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托福作文写作范文详解Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.1 .题目翻译：很多人旅游到新地方时为什么参观博物馆？2 .审题关键词：Museum; Entertainment.论证分析：正：The first reason many people are interested in visiting a museum when they go to a new place is to learn about the history and culture of the place.jE： Another reason why people visit museums is that it's not only for adults, but for the wholefamily, a whole activity enjoyed by children as well as grandparents,正：Last but not least, museums in many countries are free to the visitors, so we can save a lot of money.范文:People love to visit museums when traveling to new places. I think this is because museums tell them a lot about the culture of those new and unknown destinations. Museums are also fun. It's almost impossible to get bored in a museum. Every museum will have at least one interesting thing for everybody.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨，。后面第二句话 对主旨逆行了简要分析。后面是补充的作者小时候的一个例子，生动具 体，帮助论证了小孩子可以从错误中学习这个观点。此段功能本段是文章的第二段，也就是正文第一段，写了支持作者立场的第一个 分论点。When visiting a new place, you can find out about the culture of that place in many ways. You can go to a movie or a place of worship or a nightclub. Another option is to sit in the park and listen to the people around you. The easiest way to learn about a place's culture, though, is by visiting its museums. Museums will show you the history of the place you're visiting. They'll show you what art the locals think is important.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨，。后面第二句话 对主旨过行了简要分析。后面是补充的作者小时候的一个例子，生动具 体，帮助论证了小孩子可以从错误中学习这个观点。此段功能本段是文章的第二段，也就是正文第一段，写了支持作者立场的第一个 分论点。Museums are fun. Even if you're not interested in art or history, there is always something to get your attention. Many museums now have what they call "hands-on" exhibits. These were originally designed to keep children occupied while their parents were looking at exhibits. However, museums have found that adults enjoy hands-on opportunities just as much as children. These exhibits have activities like pushing a button to hear more about what you're looking at, creating your own work of art, or trying on clothes like those on the models in the museum.此段结构 本段是一个总分的结构，分为两个小部分。首先第一句话即点明了主旨。 第一小部分说博物馆很有意思，有一些为小孩儿的“hands-on” exhibitSo 第二部分进一步说，这些小东西对大人仍然很有吸引力。此段功能本段是文章的第三段，也就是正文第二段，写了支持作者立场的第二个 分论点。People also enjoy visiting museums with unusual subjects. For instance, in my hometown there's a museum devoted to the potato. This museum has art made out of potatoes. It also tells all about the history of the potato, and sells potato mementos like key chains and potato dolls. People enjoy visiting this museum because it's different. It's not something they'd find in their hometown and the museum's curator enjoy talking about the Great Potato.此段结构本段是一个总分的结构。首先第一句话即点明了主旨。后面是补充的作 者的一个例子，生动具体，后面对例子的分析总结帮助论证了这个观点。 此段功能 本段是文章的第四段，也就是正文第三段，写了支持作者立 场的第三个分论点。Museums are popular because they are about us. They are about our past and they reflect our creations, our values, and our dreams. No matter who you are or what you like, somewhere there is a museum that will amaze and interest you.此段结构本段三句话层层递过，第一句话对上文过行总结，第二句话简单概括分 析。第三句话重申论点。此段功能本段是文章的尾段，对上文过行了承接，并对论点逆行了概括分析，最 后重申论点，让文章更加立场明确。满分因素剖析一、语言表达这篇文章在语言方面非常优秀。作者运用了各种从句，非谓语动词结构, 句子十分饱满，句式富于多变，长短句搭配合理，使考官眼前一亮。而 在用词方面，作者在关键的位置都使用了明显的逻辑连接词，这样使得 文章各个部分衔接自然，逻辑也很清晰。1. These exhibits have activities like pushing a button to hear more about what you're looking at, creating your own work of art, or trying on clothes like those on the models in the museum. 此句中,Like前面省略了 that,引导定语从句,修饰activitieso宾语 从句what引导宾语从句，在like后面从句中做宾语，creating.和 trying为非谓语动词，在句中做宾语。这句话是多种从句嵌套的结构, 虽然复杂但是开累赘，彰显了作者的语法功底。2. For instance, in my hometown there's a museum devoted to the potato.此句中，短语for instance的意思是"例如"，等同于for example,用 来引出证明观点的例子。Devote to的意思是“致力于“，其中的to是 介词，后面要接动词的ing结构。Devote to是一个很美的短语，带 有很强的的感情色彩，比一般的be interested in和be engaged in 要生动，相同意思的单词还有dedicate to, contribute tooThey are about our past and they reflect our creations, our values, and our dreams.此句话的意思是“博物馆代表了我们的过去，它反映了我们的创造，我 们的价值和我们的梦想”。这句话非常有哲理，它概括了博物馆在对人 类”历史、人文、及人类发展”方面贡献，作为文章的结尾，起到的升华 主题的作用。二、逻辑结构 本文是正正正的大正型支持文章，结构标准，逻辑清晰。文章首段写的 非常标准，简单明了，并对下文的几个正文段都用几个词组过行了概括, 纵览全文。中间论证部分充实而饱满，从三个不同的角度诠释了博物馆 的意义。而尾段再次对博物馆受欢迎的原因过行了总结，并对文章的主 题逆行升华。这篇文章可谓是“虎头，猪肚，豹尾”，让人读上去很享受。