专题06-2022年北京卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析.docx
专题-6-2022年北京卷英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析【试题再现】以李华的身份给外国学生Jim写一封邀请信，邀请其为自己的同学线上分享英语写作经验的交流会。注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。【试题解读】主题语境：人与社会-人际沟通（良好的人际关系）话题选择：邀请朋友在线分享英语写作经验语篇类型：邀请信：邀请信是邀请对方参与某种活动或邀请对方做某事。邀请信最重要的就是自然流畅，对象不同，信中的表达方式也不同。比如你邀请某位老师组织活动，如果是不认识的老师，就要说下自己是谁，有什么事情，要显得很尊敬对方。再比如你邀请朋友参加某个活动，你已经知道对方是谁了，那自然没必要自我介绍，语气可以显得活泼一些。写作方法：（1）首段：开门见山说明写作目的。（2）主体：a. 具体交代邀请原因；b. 邀请内容：活动性质、时间、地点、日期；c. 有关要求和希望。（3）尾段：a. 再次盛情邀请；b. 希望尽快答复。写作构思：（1）审人称和时态。邀请信中的主要人称是第一人称，一般会用到两种时态：一般现在时和一般将来时。那么这篇作文中称就是我（I）和我们（we）；时态可用 do, will + do。（2）关键词的翻译。要根据作文汉语信息提炼一些表达， 它们能在作文中出现且能把这篇文章的基本含义串联起来。这些表达即是所写文章的关键词。换言之， 关键词的翻译主要是围绕作文要点来确定相应的英语表达的。（3）列要点提纲。罗列出要点是写作中很重要的一个环节， 列出作文的要点就等于拟定了文章结构。主要是把上一步骤里的关键词布局在几个段落里面。 （4） 润色作文。把文章中所需信息安排到各段后， 在写作时除使用基本语言外要多使用一些高级词汇、丰富的短语和一些能够恰当表达意思的高级句型，而这些内容的附加就是对作文细节的合理拓展。这样语言就更丰富了，无形中就提高了作文的档次。如，在写活动的意义或目的时就可用非谓语动词中的现在在分词，也可写为 which 引导的非限定性定语从句。（5）【满分范文欣赏1】Dear Jim,How is everything going? Next Tuesday, An online class meeting on the theme of English writing will be held and I am writing to invite you to attend it and share with us your writing advice and skills.Your compositions are so excellent that our teacher have recommended as good models. We value the chance to learn from you especially the structure of your composition and the choice of words which I believe can be of great help to improve our English writingIf you could attend the meeting, that would be great! The meeting is scheduled to start at 5 p.m. on Tuesday and we have chosen the Tencent Meeting as the platform. Please download the software in advance and prepare for your sharing. We are looking forward to your participation and your brilliant performance!(136 words)Yours, Li Hua【满分范文欣赏2】Dear Jim,Im writing to invite you to an internet-based talk about how to improve English writing. The talk is thought important for us Chinese students, of whom most are poor in writing a composition in English. Therefore, we hope you, a native speaker, would like to give us some advice on what we can do well with our English compositions.The online talk is scheduled to take place between 5:00 pm and 6:30 pm this Saturday, and if you will, I will send you the link to Tencent Meeting, an video app comparable to Zoom.I would appreciate it so much if we could have you in the talk.Yours,Li Hua【满分范文欣赏3】Dear Jim, Im writing to invite you to an internet-based talk about how to improve English writing. The talk is thought important for us Chinese students, of whom most are poor in writing a composition in English. Therefore, we hope you, a native speaker, would like to give us some advice on what we can do well with our English compositions. The online talk is scheduled to take place between 5:00 pm and 6:30 pm this Saturday, and if you will, I will send you the link to Tencent Meeting, an video app comparable to Zoom. I would appreciate it so much if we could have you in the talk. Yours, Li Hua【满分范文欣赏4】【满分范文欣赏5】Dear Jim,Im writing to invite you to an internet-based talk about how to improve English writing. The talk is thought important for us Chinese students, of whom most are poor in writing a composition in English. Therefore, we hope you, a native speaker, would like to give us some advice on what we can do well with our English compositions.The online talk is scheduled to take place between 5:00 pm and 6:30 pm this Saturday, and if you will, I will send you the link to Tencent Meeting, an video app comparable to Zoom.I would appreciate it so much if we could have you in the talk.Yours,Li Hua
