2024年新高考英语总复习考点15 英语作文中词汇的升级（上海专用解析版）.docx

考点15英语作文中词汇的升级课前热身练>（2023 春上海,复旦附中校考）Directions: Write cm English composition in 120-150 words according to theinstructions given below.假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，学校学生会近日打算策划一次促进学生心理健康的活动，并向全校同学征集活动方案。请向学生会投稿，给出你的活动创意和如此设计的原因。注意：作文中不得出现你本人的姓名、班级及学校等真实信息。答案Dear Sir/Madam,I am glad to hear that the Student Union is planning an activity to promote students' mental health recently. I am writing to make some suggestions of my own.We can organize a lecture on mental health counseling. We can invite mental health education experts to give theme lectures to help students learn to express themselves in an appropriate way, enhance their sense of gratitude, and understand how to communicate. I think that in this way, we will face others with optimism, humor and positive attitude, improve interpersonal communication ability and establish a positive and harmonious “sunshine attitude”. Besides, we can conduct on-site psychological counseling activities. Provide on-site answers to students' psychological problems and confusion encountered in daily life through face-to-face consultation.I hope my suggestions will be helpful to you.Yours,Li Hua【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生向学生会投稿，提出你对促进学生心理健康的活动的创 意并介绍原因。To tackle the growing problem, schools should reduce the academic burden of students and increase the time of outdoor activities. Whafs more, we should attach importance to our visual health and control the time spent on electronic devices.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生以“Protecting our eyes to enjoy a bright world”为题，根据图 表调查结果写一篇短文，简述学生近视率状况，给与评论并提出建议。【详解】1.词汇积累同时:解决:meanwhile>at the same timetacklehandle/cope with/solve减少:reduce一decrease/cut down重视：attach importance to>take sth seriously/make account of 2 .句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Data shows that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted.拓展句： Data shows that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted, which should arouse our attention.【点睛【高分句型 11 Data shows that 14.3 percent of pre-school kids are nearsighted.（运用 了 that 引导宾语 从句)【高分句型 2】 Whafs more, we should attach importance to our visual health and control the time spent on electronic devices.（运用 了“spent on electronic devices”过去分词作后置定语，修饰名词"the time”）2.你校在学生中开展调查，想了解学生对艺术鉴赏Art Appreciation这门课程是否感兴趣。请写一篇短文, 给你校英文网站投稿，内容包括：1 .描述图表(chart);2 .试分析产生该结果的原因；3 .你的看法。注意：词数100左右。A survey on Art Appreciation【答案 1 One possible version:A survey on Art AppreciationAccording to the chart, most students are very interested in Art Appreciation and the percentage is 67.24 per cent of the students fairly like it, while only 9 percent dislike it.There are a variety of reasons for the result. For instance, the multi-media approach to teaching has made Art Appreciation classes interesting, and students can not only learn from textbooks but also learn from movies. Whafs more, students are now encouraged to learn it.In my opinion, the result of the survey is a good beginning. Since art appreciation has played a vital role in our life, the importance of art appreciation can never be over-emphasized.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表了解学生对艺术鉴赏Art Appreciation这门课程是 否感兴趣，内容包括：描述图表、分析产生该结果的原因及你的看法。【详解】1 .词汇积累各种各样的：a variety of- various止匕夕卜： whafs more一 besides结果：result>consequence 重要：importance一 significance 2 ,句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：For instance, the multi-media approach to teaching has made Art Appreciation classes interesting, and students can not only learn from textbooks but also learn from movies.拓展句：For instance, what has made Art Appreciation classes interesting is the multi-media approach to teaching , and students can not only learn from textbooks but also learn from movies.点睛【高分句型 1 For instance, the multi-media approach to teaching has made Art Appreciation classes interesting, and students can not only learn from textbooks but also learn from movies. （运用 了 not only.but also连接的并列句）【高分句型 2】Since art appreciation has played a vital role in our life, the importance of art appreciation can never be over-emphasized.（运用了 since引导的原因状语从句）3 .假定你是李华，学校英文报正在开展以The Advantages and Disadvantages of Using iPads为题的讨论， 你在校园展开了调查。现请你给学校英文报写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1 .学生对使用iPad的态度及原因；2 .你的看法及建议。对使用iPad的态度原因你的看法与建议40%的人表示支持1 .用iPad进行学习；2 .用iPad娱乐;听音乐,放松心情。60%的人表小反对1 .滥用iPad会影响他人；2,沉迷于iPad会影响学习。注意：1 .词数10。左右；2 .短文的题目和首句已为你写好。The Advantages and Disadvantages of Using iPadsIt is well known that there are advantages and disadvantages of using iPads.【答案】The Advantages and Disadvantages of Using iPadsIt is well known that there are advantages and disadvantages of using iPads. In a recent investigation of students on campus, 40% of respondents expressed support for using iPads for learning and for entertainment purposes, such as listening to music to relax. The other 60% were opposed to using iPads due to concerns about the negative impact on others and the potential for iPads to become a source of distraction from studying.Despite this division of opinion, it is clear that iPads can be useful tools for learning and entertainment. However, it is important to use them responsibly and not at the expense of others or one's own education. Therefore, my suggestion is to encourage a balance in the use of iPads, by setting guidelines for when and how they can be used. For example, iPads, which could be used for a limited amount of time each day and only for certain activities that support learning, such as taking notes or accessing educational apps.In conclusion, while there are advantages and disadvantages to using iPads, responsible use can lead to a positive and productive learning experience. It is up to us as individuals to make wise choices and strike a balance between using technology for our benefit and avoiding negative impacts on ourselves and others.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以The Advantages and Disadvantages of Using iPads为题给学 校英文报投稿。【详解】1 .词汇积累调查：survey一investigation影响：impact一effect尽管：Despite>Although 鼓励：encourageinspire 2.句式拓展同义句替换原句：It is up to us as individuals to make wise choices and strike a balance between using technology for our benefit and avoiding negative impacts on ourselves and others.同义句： As individuals, we have the responsibility to make smart decisions and maintain a balance between utilizing technology for our benefit and avoiding any detrimental effects it may have on us or others.【点睛】【高分句型 1 Despite this division of opinion, it is clear that iPads can be useful tools for learning and entertainment.（运用了 Despite引导的让步状语从句，that引导主语从句，it做形式主语）高分句型 2 For example, iPads, which could be used for a limited amount of time each day and only for certain activities that support learning, such as taking notes or accessing educational apps.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）4.五一国际劳动节快要到了，为了增强学生的劳动意识和培养他们的实践技能，你校将开设劳动课，并 对学生喜欢的劳动课内容及原因进行了调查，结果如下表，请你以“Labor Courses in Our School”为题用英 语写一篇短文，给你校的英语报投稿。内容要点：1.描述图中信息；2 .介绍学生选择的原因。写作要求：L不要逐条翻译；3 .作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；4 .词数100左右。Labor Courses in Our SchoolMay Day is coming. Aiming to strengthen students' awareness of labor and develop their practical skills, our school will offer various labor courses. According to the survey that our school made, different people have different choices about their favorite labor courses.As the chart shows, 50% students like planting most, because it offers them opportunities to endure hardships and get close to nature. Besides, the planting process can bring them a sense of satisfaction and achievement. 35% students like cleaning most, because they think they can help their parents do some housework by cleaning. 5% students choose cooking, which they think is a good way to relax. Some students have other choices and their own reasons.In a word, all the courses can arouse students5 interest in labor, and make them well-rounded students.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据图表信息，以“Labor Courses in Our School”为题写一篇 短文给英语报投稿。【详解】1 .词汇积累至U 来：come一draw near忍 受：endurebear/stand止匕夕卜:besides一in addition总之：in a word一in short全面发展的：well-rounded-well-developed2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Aiming to strengthen students?awareness of labor and develop their practical skills, our school will offer various labor courses.拓展句： Our school will offer various labor courses so that students, awareness of labor will be strengthened and their practical skills will be developed.【点睛】【高分句型1135% students like cleaning most, because they think they can help their parents do some housework by cleaning.（because引导原因状语从句和省略that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】5% students choose cooking, which they think is a good way to relax, （which 引导的非限制性定语从句）5.近日，你校英语报拟介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况。请你结合图表信息，以“Physical Exercise After Class” 为题写一篇英语短文投稿，内容包括：1 .课外体育锻炼情况描述；2 .简单评论；学生课外体仃锻炼调查结果（人数仃分比） 65%70%60%50%40%30%20%10%0%3 .你的建议。20%40%15%跑步 打羽毛球 打篮球 踢足球注意：1 .词数80左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Physical Exercise After Class【答案 J One possible version:Physical Exercise After ClassRecently, a survey on students? after-class physical exercise has been conducted among students in our school. The results are as follows.More than half of the students, about 65%, choose running as their regular form of exercise, while only 15% would play basketball after class. Meanwhile, badminton is preferred by 40% of the participants, followed by basketball, which attracts 20% of the students. As for the reasons, it is likely that running requires less on equipment and field, and can be done at will. The other three, especially football, are usually played by boys, and thus have less participants.Whatever physical exercise we choose, we should bear in mind that it is the workout itself that matters. Therefore, we'd better set aside some time fbr exercise each day.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文。要求考生结合图表信息，介绍学生课外体育锻炼的情况，进行简单 评论并提出你的建议。【详解】1.词汇积累 吸弓:attractappeal to随意：at will一as one pleases 因 此：therefbre一as a consequence 留出：set aside一spare2 ,句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句： Therefore, we'd better set aside some time fbr exercise each day.拓展句： Therefore, we'd better set aside some time for exercise each day, which is beneficial for our body and learning.【点睛】【高分句型 1 】Meanwhile, badminton is preferred by 40% of the participants, followed by basketball, which attracts 20% of the students.（运用了 which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型 2 Whatever physical exercise we choose, we should bear in mind that it is the workout itself that matters.（运用了 Whatever引导的让步状语从句和that引导的宾语从句）课后巩固提高>6.你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad”为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括: 1 .你的理解;2.举例说明。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad【答案】参考范文：Failure Is Not Necessarily BadPeople often feel sorrowful for failure, thus trying to avoid it at any cost. However, in daily life, failure is unavoidable. It is our attitude towards it that counts. Thus, we should treat failure as a stepping stone instead of as a block.Take myself as an example, I used to do poorly in math, however hard I tried. Repeated failure in the subject was a blow to my confidence. I never thought of giving up, though. I began to reflect on my failure. By and by, I made progress and achieved my final success. I learnt an important lesson about never giving up and determination from the experience.In brief, failure is not necessarily bad.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校英文报正在组织作文比赛，请你以“Failure Is Not Necessarily Bad” 为题写一篇短文投稿。【详解】1 .词汇积累因此：thus一therefore重要：count>matter障碍：block>obstacle 开始：begin>start 2 .句式拓展合并简单句原句：I began to reflect on my failure. By and by, I made progress and achieved my final success. 拓展句： After I began to reflect on my failure, I made progress and achieved my final success.【点睛】高分句型 1 Take myself as an example, I used to do poorly in math, however hard I tried.（运用 了 however引导让步状语从句）高分句型 2 I learnt an important lesson about never giving up and determination from the experience.（运用 了 动名词作宾语）7.某英文网站正在开展“The Decisive Factors in Success”讨论。有些人认为成功需要运气；有些人认为成功 需要毅力请你围绕该话题发一个帖子，要点如下：1 .你的观点；2 .举例说明。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；3 ,请按如下格式作答。【答案 When it comes to the qualities which determine success, some people assume that success requires fortune, willpower and so on. However, I insist patience is the most important.As far as I can remember, I took up running to lose weight when I was young. But after a month, I started to get impatient. Thankfully, my father pushed me to be more patient. I accepted his advice, got back on track and carried it through. Gradually, I became fitter.Looking back, I would have ended up nowhere if I had lost patience and given up halfway. Ifs patience that makes a great difference in the end.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The Decisive Factors in Success"”为话题发一个帖子，阐 明自己的观点并举例说明。【详解】1.词汇积累认为：assume think/believe幸亏：thankfully -fortunately迫使：push 一fbrce 建议：advice suggestion2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：But after a month, I started to get impatient.拓展句：But after a month, I started to get impatient so that I wanted to quit it.【点睛】【高分句型 1 When it comes to the qualities which determine success, some people assume that success requires fortune, willpower and so on.（运用了 which引导的定语从句以及that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2 It's patience that makes a great difference in the end.（运用 了 强调句型）8.假定你是李华，你班近期开展了以What makes a good teenager in the New Era?为题的讨论。请你就此写 一篇短文向英文校刊投稿，内容包括：1 .讨论结果；2 .你的观点。注意：1.词数100左右；3 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。What makes a good teenager in the New Era?【答案】What makes a good teenager in the New Era?To thoroughly understand what makes a good teenager in the New Era, students in our class held a discussion about the subject.Firstly, most students agree that a good teenager in the New Era should devote himself to study. Secondly, many students consider it necessary to be positive, kind and helpful and a teenager possessing the two qualities always respects the aged and loves the young. Last but not least, a good teenager in the New Era should be faithful to the country and people, which is the basic principle.In my opinion, apart from what is mentioned by my classmates, physical and mental health is of equal importance to a good teenager in the New Era.【导语】本文是一篇投稿。要求考生以李华的身份就你班近期开展了以What makes a good teenager in the New Era?为题的讨论写一篇短文向英文校刊投稿。【详解】1.词汇积累理解：understand comprehend讨论：discussion 一 conference同 意：agree> consent有益的：be helpful be beneficial2 .句式拓展同义句改写原句：Firstly, most students agree that a good teenager in the New Era should devote himself to study.拓展句：Firstly, what most students agree is that a good teenager in the New Era should devote himself to study. 【点睛 X 高分句型 1 To thoroughly understand what makes a good teenager in the New Era, students in our class held a discussion about the subject.（动词不定式做目的状语）高分句型 2 Last but not least, a good teenager in the New Era should be faithful to the country and people, which is the basic principle.（运用了 which 引导的定语从句）9.假定你是李华，你校英语角上个月举办了为期一个月的关于二十四节气（24 solar terms）的系列讲座。请 你为校英文报写一篇短文报道此事，内容包括：1 .活动的目的；2 .活动的内容；3 .活动的反响。注意：1 .写作