高中英语2025届高考应用文写作讲解练习系列0630（共三篇）.doc

高考英语应用文写作练习与讲解一、建议信：探寻中国文化社会实践活动（浙江省杭州市2023-2024学年高一下学期6月期末英语试题）假设你是李华，你的新西兰笔友Noah正在策划一项主题为“探寻中国文化”的课外实践活动，写信征询你的建议。请你给他回一封信，内容包括：1.活动建议及理由；2.鼓励与祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段开门见山表明写作目的活动提议；第二段给出具体建议及理由（要点1）；第三段表达祝愿（要点2）。【参考范文】Dear Noah,I hope this email finds you well! Learning that you are planning an extra-curricular practice of "Exploring Chinese Culture", I am writing to share with you some of my suggestions.Practice Chinese calligraphy is my top recommendation. As a unique art form in China, calligraphy is a mix of Chinese characters and beauty, showcasing the essence of Chinese culture. Plus it is also preferable to practice Tai Chi. Focusing on the perfect combination of wisdom and strength, Tai Chi is a traditional Chinese boxing that gives you a deep insight into the profound traditional Chinese culture, and frees you from the academic pressure.I hope my advice is of some help to you and wish you a complete success! (119 words)Yours,Li Hua【中文翻译】亲爱的诺亚：见信好！听说你正在策划“探寻中国文化”课外实践活动，我写信和你分享下我的一些建议。首先，我建议你们可以通过组织一次中国书法体验活动来深入了解中国文化。书法是中国独有的艺术形式，它融合了文字与美学，能够直观地展现中国文化的精髓。此外，练习太极拳也是一项不错的选择。注重于智慧与力量的完美融合中国传统拳术，太极拳不仅可以让我们深入理解博大精深的中国传统文化，还有助于缓解我们紧张的学业压力。希望我的建议对你有所帮助，并祝愿你们的实践活动取得圆满成功。李华【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为建议信；（2）因两人是笔友关系，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为提出“探寻中国文化”课外实践活动的建议，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时。2.本文的亮点：（1）I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构；（2）Learning that听说；（3）my top recommendation我的首选；（4）a mix of融.于一体；（5）showcase=show展示的较正式表达；（6）plus此外；（7）it is also preferable to do sth做某事也是更好的；（8）give sb a deep insight into使某人深刻理解某事；（9）free sb from sth使某人摆脱某事；（10）is of some help to sb对某人而言是有所帮助的。二、发言稿：我最钦佩的科学家（台州市2023学年第二学期高一年级期末试题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以The Scientist I Admire Most为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：1.科学家的简介；2.敬佩的原因。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段引出话题介绍一位最钦佩的科学家；第二段简介科学家（要点1）并说明理由（要点2）；第三段总结。【参考范文】Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! There are many scientists renowned at home and abroad who have made outstanding contributions to the world in various fields, of whom Yuan Longping is the one I admire most.Known as “Father of Hybrid Rice”, Yuan Longping enjoyed great popularity throughout the world. He devoted all his life to the research on high yield and superior quality rice, making a huge breakthrough in agricultural production in China and even the world. It is his hard work that has made "the dream of enjoying the cool under the rice" a reality.Yuan Longping, a scientist with persistent pursuit and firm belief, has written a series of magnificent chapters in agriculture with his wisdom and sweat. His achievements and spirit are worth learning and inheriting by each and every one of us. (131 words )Thanks!【中文翻译】大家好！古今中外有很多科学家，他们在各个领域为世界做出了杰出贡献，其中最让我钦佩的要数袁隆平。袁隆平是杂家水稻之父，受到全国人民，乃至世界人民的尊重。他倾尽毕生精力致力于水稻研究，成功研发出高产优质的杂交水稻，让中国乃至世界的农业生产取得了巨大突破。正是他的辛勤耕耘，让“禾下乘凉梦”成为了现实。袁隆平，这位有着执着追求和坚定信念的科学家，用他的智慧和汗水谱写了一曲曲壮丽的农业诗篇。他的成就和精神值得我们每一个人去学习和传承。谢谢大家！【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为发言稿；（2）因文本是发言稿，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍最钦佩的一位科学家并说明理由，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时和一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）renowned at home and abroad闻名国内外，在句中用作后置定语；（2）enjoy great popularity throughout the world享誉世界；（3）It is his hard work that .运用强调句结构；（4）each and every one of us表示强调。三、发言稿：我最钦佩的科学家（2）（台州市2023学年第二学期高一年级期末试题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以The Scientist I Admire Most为题写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括：1.科学家的简介；2.敬佩的原因。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。写作注意要点1.基本时态为一般现在时和一般过去时。2.写作思路：三段论。第一段引出话题介绍一位最钦佩的科学家林巧稚；第二段简介科学家（要点1）并说明理由（要点2）；第三段总结。【参考范文】Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! There are many scientists renowned at home and abroad who have made outstanding contributions to the world in various fields, of whom Lin Qiaozhi is the one I admire most.Known as "mother of ten thousand babies", Lin Qiaozhi is a pioneer in medicine who devoted all her life to becoming a benevolent healer. During her lifetime, she delivered more than 50,000 babies, including Yuan Longping, "father of hybrid rice." In the face of the backwardness of domestic medical technology at that time, she resolutely committed herself to the improvement of womens health level. It was her dedication that saved countless patients in clinical practice as well as achieved a significant breakthrough in scientific research.Lin Qiaozhi's story has inspired the youth through generations. Her perseverance and innovation have set a good example for each and every one of us. (140 words)Thanks!【中文翻译】大家好！古今中外有很多科学家，他们在各个领域为世界做出了杰出贡献，其中最让我钦佩的要数林巧稚。被誉为“万婴之母”的林巧稚，是一位终其一生践行医者仁心的医学先驱。她一生接生过超过五万名婴儿，其中就包括“杂交水稻之父”袁隆平。面对当时国内医学技术的落后的严重问题，她毅然决然地投身于这一领域，致力于提高妇女的健康水平，不仅在临床实践中救治了无数患者，更在科研上取得了突破性的成果。林巧稚女士的事迹激励着我们一代又一代的年轻人。她的坚韧不拔、勇于创新的精神是我们学习的典范。谢谢大家！【参考范文解析】1.应用文写作前三步骤：（1）审题判定文体为发言稿；（2）因文本是发言稿，故李华身份不必交代；（3）因文本主体部分为介绍最钦佩的一位科学家并说明理由，故本文总体时态定调为一般现在时和一般过去时。2.本文的亮点：（1）renowned at home and abroad闻名国内外，在句中用作后置定语；（2）Known as以.而闻名；（3）devote all her life to becoming a benevolent healer终其一生践行医者仁心（其中healer意为“治愈者”）；（4）commit oneself to致力于；（5）It was her dedication that .运用强调句结构（其中dedication意为“投入，奉献”）；（6）set a good example for sb为某人树立好榜样；（7）each and every one of us表示强调。3