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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上写作练习：（人物篇）写人作文是中考的热门题材之一， 写这类作文时要注意以下几点：1. 描写人物时，不能面面俱到，泛泛而写，要重点突出其鲜明特征，以表现与其他人物的不同之处。2. 叙述与人物有挂的事情时，要分清主次，前后照应，选取典型事例来刻画人物。3. 描写人物时，一般在结尾处要对人物进行评价，抒发自己对人物的情感。基本框架 人物 Part 1 外貌 性格 时间Part 2 过程事件 结果Part 3 感受写作评分标准及进步方向：内容要点应用词汇: 高级词汇的合理使用（energetic, intelligence）、同义词的变化使用(以likebeautiful为例

2、)、短语的恰当使用(come up with)语法结构的准确性：适当运用较复杂的语法，固定句式（感叹句、强调句、倒装句等）、定语从句、状语从句、现在分词短语、动词不定式等。 Taps must be turned off after being used.上下文的连贯性： 连接词、非谓语动词等结构。First of all , in a word等连接词汇总：1. 表示目的：for this purpose，for this reason，so that，in order that，so as to，in order to2. 表示对照：but，however，yet，on the other

3、 hand，on the contrary3. 表示结果：so，thus，therefore，as a result 4. 表示因果：because，since，as, for， because of , owing to5. 表示强调：indeed，in fact，as a matter of fact 6. 表示并列观点：firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally, first of all, also，and，in addition，besides，whats more，moreover, last but not least, whats worse7. 表

4、示解释和说明：for example， for instance8. 表示比较：like，just like，just as，in the same way，similarly9. 表示总结：finally，at last，in short，in a word10. 表示让步：although，though， even though，no matter wh建议记诵的话题词汇和短语：11. 关系：father, parents , grandfather ,uncle ,aunt ,schoolmate, monitor等，cousin比较加分哦12. 职业：teacher, doctor,

5、nurse, dentist, cook, artist, scientist, soldier, manager, businessman, journalist等13. 外貌性格：pretty , good-looking, short , tall, lovely, adorable, naughty, smart , wise, diligent, lazy, humorous, attractive, funny, outgoing, serious, quiet. warm-hearted, patient，strong-minded, hard-working等(介绍外貌时候可用

6、上定语从句，开篇就亮点)14. 年龄： a twenty-year-old man, as a boy of 15, at the age of 10, during his childhood, middle-aged , in his forties 等15. 兴趣爱好： enjoy doing, like to do /doing, be fond of, be crazy about, be interested in , prefer to do/doing 16. 评价： be popular with , be respected by, be honored as, be co

7、nsidered ad, be famous for, be regarded as, set a good example等。句子： 1. He shows great enthusiasm in pursuing knowledge.2. She is a ordinary-looking girl with short hair.3. Not only does she . but also4. He sets us a good example.5. Ill never forget the day when6. Im so proud that I have such a good

8、friend.7. He is considered as an honest, humorous teacher and he is respected and loved by the students and other teachers. 8. Owing to his patient guide and my effort , I learned quite well at the end.9. Without his help, I would have10. It was because of their help and encouragement that I could g

9、et the best result. 11. She has a great sense of humorous.12. She always comforts me when I get into trouble.13. Im very grateful to him for all that he has done for me.14. During the process of my growth, there are lots of people I want to thank, but the person I want to thank most is15. I want to

10、thank sb. from the bottom of my heart. 满分作文评析：(1)时光匆匆，不知不觉中，同学们的初中生活即将结束，你们有一个懵懂的孩童成长为有知识有理想的少年。在你们成长的历程中，渗透了父母的心血，充满了师长的关爱，得到了朋友的帮助，请以My_为题，写一篇短文，描述你心中最重要的人或最令你难忘的人。要求：1. 把题目补充完整。 2. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。 3. 词数在60 - 80之间。 4. 内容要齐全，包括以下几点：Who is the person in your heart?Why is the person so important in y

11、our heart?What will you learn from the person in the future?参考范文： My father is a hero in my heart. Although he has been away for many years, he still lives in my heart now.As a father of the five children, he knew his duty. When I was a little girl, I thought my father never knew tired. He always wo

12、rked and worked. He was a man of great strength both physically and in the mind.My father not only worked hard to support the whole family, but also looked after my ailing(多病的) mother. Day and night, he struggled for years with mothers disease. At last, my mother recovered because of my fathers love

13、 and help. However, my father, a man who was great and gentleness, fell down. I lost my hero. He was too tired. He slept for ever.A few years has passed, but I think my father never left me. He always smiles at me and lives in my heart. I know I have my fathers love. It gives me courage to do anythi

14、ng, to face any difficulties in my life.From him, I will learn to stand up straightly, to be proud of who I am!2. A Real Friend提示：朋友，是思想上值得依赖，情感上可以依托，学习上能得到帮助，生活上给予关照的人。请写一、两件事情来讲述你和朋友之间真挚的友情。要求：1、请根据所给题目，用英语写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； 2、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3、文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4、短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷作答，一律不得分。参考范文：A

15、 Real FriendEveryone needs friends. Friendship plays an important role in our lives. Friends can encourage us to be better and share our hopes and dreams. Amy is a real friend like this.When I became a middle school student, I dont do well in English or math. I fell behind others. I was worried and

16、upset. At that time, Amy often lent me her notebooks and came to my house to help me after school. When I wanted to give up, she always encouraged me to hold on, Thanks to Amy, a month later I caught up with others. Now both of us are in Grade 9, we have the same dreams - to be a student in a good u

17、niversity. I think we can achieve our dreams.A friend in need is a friend indeed. Amy is such a good friend.记诵词组专心-专注-专业1. suffer from 遭受, 忍受2. thanks to 多亏了3. get/be used to sth./doing sth. 习惯于4. be absorbed in 专心于，全神贯注于5. concentrate on sth. 专注于6. share your happiness and sadness with sb. 和某人分享你的快

18、乐和痛苦7. pursue knowledge 追求知识8. be in trouble 处于困境中，遇到麻烦9. depend on sb. to do sth. 依靠某人做某事10. to be honest 老实说11. encourage sb. to do sth. 鼓励某人做某事12. be popular with sb. 受到某人的欢迎13. strengthen our friendship 增进我们的友谊promote our friendship14. benefit a lot from sth. 从中受益良多15. speak highly of sb. 对某人评价高

19、16. get along well with sb. 和某人相处得好17. put ones heart into sth. 用心对待某事18. make progress 取得进步19. have trouble in doing sth. 做某事有困难20. come true 实现21. realize/achieve ones dream 实现某人的梦想22. enjoy doing sth. like to do sth. / like doing sth. be fond of sth. / doing sth.be crazy about sth. / doing sth.prefer doing sth. to doing sth. 23. is of great help for sb. 对某人有很大的帮助= very helpful24. lose ones temper 发脾