使用了定语从句、 本文结构紧凑，层次分明。Hi, Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it. I think I'm fit for it. As a student, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition, I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So I'm quite confident thatl can help you learn Mandarin.Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the saying goes, practice makes perfect. Besides, you can also read some books in Chinese, see some Chinese films and listen to some Chinese radio programmes. Speaking and listening are very important for a language learning, by which you are sure to make great progress.English.West, you say you can teach English as a reward. It is just what I want. Km eager to improve my English. So, if you allow me to help you learn Mandarin, you can also help me improve my English.We can contact each other by video chat every night for half an hour in English and half an hour in Chinese, so that we can improve our oral speaking.Hope for you early reply!Yours Sincerely,Li Xia【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。写作时需注意以下几点：1.审题，即审要求、审文体、审人称、审时态。 2.要抓住中心，列出要点及提纲。范文恰当地使用了定语从句和表语从句，同时还使用了大量的短语，文 章上下文连贯，逻辑顺畅，是一篇好范文。第一节 DNA DetectionWe can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it. It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.【解析】对于基础写作用5个句子概括医疗新技术，要求必须用上所有的要点，不能遗漏。对于概括短文 大意，要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。2.根据要 表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态及一般将来时。3.注意使用高级词汇 和句式，以增加文章的亮点。Learning that you are organizing this activity to share books worldwide, I am writing to apply for it for the simple reason that I love reading and I own a large number of books.You've introduced two ways to share books: wild release and controlled release. Of the two, the latter wins my favor. By the means of controlled release, I only need to deliver books to other participants, not only are books shared but it can build up a bridge connecting readers from different parts of the world as well.If you could provide more specific information, I would be well grateful. Looking forward to your reply.【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文，首先表明写信目的：申请参加该活动所给范文语言简洁；其次，选择一种 分享方式：二者选一；然后阐述理由；最后结尾，添加希望。本文使用了短语apply for, Looking forward to, 并恰当地使用了同位语从句和部分倒装，时态运用准确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figurines. When the craftsman came into the classroom, we gave him a warm welcome and two boys helped him with the tool box. First, he showed us the basic steps and skills of making dough figurines. We stood around him and watched attentively. Then we started to have a try ourselves. The old man walked around and helped us patiently.Finally, we put the figurines we made on the table and took pictures with the old craftsman. Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.We hope we can have more activities of this kind!【解析】本文是图表类记叙文，用四幅图的形式展现了一个活动的过程，体裁为记叙文。范文使用了 FgThen, Finally等来衔接句子和段落，表示事情发生的时间顺序，使作文更有条理，做到了行文连贯。全文用 的是一般过去时，注意了文章上下文时态保持一致的原则。范文使用了一些重要的语法知识：非谓语动词 Looking at the figurines, we were all very excited.: 定语从句 we put the figurines we made on the table.； 时间 状语从句When the craftsman came into the dassroom语法知识使用得当叙事清晰。Sally was a teacher, who taught some students full of problems. The students didn't follow the school rules. Therefore, she made the rules for them. Later they made great progress.In our class, some students don/t work hard and often fight with each other. I will tell them some stories about hard-working people. I will make a study plan to encourage them to study work. I put up some sayings on the walls to remind them to do so. I will explain to them that studying hard is very important. They aren't allowed to fight at school. In this way, students have a good habit. Most of the students follow the school rules and study work. They will respect teachers and other classmates. They will have good manners and confidence. Later they will get better grades.【解析】本题考查提纲作文。文章恰当地使用了定语从句、宾语从句等句式，副词therefore的使用使文章 内容更有层次感，也使得语言更加连贯。本文结构紧凑，层次分明，是一篇不错的范文。When I Have a Different OpinionWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities. We may have various ways to deal with such a situation. When I have a better idea, I would choose to stick to it. By doing so, I can not only share good ideas with others but also learn to express myself clearly.Once we were discussing where to go for an outing. Most of my classmates wanted to go to a park while I had an idea of going to a nicer peace. I managed to persuade my classmates into accepting my idea. We did have a good time that day. Good opinions are worth sticking to because they can benefit us all.An alternative student version:When I Have a Different OpinionWe may have different opinions in organizing class activities. When I have a different opinion, I may choose to give it up and respect the opinion of the majority.The main reason for my choice is that being brought up in a culture emphasizing collectivism; I tend to sacrifice my own interest for the group benefit. Once we were left to decide whether to have a picnic in a park or go to a museum. I would love to go to a museum, but most of my classmates wanted to go for a picnic. Without hesitation, I decided to follow them and we did have lots of fun that day. Sometimes giving up a little can mean getting more.【解析】本文正确使用了表语从句、定语从句、宾语从句以及强调句等句型，正确使用了使用了大量习语 和短语 > 如 not only .but also. ., be worth doing sth; stick to sth.; have a good time; have lots of fun; tend to do 等。文章总体上结构紧凑，层次分明，是一篇不错的文章。Were I three years younger than I am now, I would strongly recommend that I set more practical and specific goals. As an old saying goes, living without a clear and achievable aim is like sailing without a compass. Compared with many abstract objectives, practical ones can bring us more courage and confidence whenever we make one step forward. If only I could go back and reset my goals.【解析】本题考查开放性作文写作，给考生自由发挥的余地较大。范文正确使用了宾语从句，主语从句， 条件状语从句等，并使用了并列结构not only, butas well以及虚拟语气。结尾部分用表达了对“回不到过 去”的惋惜。总体上来说本文结构紧凑，层次分明，是一篇不可多得的好文章。