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1、SCI修改稿回答审稿人意见范文模板修改稿回答审稿人的意见（最重要的部分）List of ResponsesDear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号 ). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the

2、 important guiding significance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked in red in the paper. The main corre ctions in the paper and the responds to the reviewer s comments are as flowing:Responds to t

3、he reviewers comments:Reviewer #1: 1. Response to comment: (简要列出意见 )Response: 2. Response to comment: (简要列出意见 )Response: 。 。 。 。 。 。逐条意见回答，切忌一定不能有遗漏针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用：We are very sorry for our negligence of.精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 1 页，共 12 页 - - - - -

4、- - - - - We are very sorry for our incorrect writing .It is really true as Reviewer suggested thatWe have made correction according to the Reviewers comments.We have re-written th is part according to the Reviewers suggestionAs Reviewer suggested thatConsidering the Reviewers suggestion, we have 最后

5、特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见：Special thanks to you for your good comments. Reviewer #2: 同上述Reviewer #3:Other changes: 1. Line 60-61, the statements of “” were corrected as“”2. Line 107, “” was added 3. Line 129, “” was deleted We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes in the manuscript. Th

6、ese changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 2 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers warm work earnestly,

7、and hope that the correction will meet with approval.Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 3 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - 以下是审稿人意见和本人的回复。与大家分享。从中可以看出， 这位审稿人认真读了文章， 提出很多宝贵的意见。 这些意见分布在文章的各个地方。我很诧异有人真正读了我的文章

8、。看到这些意见，我觉得很感激， 不是因为接收文章的原因， 而是这些意见能真正有助于提高文章的质量。从中还看出，回答审稿人问题的“技巧” 。对于回答问题，有的人就是一味反驳，却不加改进。记得 ACS Style Guide里面说，当审稿人问到问题的，哪怕是他理解错误，这也说明作者这么写，其他读者也会理解错误，引起歧义。因此，作者就是要修改句子，使表达不引起歧义。因此：有时间一味反驳，还不如指出具体改进在第几页、第几段。=Reviewers comments:Reviewer #3: While revising the script, it is to be suggested that aut

9、hor should clearly indicate the aim & scope of the study and while making conclusion, it is to be mentioned how the study is useful for the practical purposes. In addition the following are the few suggestions/comments, which may be included while revision.1. Introduction part first para last line,

10、author must avoid to write 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 4 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - ambiguous statement ., much work is still ahead, may indicate properly.2. Author could not demonstrate the reason why, to select the organic compound such as ethyl pyruvate

11、for this study 3. Experimental part: It is difficult to understand the in-situ RAIRS experiments with homemade liquid-solid RAIRS cell. More detailed information may be useful for the others those who are working in the area. Photograph of the assembled cell may be included.4. The description given

12、for the experimental set up (page 4) can be presented by flow diagram instead, as an ease to understand the set up. 5. Resluts Part (Page 6): CO adlayers with identical monolayer coverages, the monolayer coverage, is it been performed with some adsorption model Further, it was suggested that CO-satu

13、rated Pt surface, but not mentioned about the saturation experiments. Is it obtained after 60 min of CO bubbling6. Page 12, 2nd para: The displacement of EtPy by CCl4 flushing, is it confirmed by the EtPy peaks If so, it has to be mentioned clearly in the para. Also in the same para, author referred

14、 for Fig. 7a and 7b but in the figures, it didnt appear, only figure 7 appeared. I feel it refers for figure 7, portion A and B, to be corrected. Similarly, in the text referred the fig 2a, 2b. etc but on the figure sheet it is mentioned as 2A, 2B .etc. to be corrected. 7. Page 14, 1st para: contami

15、nation of the Pt surface by corrosion 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 5 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - of o-rings in high concentration EtPy, but the statement has not been supported by other evidence/literature.8. Pages 14 through 17: the observed reactivity of va

16、rious solvents for adsorbed CO on the Pt surface (figs 3 & 4) has to be discussed more precisely. This reviewer is unable to follow the reason why they showed different reactivity, is it principally due to the organic moieties, or due to the impurities of commercially available chemicals or a mixed

17、effect. It has to be clearly demonstrated, however, the only experiment performed with CO/water CCl4 would difficult to describe it in detail.9. The author try to restrain with repeated arguments in the text ., page 3 para 1: It was generalized that., also appeared on page 21 first para. 10. Caption

18、s of the figures are too long, the detailed description already given in the text, hence would not be included here. Captions should be short and crispy.=Dear Editor,I quite appreciate your favorite consideration and the reviewers insightful comments. Now I have revised the JCIS-06-247 exactly accor

19、ding to the reviewers comments, and found these comments are very helpful. I hope this revision can make my paper more acceptable. The revisions were 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 6 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - addressed point by point below.general The objecti

20、ve of this research was added at the beginning of the third paragraph of Introduction. How the study is useful for practical purposes was added at the end of Conclusion as one paragraph.1 Ambiguous statement ., “much work is still ahead” was deleted.2 Ethyl pyruvate was used here as a typical compou

21、nd (containing two carbonyl groups) to demonstrate the feasibility of using our diagnosing tool to detect low-coverage CO (coming from decarbonylation of EtPy) at the liquid-solid interface. EtPy is a reactant used in liquid-phase chiral catalysis, and slight decomposition of EtPy to adsorbed CO was

22、 reported to influence the catalytic performance. In addition, by studying that, we can directly compare our results with previous studies. More details in the first paragraph of Section .3 The IR cell was designed according to the IR cells used by many electrochemical workers. References were added

23、. A photo was given in the Supporting Information.4 A flow diagram of the experimental setup was given in the new Fig. 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 7 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - 1.5 The CO adsorption experiments were performed in the same adsorption mode, by

24、bubbling CO through a clean Pt surface in different days to achieve the same saturation coverage of CO. Initial experiments indicated that given the CO bubbling rate was cm3/min, CO can saturate on Pt after 30-45 min. We bubble CO for 60 min to guarantee the same CO coverage. If we bubble CO for mor

25、e time, or if we increase the CO flowing rate several times, the CO saturation coverage doesnt change, indicating 60 min is already enough. A figure showing the CO uptake as a function of bubbling time was given in the Supporting Information.6 The displacement of EtPy by CCl4 was confirmed by the re

26、moving of EtPy peaks. The mention of Fig. 7a and 7b etc. throughout the text were all corrected.7 It is known that some solvents such as acetone can corrode the Viton o-ring. We saw the damage of o-ring after using high-concentration EtPy. A reference to the Viton o-ring information was given.8 The

27、observed reactivity trend is due to a combination of both effects, with the accumulation of organic moieties on Pt surface during 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 8 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - numerous flushing cycles the more important reason. A few proper sente

28、nces were added to clarity this point. 9 The repeated arguments in the first paragraph in Section were deleted.10 The too-long captions were significantly shortened. In all, I found the reviewers comments are quite helpful, and I revised my paper point-by-point. Thank you and the review again for yo

29、ur help!=结果：欢迎浏览： Organic Chemistry on Solid Surfaces (Review) Z. Ma, F. Zaera*, Surface Scence Reports 61 (2006) 229-281. ScienceDirect TOP25 Hottest Articles in Chemistry 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 9 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - CI 修改稿回答审稿人意见范文模板修改稿回答审稿人的意

30、见（最重要的部分）List of ResponsesDear Editors and Reviewers:Thank you for your letter and for the reviewers comments concerning our manuscript entitled “Paper Title” (ID: 文章稿号 ). Those comments are all valuable and very helpful for revising and improving our paper, as well as the important guiding signific

31、ance to our researches. We have studied comments carefully and have made correction which we hope meet with approval. Revised portion are marked in red in the paper. The main corrections in the paper and the responds to the reviewer s comments are as flowing:Responds to the reviewers comments:Review

32、er #1: 1. Response to comment: (简要列出意见 )Response: 2. Response to comment: (简要列出意见 )Response: 。 。 。 。 。 。精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 10 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - 逐条意见回答，切忌一定不能有遗漏针对不同的问题有下列几个礼貌术语可适当用用：We are very sorry for our negligence of .We are very sorr

33、y for our incorrect writing .It is really true as Reviewer suggested thatWe have made correction according to the Reviewers comments.We have re-written this part according to the Reviewers suggestionAs Reviewer suggested thatConsidering the Reviewers suggestion, we have 最后特意感谢一下这个审稿人的意见：Special than

34、ks to you for your good comments. Reviewer #2: 同上述Reviewer #3:Other changes: 1. Line 60-61, the statements of “” were corrected as “”2. Line 107, “” was added 3. Line 129, “” was deleted We tried our best to improve the manuscript and made some changes 精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳

35、 - - - - - - - - - -第 11 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - - in the manuscript. These changes will not influence the content and framework of the paper. And here we did not list the changes but marked in red in revised paper.We appreciate for Editors/Reviewers warm work earnestly, and hope that the correction will meet with approval.Once again, thank you very much for your comments and suggestions.精品资料 - - - 欢迎下载 - - - - - - - - - - - 欢迎下载 名师归纳 - - - - - - - - - -第 12 页，共 12 页 - - - - - - - - - -