2022年考研英语看图作文范例点评：拔苗助长.docx

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1、2022年考研英语看图作文范例点评：拔苗助长 看图作文在英语作文中是大家普遍缺乏练习的一种类型，一个提高的方式就是看范例和点评，针对其中的错误进行自我修正。 拔苗助长： 写作原文 As is vividly unfolded in the caricature,A little boy is required to finish reading a mass of books which are even higher than his height by his father,whose facial expression implies that he is rather unwillin

2、g and distressed.in the picture,there is a book called Early-MBA.genarally,It isread by adults.the drawer aims to reveal a symbolic meaning that parents should cultivate children according to his aptitude,instead of blind notion of education.In contemporary society,the number of students who suffer

3、from cram school and the pressure of their parentshas increased at an alarming rate.Careful deliberation of this phenomenon has illustrated me on why this should be so.Fierce competition,in the first place,constitues one of the primary reasons.According to a recent survey made by sina,there are one

4、million students choose to pursue a master degree after graduation.Attending cram school will lay a foundation for future development.Convergent thinking existing in the society is also the breeding ground for this trend.This undesirable general mood of society will eventually result in being devoid

5、 of innovation.If there is no compelling interference to revease this trend,our country is bound to be influenced adversely.To be specific,It will lack innovative talent,be short of the motion to accelerate,and ultimately be detrimental to building up a suststainabledevelopment society.In terms of m

6、y personal experience,Itis urgent and imperative to take counter measures.For one thing, the public media should advocate and propagandize the notion of divergent thinking,which will be conducive to ones personal growth and core competitive power.For another,students should foster a desirable life p

7、hilosophy.If we can implement as the above mentioned,the promising future can be well guaranteed. 总体点评 文章采纳经典的三段式结构进行阐述，重点突出，条理清楚；但还存在一些简洁的语法错误。作者在写作完之后若可以花费几分钟时间来回读文章，便会削减不必要的错误。考研作文的整体思路你已经基本驾驭，后面要做的就是多积累高分佳句，加强句子成分的分析。写完之后肯定要仔细检查，削减失分点。 参考分数：12 英语写作水平的提升须要不断地练习，在改正错误中不断取得进步，不怕犯错误，怕明知道犯错误却不面对。看了范文和点评，希望大家有思索，有提高。 第3页 共3页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页第 3 页 共 3 页