专题17 -2021年新高考1卷& 2卷-2020-2022近三年英语真题作文深度点评与满分作文赏析(附10篇).docx
专题06 2021年新高考1卷& 2卷【试题再现】学校英文报Youth正在庆祝创刊十周年。请你写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:1. 读报的经历;2. 喜爱的栏目;3. 期待和祝福。注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。【试题解读】【试题分析】1.类型:情景式+提纲型2.体裁:投稿信3.语言:语体正式体4.词数:写作词数不少于80【写作思路】本写作任务要求给英文报投稿以庆祝其创刊十周年,内容要点提示有三点:1.读报经历;2.喜爱栏目;3.期望和祝福。因此写作中必须涵盖所有要点,可以将三点内容融入到一个段落中,也可以将三个要点分三段进行写作。写作步骤:首先介绍自己从什么时候开始接触英文报,接着介绍自己喜欢的栏目,可以是一个或多个栏目,最好写出具体的栏目名称,比如News、Literature、Ask 等,此处可以增加英文报给自己带来的改变,最后表达对英文报创刊十周年的祝福以及期望。【满分范文欣赏1】Youth and Me【第一段开门见山,直击主题】As the 10th anniversary ceremony of YOUTH is drawing near, I can't help but take this opportunity to extend my heartfelt congratulations.(表达衷心祝贺)【第二段3个要点,一一展开】Ever since I was young, my parents have been exposing(现在完成进行时) me to various magazines, but YOUTH is always my favorite with its originality (原创性)and friendliness(友好). Time passing by,(独立主格结构) what doesn't fade(褪色) is the charm and glamour(魅力) of the magazine which gains wide recognition and high praise(广泛认可及高度赞赏) from many students, including me, a regular and loyal reader.Not only does it supply me (否定词开头的部分倒装句)with a platform to broaden my horizon, but its rich content can also spark my burning passion for English. I am fond of all its columns, but what I enjoy most is School Life, a column close to big and small happenings(发生的事) in our life, preserving(保存) important moments and bringing us fun and color.【第三段:收尾呼应,升华与点题】I have thousands of blessings(祝福) and I keenly wish YOUTH could achieve greater success and gain more popularity. (156词)【满分范文欣赏2】Youth and MeHow time flies! It has been three years since I first read the newspaper Youth, which has accompanied me to go through my high school, one of my most important life stages.When it comes to my favorite column of Youth, what first comes to my mind is the Foreign Culture section. To begin with, I can accumulate abundant knowledge about foreign countries. Furthermore, making a comparison between Chinese culture and foreign culture can broaden my horizon, thus instructing me to view things from different perspectives. By the way, roaming in the ocean of foreign culture can help me refresh myself completely.I do wish Youth can include more valuable content and I firmly believe that Youth will definitely attract more readers.【满分范文欣赏3】Youth and MeThe last ten years has witnessed the glorious rising of Youth, a school newspaper, which bears great significance for us students.Every time when I receive a latest volume, it is the “Youth Today” column that I immediately grasp to read, for it delivers appealing events around us, whether they are big news or trifles.At such a meaningful point, Youth's tenth birthday, I sincerely hope that continuous efforts will be made and better contents will be included in Youth, helping to nourish our mind and accompany us in our growing path.Heartfelt blessings and wishes to Youth.【满分范文欣赏4】Youth and MeWhen I first came to our school three years ago, I fell in love with Youth at first sight, for it covered a wide variety of topics, ranging from updated news, beneficial learning tips to personal encouraging stories for young people. Gradually, attracted by its content, reading it became a must for every day. Not only did it enrich my after-class life, but also broadened my horizons and encouraged me to carry on when I met with difficulties.All its columns are of great interest to me, but Corner of the HEART where the personal experiences are shared by my schoolmates touches me most and has a profound influence on me. Every time I have difficulty in moving forward, I turn to it for joy and help.It is Youth that has accompanied me to spend my senior high school years. With its tenth birthday around the corner, I send my heart-felt gratitude and I do hope it will keep more students company and offer more guidance to students like me. Best wishes!【满分范文欣赏5】Youth and MeIt has been 10 years since Youth was founded. In my memory, it is Youth that accompanies me through my whole high school. When feeling depressed, I often choose to enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of imaginative stories. These stories can relieve my stress and broaden my horizon. Besides, I even submitted my own fiction to Youth. Refused as I was, I still received some great encouragement, which gives me confidence to be a writer.I do expect Youth can publish more classic works and have a promising future.【满分范文欣赏6】Youth and MeYouth-a poplar campus newspaper-is celebrating its tenth anniversary, on which special day, as a devoted reader Id like to give it my sincere congratulations with great excitement.Three years ago, when I came across Youth. I was impressed by its content and striking narration and recording events in and out campus, ranging from sports, science and new technology,self growth and study methods, among which the philosophy column attracted me most.With its articles influence, I have helped myself overcome loneliness and would like embrace all beauty of life.Last, thanks Youth for giving me a new perspective of life and I really hope that Youth will step further and bring more brightness to the youth like me!【满分范文欣赏7】Youth and MeReading newspapers is a good habit that will benefit us all our lives.My first contact with the English newspaper Youth was in a leisure noon. Upon starting reading it, I was attracted by its interesting content. As time passed, reading Youth seemed to become a part of my daily routine. The English Short Novels column is my favorite, which enables me to acquire English knowledge while reading stories.On the occasion of the 10 anniversary of the founding of Youth, I sincerely wish it better and better. Looking b forward to its continuation of the wonderful stories of youth. (99 words)【满分范文欣赏8】Youth and MeWith the 10th anniversary of Youth approaching permit me to offer it my sincere congratulations.Youth is our school's English newspaper, which is popular among readers. I began reading Youth three years ago. Through reading it, my writing ability has improved greatly.Foreign Culture "is one of my favorite columns. It provides nice platform for us students to broaden our horizons. Not only does the column introduce the life of high school students abroad but also carries their favorite festivals.I'm anticipating reading more quality English articles. May Youth have a better tomorrow!【满分范文欣赏9】Youth and MeFor the 10th Anniversary of YOUTH / On occasion of the 10th Anniversary of YOUTH, I want to share my reading experience. Youth has accompanied me for three years during my high school. It involves all topics that senior students are interested in and leads us to feel the wonderful outside.As a loyal reader of YOUTH, I am always absorbed in columns on teenagers from which I can get inspiring stories and gain much pleasure from exciting news.I sincerely hope that YOUTH can make greater progress and attract more readers to share their stories.【满分范文欣赏10】Youth and MeYOUTH, the most popular school English paper among us students is celebrating its 10 anniversary.Looking back on those impressive days with YOUTH, I am full of thankfulness to it.It was the first semester when I was trapped in learning and feeling greatly depressed that I was introduced to YOUTH.The moment I dived deeper into YOUTH, I was deeply attracted by one of its columns the Window to the World through which I harvested a lot. Whenever I was down, I would turn to YOUTH; whenever I had any question in English, I would refer to YOUTH. The insightful and profound articles and abundant materials concerning English learning cast light on all my embarrassments,raising me up.Thanks to YOUTH,I became so confident that I picked up mycourage to face my dilemma and strove hard for improvement. Thanks to YOUTH, not only were my horizons widely broadened and campus greatly enriched,but my English was gradually improved hence contributing to my overall promotion of my study. Thanks to YOUTH I became what I am today, living up to my parents and teachers expectations.Here I would like to convey sincere gratitude and my best wishes to YOUTH. May YOUTH the brightest future and prosperity.