Unit 5 Good manners第 4 课时 Writing（教师版）-八年级英语下册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版）.docx

Unit 5 Good manners第4课时 writing八年级英语下册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版）知识精讲本单元主题是学会餐桌礼仪。目的是教会学生就餐礼仪。主要内容包括:1. 大家到齐了才能开始; 2. 就餐时不要吵闹; 3. 不要张大嘴巴吃饭; 4. 不要含着食物讲话; 5. 不要够别人盘子里的东西; 6. 离开之前要等别人吃完。 能力拓展假如你是李晨, 你的美国笔友Linda打算来中国度假。请你根据下面所给的要点提示给她写一封不少于80词的电子邮件, 简单介绍一下中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。 要点提示:1. 赴宴要准时, 见面要微笑、握手。 2. 每次不要吃太多。 3. 当你吃饱了, 对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝。 4. 告辞时, 要对主人表示感谢。 思路点拨本单元主要向别人介绍餐桌礼仪, 要从以下三个方面人手: A) 赴宴要准时, 见面要微笑、握手。 B) 不要吃得太多, 吃饱了对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝。 C) 告辞时, 要对主人表示感谢。 _【答案】Dear Linda, Im glad to hear that you will come to my country for vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, if youre invited to dinner, you re supposed to be on time and shake hands with the host with a smile. While eating, you should not eat too much at a time. Its good manners to chew with your mouth closed and use a napkin to wipe your mouth sometimes. When you are full but the host still asks you to help yourself to some more food, you should say “Thank you. Its delicious, but Im full.” Its polite to say thanks while leaving. Have a good trip! Yours, Li Chen 分层提分A今年是我市创建全国文明城市的关键一年。作为中学生，我们应积极参与。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。l. 尊敬老师，对人礼貌；2. 帮助他人，友善待人；3. 遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；4. 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；5. 个人观点。参考词汇：尊敬   respect；对礼貌 be polite to；斑马线   zebra crossingOur city is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?_【答案】Our city is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?We should respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those in need and be friendly to people around us. Besides, we must obey traffic rules. When crossing the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What's more, we should protect our environment. For example, We mustn't step on the grass and climb trees. We mustn't throw litter' everywhere.Let's try our best to make our hometown a civilized city.【详解】试题分析：本文是提纲类作文。首先认真审题和阅读提示。根据提示（作为中学生，我们应积极参与创建全国文明城市。）可知此文时态主要是一般现在时，要使用建议型句型（we should/must/are supposed to），动笔前要认真阅读提示：（l. 尊敬老师，对人礼貌；2. 帮助他人，友善待人；3. 遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；4. 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；5. 个人观点。），内容要包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。不要写得太少，字数在80词以上。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。（一）根据要点列提纲：l.尊敬老师，对人礼貌：respect our teachers and be polite to others. ；2.帮助他人，友善待人：help those in need and be friendly to people around us.；3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯：obey traffic rules，When crossing the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing，mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red.；4.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等：we should protect our environment.， We mustn't step on the grass and climb trees. We mustn't throw litter everywhere.；5个人观点：Let's try our best to make our hometown a civilized city.（二）连词成句，连句成篇，注意使用连词；（三）写完以后再阅读一遍，检查是否有语法、单词拼写等错误，或不合适的地方。点睛：这是一篇比较优秀的作文，语言表达要符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，用词准确、句子通顺。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）注意给出的起始句（这就给出了时态），学生运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。B目前，你所在的学校正在积极创建全市文明校园，请你以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题，根据下列提示用英语写一封80词左右的倡议书。要点提示如下： 1. 保持教室的整洁，不乱扔垃圾；       2. 不在公共场所大声喧哗，图书馆保持安静；3. 遵守交通规则，总是排队；             4. 举止有礼，互帮互助；             5. Dear schoolmates,Our school is trying to be a better place for all of us. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something for it._Lets start from ourselves!The Students Union June 13th, 2018【答案】Dear schoolmates,Our school is trying to be a better place for all of us. We know good manners are really important. And we can do something for it.In order to make our school more beautiful, we should keep our classrooms clean every day. Remember not to drop litter everywhere. And we should remember not to laugh or talk loudly after class in public places. When we are in the library, we must keep quiet. Its also important to follow traffic rules everywhere and queue for everything. We should always behave politely and help each other any time. Good manners make our school better, as well as us.   Lets start from ourselves!The Students Union June 13th, 2018【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，以校学生会的名义就“创建文明校园”这一主题，写一封倡议书。【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，写一封“创建文明校园”的倡议书。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should，When we are，Its also important to，Good manners make等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了为了让学校成为一个更好的地方，我们有一些事要做，接下来介绍我们应该做的事，最后提倡要从我们自己开始。此处in order to, remember not to do sth, keep quiet, each other, as well as等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。C假如你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom打算来安徽度假。请你根据下面所给的提示内容给他写一封电子邮件,简单介绍一下我们中国的风俗与餐桌礼仪。要点如下：1.会面亲戚朋友时要微笑,握手；2.每次赴宴要准时,同时不宜吃得太多；3.当你吃饱了,对主人的劝菜应礼貌回绝；4.离别时,要对主人表示谢意。注意：1.词数80100；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称；4.信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。_Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear that you will come to Anhui for winter vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China,_ Best wishes.Li Hua【答案】Dear Tom, I'm glad to hear that you will come to Anhui for winter vacation. Different countries have different customs and table manners. In China, you should smile and shake hands with your friends or relatives. If you're invited to dinner, you must be on time. While eating, you should not eat too much at a time. It's good manners to say “thanks” to the host when he asks you to help yourself to some food. When you are full, but the host still asks you to help yourself to more food, you should say, “Thank you. It's delicious, but I'm full.” It's polite to say thanks while leaving. Have a good trip!Best wishes.Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本题属于书信作文。题目要求以Li Hua的身份向即将来安徽的美国笔友Tom写一封介绍中国风俗及餐桌礼仪的书信。2.写作指导：首先开篇已给出，中间要写明在中国具体的风俗和餐桌礼仪，最后表示对Tom的欢迎与祝福。人称主要采用第一人称，时态主要采用一般现在时。在描述中国风俗和餐桌礼仪时要把具体细节表达清楚，前后要贯通连贯。D学生会将要邀请Mr Black做一个关于电话礼仪的演讲，请根据下列内容，写一个不少于70词的通知，不包括所给的开头和结尾。Name of the talk: Good telephone mannersTime: 2 p.m., 13 MayPlace: The school hallContent: Some important rules, for example: answer a phone as soon as possible, say sorry for delays (延误), keep your voice down, be yourself and speak naturally, say good-bye before hanging upHello, everyone, May I have your attention, please?_Of course, there is a lot more to learn about. Please go and attend the speech.【答案】Hello, everyone, May I have your attention, please?There will be a speech in the school hall at 2 oclock on the afternoon of 13 May. Mr Black is going to tell us something about good telephone manners. There are many rules on making or answering phone calls. Please keep some of them in mind. For example, we should always remember to answer a phone as soon as possible. It is polite of you to say sorry for delays. And please keep your voice down on the phone. You should be yourself and speak naturally and politely. Before you hang up, never forget to say good-bye.Of course, there is a lot more to learn about. Please go and attend the speech.【详解】本文要求根据所给出的内容写一个通知，是关于学生会将要邀请Mr Black来学校做电话礼仪演讲的通知。内容包括：演讲名字、时间、地点以及演讲的内容。本文时态主要用一般将来时，人称涉及到第一、二、三人称，但主要是第二人称。在写作时，要将给出的通知提示信息全部用英语正确的表达出来，同时注意理顺要点，防止漏写。要注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；上下文的过度，要符合逻辑关系，词汇、句式要丰富多样，避免句式单一。