2022年关于父亲节的英语作文-我的爸爸Myfather!.docx

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1、2022关于父亲节的英语作文:我的爸爸My father!there is always a brilliant image living in my heart. that is my dear father. seen through the eyes of many other people, father seems to be a very ordinary person. but he is quite extraordinary in my eyes, i have never lost my wonder at his good-personalities such as di

2、ligence, devotion, care, optimism ever since my childhood.being a farmer, father works very hard in the fields all the year round. he works from dawn till dusk every day and even till midnight when it is the harvest season. he seldom enjoys leisure with other farmers even if the farm work is not muc

3、h. he chooses to live a busy life with reluctance to stop for a while.father devotes all himself to our family. as we are poor, he always tries his best to support our family and afford the tuitions for my brother and me. for the whole family, for brother and me, he never stops working laboriously i

4、n the fields throughout the year. now he has got a wrinkled face and white hair because of excessive hard work, looking much older and weaker than any other person of his age. in spite of all this, father never complains to us. it is his full devotion that were living a better life now. it is his fu

5、ll devotion that both my brother and i are able to study at college.father shows much care to us children and my mother as well. whenever there is any delicious food on the table, he just leaves it to us while he takes the simple one himself. if my brother and i fall ill, he will not hesitate a mome

6、nt to get some medicine for us or take us to see the doctor. my mother suffers a bad disease. father looks after her very carefully. he never lets mother do any heavy work both at home and in the field. mother appreciates him m much that she often praises him as a model husband before others.father

7、is a person full of optimism. he never complains about our poor life. he is never frustrated by trouble. he often tells us that everything will be all right if we have enough confidence in life. due to his optimism, we are all confident to face our life and work.we all think that father is not in th

8、e least an ordinary man. he plays an extraordinary role in my family. we cant have anything without him. now im pursuing further studies at college far away from father. i miss him very much. and i often see him in my dreams. his great image is deeply carved in my mind.评语：作者以朴实的语言充溢感情地刻画了父亲的不平凡的形象，分别从四个不同的角度描述了父亲的勤劳、奉献、关爱和乐观。内容真实感人，行文简洁流畅，结构清楚，组织有条有理，首尾呼应，给读者以剧烈的感染力。作者用词简洁精确，并能很好地尝试一些新学的词汇及表达，使简洁的行。文更为生动。作者没有运用太多困难的句式，但能适当运用介词短语、分词结构、强调及重复的手法，恰到好处 地突出了行文句式的改变，使文章更耐读。第4页 共4页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页第 4 页 共 4 页