Unit 2 单元话题满分范文必背-（牛津译林版）.docx

Unit 2 Colours单元话题满分范文必背1在中国传统文化中，红色寓意丰富，它意味着好运和喜庆，也象征着奋斗与胜利。红包，红灯笼、红歌、红色之旅在中国都很受欢迎，请以“Chinese Red”为题，写一篇约110词的英语短文，让外国朋友了解中国红。注意：文本不可出现人名，标题己给出，不计入总词数。Chinese Red_【答案】例文Chinese Red       In China, red is a traditional colour that can be found almost everywhere. It means a lot to every Chinese.It is a symbol of good luck and happiness. We can see red on some big days, such as the Spring Festival or wedding days. To express our great joy and wishes, we often put up red lanterns, give hongbao or prepare other red items. Chinese red also stands for hard work and success. It is chosen as the colour of Chinese national flag, reminding us of how Chinese people fought for our country before. Today more of us take red tours and sing red songs, which fill us with pride and strength to work harder.In conclusion, Chinese red plays a significant role in our traditional culture.【解析】【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，主要是描写红色在中国传统文化中的寓意以及象征等，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：写作时要紧扣主题，本文应该用第三人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。2威廉是一名初三学生，面对繁重的课业和升学压力，他常常感到焦虑不安，晚上总是失眠，考试成绩不好。请针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。要点如下：1.如果你常常感到压力，建议你穿蓝色或白色，它们会使你感到放松。2.如果睡眠不好，建议把卧室的墙漆成蓝色，因为睡在蓝色中的房间里会给你身心带来安宁。3.如果考试成绩不好，建议，因为Dear WilliamYou told me that you had some problems with your study and life. Id like to give you some advice._I'm sure you will feel much better if you follow my advice.Yours,John【答案】Dear WilliamYou told me that you had some problems with your study and life. Id like to give you some advice.If you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. They will make you feel relaxed. If you cant sleep well at night, you'd better paint the walls of your bedroom blue, as sleeping in a blue room will bring peace to both your mind and body. If you can't get good marks in exams, I think it's good for you to use yellow pens. Yellow is the colour of wisdom. Some people prefer this colour when they hope for success. I'm sure you will feel much better if you follow my advice. Yours,John【解析】【分析】本题是写一封书信。格式给出，注意要素完整。【详解】本短文从不同方面分析了颜色各种精神疾病的影响和治疗方法。多用条件状语从句，主句用一般将来时表达，在描述科学事实时，则运用一般现在时。提出建议用短语had better do sth.最好做某事。If you can't get good marks in exams, I think it's good for you to use yellow pens.通过和蓝色进行比较，得出黄色有助于考试得高分，因为黄色代表智慧。3请以Colours and Moods为题，选两种颜色，分别代表energetic colour和strong colour，适当介绍它们对情绪的影响，并谈谈你最喜欢的颜色。要点如下:1.绿色是活力之色，它能给你能量，因为它是自然之色，代表新生。所以当你疲惫或虚弱时，你应该穿绿色的衣服。2.红色是强烈的颜色，它会使你看起来更加强大、有力。在中国红色还代表幸运，在过去许多女性都喜欢在结婚之日穿红色。3.我最喜欢的颜色是白色，因为(请用1-2、点理由阐述)注意:80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。Colours and MoodsDo you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods? 【答案】Colours and MoodsDo you know anything about the relationship between colours and moods?Green is an energetic colour.   It can give you energy, as it is the colour of nature and represents new life. So when you are tired or weak, you should wear green clothes.Red is a strong colour. It can make you look more powerful. It also represents luck in China and many women preferred to wear red on their wedding day in the past.My favourite colour is white because it is the colour of purity and it can help me calm down when I feel nervous.All the colours make our world colourful and wonderful.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍颜色对情绪的影响以及自己最喜爱的颜色。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一和第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意要表达出提纲所列内容，防止漏写。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句，以提高文章的档次。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。4写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。包括以下要点：1. 颜色分为冷色和热色；2. 两种颜色的作用；3. 选择颜色的重要性。词数：80左右。_【答案】Color may decide the feelings of the people. People usually talk about two group of colors: warm colors and cool colors. The warm colors are red, orange and yellow. The cool colors are green, blue and grey. The warm colors make people active and excited. And the cool colors can make people relaxed and calm. Because different colors have different effects on the people. So it is important for us to choose different colors to suit different situation.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇颜色决定人心情的英语短文。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：People usually talk about., The warm colors are., The warm colors make, So it is important for us to.等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了颜色可能会决定人的心情，接下来介绍颜色分为冷色和热色以及两种颜色的作用，最后指出选择颜色的重要性。此处talk about, make sb+形容词，have effects on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5请根据所给内容的提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。1. Daniel是一名学生，也是学生会的主席。               2. 他学习认真，成绩优异，乐于助人。3. 他最喜欢的颜色是蓝色，因为蓝色代表着宁静，蓝色对大脑和身体都有好处。4. 当别人生气时，Daniel常帮助他们平静下来。5. 他热爱和平，希望世界上没有战争，我们的世界永远和平。_ _【答案】   Daniel is a student and hes also the chairperson of the Students Union. He studies very hard and gets very good results. He is willing to help others. His favourite color is blue because blue represents calm and it is good for mind and body.        When someone gets angry, Daniel usually helps him calm down. Daniel loves peace and he hopes there is no war in the world and our world is always peaceful.【解析】【详解】试题分析：本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。短语的使用使得文章很生动，例如is good for mind and body.，helps him calm down，be always peaceful等。而多种句式的运用则是本文的亮点，例如，hes also the chairperson of the StudentsUnion.，He studies very hard and gets very good results.，He is willing to help others.，When someone gets angry, Daniel usually helps him calm down.。然，这是一篇非常优秀的习作。6请你用英文写一篇短文，介绍你的朋友约翰(John)。内容要点：1. 约翰是个生意人。他经常穿一身黑色西服( suit)，白衬衫，打着黄色或灰色领带；2. 黑色代表着权力和信任，黑色西服使他看上去很强大；3. 而白色使他感到平静和安宁，他认为灰色能使他看上去有思想(thoughtful)；4. 黄色是太阳的颜色，能使他5. 他对工作充满信心。注意事项：1. 短文须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2. 第4要点须用两句话展开合理想像，作适当发挥；3. 词数在80个左右。_【答案】John is a businessman. He always wears a black suit, a white shirt and a yellow or grey tie. Black represents power and trust. Black suits make Mr Smith look powerful. White makes him feel calm and peaceful. He also thinks wearing grey can make him look thoughtful. Yellow is the colour of the sun. It can remind him of a warm, sunny day. It is also the colour of wisdom. It can bring him success.So Mr Smith is confident about his work.【解析】【详解】试题分析：这是一篇材料作文，属于人物介绍。人称为第三人称，时态为一般现在时，注意主谓一致关系。动笔前先要注意认真阅读材料，根据汉语提示，选择恰当的句型去完成写作，注意文章的层次脉络。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。7假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Mike对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想知道更多关于红色在中国文化中的象征与意义，请你根据对方的邮件内容写一封回信。 To: Lihua2021                                        From: mikeHey Li Hua. Happy New Year!I recently read something about how popular and significant the color red is in China. Why do so many Chinese people like it? When, where, and how do you use it? Im looking forward to hearing what you have to say about this. Thanks !Mike Hi Mike!_Li Hua【答案】例文Hi Mike!Its great to hear from you. Yes, we do love red here in China Im quite happy to answer your questions about it and tell you a little bit about our culture.Basically, people in China think that red stands for happiness and good luck. It has been an important color for us since ancient times. You can see it almost everywhere on buildings, clothing, and even our national flag. Its especially common to see red color during Spring Festival. We put red paper-cuts on our doors and windows during this holiday. Kids get red envelopes full of “lucky money” from their older relatives. I have a nice red dress myself. Its one of my favorites. My parents gave it to me. I feel like it represents their love and best wishes for me.Thats about it. I hope you understand more about Chinas love for red now!【解析】1. 题干解读：文章属于书信作文，英国笔友Mike对“中国红”一词很感兴趣，想知道更多关于红色在中国文化中的象征与意义，要求根据对方的邮件内容写一封回信。按照邮件的信息，红色在中国的象征及意义要写全，也可以适当发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2. 写作指导：文章主要以一般现在时为主，人称用第一、三人称展开描述。内容主要是谈谈红色的象征及意义。文章分三段，第一段总体说很高兴回答Mike的问题；第二段具体介绍红色在中国文化中的象征及意义；第三段提出希望。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。8学校要为初三学生订制新的校服，下面是工厂送来的图片，请你结合所学的关于颜色的知识，选择一款校服加以评价。要求：1. 就校服的颜色以及款式加以评价；2. 内容充实，语言流畅，书写工整；3. 80词左右。提示：Style A：red and black sports clothes for girls； blue and black sports clothes for boys Style B：white shirt，dark blue skirt and red tie for girls；white shirt，dark blue trousers and red tie for boys_【答案】I like style A very much. I think wearing such school uniforms can make us look not only smart but also sporty. And we may feel energetic when we wear them. I like the colours as well. Its good for boys to wear blue and black. They are a good match. They can make us feel less stressed. And red is also a good colour for girls. Red makes us feel full of energy. It can make us take actions easily.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头写出我选择的校服类型；接下来介绍我的理由以及对校服的评价。2.例文点评：例文采用一段式；用第一、三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般现在时，对校服的颜色以及款式加以评价，叙述完整且条理清晰。3.高分亮点：短语：not only, but also； be good for；make sb do sth；take actions。句型：I think后面接宾语从句；句型Its+形容词+for sb to do sth；They are。9假如你是Amy，你看到Rainbow女士颜色治疗中心的一份招聘启事。你想去推荐自己做这份工作，请根据招聘启事的内容用英语写一封信。注意：1.词数：100 词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数) 2.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息。3.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息，并做适当发挥。Dear Miss RainbowI am writing to recommend myself to be the assistant of your Colour Therapy Center._Yours,Amy【答案】Dear Miss RainbowI am writing to recommend myself to be the assistant of your Colour Therapy Center. Im Li Ming. Im in Class 8, Grade 9. I am kind. I am willing to help others. Im organized. I have learned to use the computer to get myself more organized. I believe colours can change our moods and improve our life. Blue is a calm colour. It can bring peace to our mind and body. Yellow is the colour of the sun. If someone doesnt feel confident enough, use the colour yellow. If I can be your assistant, I think I can learn more about it. I hope you can choose me as your assistant.Thank you!Best wishesYours,Amy【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于书信作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇短文，写一封信推荐自己做这份工作。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍个人情况以及对颜色的看法；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。