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湖北省黄冈市2014高考英语作文训练题连载（5）及参考范文【浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷】书面表达（满分30分）假设你是高中学生王敏，当你听说当地政府打算把你所在的有着百年历史的老学校从市中心 迁至郊区时，你决定给市长写一封信表达你，的想法。你的信必须满足以下要求：1 .简述你写信的目的及你对此事的观点；2 .说明你的理由。Dear Sir,Wang Ming,A student of xxx School【参考范文】书面表达A possible versionDear Sir,It is said that our local government ris going to move our school to the suburb. I am now writing to express my opinion that it is more advisable to keep the school where it is.For one thing, it is more convenient for both students and teachers to get to the present school which is located in the center of the city. If it is moved to the suburb, it surely will bring students, especially their parents, much trouble.For another, as a school with a history of one hundred years, her value mainly lies in the signs left by time. We can put up new buildings and plant new trees, but we cannot rebuild such reminders of memory.Therefore, I suggest the school not be moved.rWang Ming,A student of xxx School【陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟考试】书面表达（满分30分）.假如你是李华，请你根据以“老人摔倒你会扶吗？ ”为主题的班会调查结果及你自己的意见 给英语周报写一篇演讲稿，要点如下：建曲L既%的人认融RAM-2,酬3.不怕"注意：L总词数不少于100； 2,开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名 称。Ladies and gentlemen,Will you help the old when he/she falls down on the street? A recent survey from our class meeting shows that【答案】Ladies出MgwM0nM版 you 方即 old w加爪 he/she jlilkdbw?z on f加? 4 定c&il皿n%/血冽 our class meeti愧Hiows 地。/eighty percent of the students think they are 矶ire to help the old fa，en down on the street because saving life is first things first. Fifteen percent cf the students sav whether they help cr not depends on the drcunistances. However, five percent bold the view that the old shouldn' t be helped. Why not? First, they lack the knowledge of first aid, not knowing how to deal with the situation. Second, they are afraid of gettiiig into trouble.In my opinion, we should help each othm especially the old people. Please remember "respect the old" is one of our best traditions. Everyone will become old, and if such a ase occurs to us one day when we re old, I will say I do need your help. Thank you!【解析】试题分析：本文属于提纲短文，话题为：“老人摔倒你会扶吗？ “同时这也是一篇议论文，使用第三人称和一 般现在时。要点：1.部分同学认为应该去扶，因为救死扶伤是中华美德。2.部分人认为不能扶,因为我们缺 乏急救知识，反而会带来更大的问题。而且有些人因为扶人而被额讹诈。3.个人观点：应该去扶摔倒的老人。 苜先要选怪自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内,选择句式时要赋予变化,因为这样你才可以更好.的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，如besides, further, last but not Least等。在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的 档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。【亮点说明】本文的亮点在于连接词的使用，让整个文章成为了一个有机的整体。如However. Why not? Firsts Second> In my opinion等等；同时句中还有一些高级的句式，如such a case occurs to us one day when we' re old 中的定语从句 when we' re oldo在以后的写作中 一定要注意这些技巧的使用。考点：考察提纲短文说明文型基础写作11专题导读说明文是用简洁的文字介绍事物的特性、构造、变化或结果的文章。高考中，说明文常见的 话题有：产品介绍、地点描述、方位描写、变化分析、购物指南和操作说明等。近几年的说 明文主要是及时性的说明文。写作这类文章需注意以下几点：1 .首先要读题审题，弄清需要介绍的内容，把握信息要点，不可遗漏也不能添加。2 .写作内容要条理清楚，层次分明。说明科技方面的内容常用定义法、比较对比法、分 类法和因果法等；说明自然环境方面的内容常用时空次序法与分类法等。3 .时态常用一般现在时，当然若是介绍其历史时，要用一般过去时；语态可能用到被动 语态；若是介绍地点环境等，要善于运用there be结构。真题典例【2011 广东卷】以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道。基本信息：(1)书名:Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother(2)作者：Amy Chua,美籍华人，耶鲁*大学教授(3)出版时间：2010年内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事效应：引发了中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论相关报道：中文版：2011年初开始在中国销售意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法最新消息：17岁的大女儿已被哈佛*和耶鲁录取*耶鲁：Yale； *哈佛：Harvard 真题典例【写作内容】根据以上信息写一篇图书介绍，内容包括：1 .图书的基本信息；2 .图书的相关报道。【写作要求】只能用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。Version 1：A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua was published in 2010.It tells how the author, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Its publication has started a debate as to which way of parenting is superior, the traditional Chinese way or the American way. It is reported that the Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011. Unexpecrtedly, the majority of mothers in China disagree with the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to have got offers from both Harvard and Yale.Version 2：A book entitled Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother was published in 2010.Its author is Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale, who tells stories in her book about how she educated her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way. Ever since its publication, a heated discussion has been around about whether the Chinese way of educating is better than the American way. The Chinese version of the book began to sell in China early 2011, but surprisingly most Chinese mothers do not agree to Amy Chua' s way of parenting. A recent report says that Amy' s elder daughter,17, has been accepted by both Harvard and Yale.新题预测【写作内容】请根据以下内容提示写一篇欢迎辞。假定英国客人琼斯(Jones)夫妇将到你校参观访问，他们将把一批图书和电脑作为礼物送给你 们。你们将送一幅中国画给他们。现在要你准备一篇欢迎辞(speech),内容包括以下几点：(1)欢迎英国客人来参观我校；感谢他们送的礼物；简单介绍你们学校的情况：学校有90年的历史，现在有两座教学楼、一座实验楼、一个 图书馆和一个大运动场；,教师工作认真，学生学习努力；欢迎客人在参观后提出建议，以改进学校工作。【写作要求】1 .只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2 .开头和结尾已写好，不计入总句数。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。One possible version：Ladies and gentlemen, teachers and students,I have the honoux to make a speech to welcome the respected British guests 一 Mr Jones and Mrs Jones.Firstly, thank you very much for your giftsa lot of books and computers and in return we' 11 send you a famous Chinese picture as a present.Our school is a big one with a history of 90 years. Now it has been equipped with two teaching buildings, a laboratory building, a library, and a playground. The teachers are strict in their work and students study hard. After you have been shown around our school, we hope you' 11 give us advice on how to improve our work so that we can run our school better.Wish you have a good time in our school.Thank you!【陕西省咸阳市2014高考英语模拟试题】书面表达(满分30分)假定你是李华，当你看到公益广告片鼓励人们常回家看看，向父母表达“爱”时，你很有感触。请以Ways to express love to parents为题，写一篇英语演讲稿.提示：1 .在父母生日时，当面向他们说“我爱你们”；2 .经常关心父母的生活和身体健康状况；3 .注意：L总词数不少于100;2 .开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3 .不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Ways to express love to my parentsAfr dear fellows tToday I'd like t。talk aboul”呼，o express /oveour parents.力s everyone Arnows, recently people are encouraged by public service adverlisinN onTV 21go home，o see iheir parenls and express iheir love to them.【参考范文】One possible version:Ways to express love to parentsMy dear fellows,Today I' d like to talk about ways to express love to our parents.As everyone knows, recently people have been encouraged by public service advertising on TV to go home to see their parents and express their love to them. As a middle school student, I feel moved every time I see it.As far as I am concerned, there are various ways to express love to our parents. First, it is necessary to remember their birthdays, and expressing our wishes to them is a good way to let them know how we love them. Besides, we have the duty to care for the condition of their life and health. Most importantly, we should often help our parents as much housework as we can, particularly when they are tired.No matter what we do, remember showing respect for our parents is one of the Chinese traditional moral values.Thank you!