专题13 -2021年天津卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析.docx

专题13-2021年天津卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析【试题再现第一次笔试】假设你是晨光中学的李津。我市为外国友人提供生活信息的某英文网站新增了最美中华栏目，请你给该栏目投稿，介绍一个国内你喜欢或去过的地方。内容包括：（1）该地方的基本情况（如名称、地理位置等）：（2）该地方的特色（如文化、景点等）（3）你对该地方的印象和感受。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯。【试题解读】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态： 一般现在时 结构：总分法第一段是文章的总起段，说明四川省有很多著名的景点；第二段介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程，第三部分说明你对该地方的印象和感受。要求：1. 说明四川省有很多著名的景点四川的地理位置：中国西南部著名景点：九寨沟、都江堰灌溉工程2. 介绍景点九寨沟和都江堰灌溉工程 九寨沟是自然保护区给人印象最深的层层叠叠的瀑布和五颜六色的湖泊，有很多珍稀动植物都江堰灌溉工程始于2000多年前，现在仍然起着灌溉的作用3. 你对该地方的印象和感受：九寨沟的美景和都江堰灌溉工程的建造会让你惊叹第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） be located in；world-famous；places of interest；a nature reserve ；impressive；multi-level waterfalls；have a chance to do；rare animals；scenic spot；date from；play an important part in；be amazed by 第三步：连词成句(1) Sichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. (2) It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation project.(3)Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. (4) What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. (5) Walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals such as giant pandas, golden monkeys. (6) There are many species of rare plants protected here. (7) Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. (8) It dates from over 2,000 years ago. (9) It is still playing an important part in irrigation today. (10) Im sure the visitors will be amazed by its construction. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。【满分范文欣赏1】A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19,2021 By Li JinOne possible versionA Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch 19,2021 By Li JinTianjin, a beautiful city on the Haihe River, is located in the north of China next to the capital city of Beijing.With a long history and rich cultural traditions,Tianjin attracts tourists from both home and abroad.There are a lot of places of interest. The Ancient Culture Street is well known for the beautiful arts and crafts that reflect the wisdom and creativity of the local people.The Tianjin Eye, which stands over the Haihe River gives an amazing view of the city. Other places worth visiting include the Water Park in the city center and the Huang ya guan Great Wall in Jizhou District.What impresses me most is the friendly and optimistic people living here. They are working hard to make the city a more beautiful place.【满分范文欣赏2】A Beautiful Place in ChinaMarch19, 2021By LiJinSichuan Province is located in southwestern part of China. It enjoys many world-famous places of interest, such as Jiuzhaigou and Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.Jiuzhaigou National Park is a nature reserve in the north of Sichuan Province. What is the most impressive is its many multi-level waterfalls and colorful lakes. Whats more, walking in the nature reserve, you have a chance to see rare animals like giant pandas, golden monkeys. There are also many species of rare plants protected here. Another famous scenic spot is Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. It dates from over 2,000 years ago. However, it is still playing an important part in irrigation today.Im sure the visitors will be amazed by the beautiful scenery in Jiuzhaigou as well as the construction Dujiangyan Irrigation Project.【试题再现第二次考试】假定你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：（1）表示感谢并问候；（2）计划与家人一起做的事情；（3）你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。【试题解读】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你在英国游学期间曾寄宿在英国学生Chris家，他母 亲Nancy通过电子邮件祝贺你顺利完成高中学业，并询问你将如何安排高中最后一 个假期。请你用英语回复，内容包括：表示感谢并问候；计划与家人一起做的事情；你决定选择哪个专业，为学好该专业做何准备。【详解】1.词汇积累照顾：take care oflook after另外，此外：in additionbesideswhats more雇佣：employhire既然：now thatsince2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.拓展句：As the Internet industry develops rapidly，the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide.【满分范文欣赏1】Dear Nancy,Thanks for your letter. Its been a long time since I left London.Hows everything going?As Ive completed study in high school there is going to be a long vacation this summer. And I have got quite a number of things on my to-do list. The top priority is travelling across China with my parents.There are so many great places wed like to visit. Its pretty hard for us to make the choice. Anyway,were going to figure out our travel plan in a few days.In addition, Im going to get prepared for my college life. Ive decided to choose biochemistry as my major. So I will do some research and try to find a part-time job in a biochemistry lab.I would be grateful if you could give me some advice since youve been working as a university teacher for 30 years. Thanks again for your letter. Hope to hear from you soon.Yours, Li Jin【满分范文欣赏2】Dear Nancy,I am very glad to receive your E-mail. I am very grateful to you and your family for taking care of me during my study tour in the UK. And wish you all the best.Now that I have finished my high school studies, my parents and I are going to travel to Beijing. I'm going toTian 'anmen to see the flag raising and climb the Great Wall. In addition, I want to go to Qinghua Garden to enjoy the elegant demeanor of famous universities. I have decided to register for the computer major. With the rapid development of the Internet industry, the high-paying employment in IT industry attracts more and more people to join the Internet tide. Before choosing, consult people engaged in this major or go to training institutions for consultation. Only with a clear goal, we will have targeted learning in the future, which will be more efficient.Yours,Li Jin