短文改错公开课(课堂PPT).ppt

Proof Reading短文改错短文改错生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。生活中，人人都会犯错，有错就知改。写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。写作中，人人也会犯错，有错也要改。1Play a gameFindthewrongwordsandcorrectthem.bestrictatsbberesponsiblewithsb/sthbeinbusinesshavesthoncommonhaveaneffectinsblosetheheartmakeagreatprogressthewarwasbrokeouttheaccidentwashappenedinthehurrysharesthforsbapairofshoealotofequipmentsgeneralspeakingassoonaspossiblywithforoninonthethea awaswaswaswasawithShoesequipmentGenerallypossible2What is proof reading?知知短短文文改改错错 则则百百战战不不殆殆1.correct some grammar mistakes2.connection between sentences3.the main idea of the whole passage3设错方式？设错方式？改错格式？改错格式？假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中同桌写的以下作文。文中共有共有10处错误处错误，每句中最多有两处每句中最多有两处。错误涉及错误涉及一个单词一个单词的增加、删除或修改。的增加、删除或修改。增加增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除删除：把多余的词用斜线把多余的词用斜线()划掉划掉。修改修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：注意：1每处错误及其修改均每处错误及其修改均仅限一词仅限一词；2只允许修改只允许修改10处处，多者，多者(从第从第11处起处起)不计分。不计分。4改错步骤改错步骤1.Go through the whole passage to get a general idea.(浏览全文，掌握大意）浏览全文，掌握大意）2.Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the grammar mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行（分句阅读，逐行找错）找错）3.Read the passage again,check your answers.（检查核对，敲定终稿）（检查核对，敲定终稿）5 I often dream of a teacher.I dream of standing on the _ platform in the classroom and give lessons to lovely boys ._ and girls.I teach them,play with them,but watch them ._ growing up.I am always young when I was staying ._ with them.I know there is not easy to be a teacher.You ._ have to learn in order to teach.Without enough knowledges ._ you can never learn well.What is more,you have to be ._ friends with your pupils and take good care of him._ Only in this way can you are a good teacher and win _ respect from them.Though I am a student now,I will work as very hard to make my dream come true._beinggivingandamitknowledgeteachthembeHomework-Check your answers6How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?7How many kinds of mistakes in this Proof Reading?ProofReading动词动词名词名词冠词冠词代词代词连词连词介词介词形容形容.副词副词8近近5年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表年全国新课标卷短文改错题考点一览表 考查内容时间动动词词名名词词介介词词连词冠词代词形容形容词词副副词词2010年312111012011年322110102012年312102012013年322110102014年111110239小组合作，讨论学案中小组合作，讨论学案中的突破考点内容的突破考点内容3minutesQuickly!10小试牛刀小试牛刀1.(2010全国）全国）Ontheboxwasacardsay“25centseach”2.TheGreatWallofChinaisoneofthelargestconstructionprojectsevercomplete.3.(2012全国全国)Iwinanationalprizeforpaintinglastweek.4.(2013全国全国)TeainChinawastraditionallydrankfromcupswithouthandles.5.Sheusedtoholdingmeonherkneesandsingoldsongs.6.Amongtheparkstreesthereareasciencehall,anartcentre,agym,andsayingwondrunkcompletedholdis11归纳总结归纳总结错误主要错在错误主要错在时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、时态、语态、主谓一致、动词短语、非谓语动词（非谓语动词（todo/doing/done）12小试牛刀小试牛刀1.(2010全国全国)Iftheyhadsaidwastrue,Iwouldhaveachanceofwinningtheprize.2.(13全国全国)Infact,mygrandfatherevenscaredmyclassmatesawayduringtheycameovertoplayordohomeworkwithme.3.IwillbeverygladwhetherIcanworkwithyou.whatwhenififwhether如果如果条件状语从句条件状语从句是否是否及物动词后的宾语从句且没有及物动词后的宾语从句且没有ornot是否是否通常引导名词性从句通常引导名词性从句13小试牛刀小试牛刀归纳总结归纳总结错误主要错在错误主要错在 并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用，并列连词和从属连词的漏用和错用，上下文逻辑关系理解错用上下文逻辑关系理解错用4.(2011全国全国)IboughtmyticketbutturnedaroundtopickupmybagfromthefloorandthenIrealizedthatsomeonehadstolenit.5.Ireceivedmymotherscalltellingmeshewouldcome,butIhadtocanceltheappointmentswithyou.andso14小试牛刀小试牛刀1.(2011全国全国)Itfeltverystrangetotravelwithoutanyluggages.2.(2014全国全国)WhenteagotpopularinBritain,therewasacryingneedforgoodcupwithhandlestosuitBritishhabits.3.AfterlearningEnglishforseveralyears,Ihavemadeagreatprogress.4.IfIchoosetotakeanextbus,Iwouldhavetowaitforanother30minutes.5.Allinall,Joeyisaveryspecialdogbecausehehasovercomeunpleasantstartinlife.luggagecupsthean15名词错误主要错在名词错误主要错在 单复数；可数与不可数；单复数；可数与不可数；归纳总结归纳总结冠词错误主要错在冠词错误主要错在 泛指与特指；泛指与特指；a.an.the混用混用漏用和多用漏用和多用16小试牛刀小试牛刀1.(2012全国全国)MyfatherwassopleasingthathesuggestedIgotoEnglandforaholiday.2.(2014全国全国)Thefruitsaresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste.3.(2014全国全国)Wearegrowingwonderfullytomatoesatnocost.pleasedtasty4.BeingamemberoftheStudentsUnionmakesmecapableoforganizingvariousactivities.However,IamconvincedthatIcankeeptheclassorganizedandlively.Therefore5.Wegaveourthankstoourteacherswhohadbeeneducatinguspatient.patientlywonderful17归纳总结归纳总结错误主要错在错误主要错在 词性错用，副词混用；词性错用，副词混用；原级、比较级原级、比较级最高级的混用最高级的混用18小试牛刀小试牛刀1.(2010全国全国)Beforeherleaving,Ipreparedagifttoshowmybestwishestohim.2.Tomakemydreamcometrue,IhavetoldmeoverandoveragainthatIllconcentratemoreonstudies.3.Everyyearmoreandmorepeoplestartastampcollectionofyourown.归纳总结归纳总结错误主要错在错误主要错在 hermyself指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用；指代错误；人称代词和反身代词的误用；主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合主格宾格；关系代词和连接代词（复合句，名词性、定语从句）句，名词性、定语从句）their19小试牛刀小试牛刀1.(2011全国全国)LuckilyIhadallmymoneyonmypocket.2.(2014全国全国)Nearlyfiveyearsagoandwiththehelpbyourfather,mysisterandIplantedsomecherrytomatoesinourbackgarden.归纳总结归纳总结 错误主要错在错误主要错在 inof固定搭配固定搭配20聚沙成塔聚沙成塔-Summary动词动词时态时态和和语态语态主谓一致主谓一致勿忘记勿忘记还要注意还要注意非谓语非谓语名词名词多考多考单复数单复数连词连词并列并列和和从属从属上下逻辑上下逻辑要清楚要清楚形容副词形容副词看看词性词性代词代词前后要前后要一致一致介词介词搭配搭配要记牢要记牢还有还有冠词冠词a/an/the改完改完复查复查敲定稿敲定稿2122231.MyfriendNicktoldmestoryabouthisexperiencebackintheUS,whichwasveryinterested.2.IwasattheShanghaiRailwayStationbuyatickettoHangzhou.3.Sincethenforalltheseyearswehadbeenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwheretheyplease.4.TherewasUncleChen,gentlemanlivingnearmyhouse,whowasaverymuchfamouswriter.(2010-2014全国卷)abuyinghasainteresting245.However,myfatherhadtoreturntoworkonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.6.Forawhilemyparentsboughtmenewtoys.Butbeforelongtheybegantoseewhichwashappening.7.Howmanytimeshaveyouwalkedoutofaroomandleavethelightsortelevisionwhennooneelsewasthere?flewleftwhat25Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.Theyarethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidntneedtodosomanyhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretimewithafter-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneandahalfhourandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.Mydreamschoollooklikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsoftheflowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassforarest,orsatbythelakelisteningmusic.Theteachersherearekindandhelpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.2014全国卷短文改错Theredontmuchforhourslookssittohelpful固定句型固定句型动词动词介词介词名词名词动词动词冠词冠词动词动词动词短语动词短语形容词形容词形容词形容词267 7兄弟兄弟 3 3不改不改 4 4原则原则27【解题步骤】1 浏览全文，掌握大意2 分句阅读，逐行找错3 检查核对，攻克难点4 规范答题 不留空白281.Finish the writing in your paper and correct it by yourself in time.2.Try to do the after-class exercises by using what we have learned.必做部分：必做部分：选做部分：选做部分：29Themorewepractise,theeasieritwillbe!30