15.应用文技巧5：细节的增添与润色.pptx
细节的增添与润色细节的增添与润色1.列举具体的实例进行补充说明(1)我们青少年应尽我们所能保护环境、拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use recyclable bags instead of plastic bags,refuse to use single-use products,plant more trees and save water and energy(我们可以用可回收袋代替塑料袋,拒绝使用一次性产品,种植更多的树木,节约水和能源).(2)我要花一些时间和父母在一起。Ill spend some time staying with my parents.Ill spend some time staying with my parents,chatting with them and doing some housework(与他们聊天和做一些家务).(3)我想找一个像我一样喜欢旅行的笔友。I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.I would like to seek a pen pal who is interested in traveling just like me.If possible,we can travel together or share traveling experiences(如果可能的话,我们可以一起旅行或者分享旅行经历).2.增添与所写信息相关的神态、动作、心理描写以及背景渲染等内容我发现了一些不良行为。I found some bad behavior.I found some bad behavior.Some people scribbled on the wall,some people played soccer on the lawn and some people threw rubbish everywhere(有些人在墙上乱涂乱画,有些人在草坪上踢足球,有些人到处扔垃圾).3.增加相关信息的时间、地点等内容(1)我要和父母一起去超市购物。Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket.Im going to do some shopping with my parents in the supermarket and wont be back until about 5:00 in the afternoon(直到下午五点左右才回来).(2)我已经带来了你让我归还的这两本书。I have brought with me the two books you asked me to return.I have brought with me the two books you asked me to return to the City Library(去市图书馆).4.适当增加与所给信息相关的原因、结果、条件、让步、手段、目的等内容(1)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Henry最近来信询问你高考后的暑假安排。请根据下面要点写一封回信,说明你的计划,并简述理由。要点:a.休息;b.读书;c.参加社会活动。I need a good rest.Ill do some reading.I need a good rest because I do feel tired after the hard work of all these years(因为经过所有这些年的辛苦工作,我确实感到累).Of course,Ill do some reading for fun,and for knowledge as well(为了乐趣也为了知识).Ill take part in some social activities.If I have free time(如果我有时间),Ill take part in some social activities.If possible(如果可能的话),Ill take part in some social activities.(条件状语)Ill take part in some social activities so that/in order that I can know more about society(为了更好地了解社会).(2)Tracy来电话说和你在博尔顿咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)的见面取消。Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee.Tracy called,saying that she couldnt meet you at Bolton Coffee as she had something important to do(因为她有重要的事情做).5.结尾适当发挥,写出个人感受、评价、希望、愿景、倡议等(1)Tired as I was this summer holiday,I felt very happy for what I did.(个人感受)(2)As far as Im concerned,such activities are necessary and meaningful.(评价)(3)In a word,if she would like to learn Chinese,I hope she will do it well.(愿景)(4)As students,its our duty to protect our school environment and make it clean.(倡议)【拓展训练】假如你是班长,你们学校本周日将组织一次参观首都博物馆的活动,请你写一个通知。相关内容如下:安排:1.上午8:00 在学校大门口集合,集体乘车去首都博物馆;2.上午8:40 在导游的带领下参观首都博物馆;3.中午12:00 参观结束,集体乘车返回学校。要求:1.参观过程中请自觉遵守公共秩序;2.馆内禁止录像和开闪光灯拍照;3.参观后每人写一篇日记。注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.通知的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear students,Attention,please._【参考范文】Dear students,Attention,please.I have something to tell you.We are going to pay a visit to the Capital Museum this Sunday.Be sure to arrive at the school gate before 8:00 a.m.We will go there by bus together.At about 8:40 a.m.,well visit the museum following a guide.The visit will be over at around 12:00,and then well return by bus.Please observe public order,keep quiet and avoid running.Video recording and flash photography are forbidden in the museum,so youd better take some notes since we have to write a diary after the visiting.Thats all.Thank you.
