专题02 -2022年全国乙卷 -2020-2022近三年英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析（附10篇）.docx

专题022022年全国乙卷【试题再现】学校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论。请使用图表中的调查结果写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1学习活动状况描述：2简单评论；3你的建议。注意：1词数100左右；2短文的题目和首句已为你写好。Learning English Beyond the ClassroomThere are many things we can do to learn English well._【试题解读】一、主体分析 2022年高考全国乙卷英语试卷写作试题的考查形式又有新变化，设置了读图表、写短文的形式，特别突显了高中英语课标中所增添的“看”的考查，强调了读图能力。设置的写作情境是校英文报正在开展以Learning English Beyond the Classroom为题的讨论，要求考生阅读有关学生英语学习活动调查结果情况的图表，使用图表中的调查结果信息写一篇带有个人思考的、有记叙有说明有议论的小短文。 这精心设计的试题情境使写作形式更加灵活，内容更加开放。这封信中会涉及到考生“我”、 参与英语学习活动情况调查的“学生们”，因此第一、三人称都可能会用到；表达学习活动状况描述和简单评论，主要用一般现在时；关于建议，为将来的事情，因此时态会用一般将来时，或者用情态动词来表达建议。写作时要根据主要内容的顺序来写，适当增加细节，并且选用恰当的连接词使文章通顺、语言流畅。二、整体思路 1. 叙述并说明英语学习活动调查的原因及目的。 2. 分两方面阐述：英语学习活动调查结果柱状图描述，并加以简单评论。 3. 你实用的建议。【满分范文欣赏1】Learning English Beyond the ClassroomThere are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently a survey about how to learn English beyond the classroom has been conducted. As can be clearly seen from the statistics, appreciating English songs accounts for 65 percent compared with 50% who choose to watch movies as a way of English learning. Reading English books prove to be the less popular ways making up 18%, together with visiting English learning websites, taking up 12% .It turns out that students attach greater importance to interest and entertainment instead of traditional approaches such as reading books when learning English. However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it is one of the best ways to increase vocabulary and to strengthen the understanding of grammar. Therefore, students become best English learners quickly.【满分范文欣赏2】Learning English Beyond the ClassroomThere are many things we can do to learn English well. A recent survey suggests that the majority of students being interviewed, about 65%, tend to learn English by listening to English songs. 50% of the students choose to watch English movies as a way of learning. Reading English books and visiting English learning sites prove to be the less popular ways accounting for 18% and 12% respectively.Overall, the results are quite interesting, indicating that language learning can be integrated with personal hobbies and entertainment. In the future,I think our school could provide some activities such as book clubs or English corners to further inspire students interest in learning English.【满分范文欣赏3】Learning English Beyond the ClassroomRecently, an investigation is being carried out by our schools English newspaper about English learning status outside the classroom.According to the bar chart, there are mainly four types of after-class English study. As is shown, more and more students pay attention to English songs, the percent of whom have increased to 65%, and furthermore, the number of those who are into English movies accounts for 50%. The rest two types, reading English originals or browsing English learning websites, account for no more than 18% and 12% respectively.This phenomenon shows that the top two combine entertainment and relaxation as well as easy access for English learners compared with much more boring and dull atmosphere in English class. However, since both are fast-food culture, the rest two choices mean much harder and more toil although it is more fruitful and influential.From the analysis we can safely draw the conclusion that we need to think about how to make full use of our spare time to learn English. It is possible that in the future the tendency will change with our awareness improved. （187）点评：本文运用了模板，对根源做了分析，运用了长难句和高级表达。【满分范文欣赏4】Learning English Beyond the ClassroomHow will you arrange for your English extracurricular study? It is a going-on hot topic launched by our English newspaper. The results are clearly shown as the bar chart: among the four types, listening to English songs and watching English movies account for over half percent, leaving reading English originals or scanning learning websites far behind 18% and 13% respectively.Behind this phenomenon, we can find that it is much attractive to get entertained and relaxation from the top two, while the rest types are much tedious and dull.In brief, I hold that we can make the right decision and balance study and entertainment. English is a tool to learn more useful knowledge We may make our life after class meaningful and instructive, not just for a little fun. （130）【满分范文欣赏5】Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. Recently, we conducted a survey concerning different ways to learn English beyond the classroom. The results are as follows. There are roughly 65% of the students preferring to listen to English songs while 50% of the students choose to watch English movies. But the percentage of students reading English books is only 18%, followed by 12% who study English via English learning websites. The results suggest that most students would rather study English in a more entertaining way. From my point of view, we should also take English books and websites into consideration, thus laying a solid foundation for English.【满分范文欣赏6】Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. Following are four main approaches taken by us students. The most popular approach is listening to English songs, which accounts for 65%. And half of the students surveyed prefer to learn English by watching English movies. In contrast, students who read English books and visit English learning website are much fewer than those mentioned above, only taking up 18% and 12% separately. On the whole, students get used to learning English through relaxing ways. From my perspective, whatever method we choose, it is our inner interest and enthusiasm that allow us to make brilliant progress in English.【满分范文欣赏7】Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. As we can see from the chart, 65% of the students enjoy listening to English songs to learn English, while 50% choose to watch English movies. And 18% of the students choose to read English books, 6% higher than those who prefer to visit English learning websites. From the data we can conclude that most students seek lighthearted ways to learn English. My suggestion is that beside the methods mentioned above, we can also try chatting online with foreigners or keeping an English diary. Frankly speaking, there are a wide range of ways to learn English beyond the class, but it is important to find one that suits you best.【满分范文欣赏8】Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. According to a survey, most students being interviewed, specifically 65%, choose to listen to English songs, while half of the students prefer to watch English movies. Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively. It turns out that students favor the entertaining ways over the traditional ones when it comes to English learning. However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students gain a deeper understanding of English as a language. Therefore, students should spare more time for English reading rather than watching movies or listening to music too much.【满分范文欣赏9】Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. A recent survey suggests that the majority of students being interviewed, about 65%, tend to learn English by listening to English songs. 50% of the students choose to watch English movies as a way of learning. Reading English books and visiting English learning sites prove to be the lesspopular ways, accounting for 18% and 12% respectively. Overall, the results are quite interesting, indicating that language learning can be integrated with personal hobbies and entertainment. In the future, I think our school could provide some activities such as book clubs or English corners to further inspire students' interest in learning English.【满分范文欣赏10】Learning English Beyond the Classroom There are many things we can do to learn English well. Our school recently carried out a survey regarding “Learning English Beyond the Classroom". Following are the results of our survey. Most students, that is to say 65%, have a preference for English songs, with half of the students keen on watching English movies. For those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites, the percentages are 18% and 12% separately. In my view, it is not how we learn English but our determination to learn English that actually matters. As long as we devote ourselves to English learning, we would make great improvement.