Unit 2 School life第 4 课时 Writing（教师版）-八年级英语上册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版）.docx

Unit 2 School life 第 4 课时 writing八年级英语上册同步精品讲义（牛津译林版） 知识精讲本单元的Main task是写一篇英语短文来描述自己理想中的学校，那么怎样来写呢？同学们可以从以下几个方面进行写作：写出上学及放学的时间，午餐时间、地点，放学后的活动、时间等。描绘一下学习的科目，自己和同学们对所学科目的观点，介绍班级大小等。描写一下理想中的学校的环境和设施。写一下学校开设的兴趣小组和自己参加的活动。教材中出现的相关句型：1My ideal school starts at . and finishes at .我理想的学校在上课，在放学。2We have an hour for .我们一个小时。3I have . because I think . is very interesting.我学习因为我认为很有趣。4I love .，so I have . every day.我爱，所以我每天学习5There is a large playground/big library/dining hall/football field/swimming pool.有一个大操场/大图书馆/餐厅/足球场/游泳池。6We have lots of .我们有许多7Every .，we go on a school trip.每，我们进行学校郊游。其他拓展句型：1We have lots of clubs and after­school activities.我们有许多俱乐部和课外活动。2Among all my subjects，I like French best.在所有科目中，我最喜欢法语。3During the week，we can borrow more books from the school library.在这个周，我们可以从学校图书馆借更多的书。4In the club，older students help new students learn more about the school.在俱乐部中，老生帮助新生了解更多有关学校的事。5We wear school uniforms，but we do not wear ties.我们穿校服，但是我们不系领带。能力拓展为了争做“阳光好少年”，近期阳光中学八（1）班开展了一次主题为“读好书、走好路、扫好地”的班会活动，根据下列提示信息，完成短文内容，完成一篇短文。要点：读好书获取知识，开拓视野；（自拟一点）走好路遵守交规，严禁插队；（自拟一点）扫好地保护环境，健康生活；（自拟一点）希望人人参与，变得优秀要求：1.90词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。2.短文内容必须包括所给的提示，并按要求做适当发挥。3.不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Be an excellent studentRecently, we have held a special class meeting. The purpose of it is to help us students form good habits and to be an excellent student.As students, we should read more. _【答案】Be an excellent studentRecently, we have held a special class meeting. The purpose of it is to help us students form good habits and to be an excellent student.As students, we should read more. Reading can not only help us learn more knowledge but also open up a whole new world to us. Whats more, its a good way to relax ourselves and enrich our lives.Its necessary for us to obey traffic rules. We should queue and avoid pushing in before others. Moreover, its dangerous for teenagers to ride too fast.Its our duty to protect the environment and live a healthy life. Also, we can pick up the litter if possible or do housework, such as sweeping the floor.I hope everyone can take an active part in order to make ourselves excellent.【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。围绕主题“读好书、走好路、扫好地”的班会活动来完成一篇短文。2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。第一段引出主题；第二段介绍阅读的重要性；第三段介绍遵守交通规则的重要性；第四段介绍保护环境的重要性；最后一段呼吁每个人都要行动起来。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强。无语法和标点错误。分层提分A红星中学将每年的6月7日定为美食节，而今年的主题是“为贫困孩子献爱心”。请你以学校学生会的名义写一份倡议书（词数在80左右），要点如下：1. 孩子们没有足够的学习用品和衣服（school supplies and clothes）；2. 许多贫困孩子上不起学（tooto）；3. 我们准备举办美食节为他们筹钱（raise money）；4. 美食节于6月7日周日上午9: 30在学校操场上举行（school playground）。Dear students,_The Students Union（学生会）【答案】Dear students, In some parts of our country, children dont have enough school supplies. They dont have enough clothes to keep warm. They are too poor to go to school. In order to help them, we will hold a food festival to raise money for them. The food festival will be on our school playground at 9:30 a. m. on Sunday, June 7th. Look forward to your joining. The Students Union【详解】1. 题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是以“为贫困孩子献爱心”为主题展开描写，内容按照题目中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：文章主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第三人称展开描述。主要是介绍活动的详情，包括举办活动的目的，贫困地区孩子们的现状以及活动的时间和地点等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。 B假如你是Simon，现用英语写一封申请加入环保俱乐部(Go Green Club)的信。信中需包括以下所给信息，可适当发挥使行文连贯，书写规范，词数不少于80。要点如下：1、你是阳光中学八年级学生，15岁，想成为环保俱乐部的一名成员；2、你身体健康，诚实幽默，乐于助人，有许多爱好(举例说明具体爱好)；3、你热爱自然并理解保护环境的重要性；4、你加入该俱乐部后的理由(至少两点)；5、每个周日上午9点到10点可以参加俱乐部的活动；6、联系方式：010-63880945或SimonDear Sir/ Madam,_Yours Sincerely,Simon【答案】Dear Sir/ Madam,Im Simon. Im a student of Grade 8 in Sunshine Middle School. As a teenager of 15, I want to be a member of Go Green Club. Im healthy, humorous and helpful. Besides, I have lots of hobbies, such as playing basketball, playing the violin, reading books and so on.I love nature and know the importance of protecting the environment. If I can join the club, I can set an example for others. I can tell everyone around me about the importance of protecting the environment and help them classify their rubbish and help them form a good habit of not littering. At the same time, I will turn some useless things into useful things. For example, donating unnecessary books to children in poor areas. I really hope I can join the club. Usually, I can join the club from nine to ten every Sunday morning. Im looking forward to your response. My telephone number is 010-63880945. My email is Simon.【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据题目中的要点提示，写出个人信息以及想要加入环保俱乐部的理由及原因等，以及自己的联系方式等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：写作时要注意书写格式的正确，用第一人称来写作，时态以一般现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 C假定你是李华。合肥市第三十八中学教育集团文学社刊物春花招募小记者，请你用英文给编辑部写封自荐信。要点如下：1.了解学校；2.爱好广泛；3.擅长写作；4.乐于交流。注意：1.词数80-100；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。reporter 记者Dear Sir/Madam,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,I hear you are looking for a reporter for your magazine. I hope to be a member of it.First of all, I have been a student in this school for nearly two years, so I know about it well. Besides, I have a lot of hobbies, such as reading and traveling. I have learnt a lot from them. Whats more, it is writing that I am good at. It brings a great deal of fun to me. At the same time, Im always ready to communicate with others.Im sure to be the right person you are looking for. Id be greatly thankful if I could get the chance.Yours,Li Hua.【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示词语和要点，写出自己可以胜任这份工作的理由，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：写作时要与要点紧密结合，用第一人称来写作，时态以现在时为主，要做到要点齐全，无单词拼写和语法错误。 D 假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件，想要了解一下你们的学校生活情况。请认真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复，字数90左右。To: lihua From: bill006Subject: School life Dear Lihua, How are things going? We will have our winter vacation soon. Would you please tell me your school life?Who is your best friend at school?What activities do you have in your school?Do you like your school uniform? Why or why not?How do you feel about your school life? Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes!Bill 注意：1.开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 2.回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯通顺。 3.文中不得提及人名，校名等相关信息。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my school life._I am also interested in your school life! Write to me!Yours,Lihua【答案】Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my school life. Tony is my best friend in our school. We often go to school at half past seven. Our class begins at eight. We have four classes in the morning. There are three classes in the afternoon. We have five subjects. They are Chinese, English, maths, art and PE. We have many kinds of activities. There are different clubs in our school. You can join them if you like. I like our school uniforms because they are comfortable and fashionable. I think our school life is colorful.I am also interested in your school life! Write to me!Yours,Lihua【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。要求根据提示问题，介绍自己的学校生活。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时主要以第一人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍自己最好的朋友、学校有什么活动、是否喜欢校服和原因以及觉得学校生活怎么样；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。