2024年新高考英语总复习考点14 高中英语写作技巧（上海专用解析版）.docx

考点14高中英语写作技H课前热身练>(2023 春上海华师大二附中校考)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.现在城市里有很多家庭请家政服务(housekeeping service),请你对此现象发表你的看法。内容必须包括：团概述城市里有很多家庭请家政服务现象回此现象对家庭和社会产生的影响回你对此现象的看法【答案 1 We can often see reports that the housekeeping industry is in a state of shortage, which shows more and more people hire housekeeping.This phenomenon has various effects on the family and society. First, housekeeping can save time to do other things. Office workers increasingly need the help of housekeeping services to help them save from tedious household chores and devote themselves to meaningful things.Secondly, it helps to reduce family conflicts and promote family harmony. Housekeeping can help young couples maintain family relations and reduce family conflicts after forming a new family.Finally, housekeeping can also bring convenience to parents. Due to the particularity of work, such as doctors, traffic police may not be able to go home during the New Year. In this case, it is a good choice to find a domestic helper or occasionally call an hourly worker.Therefore, I think the housekeeping service is necessary.【导语】本文是一篇说明文。要求考生针对城市很多家庭请家政服务现象进行概述，分析这一现象对家庭 和社会产生的印象，以及考生对此的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累表明：show findicate产生影响：have effects on 玲have influence on重要的：important一significant也就是说：that is to say=in other words2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.拓展句：Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, who know how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.【点睛】高分句型 1 Because in addition to teaching students knowledge, teachers have a more important mission, which is to educate people.（运用了 because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 高分句型 2 Teachers are rich in feelings and wisdom, knowing how to imperceptibly into the excellent quality of education.（运用了现在分词作状语）2.假设你是光明中学高三学生李明。近期，年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，其中一个环节为“说说你 的故事”，筹备组现面向本校全体高三学生征集真实故事案例。请给筹备组写一封邮件，内容须包括： 1）你印象最深的一件事情；2）此事对你的启发和影响。【答案】One possible version:During the past three years in the Guangming senior high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. In order to win the competition, we all went for it. During the week before the competition, we practised singing in our free time. Although it was a hard job, every participant took it seriously and did their best. Thanks to our effort, we won the first prize. Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy. The movement reminded me of an old saying-No pains, no gains. It was hard work, but during the course of preparation, we developed deep friendship, confidence as well as understanding!【导语】本文是一篇开放作文。年级组正在策划18岁成人礼仪式，要求考生给筹备组写一封邮件说说自 己印象最深刻的一件事，以及此事对自己的启发和影响。【详解】1.词汇积累难忘的：unforgettable>memorable 为了： in order toin an effort to 困难的：hard一 tough由 于：thanks to一owing to2 .句式拓展同义句原句： Hearing the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.拓展句： When we heard the exciting news, we were all wild with joy.【高分句型 1 One of the most unforgettable things was when our class prepared for a group singing competition. （运用了 when引导的表语从句）高分句型 2 Although it was a hard job,every participant took it seriously and did their best.（运用了 although 引导的让步状语从句）3 .假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了 在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含：1 .对你校社团进行分类；2 .具体描述每一类社团的特色。【答案】One possible version:Clubs in My SchoolTo enrich students9 life, our school organizes a variety of clubs in my school. Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. Generally speaking, the clubs in my school can be classified into two types: sports club and art club.Sports club are popular among students. There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. So students there can make friends. Besides, they can not only play sports in free time, but also they can learn some sports skills.Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. Also, it provides students some knowledge about art. Meanwhile, students there can have the access to the instrument, such as piano, Erhu and so on.All the students in my school like the clubs. So I think the clubs are very significant.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含学生 对校社团进行分类，并具体描述每一类社团的特色。【详解】1 .词汇积累等等：and so on一and the like此外:Besides一In addition 机会：chance>opportunity 同 时： MeanwhileAt the same time2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.拓展句： Art club which includes music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art.高分句型 1 Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2 There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）4. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校学生会准备为文学社、英语社、体育社、艺术社等各社团招募新成员。假如你是其中一个社团的负责 人，请你写一篇宣传稿介绍你们社团的情况。文章必须包括：简单介绍你们社团的特色或优势简要描述你们社团的发展规划【答案】I'm Li Hua, the organizer of the English club. I founded this club to increase students5 interest in English and improve students5 oral English skills.We have English club games every weekend. Students can play freely, thus improving their confidence in learning English. For example, we will organize English drama performances, which many students will come to watch and show their interest in. In addition, we also invite some teachers to guide us on how to perform English dramas every two weeks. This semester, we will continue to carry out special training activities. They will expand students9 English knowledge.If you want to become a member of the club, you will be free to practice English every weekend. Looking forward to your joining us.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生作为学校其中一个社团的负责人，写一篇宣传稿介绍社团的 情况，简单介绍社团的特色或优势，并描述社团的发展规划。【详解】1.词汇积累 建立：fbund一set up 有兴趣：show interest in>be interested in 此外:in addition>besides 继续：continue>go on2 .句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： This semester, we will continue to carry out special training activities. They will expand students9 English knowledge.拓展句：This semester, we will continue to carry out special training activities, which will expand students9 English knowledge.【点睛】【高分句型 1 For example, we will organize English drama performances, which many students will come to watch and show their interest in.（运用 了 which 引导非限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2 If you want to become a member of the club, you will be free to practice English every weekend.（运用了 if引导条件状语从句）5. Directions: Write an English composition in 120 150 words according to the instructions given below inChinese.假如你是明启中学的学生李明，学校准备开展“发现春天'的社会实践活动，并在校园网上征集大家的意见, 请你发贴简要阐述你的设计方案。内容需要包括：1）活动线路与内容。2）推荐理由。【答案】Dear Sir/Madame,Knowing that our school will hold a social practice activity titled "Discovering Spring”, I am very delighted to present my design.It is my suggestion that all teachers and students take part in outdoor hiking. The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village with a length of thirty kilometers. All students are required to take a plastic bag to pick up rubbish thrown by tourists on the way and in BeiHai Folk Culture Village students can visit the village to buy hand-made articles made by craftsmen and enrich them with colorful local culture.As far as I'm concerned, to start with, it's a better choice to help students develop a kind of bearing hardships spirit which is helpful for their future life. Besides, Students are encouraged to pick up rubbish on the ground to raise their awareness of environment protection. In addition, all students need an occasion to escape for a while from their hard study and have a good rest.I hope you will find these proposals useful.Yours, Li Ming【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇意见征集，要求考生以李明的身份为学校即将开展的“发现春天”社会实践活动建言献策，并阐述你的设计方案。【详解】1 .词汇积累IF常：very > more than参力口 ： take part in一 participate in购买：buy一 purchase有益的：be helpfUl一 be beneficial2 .句式拓展并列句变简单句原句：The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village and it is thirty kilometers long.拓展右J ： The route is from our school to BeiHai Folk Culture Village with a length of thirty kilometers.【点睛】【高分右J型 1 Knowing that our school will hold a social practice activity titled "Discovering Spring"，Iam very delighted to present my design.（现在分词短语作状语和that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2 Students are encouraged to pick up rubbish on the ground to raise their awareness of environment protection.（被动语态、非谓语动词短语）课后巩固提高>6. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below inChinese.假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问卷调查，结果如下表所示，写一篇调查报告，内容须包括:1）对调查结果的简单描述;2）对数据的原因分析;3）你的看法。1博物馆免费情况下会考虑67.86%2免费才去3.57%3持无所谓态度28.57%high school students.As is shown in the picture, 67.86% of students would consider museums free of charge, which really surprises me. 3.57% of students went for free. 28.57% hold the indifferent attitude. But what accounts for the huge gap between students? In my opinion, 67.86% of the students may like to study but the family conditions are not good, there is no such expenditure, so they will consider free of charge. 3.57% of students are not interested in museums because they do not love studying, so it is free for them to go. However, 28.57% of the students are indifferent because their family conditions are good and they like to go to museums to increase their knowledge. They will go there anyway.Personally, under the condition of free, students should visit there regularly to learn some extracurricular knowledge, which will be of great help to enrich their experience, broaden our knowledge and make us a knowledgeable person.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，最近学生会对本校全体学生进行了 一项关于“博物馆免费开放政策”的问卷调查，结果如下表所示，写一篇调查报告，内容须包括：对调查结 果的简单描述；对数据的原因分析；你的看法。【详解】1 .词汇积累免费：free of chargefbr freefbr nothing 有益的：be of great help 一 be helpful 就个人而言：personally一in one's opinion 拓宽：broaden一 widen2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Recently, I conducted a questionnaire survey on the "free admission policy of museums“ among senior high school students.拓展句：Recently, I conducted a questionnaire survey which is on the "free admission policy of museums among senior high school students.【点睛】【高分句型 1 As is shown in the picture, 67.86% of students would consider museums free of charge, which really surprises me.(运用了 as和which引导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型 2 However, 28.57% of the students are indifferent because their family conditions are good and they like to go to museums to increase their knowledge.(运用 了 because 引导的原因状语从句)7. Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你是李华，你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验，活动，共有三个备选体验场所：卬快递驿站(delivery station);。网络科技公司(network technology company);。：社区托儿所(community nursery)o写一篇日记，谈谈 你的想法。日记中必须包括：1 .你选择的体验场所；2 .你选择该场所的理由；3 你准备在体验当天做什么。（日记中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）答案 A few days later, our school will carry out "Professional one-day experience“ activity, which is a very good social practice experience. Out of love for children, I decided to go to a community nursery school to experience a day of volunteer work.Because of their parents, work, these children are sent to the community nursery, where they can get good care. As nursery teachers, their job requires a lot of patience and love. On the day of the experience, I decided to make the kids happy by playing games. Interacting with them as much as possible can strengthen the bond with children and make them feel comforted.This job is sacred and glorious, and it requires plenty of love and care. I believe that through this "Professional one-day experience, activity, we can not only improve our extracurricular practice ability, but also make us more caring.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于你所在的学校将于近期开展“职业一日体验”活动， 共有三个备选体验场所：CL快递驿站(delivery station);。,网络科技公司(network technology company);。：社区 托儿所(community nursery)。写一篇日记，谈谈你的想法。【详解】1 .词汇积累开展：carry out一 launch由于，出于：Out of- Due to需要：requires一 needs提高，增强：improve- enhance2 ,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：This job is sacred and glorious, and it requires plenty of love and care.拓展句： This job is sacred and glorious, which requires plenty of love and care.【点日青】【高分句型 1 A few days later, our school will carry out "Professional one-day experience, activity, which is a very good social practice experience.(运用了 which 弓| 导的非限制性定语从句)高分句型 2I believe that through this "Professional one-day experience“ activity, we can not only improve our extracurricular practice ability, but also make us more caring.(运用 了 not only.but also.的固定句型。) 8. Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions givin below in Chinese.假如你是李华，是红星中学的高三学生。班主任老师要求，在下周班会课上每位同学都要做一个简短的推 介，介绍进入高三以来给你留下印象最深的人或事，可以是一个人，或一本书，或一部电影等。你的文章必须包括: 简单描述一下你所介绍的人或事 阐述给你留下深刻印象的原因答案 I have met a lot of people in my school who have made the biggest impression on me since I entered senior three. One of them is my deskmate Emma.I am impressed by her because she is the best friend I've made in the class, who is always there fbr me when I am in need of help. Recently, I found myself getting upset easily. I often complained about the stress and even couldn't concentrate on studies. Emma noticed my problem and spent two hours with me one day, talking about her own stress and how she was dealing with diffculties. From her, I learnt that the only way to beat diffculties is keeping trying instead of complaining. And I felt much more confident to fight against them together with Emma.【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生介绍进入高三以来给你留下印象最深的人或事。【详解】1 .词汇积累遇至U ：meet一encounter最近:recently 一 lately压力:stress-pressure处理：deal with>cope with 2 ,句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Recently, I found myself getting upset easily.拓展句：Recently, I found that I got upset easily.【点睛】高分句型 111 have met a lot of people in my school who have made the biggest impression on me sinceI entered senior three.（运用了 who引导的限制性定语从句和since引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2 I am impressed by her because she is the best friend I've made in the class, who is always there fbr me when I am in need of help.（运用了 because引导的原因状语从句，that引导的限制性定语从句，省略了 that, who引导的是非限制性定语从句和when引导的时间状语从句）9.某英语网站正在开展以“Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework?”为题的讨论。请你根据下图跟帖，内容包括:1 .图片描述；2 .简单评论。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右;2 ,请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework?Should Children Be Paid to Do Housework?Undoubtedly, this picture has reminded me of a phenomenon that cannot be ignored: A lot of children nee