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Unit 3 第5课时 A当前，全市各学校正开展“智慧阅读”活动.请你根据活动主题并结合表中所给信息，用英语写一篇80词左右的倡议书，向全校同学发出倡议读书的益处1.获取知识，使人明辨是非 2.?（请你补充）发出倡议1.多读书，读好书2.养成每天读书的好习惯3.与父母共读一本书.4.?（请你补充）My dear friends,As we know, reading is very important._【答案】My dear friends,As we know, reading is very important.It's a good way to help you learn knowledge. Through reading, you can tell what is right and what is wrong. Reading can also bring us a lot of joy and peace.Its necessary for us to read. We should read good books which can help us learn more. Besides, it's important to form a good habit of reading every day. What's more, we can go back home and read a good book together with our parents. Its a good chance for us to improve our knowledge as well as our relationship. After reading, you can try to write down what you think. It's also helpful for you to improve your writing skills.Come on and join us in reading!【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作。在写作时应紧接开头继续写作，根据题目要求讲述读书的益处，并发出读书的倡议。2.写作指导：本文用第一人称来写作，时态采用一般现在时为主，关于读书的倡议叙述完整，条理清晰。 B 随着网络的不断发展，传统的学习模式受到冲击。“网上学习(online learning)”这一新的学习模式备受青睐。假设你是刘欣，最近某英文杂志正在讨论中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况，请你给该报投稿，反映讨论结果并谈谈你自己的看法。提示：观点赞成(support) 反对(against) 理由1.网上资源丰富(be filled with useful resources) 2.可以自由(free) 选择学习内容和时间1.网上信息太多，有些不真实2.长时间用电脑对眼睛不好(be bad for) 自己的看法1.事物都有两面性(every coin has two sides) 2.学生应该正确使用网络(use the Internet properly) 注意：1.词数80以上，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.信中不能出现真实的人名、地名。参考词汇：convenient(方便的) Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet. _Yours,Liu Xin【答案】Dear Editor,Recently, our class had a discussion about whether students should learn on the Internet.Some students support it. They think online learning is much more convenient and that the Internet is filled with useful resources. Whats more, learners are free to decide what and when to learn. However, some students are against it. Although they think theres a lot of information on the Internet, some information isnt true. Also, spending a long time searching for information online is bad for their eyes.In my opinion, every coin has two sides. I think its better to use both the traditional way of learning and online learning. Students should use the Internet properly.Yours,Liu Xin【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求你以刘欣的身份给杂志投稿，把班级针对“中学生是否应该通过网络进行在线学习”的讨论结果写成文章。写作指导：本文应该主要以第三人称对不同观点展开描述，时态以一般现在时为主。写作过程中注意分层次，把不同观点及其理由阐述清楚，并且要发表自己的看法。注意语法和用词要符合规范。 C假如你是王雷，就读于某国际学校，你校开展“垃圾分类、人人有责”的主题活动将近一个月，但收效甚微。为此，你给校长Mr. Welles写了一封邮件，邮件中你就垃圾分类过程中存在的问题以及解决办法做了简单阐述。请你根据所给提示，完成这封邮件。写作提示：1.What are the main environmental problems?2. What can we do in our daily life?3. Whats your wish?写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；2. 100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Mr. Welles, The rubbish sorting project has been around for nearly a month in our school, but our school environment hasnt got better. Why is that? Here are my opinions._Your sincerely,Wang Lei【答案】Dear Mr. Welles, The rubbish sorting project has been around for nearly a month in our school, but our school environment hasnt got better. Why is that? Here are my opinions.There are mainly two problems. Many students havent realized the importance of protecting the environment. They think it is far from us students. And for students who want to make a change, they have no idea how to sort the rubbish. To solve these problems, I suggest our school give some speeches on rubbish sorting so that we students will learn about how to deal with all kinds of litter. Whats more, teachers can be asked to check if students are putting rubbish in the right bin.I think if we all make an effort, our school is sure to become a better place.Your sincerely,Wang Lei【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，题目要求是假如你是王雷，你校开展“垃圾分类、人人有责”的主题活动将近一个月，但收效甚微。为此，让你给校长Mr. Welles写一封邮件，简单阐述你就垃圾分类过程中存在的问题以及解决办法。要包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；语句要通顺，条理要清晰，详略要得当，书写要工整，100词左右。2.写作指导：写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，一定要谈谈自己的看法。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的字数，不要太多也不要太少。 D九年级学生Sandy面对父母和老师的期望以及每天堆成山的作业感到非常苦恼，昨天因为看了一小时的电视跟妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据以下提示以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。写作提示：1. 如何舒缓目前的压力；2. 如何安排好每天的学习和休息；3. 如何处理与父母的关系。写作要求：1. 语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；2. 100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Sandy, I'm really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. Here is my advice._ _Yours,Nancy【答案】Dear Sandy, I'm really glad that you can share your problems and feelings with me. Here is my advice.First, it's a good choice to take up a hobby to help you relax.Second, you can make plans for your everyday life. After you study for about two hours, you can take a walk outside and try to relax. Besides, don't stay up late.Third, never argue with your parents. You should learn to understand them and communicate with them. Discuss your problems with them. They will help you find better ways to solve them.In a word, you will have a happier life with less pressure as long as you study hard and often talk with your parents.Yours,Nancy【详解】1. 题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以老师Nancy的身份给学生Sandy写一封信，帮助他舒缓目前的压力，属于书信类写作。题目中用写作提示的形式，列出了文章的主要内容，包括三个方面，我们应以这个提示为主线，发挥想象力，补充具体细节，使文章内容更加丰富、充实。写作前，应仔细审题，确定文章的主题、时态和人称。2. 写作指导：审题可知，这篇短文应以第二人称和一般现在时为主展开叙述，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，从句子的整体结构出发，使用恰当的词汇、短语和句型。句子结构可以简单句为主，如主谓宾或主系表结构，穿插使用并列句或复合句以及其他复杂结构，如非谓语动词等，提升文章档次。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。例文中FirstSecondThird和In a word等词语的运用，使行文条理，层次清晰，是本文的亮点所在。 E假设你是李平，你的朋友Nancy最近学习上遇到困惑。请根据表格提示的内容用英语给她写一封电子邮件，简要描述并发表你自己的观点。要求：(l)中心突如，语义连贯层次清晰，书写规范；(2)词数在90词左右，开头和结尾已给出不计入总词数；(3)文中不得出现你所在学校的名称及你的 真实姓名。适当的压力积极恩考，认真学习；及时复习，防止遗忘；过重的压力无法入睡，非常疲倦；害怕考试，导致失败；应对的措施合理计划，准备充分；（至少2条） Hi, Nancy,How are you?Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us._I'm really forward to hearing from you.LoveLi Ping【答案】Hi, Nancy,How are you?Everyone may have the exam stress. A little bit of stress can be a good thing to us.If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder. Besides, it can remind us to review our lessons in time to remember them. So we can pass the exams easily.However, if we have too much stress, we can't sleep well at night and we may feel very tired. We may be afraid of exams and fail in the end.In my opinion. to deal with the exam stress, we'd better plan and prepare well. We should also develop some good habits, such as enough exercise and healthy diets. Then we'11 feel relaxed and do well in the exams.I'm really forward to hearing from you.LoveLi Ping【详解】这篇作文是要写一封电子邮件，背景是你的朋友Nancy最近在学习上遇到了困惑，需要你用英语来告诉她应该怎么办，具体的内容已经给了出来，例如可以告诉她适当的压力是有益的，可以帮助她积极恩考，认真学习；及时复习，防止遗忘；如果压力过重就可能产生不良的结果，例如无法入睡，非常疲倦；害怕考试，导致失败；就此你需要给出可行的建议和措施，这里需要自行补充两条，在写作的时候一定要注意逻辑准确，正确运用相关的连词，说理要能自圆其说，此外要保证用词准确，语法正确，语言连贯。写作亮点：作文的开头结尾已经给了出来，所以可以直接根据表格开始正文的书写，用到的一些短语结构较为准确，例如：exam stress. 考试压力，A little bit of stress 一点压力，think actively 积极思考，work harder 更努力工作，remind us to review our lessons 提醒我们去复习课程，pass the exams easily 轻松通过考试，too much stress 过多的压力，sleep well 睡眠好，be afraid of exams 害怕考试，in the end 最后，In my opinion 在我看来，develop some good habits 养成一些好习惯，healthy diets 健康饮食，feel relaxed 感到放松。除了这些短语，还在多处用到了条件状语句，例如：If we have proper stress, we can think actively and work harder.（如果我们有合适的压力，我们可以积极思考以及更努力工作），此外，文章分段清晰，说明逻辑清晰，语句十分连贯，完成了要求的写作任务。