高中英语教学：求助信学案.docx
应用文一一求助信一.课前预习：1 .定义：道歉信是指因过失或疏忽等做错了事，给别人带来麻烦或造成损失，发觉后向对方赔礼道歉并请 求对方原谅的信件2 .语言风格：语气诚挚，言辞诚恳，理由真实。3 .格式：称呼(首行顶格)；署名4 .时态：一般现在时为主5 .结构：一般分三部分：(1)开头部分：说明写信原因；(2)主体部分：陈述请求帮助的具体内容；(3)结尾部分：希望得到帮助。6 .常用句式：第一段：说明写信原因1. I wonder if you can offer me some tips on.2. I am writing to ask you to do me a favour / give me a hand.3. I am writing in the hope that you can give me some tips on.4. Hopefully you would be so kind to give me some suggestions/help on.5. Would you be kind enough to give me a hand with.? /Could you please offer me some adviceon.第二段：陈述请求帮助的具体内容1. Unfortunately, I still find/feel it hard/ difficult toWhat makes worse is that.2. There are .problems I'm faced with now. First,. Second,.3. Although I have taken some measures to., I made no progress.4. I'm encountering some problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with,. Whal's more,. What troubles me most is.第三段：希望得到帮助1. I'm eager to get/eager for your timely help.2. I have the confidence that with your help, I can.3. I will be grateful if you can spare time to give me your hand.4. Faced with / Facing so many difficulties, I am anxious to get your help.5. I would like to thank you for your generous help in his case in advance.6. I would appreciate it if you could be so kind to give me some useful tips/ suggestions.7. I would appreciate your considering this matter and getting back to me at your earliest convenience.二,课中例析：1.示例范文：假定你是李华，寒假里你的父母想让你报数学辅导班，而你想报吉他班，为此你很烦恼。请给你的英国笔友Tom写一封邮件，向他诉你的烦恼。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。1.遣词造句：(1)帮我个忙(2)充分利用(3)参加数学辅导班(4)更糟糕的是(5)有益的指导(6)真诚的帮助(7)报名(8)使, , 心烦(9)我写信希望你能帮我个忙。(10)他们认为参加数学辅导班提升成绩对我来说是一个好时机。(it's good time.)(11)我的建议是报两门课程。(12)他们拒绝了我的建议，这使我很心烦。(13)句式升级，用同位语从句把10、11两句合成一句。3 ,连句成篇：二：课后巩固：假定你是高三学生李华，在复习英语的过程中遇到了一些困难，想得到英语老师Michael的帮 助。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.描述困难;2.寻求帮助。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Michael,Facing with some learning problems in English, I'm writing this letter to ask for help.With the increase of vocabulary in comprehensive reading, I feel it difficult to understand the passages. Besides, Ihe grammatical patterns seem to be another huge obstacle for me in reading. Not well equipped with rich expressions, I can't do well in writing, which also results in my poorgrades.Thus, would you please be kind enough to offer me some advice? Looking forward to your sincere assistance and instructive guidance.Yours,Li Hua参考答案：XI/ JZ JZ 23456789 z( z( z(x z( z( z( /( z(1) give sb. a hand make full use of attend a math training course to make matters worse instructive guidance sincere assistance sign up for upset sb.I am writing in the hope that you can give me a hand.(10) They think it's a good time for me to attend a math training course to get my math improved/enhanced/promoted.(1 l)My suggestion is that I (should) sign up for both courses (12)They've even refused my suggestion, which really upset me.(13)They've even refused my suggestion that I sign up for both courses, which really upset me.Dear Tom,I am writing in the hope that you can give me a hand since the winter holiday has finally begun and I wanted to make full use of it.Learning how to play the guitar is my first choice. But now it seems hard for me to do so because of parents objection. They think it's a good time for me to attend a math training course to get my math improvcd/cnhanccd/promotcd. To make matters worse, they've even refused my suggestion that I sign up for both courses, which really upset me.Thus, would you please be kind enough to offer me some advice? Looking forward to your sincere assistance and instructive guidance.Yours, Li Hua
