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1、2022年考研英语写作小作文批改范文：邀请信<script src=http:/img.fwwxx日，不要用help)I really hope you can make it. RSVP before the deadline for September xx日的意思了.) RSVP before December 27th./p> Yours faithfullyLi Ming 4分 微点评：你对模版不熟识，建议你多看看满分作文，熟识一下这类作文的写作思路。对于不熟识其词义或用法的词，尽量不用。 5-7分 第一篇 Dear Kate, There will be a Chris

2、tmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th. Campus English CornerOctober 22, 2022 修改看法： Dear K

3、ate, There will be a Christmas party at English corner on Dec.25th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 p.m. This will be followed by a game. At around 7 p.m. a meeting will be held. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Dec.24th. Campus English CornerOct

4、ober 22, 2022 5分 微点评：考研小作文的字数要求是100词左右，你的作文虽然没有大问题，但是包含的内容太少，句型变换等也太少了。另外，要留意书信的格式。 其次篇 Dear Miss Yuan, There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This

5、will be followed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners. I really hope yo

6、u can make it. RSVP before the next Wednesday. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 修改看法： Dear Miss Yuan, There will be a celebrity party for the new year in the activity room on the next Saturday. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 6 oclock in the evening. This will be fol

7、lowed by a serious of wonderful performances played by our classmates. At around 8 oclock, we project some interaction activities to animate the atmosphere so as to promote the relationships of classmates. Whats more, we prepared some gifts to be presented to the winners. I really hope you can make

8、it. RSVP before the next Wednesday. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 7分 微点评：写作文的时候再细心一些，留意单词的拼法。背单词时要把词义背牢。 第三篇 Dear Professor, There will an Academic Exchange of East Asia International Law at No.1 lecture theatre on April 19, 2022. We should be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at

9、14:30. This will be followed by a communication about application of law of East Asia economic trade with other professors and experts come from Japan, Korea and other countries. At around 19:30, a dancing party will be holding in university auditorium. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Apr

10、il 12,2022. Law School PKUApril 5,2022 修改看法： Dear Professor, There will an Academic Exchange of East Asia International Law at No.1 lecture theatre on April 19, 2022. We should be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 14:30. This will be followed by a communication about appl

11、ication of law of East Asia economic trade with other professors and experts come from Japan , Korea and other countries. At around 19:30, a dancing party will be holding in university auditorium. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before April 12,2022. 加Yours sincerely,Law School PKUApril 5,2022 7

12、分 微点评：留意书信的格式以及被动语态的问题。一句话里不能有两个谓语动词。 第四篇 Dear Bob, There will be a summer celebrate party for teenagers at the playground of Beijing Forgin University on this weekend. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 9:00 to 11:00in the morning of the Weekend. This will be

13、followed by a music gathering which you can communicate with others, also you can eat various kinds of delicious food. At around the next time to 5:00 pm, it is the free time for us to take a series of activities, such as playing cards, singing songs and so on. I really hope you can make it. RSVP be

14、fore the final date that I have informed to you. Sincerely yours,Li Ming 修改看法： Dear Bob, There will be a summer celebrate party for teenagers at the playground of Beijing Forgin University on this weekend. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 9:00 to 11:00in the

15、morning of the Weekend. This will be followed by a music gathering which you can communicate with others, also you can eat various kinds of delicious food. At around the next time to 5:00 pm, it is the free time for us to take a series of activities, such as playing cards ,singing songs and so on. I

16、 really hope you can make it. RSVP before the final date that I have informed to you. Sincerely yours,Li Ming 5分 微点评：你对模版的理解不够透彻，建议你对于同一个题目，多看一些模版，然后归纳出一个自己的模版。 第五篇 Dear Mr.Bob, There will be a nationwide academic communicatiom involved in the education of China in Peking University on Wendsday. We

17、would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at eight oclock am on that day. This will be followed by a dabate on social phenomenon nowadays. At around ten oclock, there will be a interaction between parents and their childrens. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Tuesd

18、ay. Yours sincerelyLi Ming 修改看法： Dear Mr.Bob, There will be a nationwide academic communicatiom involved in the education of China in Peking University on Wendsday. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at eight oclock am on that day. This will be followed by a dabat

19、e on social phenomennon nowadays. At around ten oclock, there will be a interaction between parents and their childrens I really hope you can make it. RSVP before Tuesday. Yours sincerelyLi Ming 5分 微点评：写作文时要细心一些，你的作文没有什么大问题，就是拼法错误太多了。 8-10分 第一篇 Dear Dr.Wang, There will be a conference about global e

20、nvironment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by

21、students from both China and America. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 修改看法： Dear Dr.Wang, There will be a conference about global environment held at auditorium in our university on January 5th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasi

22、on will start at 9:00 in the morning. This will be followed by a brilliant speech from our foreign guests. At around 10:00 a.m., a debate of environmental issues will be given by students from both China and America. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before next Friday. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 9分

23、微点评：作文写得很好，没有语法错误，但是内容要是再丰富一些会更好。 其次篇 Dear Xiaoqiang, There will be a banquet to celebrate the admission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2022. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at five Oclock in the afternoon. This will be

24、followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven Oclock,we will hold a small dancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2022. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 修改看法： Dear Xiaoqiang, There will be a banquet to celebrate the adm

25、ission of Beijing University for our best friend Tracy in my home on January 5,2022. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at five Oclock in the afternoon. This will be followed by a hearty dinner which my wife will cook. At around seven Oclock,we will hold a small d

26、ancing ball that I think everybody would enjoy it. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before December 28,2022. Yours sincerely,Li Ming 10分 微点评：作文写得特别不错，接着保持！ 第三篇 Dear Mary, There will be a high school reunion at Lijiang Hall of Cuihu Hotel on May 15th. We would be honored to have you there with us.

27、 The occasion will start at 2:30 p.m. This will be followed by a speech given by monitor in memory of our headmaster. At around 5:00 p.m, there will be a banquet held by student union of our school, in which Chef Monica and her team will provide various kinds of classical school snacks to all of the

28、 guests. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this weekend. Yours truly,Li Ming 修改看法： Dear Mary, There will be a high school reunion at Lijiang Hall of Cuihu Hotel on May 15th. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at 2:30 p.m. This will be followed by a speech

29、 given by monitor in memory of our headmaster. At around 5:00 p.m, there will be a banquet held by student union of our school, in which Chef Monica and her team will provide various kinds of classical school snacks to all of the guests. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this weekend. Yours

30、 truly,Li Ming 9分 微点评：作文写得很不错，假如对于classical和 classic 分不清的话，你就可以不写，写错了反而要扣分。 第四篇 Dear Xiaoming, There will be a ceremony for new students in our school hall on October 20.We would be honored to have you there with us .The occasion will start at seven oclock in the evening .This will be followed by a

31、dinner party including Chinese and English songs , modern dance and instrumental performance. At around ten, we will hold a small ball, in which students can have further understanding about each other and our school. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this Friday afternoon. Yours sincerely，

32、Li Ming 修改看法： Dear Xiaoming, There will be a ceremony for new students in our school hall on October 20.We would be honored to have you there with us .The occasion will start at seven oclock in the evening .This will be followed by a dinner party including Chinese and English songs , modern dance an

33、d instrumental performance. At around ten, we will hold a small ball, in which students can have further understanding about each other and our school. I really hope you can make it. RSVP before this Friday afternoon. Yours sincerely，Li Ming 10分 微点评：这篇作文写得特别好，基本没有问题，接着保持！ 第五篇 Dear Amy, There will be

34、 a lecture given by Lucius Annaeus Seneca at Roman Forum on the morning of August 18th, BC50. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasion will start at nine oclock. This will be followed by a debate between scholars. At around mid-afternoon, Nero the Emperor will show himself up. We

35、really hope you can make it. RSVP before the third day you have got our letter. Yours truely, River Song and the Doctor 修改看法： Dear Amy, There will be a lecture given by Lucius Annaeus Seneca at Roman Forum on the morning of August 18th, BC50. We would be honored to have you there with us. The occasi

36、on will start at nine oclock. This will be followed by a debate between scholars. At around mid-afternoon, Nero the Emperor will show himself up. We really hope you can make it. RSVP before the third day you have got our letter. Yours truely, River Song and the Doctor 8分 微点评：作文写得很好，就是要留意一下单词拼法，另外，内容最好再扩充一下。 第15页 共15页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页第 15 页 共 15 页