Unit 6Sunshine for all 第 4 课时 Writing（教师版）-八年级英语下册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版）.docx

Unit 6 Sunshine for all 第4课时 writing八年级英语下册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版）知识精讲话题分析本单元讨论的话题是如何帮助他人。在我们身边有许多需要帮助的人，我们可以采取多种方式给予帮助、伸出援手。比如，我们可以向有关部门写求助信来帮助身边需要帮助的人。写作时，我们可以先简单介绍当前的社会现实一许多家庭、孩子需要帮助，然后再说明我们可从哪些方面、通过哪些方式给予帮助，接着阑明助人为乐的意义，最后呼吁大家互帮互助，让世界更美好。写作目标能够运用本单元所学的单词、短语和句型介绍受帮助者的现状:提出几条帮扶建议;倡导人人参与，帮助他人。能力拓展假如你是学生会主席Simon，号召同学们为王磊踊跃捐款。王磊是一中八年级的学生，今年14岁，平时学习刻苦，成绩优秀，乐于助人。他的爸爸两年前去世了，妈妈没有工作。他家境贫寒。现在他患严重的心脏病，需要立刻手术。希望大家踊跃捐款，这样他就可以接受手术（手术费约二十万元），如果大家都能伸出援助之手，他很快恢复健康，重新返回校园了。Give a helping handDear all,A Grade 8 student from Number One Middle School needs our help!_Thanks a lot for your help!Simon【答案】Give a helping handDear all,A Grade 8 student from Number One Middle School needs our help!The students name is Wang Lei. He is 14 years old. Wang Lei works hard at school and he is one of the top students. He is helpful too.His father died two years ago and his mother has no job. His family is very poor. Now he has a serious heart disease. He needs to be operated on as soon as possible. I hope all of us can donate money to him. The operation will cost over two hundred thousand yuan. If all of us can give a helping hand, he will get well soon and return to school.Thanks a lot for your help!Simon【分析】本文是一篇材料作文【详解】根据题目要求可知，本文是介绍同学的个人和家庭情况，应该用一般现在时，穿插一般过去时和一般将来时。人称用第三人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：第一部分：开篇点题号召同学们为王磊踊跃捐款。第二部分：具体介绍需要帮助的同学的情况王磊是一中八年级的学生，今年14岁，平时学习刻苦，成绩优秀，乐于助人。他的爸爸两年前去世了，妈妈没有工作。他家境贫寒。现在他患严重的心脏病，需要立刻手术。希望大家踊跃捐款，这样他就可以接受手术（手术费约二十万元），如果大家都能伸出援助之手，他很快恢复健康，重新返回校园了。第三部分：再次点题希望大家帮忙。分层提分题组A 能力提升练A假设你是一名18岁的学生，参加了学校举办的Walk for Children募捐活动。你和你的队友在两小时内完成了行走任务，获得了奖状和纪念品，共募集了5000元人民币，用以帮助中国因贫困不能上学的孩子。请根据以上内容和下表写一篇短文介绍这次活动。字数在80词左右。活动名称Walk for Children活动时间9.00a.m, Sunday, July 13, 2008活动地点海西公园路线从学校到海西公园活动目的帮助中国因贫困不能上学的孩子完成活动时间2小时奖励证书、纪念品筹款数量至少4000元人民币_【答案】Walk for ChildrenOur school held a fund-raising event called Walk for Children on Sunday, July 3, 2008. It started at 9:00 a.m. from our school to Haixi Park. Its aim is to help the children who are too poor to go to school. My team members and I finished the walk within 2 hours and we received certificates and souvenirs. We collected 5,000yuan in all. Ill always remember the experience that I can help make the lives of poor children better.【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料。假设你是一名18岁的学生，参加了学校举办的Walk for Children募捐活动。你和你的队友在两小时内完成了行走任务，获得了奖状和纪念品，共募集了5000元人民币，用以帮助中国因贫困不能上学的孩子。根据以上内容和下表写一篇短文介绍这次活动。首先认真审题。根据内容可知此文时态应用一般过去式时。动笔前要认真阅读材料，列好提纲，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写，语法错误（时态，主谓一致等）。点睛：（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。（2）根据内容确定短文时态，学生要运用正确的时态，运用所给或所学的词语，尽量运用熟悉的句型。（3）列好提纲和要点，及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语，句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅，连贯。 （4）注意书写的规范：大小写，标点符号等的正确运用。   （5）注意检查：单词拼写，语法，动词时态，语序，主谓一致等。B假设你所在的城市即将举办国际贸易博览会。有关部门现向全社会招聘志愿者。要求：1具有为国际友人服务的热情；2掌握丰富的文化知识，既是服务人员，也是文化的使者；3具有流利的英语表达能力，能做好沟通工作。假如你叫林平平，请根据以上要求，写一封想当博览会志愿者的申请信。要求：字迹工整，80词左右。开头、结尾已写好，不计入总词数。生词：国际贸易博览会the International Trade ExpositionDear Sir or Madam, Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I'd like very much to be a volunteer._To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.Yours.Lin Pingping【答案】Dear Sir or Madam, Thank you for taking your time to read my letter. As the coming of the International Trade Exposition, I'd like very much to be a volunteer.All our citizens are hosts for this special event. Above all, I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world. Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture. What's more, as we all know, English as an international language will play an important role in communication during the Exposition, and I am good at it. I can express myself fluently and clearly in English.To sum up, I believe I can be a qualified volunteer. I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.Yours, Lin Pingping【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如Thank for doing，the coming of，very much，to be a volunteer，above all，all over the world，not onlybut also，what's more,，as we all know，play an important role，be good at，in English，sum up，be accepted to be one等。而I promise I should endeavor to serve with enthusiasm our distinguished guests from all over the world. /Besides, I have a rich knowledge about Chinese history, so I will be not only a servant but also a carrier for our splendid culture./ I will value it and do all I can if I could be accepted to be one.等复杂结构从句的运用，使本文内容丰富，表达流畅，是短文的最大亮点。点睛：这是一篇提示作文，根据提示内容可知用一般现在时和一般将来时，可针对提示内容结合实际生活展开合理的想象，行文中注意使用一些常见的短语，会给习作增色。题组B 培优拔尖练C假如你是班长，你负责制定你们班五月份的志愿者活动计划。请你写一篇80100词的发言稿，代表班委会向全班的志愿者介绍一下该月的活动安排。要求：1. 活动计划中有两项内容需自拟。2. 发言稿的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入要求词数。时间活动计划5月10日去火车站清理垃圾5月17日去养老院5月24日去人民公园5月31日帮助某社区的小学生学习，给他们讲故事Attention, please! Id like to tell you something about our plan for the volunteer work in May. _Thats all. Thank you.【答案】Attention, please! Id like to tell you something about our plan for the volunteer work in May.Well go to the train station to clean up the litter on May 10. On May 17, well go to the old peoples home to help them wash their clothes and clean up their rooms. After that well give performances to cheer them up. On May 24, well go to the Peoples Park to fix up bicycles and radios for people in need. Well go to Guangming Community near our school on May 31. Well help the children there study and tell them stories. Im sure well have a meaningful May.Thats all. Thank you.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求写一篇发言稿，介绍五月份活动周的志愿者活动计划，要包含所有提示要点，并自拟两项内容。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，使用一般将来时来介绍活动安排。要做到要点齐全，具体某一天安排了哪些活动要写清楚。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。D上周六我校在人民广场举行了一场慈善演出，演出的目的是为“希望工程”募集资金，帮助贫困地区的孩子们。许多师生表演了节目，尤其是我校非洲鼓表演（the Africa Drum Playing）最受欢迎。我们还邀请了很多当地商人(businessman)来看演出，他们给予了我们支持。演出大获成功。我希望更多的人（至少二句）_【答案】Last Saturday we held a charity show at Peoples Square. The purpose of the show was to raise money for Project Hope to help the children in poor areas. Many teachers and students took part in it. The Africa Drum Playing by our school was the most popular. We invited many local businessmen to the show and they provided support for us. The show was a big success. I hope more people can take action to help more poor children.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下上周六我校在人民广场举行的一场慈善演出。主要从演出的目的、参加者、特色节目等方面去介绍。时态为一般过去时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含材料中的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】The purpose of the show was to raise money for Project Hope to help the children in poor areas.该节目的目的是为希望工程筹集资金，帮助贫困地区的儿童。动词不定式to help the children in poor areas用作目的状语。【高分句型二】The Africa Drum Playing by our school was the most popular.我们学校的非洲鼓是最受欢迎的。by our school是介词短语做定语。