Unit 4 单元话题满分范文必背-（牛津译林版）.docx

Unit 4 Growing up单元话题满分范文必背1北京冬奥会已经落幕，世界各地的运动健儿参加这一盛会。大家会不会为运动员们的获奖而激动，为他们的坚持而感动？想想你最崇拜的一位运动员是谁，以My favorite athlete为题，写一篇英语作文。要点：1. 介绍你最崇拜的运动员。            2. 为什么最崇拜他/她？3. 你从他/她身上学到了什么？写作要求：1. 包括以上所有要点，并作适当发挥；2. 条理清楚，语句通顺,意思连贯，书写规范；3. 80100词左右。_【答案】例文My favorite athleteMy favorite athlete is Ma Long. He is one of the best table tennis players in the world.Ma Long was born in Anshan, Liaoning province. He has been playing table tennis since his childhood. At the 2020 Tokyo Olympic Games, Ma Long tried his best and won the first place. All Chinese people are proud of him.Although Ma Long showed his talent at an early age, he still worked hard. Like every other athlete, he faces difficulties in training, but he never gives up. From his experience, I have learned that we can do almost anything if we never lose heart. He is my hero!【解析】题干解读：题目要求以My favorite athlete为题写一篇英语短文；要求包含所有要点提示。写作指导：此作文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，采用第三人称口吻。此作文可采用3段落格式，第一段：介绍最喜欢的运动员；第二段：描述为什么崇拜他；第三段：描述你学到了什么。22022北京冬奥会2金1银得主谷爱凌（Eileen Gu）在接受采访说要感谢妈妈对她的教育与帮助。从她的成功经历上可以看出，每一个人的成长与别人的帮助是分不开的。那么在你的学习生活中你最感恩的人是谁？他/她给了你哪些帮助？请以李华的名义在网上发表你的看法。提示：1. 不可出现真实姓名与地址；2. 观点表述正确，语句通顺；3. 不少于80词。参考词汇： 北京冬奥会Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022；金牌gold medal；银牌silver medal；同龄人contemporary_【答案】例文：Eileen Gu once said in an interview that she is thankful to her family especially her mother. As a winner of two gold medals and one silver medal in Olympic Winter Games Beijing 2022, she is sure to be the most successful one among her contemporaries. With the help of her family, she reached her goals by hard working. Yes, we cant just grow up by ourselves. We need help from others on our way to success. And for me, Id like to show my thanks to my father, who was always there whenever I needed help. From my primary school to my college, he helped to get over the difficulties I faced, he encouraged me, and stood by my side. I will never forget what he did for me.【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：本题要求以李华的名义在网上发表不少于80词的看法，内容包括：介绍谷爱凌获得的荣誉，你最感恩的人以及这个人给你的帮助。2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一和第三人称进行写作，时态主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时；写作时应紧扣题目要求和参考词汇进行发挥；写作完成后应确保文章内容齐全，行文流畅，语言符合规范和英文表达习惯。3某英语杂志社正在开展“我心中的奥运之星”的英语征文活动，谷爱凌在本届北京冬奥会勇夺两金，为国人树立了良好的榜样。请结合下面表格提供的信息完成一篇征文稿。Gu Ailings Personal information BirthJobPersonalityAchievement(成就)2003.9freestyle skier, model and studenthard-working, positivelearned skiing in 2006won two gold medals for China at theBeijing 2022 Winter Olympics内容包括: 1.谷爱凌个人信息；2.你的个人感悟。注意：1.词数: 80-100词（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校姓名。Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair? _【答案】参考范文：Have you watched the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics? Did you notice a beautiful girl with long blond hair? Now let me introduce her to you.Gu Ailing, a freestyle skier, is a model as well as an excellent student. Gu Ailing was born in September, 2003, and she started to learn skiing at the age of only three because she loves the feeling of snow. The 18-year-old girl won two gold medals for China at the Beijing 2022 Winter Olympics and made history.Gus positive attitude and hard work help her achieve great success. We should learn from her and never give up when we are in trouble. She sets a good example for us, and I want to learn from her and make full use of my time and make contributions to our country.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据表格提示内容，写一篇征文稿，介绍谷爱凌个人情况及她在北京冬奥会勇夺两金的成就，并表达自己的感悟。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时和一般过去时为主；人称以第三人称和第一人称为主。本文分为三段式，第一段引出话题要介绍谷爱凌，第二段介绍她的个人情况及取得的成就，第三段写自己的感悟。写作要确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。4我校正在举办主题为“我心中的奥运之星”的英语征文活动，其中代表者“中国速度”的苏炳添在奥运会半决赛中跑出9秒83，成功晋级决赛！成为第一位闯入奥运百米决赛的黄种人，为国人树立了良好的榜样。谓结合下面表格提供的信息完成一篇征文稿。Personal informationJobprofessor, athletePersonalitymodest, hard-working, serious. . .Clothes he wore in 2020 Tokyo OlympicsColoursred and yellowReasonsProblems full of pain. . .Solutions （解决方案） never give up. . .注意：1. 词数：100词左右（文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数）2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。3. 文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥。Su BingtianHave you watched the Olympic 100-meter race during the summer vocation? Did you notice a great man who is now called China speed? He is Su Bingtian. _【答案】例文：Su BingtianHave you watched the Olympic 100-meter race during the summer vocation? Did you notice a great man who is now called China speed? He is Su Bingtian. Su is not only a professor but also a professional athlete, who is the first one to become the first Chinese to qualify for the mens 100m finals. He is a modest and hard-working person, and he always tries his best to run although the road to success is hard. He is strict with himself and his students, and he is also serious in his class. All students like him so much. His favorite colours are red and yellow. Su attended the 2020 Tokyo Olympics, and the colours of his clothes are red and yellow, which are the same as the flag of China. As we know, he cannot avoid hurting himself during the training. However, he never gives up his dream until he achieves his dream. He must feel tired and exhausted when he runs in the tracks, but he keeps running until he reaches the finish line.【解析】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料文，就“我心中的奥运之星”为主题，根据表格内容，介绍奥运之星苏炳添。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主，使用第三人称介绍人物。承接文章的开头部分，第二段介绍苏炳添的职业，性格以及2020年东京奥运会的着装等。第三段叙述苏炳添遇到的困难以及解决方法。可自由发挥，保证叙述完整。5在2022 年北京冬奥会上，苏翊鸣和谷爱凌不断挑战自我，勇夺金牌。某英文网站正在开展以“我眼中的奥运冠军”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用 英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你认为是什么造就了他们的成功，这对你今后的学习和生活有什么启发，以及你会怎么做。提示词语： train , love, challenge, insist, support, improve提示问题：    What makes Olympic champions successful? What can you learn from them? How will you do in the future?_【答案】例文At the 2022 Beijing Winter Olympics, Su Yiming and Gu Ailing continued to challenge themselves and won gold medals. They set good examples for us teenagers. What makes Olympic champions successful? First, they possess some good characters, such as diligence and strong will. They keep on training hard and challenge themselves. Second, they have confidence in themselves and constantly improve themselves. I should learn these good qualities from them and study hard to make my dream come true.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这个题目要求学生们参加某英文网站举行的主题为“我眼中的奥运冠军”的征文活动，谈谈你认为是什么造就了他们的成功，这对你今后的学习和生活有什么启发，以及你会怎么做。题目中给出了提示问题和提示词，学生们可以此为基础，组织文章的内容，可以进行适当拓展，然后用正确的英语表达出来。2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇作文应主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时叙述，注意谓语动词的正确形式。文章中应包含题目中列出的所有要点，不能遗漏；注意英语句式结构的特点和表达习惯，以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句和复合句的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。6假如你是李华。最近，你观看了北京冬奥会，深受鼓舞。请写一篇英语短文给你校的英语报介绍北京冬奥会以及你的感受。你的短文应包括以下要点：1. 举办时间：2022年2月14至2月20日2. 举办地点：中国的城市，北京和张家口3. 参与人员：全世界各国的运动员，包括欧洲、非洲、亚洲等；4. 运动项目：滑雪、滑冰、冰球等等冰上运动；5. 你印象最深的人：6. 你感受： 1）参考词汇：北京冬奥会Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games运动员：athletes冰球：ice hockey2）不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分；3）词数80左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games_【答案】例文：Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter GamesIm Li Hua. Recently, I watched the Beijing 2022 Olympic Winter Games. The Beijing Winter Olympics was held from February 14th to February 20th, 2022. It was held in Beijing and Zhangjiakou in China. Athletes from all over the world took part in this competition, including Europe, Africa, Asia, etc. There were many competitions, such as skiing, skating, ice hockey and other ice sports. What impressed me most was Gu Ailing, a freestyle skier.From the Olympics, I know insistent effort will bring good luck, and I believe that we can create more miracles.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文。要求我们根据题目要求，写一篇英语短文给你校的英语报介绍北京冬奥会以及你的感受。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和三人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般过去时为主；描述故事时，场景应描写细致；写作时需要包含举办时间、举办地点、参与人员、运动项目、你印象最深的人以及你的感受；写作时不能遗漏题干要点，注意单词拼写以及语法错误等。7邓亚萍是世界上最出色的乒乓球运动员之一。请根据提示写一篇关于她的作文。1）1973年出生于郑州。2）5岁的时候开始打乒乓球，她努力训练，所以她后来成为一名伟大的运动员。3）她赢得了很多世界比赛，包括在奥运会中的四枚金牌。我们为她而骄傲。4）邓亚萍二十四岁时停止打乒乓球。在那之后她开始在北京的清华大学学习，并且出国深造。5）七年之后，她在剑桥大学完成了她的博士学位。无论她做什么，她从不放弃。注意：1）词数：不少于80；2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示词：in the Olympics在奥运会中Tsinghua University清华大学Cambridge University剑桥大学_【答案】One possible version:My hero is Deng Yaping. She is one of the best table tennis players in the world. Let me tell you something about her.Deng Yaping was born in Zhengzhou in 1973. She started playing table tennis when she was five years old. She trained hard,so she became a great player later. Shes won many world competitions, including four gold medals in the Olympics. We are all proud of her. Deng Yaping stopped playing table tennis when she was twenty-four. After that, she began to study at Tsinghua University in Beijing and attended university abroad. Seven years later,she completed her doctors degree at Cambridge University. Whatever she does, she never gives up. She is simply the best. She is a true hero. In short, she is so great that we will learn from her. As long as we study hard, our dream will come true one day.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。介绍世界上最出色的乒乓球运动员之一邓亚萍的相关情况。2.写作指导：本文主要以一般现在时和一般过去时为主，人称采用第三人称。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍她的个人信息以及她在乒乓球上取得的成就；第三段表达自己对她的钦佩之情。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。8当前，全市各校正开展“好书伴我成长”的活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给的信息，以“Growing up with good books”为题，写一份倡议书。注意事项:词数90左右。短文开头已经给出，不计人总词数。Growing up with good booksMy dear friends,Reading is very important. 【答案】Growing up with good booksMy dear friends,Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds but also make us clever and happy. Our study can be improved if we read more good books.However, some students spend much time listening to music, watching TV or going online to play computer games. It takes much of their spare time.So I would like to suggest that everyone should read more books, especially read some classical books so that we can spread our traditional Chinese culture to the world.Let's start reading now. And let