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考研考研图画作文图画作文1 1作文四大要素n根据历年考题，首段应是图画描述，不应发表太多议论，否则属于跑题。n图画描述至少应有两句，根据大纲解析，如果图画只字未提，扣三分之一的分数；如果图画只描述一句，属于描述不充分，扣3分。2写作框架：1）第一段主要是描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。2）第二段的全文的重点，一般都是要求具体分析图画中暗含的社会现象，分析原因及影响。3）第三段的要求一般视具体的试题而定，有的要求给出自己的评论、有的要求举例、有的要求考生提出自己的建议以及针对现象应该采取的措施。3 第一段套话如何描述第一段套话如何描述4替换picture的词语ndrawing指用线条或色彩绘成的图画。ncartoon指幽默或讽刺性漫画。(amusingdrawinginanewspaperormagazine,esponethatcommentssatiricallyoncurrentevents(报刊上的)漫画；（尤指）时事讽刺画。)nportrait指肖像，只用于指人。nillustration插画5描述图画的形容词 nthought-provoking发人深省的nenlightening有启迪作用/使人感悟的ncompelling/striking/intriguing引人注目/引起兴趣nprofound含义深刻=far-reachingimplicationsninstructive有益的（=informative）（搭配ADV:extremely,highly,most,particularly,quite）namusing令人发笑的，ridiculous荒谬可笑的nilluminating(particularlyrevealingorhelpful)富有启发性的；很有助益的；nimpressive印象深刻的，exaggerative夸张的6修饰动词的副词：ngraphically/vividly生动地nsymbolically象征性地nclearly/explicitly清晰地nsubtly巧妙地，精细地7寓意：moral/implications/messagehaveaprofoundimplicationbepregnantwithmeaningentertainathoughtdeeply8字幕:nCaption:words printed with an illustration or a photograph in order to describe or explain it（附於插图、照片上的）说明文字（附於插图、照片上的）说明文字1)Weareinformedbythecaptionthat“_”.2）Thecaptionreads/indicatesthat“_”.9 第一句描述图画第一句描述图画怎么写？怎么写？10第一段常用首句句式第一段常用首句句式nAs is shown/depicted/portrayed in the picture/cartoon,.nThe picture above vividly describe.nThe drawing above does demonstrate certain thought-provoking social phenomenon.nWhat does the author intend to convey by describing.is that.11nAsisshowninthepicture,nThereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.nOntheplaygroundrunsayoungman.12nAsisshowninthepicture,nthereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinal.nontheplaygroundrunsayoungman,rushingtothefinal.13nAsisshowninthepicture,nThereisamanwhoisrunningontheplayground.Heisrushingtothefinal.Thefinalisdefinedasanotherstart.nOntheplaygroundrunsayoungman,rushingtothefinal，whichisdefinedasanotherstart.14n1：Asisshowninthecartoon,acandleisshininginthedark.Itspreadsbrightnessarounditself.n2：Asisshowninthecartoon,inthepicturestandsacandle,spreadingbrightnessarounditself.15n1：Asisshownabove,ayoungmanwasaskinghisbarbertohavehishaircutlikeDavidBeckham.n2：Asisshownabove,inthechairsitsayoungman,askinghisbarbertohavehishaircutascoolasDavidBeckham.161718n1：Asisvividlydepictedabove,thereisabottlefallingtotheground,thewinespiltout.Onemanthinksitsallover,whiletheotheronethinksitstillleftalittle.n2：Asisvividlydepictedabove,inthepictureliesabottle,fallingtothegroundwithwinespiltout.Onemanwholooksverysadthinksitsallover,whiletheotherone,happilyrushingtothebottle,saysitstillleftalittle.19nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in the picture stands a boy,worried about disposing of nuclear waste,while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first.(33 words)20As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in front of blackboard stands a teacher,teaching mathematics,however,one of her students holds the opinion that the knowledge he is learning might be outdated by the time hes in the job market.(42 words)21As is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in the classroon stands a teacher,asking her student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message,while the student feels rather unpleasant.(37 words)22practice makes perfect23nYoushouldstartyouressaywitha brief account of a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face munication can replace face-to-face contact.24nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in the middle of a room sits a boy,typing letters continuously and intensively,who totally ignored his mother staring at the monitor with a blank face.(35 words)25nYoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountofthe the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why why education education doesnt simply mean learning to doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information.obtain information.26nYou should start your essay with a brief account of the increasin the increasing g use of the mobile phone in use of the mobile phone in peoples life and explain the Consequence of peoples life and explain the Consequence of overusing it.overusing it.27第一段第二句由图片描述上升到第一段第二句由图片描述上升到文字说明或寓意文字说明或寓意的阐释的阐释28由浅入深之句型Simple and funny as the cartoon is,it reflects that.The picture implicitly含蓄地，暗示地含蓄地，暗示地 raises the question of the importance of.The picture seems to be humorous at first glance/sight，but on second thoughts(=after reconsideration),you can find the fact that_.The primary purpose of the pictures above is that due attention should be paid to.29nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in the picture stands a boy,worried about disposing of nuclear waste,while his father instructs him to empty the dustbin in his room first.nSimple and funny as the cartoon is,it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.30uAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in front of blackboard stands a teacher,teaching mathematics,however,one of her students holds the opinion that the knowledge he is learning might be outdated by the time hes in the job market.uThe picture implicitly raises the question of the importance of the fundamental skills students learn in our classes.31uAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in the classroon stands a teacher,asking her student to read a work of literature as if he were reading a long text-message,while the student feels rather unpleasant.u The primary purpose of the picture above is that due attention should be paid to the importance of basic skills.32看累了，练一个呗看累了，练一个呗33nYoushouldstartyouressaywitha brief account of a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face munication can replace face-to-face contact.34nAs is vividly depicted in the cartoon above,in the middle of a room sits a boy,typing letters continuously and intensively,who totally ignored his mother staring at the monitor with a blank face.nThe picture seems to be humorous at first glance，but on second thoughts,you can find the fact that due to the wide use of computers and the development of Internet,more and more people like to chat on the Internet.We tend to pay more attention to electronic communication than to face-to-face contact.35nYoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountofthe the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why why education education doesnt simply mean learning to doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information.obtain information.36nYou should start your essay with a brief account of the increasin the increasing g use of the mobile phone in use of the mobile phone in peoples life and explain the Consequence of peoples life and explain the Consequence of overusing it.overusing it.37第二段：第二段：即主体段落即主体段落如何写？如何写？38主题句（全段核心，全文关键）Thesymbolicmeaningofthepictureistoshowusthatimportanceshouldbeattachedto.Thepurposeofthedraweristoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidto.Thepictureillustratestherealmeaningof.Undoubtedly,thedrawinghassymbolicallyrevealedaseriousprobleminourdailylife,.The purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of.39过渡句过渡句(“原因如下原因如下”）的表述）的表述：Several factors,(both individual and social),could account for the(negative/positive)phenomenon.The reasons for the phenomenon may be complicated,but we can,to a large extent，ascribe/owe/attribute(归结于归结于)it to the following factors.nThe purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that we should not neglect the significance of fundamental skills.（主题句）（主题句）nThe reasons for the phenomenon can be attributed to the following factors.（过渡句）（过渡句）n找原因！找原因！2-3条条1.学习基础知识不但学习基础知识不但能帮助我们获得能帮助我们获得高等的技能，还能高等的技能，还能培养我们的情操。培养我们的情操。2.基本技能永远不会基本技能永远不会过时，因为它在过时，因为它在日常生活和工作中日常生活和工作中仍然具有实用性仍然具有实用性。41nmastering the basic skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills,but also cultivate our characters along the way we learn it.nthe basic skills will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life and work.1.掌握基础知识不但掌握基础知识不但能帮助我们获得能帮助我们获得高等的技能，还能高等的技能，还能培养我们的情操。培养我们的情操。2.基本技能永远不会基本技能永远不会过时，因为它在过时，因为它在日常生活和工作中日常生活和工作中仍然具有实用性。仍然具有实用性。42下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用下面具体指出几个原因，第一个原因可以用Among the most important reasons cited by people is.Obviously,a variety of complicated factors contribute to the phenomenon,with the following one being the foremost.第二个原因可以用：第二个原因可以用：Another important reason is.Also playing a part is.第三个原因可以用：第三个原因可以用：The third reason,which can not be neglected,is that.In addition,(名词名词)is also responsible for the phenomenon.last but not least,.43nAmong the most important reasons cited by people is that mastering the basic skills can not only help us acquire the advanced skills,but also cultuvate our characters along the way we learn it.nMoreover,the basic skills will never be out of date and they remain very practical in our daily life and work.(55 words)for one thing,for anotheron the one hand,on the other hand44nThepictureillustratestherealmeaningofdealingwithtrivialthingsfirst.（主题句）nSeveralfactorscanaccountforthephenomenon.（过渡句）n找原因1+21.做小事不仅能够培养我们的情操，而这正是做大事所需要的，而且还能磨砺人的耐性。2.正如一句言语所说，细节决定成败，成功往往取决于小事情上。45nDoingsmallthingscannotonlyhelpuscultivatethegoodqualitiesthatweneedinundertakingimportanttasks,butalsodevelopourpatience.nAsaproverbgoes,itisdetailthatdeterminessuccess,whichwasmadeupofbysmallthings.46nThe picture illustrates the real meaning of dealing with trivial things first.（主题句）（主题句）nSeveral factors could account for the phenomenon.（过渡句）（过渡句）nFor one thing,doing small things can not only help us cultivate the good qualities that we need in undertaking important tasks,but also develop our patience.For another,as a proverb goes,it is detail that determines success,which was made up of by small things.(66 words)47practice makes perfect48nYoushouldstartyouressaywitha brief account of a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face munication can replace face-to-face contact.49nThe purpose of the picture is to remind us of the fact that electronic communication can never replace face-to-face contact.（主题句）（主题句）nThe reasons for the phenomenon can be attributed to the following factors.（过渡句）（过渡句）n找原因！找原因！2-3条条1.网上聊天不能完全表达网上聊天不能完全表达自己的想法。自己的想法。2.网上聊天不能给人真实的网上聊天不能给人真实的心里安慰。心里安慰。50nWhen we chat with others online,we cannot express our feelings fully.nWe know that body language plays an important role in our communication,but the electronic communication cannot do this.1.网上聊天不能完全表达网上聊天不能完全表达自己的想法。自己的想法。(浪费时间，造成交流障碍浪费时间，造成交流障碍)2.网上聊天不能与面对面的网上聊天不能与面对面的安慰相比。安慰相比。(一个真正的拥抱远比文字好一个真正的拥抱远比文字好)51nAmong the most important reasons cited by people is that we cannot express our feelings fully when we chat with others online.A typical example is that co-workers tend to send e-mails or instant messages through the Internet even when they are sitting next to each other.As words can never convey the full message,it usually takes much more time and rounds of conversation than face-to-face communicationnMoreover,We know that body language plays an important role in our communication,but the electronic communication cannot do this.For example,when we are sad,we need more love and warmth,a real hug from our parents or friends can mean much more to us than just words through electronic communication.for one thing,for anotheron the one hand,on the other hand52nYoushouldstartyouressaywithabriefaccountofthe the impact of the Internet on learning and then explain impact of the Internet on learning and then explain why why education education doesnt simply mean learning to doesnt simply mean learning to obtain information.obtain information.53nUndoubtedly,thedrawinghassymbolicallyrevealedaseriousprobleminourdailylife,educationdoesntsimplymeanlearningtoobtaininformation.（主题句）nSeveralfactorscouldaccountforthephenomenon.（过渡句）n找原因1+2教育不仅仅是信息的获得，还包括教育不仅仅是信息的获得，还包括实验技能实验技能，性格的发展，和同辈的，性格的发展，和同辈的交流等。交流等。54nThereasonwhyeducationdoesntsimplymeanlearningtoobtaininformationisthateducationisnotlimitedtothehardfactsortheoriesstudentscanlearnfromtheirtextbooksortheInternet.nItrelatestoawiderscoperangingfromtheobtainmentofpracticalskillstothedevelopmentofcharacters,whicharehardforstudentstolearnsimplybygoogling.nConsequently,comprehensivelearninginschoolsthatincludeslearningknowledge,conductingexperimentsandcommunicatingwithpeersiswhattrueeducationis.55列举影响列举影响nIt will exert a profound influence.nThe positive effects,which are widely accepted,can be listed as follows.nThe negative effects,which are generally acknowledged,are presented below.nTo begin with,to make matters worse,worst of all561.过度使用手机影响健康。（走路使用手机过马路危险，举例。或导致近视）2.降低人与人之间交流的能力。3.影响文化水平。（汉字不会写）57nThepurposeofthepictureistoremindusofthefactthatweshouldnotneglecttheconsequenceofoverusingmobilephone.Theinfluenceforthephenomenonmaybecomplicated,butwecan,toalargeextent，attributeittothefollowingfactors.First,itleadstocountlesshealthproblemsincludingshortsight,especiallyforchildren.Whatsmore,theoverusingmobilephonecanchangeourlivespatternsandundercuttheabilityofcommunicationbetweenpeople.Lastbutnotleast,havingaccesstothemobilephoneinanearlyagecandirectlyaffectliterarycompetenceofChinesenewgeneration,whocantevenwriteacompletecompositionwithoutconsultingtheirphones.58主体段落主体段落万能角度万能角度59物质回报n.canprovidepeoplewithnotonlydeliciousfoodbutfashionablecolthesandsuchbenefitsascomfortabledwellingsandhandsomeaotomobiles.nindividualsandorganizationscanmakemoney,takeprofitsandevenobtainwealthbydoing.nItcanimproveoneslivingstandardsandmakeaneasyancomfortablelife.60提供快捷信息n.providespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.n.canshrinkthedistancebetweencitiesandevencontinents,smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.61安全角度n.canshieldpeoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaults.n.cansecurepeoplesfood,healthandshelter.62身心角度n.canrelievenotonlypressurebutalsoanxietyandsuchproblemfromisolationandsolitude.nItcanlessenpeoplesstress,pressureandtension.nItcultivatesanoptimisticviewtowardtheworld,andextendspeopleslifespan.n.canalsohaveaddedbenefitofincreasingonesknowledge,givingusanewperspectiveoftheoutsideworld.63受益角度nItcanbroadenonesmind,enrichonesexperience,enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtooneswork.64有助成长和成功npeoplecanobtainmentalcomfortorspiritualbackfrom.nthrough.theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperationandfinallyfindtheirownwaystofulfilltheirpursuitofhappiness.65文化价值观nItcanpromotemutualunderstanding，narrowthegapbetweenpeople.nt