英语六级写作8——综合改错.docx

1. has2. indirectly3. on4. so5. planets6. mind7. much8. Considering9. 包arriving at/reaching英语六级写作8综合改错Passage 2Until the very latest moment of his existence, man has been bound to the planet on which be originated and developed. Now he had the capability to leave that planet and move out into the universe to those worlds which he had known previously only directly. Men have explored parts of the moon, put spaceships in orbit around another planet and possibly within the decade w川 land into another planet and explore it. Can we be too bold as to suggest that we may be able to colonize other planet within the not-too-distant future? Some have advocated such a procedure as a solution to the population problem: ship the excess people off to the moon. But we must keep in head the billions of dollars we might spend in carrying out the project. To maintain the earth's population at its present level, we would have to blast off into space 7,500 people every hour of every day of the year.Why are we spending so little money on space exploration? Consider the great need for improving many aspects of the global environment, one is surely justified in his concern for the money and resources that they are poured into the space exploration efforts. But perhaps we should look at both sides of the coin before arriving hasty conclusions.10.1. as2. Some3. and4.5. 之前加an6. which7. nonessential8. 之后加to9. basedPassage 3Most people work to earn a living and they Produce goods and services. Goods are either agricultural (like maize) or manufactured (like cars). Services are such things like education, medicine, and commerce. These people provide goods; some provide services. Other people provide both goods or services. For example, in the same garage a man may buy a car or some service which helps him maintain his car.The work people do is called as economic activity. All economic activities taken together make up the economic system of town, a city, a country, or the world. Such economic system is the sum-total of what people do and what they want. The work people do either provides what they need or provides the money with that they can buy essential commodities. Of course, most people hope to have enough money to buy commodities and services which are essential but which provide some particular personal satisfaction, such as toys for children, visits the cinema, and books.The science of economist is basis upon the facts of our everyday lives. Economists study our everyday lives and the general life of our communities in order to understand the whole economic system of which we are a part. They try to describe the facts of the economy in which we live, and to explain how it works. The economist methods should of course bestrictly objective and scientific.Passage 4British people don't drink as many tea as they used to, but Great Britain still takes almost twenty- five per cent of all world exports of the commodity. The world largest producers of tea are India, China and the Sri Lanka.The quantity of tea is affected by the climate, by the latitude at which it is grown and also by that part of the tea bush is plucked. In fact, as Dominic Beddard, a tea taster, tells us, favour can even depend on which day the leaf is plucked: 叮here are very considerable differences between teas from the same estate made on different day," he says.Processing tea is a complicated procedure. After the green leaf has been plucked, it is processed in a factory. Quickly and carefully, the tea is reduced to a small brittle particle, which is then dried and looks like the tea you see in a packet. The tea companies then rely on tasters as Donimic to value the tea. This has to be done on a day-to-day basis because of fluctuations in quality. Having to taste up to six hundred cups of tea a day certainly causes Dominic's job an unusual one!1. much2. world's3. 包4. quaHty5. which6. flavour7. days8. slowly9. 之前加such10. makestake = account for 9题或者把as改成like cause sb. to domake sb sth不是双宾语，而是宾语和补语Passage 5Parents can be supportive of suspicions. They can be helpful to the teacher, or are in need of help themselves. Sometimes, I think parents are too hard to their children. I have seen many parents of this kind. I often have the problem of parents coming in and telling me what they really treat their kids. They tell me that they usually stand over their kinds when they do their homework. They check their work and make big fuss over the grades. They criticize the kids over everything having to do with school. My response usually is: "well, you know, he is really a good kid. He is fine in my class. Maybe you should not be too strict with them.”1. be2. on3. how4. 之前加“a"5. him6. professional7. that8. better9. onWe want parents to realize the fact that teachers are professors at working with children. They have observed many children and many parents. Because of this, and because of their specialized training, teachers can be realistic about children. Teachers know whether parents want their children to do well and to behave well. But teachers know less what children should be able to do at different ages and stages. They don't expect the 8-year-olds to do the work that can only be done by the 12-year-olds. Parents, in the contrary, often expect their children to do what is usually beyond their age and ability. Obviously, this may make great harm to the children's development.stand over密切监视某人what后面必须缺少主语或者宾语make a big fuss 大惊小怪Passage 6Thus you experience success as you complete each chapter. While you have completed the overall goal, you know you have progressed toward it.Passage 7 although the tremendous amounts of money, time and energy giving over to oral health.Although后面必须接句子Critics, on the other hand, slam the profession. It can be conservatively estimated that at least 15 percent of United States dentists are incompetent, honest, or both, says a formerPassage 8All these tokens of success are in a sense merely bribes provided by another person. Therefore, they can be effective and useful.in a sense 某种意义上Passage 95. haven't3. despite10. dishonest10. HoweverButIt is not just in academy that children are been pushed too far and too fast. Some parents start their preschool8.之前加“that”We need to abandon the false notions that we can create exceptional children by early instruction and such children are symbols of our competence as parents.