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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上一、写作时间安排 用3-5分钟时间构思，列提纲，不要，盲目写，很多考生一上来很有冲劲，但写着写着就不知道写什么东西，思路条理不够清晰，这样的文章就不能得高分，而且没有3-5分钟审题的话，很可能会跑题，跑题的文章一般得分很低，甚至得零分。 中间建议大家用20分钟左右的时间写文章，从以往考试经历看，学生花18-20分钟可以完成，速度慢的要23分钟左右，不管怎么样，最后要留出2-3分钟的检查时间。我发现一些能力强的同学，由于写作过程匆忙，很易犯低级错误。二、 如何准备 四六级写作本身要求并不是很高，但许多同学在考试中仍然拿不到分。主要原因，我感觉是很多同学练得太少，很多同学

2、知道考试前要背一些范文，但要记住这只是输入分方式，而写作时输出的过程，要求你写出来，一定要把别人的语言转换成自己的语言写出来，在这儿我建议大家一定要多练，哪怕练四五篇文章，对自己写作都会有质的提高。所以写作是练出来的，不是背出来的。很多同学有一个误区，我背几篇范文和一个模块，就会得相应一个不错的分数，这肯定是不行的。希望各位同学在准备考试时要特别关注这一点。三、 写作方法四、 新东方名师详解写作功能段落法四六级写作功能段落法示例：2012年6月六级真题作文背诵模板肯定不是最有效的方式，因为模板的思路是死的，是固定的。如果死背模板可能导致的结果就是所背诵模板的思路和考题思路不同，导致所背非所考。

3、写作第一步为审题。审题时，应把握试题对体裁和话题的宏观要求；再关注内容要求：汉语提纲或英文提示两种形式；最后关注字数。按写作内容要求写相应段落就是功能段落写作的基本思路。按照内容要求：功能段落一般包含：现象、危害（弊）、原因、建议、观点、意义（利）等六种形式。现象段基本是每年四六级必考段落内容，如：下文图画本身就是一种现象，图画所反映的更是一种现象；图画的评论可以从利弊角度分析；最后发表观点或建议。历年四六级作文，无论是四级还是六级，无论是汉语提纲还是全英文命题作文，均可从功能段落角度突破：按题目要求去写相应的内容和段落就永远做到了切题。2012年6月六级真题回顾Directions：For

4、this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication. You are required to give a brief description of the cartoon and then comment on it. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.点评：2012年6月份考到了较为少见的图

5、画评论式作文，要求先对图画进行简要描述，再对图画所描述现象进行评论。此次作文，内容方面上有两项有求：图画描述+根据图画内容评论主题针对该次作文，阅卷中发现跑题同学不在少数，主要有以下几种类型：1）只见树木，不见森林：即重点写图画中的blog，而忽略了题目中Internet和interpersonal communication才是重点所在。2）重点偏题：即详细阐述了internet对现代生活的影响，殊不知题目要求internet 的影响是局限在interpersonal communication上。3）题目要求对图画描述，但被考生忽略，或未能从interpersonal communicat

6、ion角度对图画要旨进行介绍。此类全英文命题形式在答题时考生可根据题目内容要求先自拟三个汉语提纲，然后再依照提纲去写相应的功能段落，这样全英文命题与传统作文就没有差异了。提纲如下：1.所给图画描述了一个很有意思的场景：.2.网络对人际交流的影响：利弊3.我的建议The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication首段：（图画描述：现象）Given is a cartoon which illustrates a rather interesting scene: the father, sitting in sofa, asks a

7、bout his daughters school life, with an expectation of talking with her; however, to his disappointment, the girl simply responds with a rejection: You can read all about it on my blog.利弊段：分析网络对人际交流的利弊This cartoon can be naturally associated with impacts of Internet on interpersonal communication.（图

8、画联系主题）On the one hand, Internet brings us great convenience and helps us to remove the obstacles of distance in communication. It is Internet that enables people in different places to keep in touch with each other. Without Internet, it is impossible for them to keep instant contact with others.(利)

9、On the other hand, this phenomenon is particularly worth concern for the background that people, like the daughter in cartoon, may focus too much eyesight on Internet, totally turning a blind eye to face-to-face communication. What worries many experts is that Interpersonal communication may be alie

10、nated and indifferent. (弊)现象总结+建议In contemporary society, it has become a trend for people to communicate via Internet. Meanwhile, an increasing number of individuals deem it convenient, fast and fashionable to chat online. (现象)However, I am convinced that we should educate, advocate and encourage o

11、ur friends, classmates and acquaintances to spend more time talking or chatting face to face.（建议）Do bear in mind: Internet is merely a tool. (222 words)新东方四六级名师解惑之写作篇1.脑子里想好中文的意思，再把它翻译成英文，这样的思路对吗?汪老师：很多同学都是想好中文再翻译成英文。严格说来，即使对学习英语多年的人来说，在写作时想做到完全用英文思考都是极难达到的一种近乎神话的理想境界。关键是中文思考的程度英文修养极高的人在写作时可能已经很少意识到

12、自己是在用那种语言、很难区分自己在什么时候正在使用什么语言，他已经到了“天人合一”的境界;英文很好的人可能只是在整体构思时用汉语，到具体写作段落或句子时用英语;英文一般的人会将每句的意思大致用汉语想好，但写作时还是要用英文的习惯句型和固定搭配来表达;初学英语基础又很不扎实的人在不仅每句用汉语想好，还基本每字严格对译，这就是中式英文的产生原因了。要想少些一点中式英文，就要多积累习惯句型和固定搭配，在“翻译”时尽可能多用这些模式化的句型，少一些逐字对译。2.常常想不起想用的一个词的英语说法，该如何解决?汪老师：这是考试时任何一个人都会碰到的问题，即使他的词汇量很大。其实就算一个人的词汇量再大，大到

13、掌握所有英文单词，也还是会碰到一些无法用已有单词表达的情况。因为世界在变化，每时每刻总会有新的事物出现。碰到不会表达的思想可以用以下几招：第一，模糊化即用上义词表达。如不会说“手提电脑”，可以用它的上义词“machine”, “gadget”, “invention”, “instrument” 等。第二，可以解释说明。如我们可以把手提电脑写作“the kind of computer that you can carry wherever you go and that you can put on your lap”。第三，可以把一些解释不清的东西略去不写。写作是一个主动的创造过程，可以并

14、且应该发挥自己的主观能动性。写那些自己会写的，避开那些自己不会写的。这才是写作的乐趣所在。3.文章中长句越多越好，复合句越多越好，这样的想法对吗?汪老师：考试作文和平时写作不完全相同。平时写作不同作者有自己不同的风格有些作者长于简约;有些作者喜欢繁复。但考试作文是检验一个考生写作水平的工具，命题人的目标之一就是要通过一篇文章考察考生是否掌握了复杂句。因此，在所有写作考试中都有一条不成文的规定：没有复杂句不能得高分。但是在写复杂句的同时，我们还要注意不能写太多这样的句子。全是复杂句，文章读起来会很累很烦很不自然。因此考试作文的句子要长短结合。一些基础不好的同学最好少些甚至不写复杂句，因为如果复杂

15、句写错了会影响得分，而简单句只要不错分数反而不会低到哪里去。4.不知从何处着手复习写作，提起笔来不知道怎么写，怎么办?吴老师：作文是现存考试中为数不多的考查英语主观应用能力的考试类型，在大多数权威的语言考试中都有出现。从理论上讲，就是考查第二语言或外语学习者的“输出”能力。另外，我们应该避免误入用“大词用长句”才算写作的误区，因为，好的文章或大作家往往是用“小词”表达复杂思想。简单无误是第一原则。在考试中，考生对作文的思维应该是：1、审题;2、思考简单的分支观点;考虑可以采用的成熟的句型或“万能句”。其中，前两步比较关键。一、对于审题，应该看到，近年四级或六级题目大多是给出提纲，那么可以直接把

16、提纲变为中心句，这些中心句就是每段的开头句。后面接入标志逻辑的词汇，如first.;second.;third.;等分支观点。也就是说，审题就是考虑文章的合理结构是什么，中心句是什么。二、 置于思考分支观点，请一定记住，外语考试的作文，考查的目标不是考生的思维水平或逻辑分析能力，而是考核语言表达能力。所以建议采取的措施是，简化自己的思维和分析。也就是，如何降低自己的思维水平，来迎合自己有限的语言状况。比如：这个东西不贵，it is inexpensive，当然也可以说：it is cheap，或者说，it does not cost me much money。等这些相关但简单的表达也是合理的

17、。窗体底端 文章正文 2014年6月四六级观点对比类议论文主题预测及写作模板 预测一 A Harmonious Dormitory Life 预测二 Students Rating of Their Teachers 预测三 Should We Help Strangers? 预测四 Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of private school预测五Disasters(negative attitudes or positive attitudes)一、观点对比类议论文 A or B?第一段：引出主题+一方观点 第二段：另一方观点 第三段

18、：个人观点第一段：首句万能句型：What this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is the phenomenon that “网络的利与弊”Most of individuals spend too much time on their computer terminal rather than relating to people in the real world.“环境污染” What this thought-provoking drawing mirrors is the phenomenon that the environment of

19、tourist areas is polluted by tourists.万能句型：The phenomenon of has been known for years. 某种现象或问题普遍存在或由来已久。The problem of tourist pollution has been known for years in todays China.“追星” The phenomenon of idolatry has been known for years in todays China.“过度开采“ The phenomenon of over-exploitation has be

20、en known for years in todays China. There is no consensus of opinions among people regarding whether + 主题句.“认为，想”怎么说？Some people hold the attitude that +主题句的肯定或否定.Some individuals are under the impression that +主题句的肯定或否定.原因如下：1，2，3The reasons can be listed as follows.FirstlySecondlyThirdly第二段：另一方观点观

21、点对比之间的过渡句Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every coin has its two sides”.Just as an old Arab proverb says, “Every sword has its two edges.” 提出另一方观点：On the contrary, others are under the impression that 分论点：There are some reasons behind this attitude.For one thingFor another第三段： 你认为表明立场 From my poin

22、t of view, it is more reasonable to support the former opinion rather than the latter one.得出结论 From what has been discussed above, we may naturally arrive at the conclusion that喊口号Generally speaking, it is high time that we placed great emphasis on this issue. That is to say, further attention is to

23、 be paid to this issue.谈措施Only through effective actions that has been taken can we prevent this trend.二、问题阐释：What caused this problem, and what solutions can solve this problem?第一段：背景主题第二段：分析原因第三段：解决方案第一段：背景主题(4句）In this age of change, the human society is progressing rapidly on various fronts.Yet

24、at the same time, many problems have arisen, a serious one of which is This issue has drawn widespread attention.In this essay, I will analyze some possible causes of this phenomenon and then propose some solutions.第二段：分析原因（4句）It is obvious that the causes of this issue are diverse.In the first plac

25、e, is the root cause of this crisis.In the second place, constitutes a major cause of this situation.Finally, plays a pivotal role in this problem第三段：解决方案(4句)Accordingly, the solution to this problem should be varied as well.To begin with, governments and relevant administrations should take effecti

26、ve measures and spare no effort to control this problem.What is more, it is necessary to raise peoples awareness ofOnly when these practical measures are taken can this problem be dealt with step by step and gone with the wind.最后，老师祝大家顺利通关！ 分窗体底端 文章正文 2014年大学英语四六级写作技巧之完美收尾英语四六级作文中最后一句话怎么结尾对于很多人来说是个问

27、题，在理性之前，让我们先感受一下一些范文的最后一句都写得什么，寻找共性，把握特点，希望对各位有所帮助，对于怎么写最后一句有点感觉吧。环境类话题：1. 温室效应 This is not an easy task, so nations should work together to prevent this global disaster, at the same time ordinary citizens should do their part.这项工作任重道远，所以各个国家要联合起来共同组织这场全球性的灾难，同时每个公民也要尽自己的一份努力。2.地球环境a. It is time for

28、 us to take measures as it is each citizens responsibility to save our mother earth.是需要采取措施的时候了，因为保护地球母亲是每个公民的职责。b. There is only one earth which we can live in. we cant afford to lose it. The environmental protection is safeguarding of our own life. 我们所居住的地球只有一个，我们无法失去她。保护环境就是守护我们自己的生命。c. Only in t

29、his way can we pursue comprehensive , balanced and sustainable development and make a harmonious society come true。 只有这样我们才能实现全面协调可持续发展，构建和社。d. As is well known to all, the conservation-minded society is advocated through China, lets practice what one preaches.3. 资源浪费In conclusion, we should limit t

30、he overuse of the natural resources and protect our living environment in order to maintain the balance of environment.总而言之，我们需要限制自然资源的过度使用，保护我们的生存环境，以便维持生态环境的平衡。社会类话题1. 医患关系 We believe with the promotion of medical ethics, the relationship between doctors and patients will become more harmonious. 我

31、们相信随着医德的提升，医患关系将变得更加和谐。2. 盲目跳槽Before every blind jump, we should keep in mind that it has to take a certain period of time before understands himself and then achieves great success.每次盲目跳槽之前，我们要铭记只有在一定的时间后我们才能了解自己并且取得成功。3. 男女平等Women will contribute to the society as much as men do, as we should give

32、 the same stage to perform。女性和男性一样能为社会做贡献，因此我们要给他们一个平等的舞台表现。4. 空巢现象 In a word, only when the young and the elderly make joint efforts can the elderly parents spend their remaining years in happiness.总之，只有年轻人和老年人共同努力，老年父母才能拥有幸福的晚年。5. 邻里缺少沟通 What I believe is that we should be aware of the necessity t

33、o step out of the doors and build a friendly relationship with others. In return , a warmer and more harmonious society could become possible。我认为我们必须意识到走出房门去建立友好的人际关系是非常必要的。这样才能可能构建一个更温暖更和谐的社会。6. 冷漠 In a word, each individual should pay more attention to others as well as the world outside。一句话，每个个体也要从自己的世界走出来，更多地注意他人和外部世界。7. 五一长假 All in all, I hope that government would adjust the schedule and let people enjoy a true week-long vacation。总之，我希望政府能调整计划让人们享受一个真正的长假。专心-专注-专业