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1、精品学习资源2021 届初三上英语单元考试优秀作文选三201-202雾霾 haze是一种大气污染；中国的雾霾越来越严峻了；请以“The Haze in China”为题，写一篇 90 词左右的短文， 客观地介绍中国雾霾的现状，雾霾的危害以及如何削减雾霾；初三 2 班陈钰铭The Haze in ChinaHaze is a kind of air pollution.The haze problem in China is becoming more and more serious, especially in Beijing. It has caused many problems.The

2、 haze is mainly caused by factories. It does great harm to people. People who live in the haze always have breathing problems. The haze makes the air dirty and people hardly see clearly on the road. Therefore, more traffic accidents happen because of the haze.Since the haze is harmful to both the en

3、vironment and human beings, we must do everything we can to reduce it. Here are some suggestions:First, we should ride bikes more often instead of drivingcars. The cars produce too muchharmful gas when working. Second, people oughtn t to burn waste, because it also harms the air quality. Third, we s

4、hould plant more trees to clean the air.In short, I hope the haze problem can be solved as soon as possible.老师点评：1、行文流畅，结构合理清晰；2、擅于使用刚学的新词组来给文章润色；初三年 3 班林滟雯The Haze in ChinaIf you go to Beijing, Shanghai or other big cities in China now, all that you can see will begray cloudy sky and smog everywher

5、e. But itnsot smog; itthse haze, a kindof harm ful air pollution. This terrible phenomenon is becoming more and more serious in China.The haze can cause many kinds of breathing problems, even lung disease. It s great of har to people s health.So how can we defeat this killer of health.the factories

6、should reduce the discharge of gas. Last but not least, the government ought to plant more trees.If we can follow the rules above, our air will be clearer and our world will be better.老师点评：本文语言流畅，句型多样，能紧扣题目要求，写出自己的观点；比方在阐述观点时，使用了First and foremost首要的是 , Second,Last but not least 最终但同样重要的是 表达了作者敏捷的句式

7、运用才能；初三年 4 班陈铭尔The Haze in China It s reported that the haze in China has become more and more serious.The air in many places is bad because of the haze. It imsportantfor human beings to have fresh air. However,many people in China don t have. Whattheshwazoerscea,n cause cancer. How terrible. So,we

8、should do something to change the situation.First and foremost, everyone had better not drive cars often, and ride a bike instead. Second,欢迎下载精品学习资源First, we can plant more trees, because trees can clean the air. Second, we must stop using many chemicals. In China, some factories use too many chemic

9、als and they produce much terrible gas. Third, our government can make laws against air pollution. Anyone who breaks the laws will be punished. Asthe sayinggoes, “ Not a cleanenvironment,the livingconditionsfavorablemeaningless.” From now on, Let s do everything we can to reduce the haze.老师点评：本文特别清晰

10、的阐述了雾霾的现状、危害及解决措施；好的开头句 + 自然连贯的过度词句 however; what s worse, 句 + 引用名言的结尾句 译为： 没有一个清洁的环境，再优裕的生活条件也无意义； = 好文章；初三 5 班 王哲轶The Haze in ChinaIn recent years, the haze has appeared in many parts of China, including Beijing.In a city where air pollution is serious, when the wind blows strongly, the haze may f

11、orm in a short while.The haze does great harm to people s health. It can cause people to have a breathing problem,even cancer. What s worse,the traffic can be much more dangerous because the drivers can not see clearly. As a result, there may be more accidents in such bad weather.To change the situa

12、tion, planting more trees is a good way. And people had better go out on foot instead of drivinga car. On the other hand, the government has a duty to stop factories producing too much terrible gas.In short, sol ving the problem of haze needs everyone s efforts.老师点评：本文行文流畅，层次分明；文中恰如其分地使用一些好词好句，使得文章读

13、起来脍炙人口；初三 6 班 刘怡昕The Haze in ChinaHaze is a kind of air pollution, and it s more and more serious in China especially in Beijing.It not only causes people to have breathing problems but also causes traffic accidents. So it has bad effects on our health as well as our daily life.The government has do

14、ne something to reduce haze, but itnost enough. More should bedone by us. First, we can encourage our friends to use cars less and use bicycles more. Second, we can plant trees to make the air fresher. Third, we can write to the local government to ask them to stop factories producing harmful gas.In

15、 a word, we should do our best to reduce haze. Although one person can do a bit, many persons can do a lot.老师点评：本文语句通顺，中心明确，表达正确；连词运用得恰到好处；结尾简洁有力，画龙点睛！初三 7 班 庄煜权The Haze in ChinaAs we know, the haze in China has appeared for manyyears. It has become one of the most serious problems in many big citie

16、s.The haze is a kind of air pollution. It is harmful topeople s health and makes ubse in a bad欢迎下载精品学习资源mood. We can hardly breathe as usual because of it. What s worse, it may cause more accidents because drivers can t see clearly on the road.Whatshould we do toreduce the haze. First,I thinkwe shou

17、ldcome to understand the importance of protecting the environment. Second, the government should take measures to stop the chemical factories from producing the terrible gas. Third, we should pass more laws againstthe haze.In s hort, we should do everything we can to reduce the haze and protect our

18、environment. Let be greener people.老师点评： 1、本文条理清晰，内容紧扣主题，结构合理；2、正确地使用了一些已学词组划线部分，做到学以致用；初三 8 班 叶宁忻The Haze in ChinaThe haze is a kindof air pollution.Nowadays, the haze in China is getting more and more serious, especially in some developed cities such as Beijing, Tianjin and Shanghai.The haze does

19、great harm to people because it may cause people to cough, get a sore throat andeven may cause lung cancer. On the other ha nd, there are more accidents because people can t see clearly when walking or driving on the road.So, what should we do to reduce the haze. First, we should plant more trees an

20、d stop peoplefrom cutting them down. Second, we should ride bikes or walk instead of drivingcars because cars will produce terrible gas when they are working. Third, everyone should come to understandthe danger of the haze and the importance of reducing it.Although we have passed laws against the ai

21、r pollution, we still have a long way to go.Let s try our best to make the air cleaner and fresher.老师点评： 1. 文章结构合理清晰，贴合题意；2.划线句子美丽，词组使用恰当合理，句子间条理清晰；初三 9 班 吴昕怡The Haze in ChinaWith the development of science ,more and more environmental problems are appearing. Such as air pollution. It has caused the

22、 haze. And the haze is more and more serious. Especially in big cities.Haze is harmful to humanslives .If someone walks on the street in this kind of weather, he canhardly see anything .As a result, there will be more accidents than before. Of course, haze would also make people feel uncomfortable a

23、nd unpleasant.And how can we reduce the haze. Here are some suggestions.First, we should have a low carbon life. It means that we should often walk or ride bikes towork or go to school instead of driving cars. Second, peopleshouldn t burn gaosi,l and coal too much, Besides, scientists can discover b

24、etter energy for humans. Finally,we should plant more trees to reduce carbon dioxide,If everyone can do everything we can to protect the environment ,the earth will become nicer and nicer.老师点评： 1.关于如何做的这一段条理清晰，内容贴合主题；2.多处用到本学期学的内容，学以致用；欢迎下载精品学习资源初三 10 班 谢舒阳The Haze in ChinaHaze is a kind ofair pollu

25、tionand itvesry serious in some big cities in China, including Beijing, Shanghai.As we know, haze is bad for humansIt chaenanltho.t only cause people to have a pain in their throat or eyes but even cause cancer. Besides, bad air will make people feel uncomfortable and unpleasant.What should we do to

26、 solve this problem.First, we should reduce the terrible gas made by factories and cars.Second, we shouldn t cut down too many trees and we should plant more trees instead. Trees can make the air fresher. Third, everyone should try his or her best to protect the environment. We should walk to school

27、 if youhave enough time.Haze is harmful to people s health. We must do everything we can to reduce it. Let s greener people and our world will become better and better.老师点评： 1. 文章内容紧扣主题，结构合理，中间的过渡段使得文章条理更清晰；2. 划线部分可借鉴；初三 11 班 林雅铭The Haze in ChinaAs we all know, the haze is a kind of air pollution an

28、d it is harmful to our health. However, the haze has become more and more serious in China.In recent years, many big cities in China especially Beijinghave fought against the haze.Many people living in these cities have breathing problems.Because of the haze, we may have no chance to see the clear a

29、nd blue sky. And it really does great harm to people s health. It might cause people to have cancer.So we must do something useful to improve the situation. We can go to school by bus instead of taking cars. And the government should stop the chemical factories from producing terrible gas.Let s try

30、our best to make the environmenbtetter and better.老师点评： 1.文章结构合理，条理清晰，紧扣主题；2.能恰当运用所学词组或句型，做到学以致用；初三 12 班 吴少颖The Haze in ChinaThe haze is a kind of air pollution. The haze in China is becoming worse and worse. In many parts of China, the sky is gray and the air is bad.With the increase in population

31、and the development of industry, the haze has become aserious problem. It does great harm topeople s health. We may cough and become sick. It s hard for us to breathe. The haze can cause breathing problems and even cancer.We must do something to change the situation. For example, we should plant mor

32、e trees anddo our best to protect the environment. It s important for the government to stop the factories from producing terrible gas.Let s do everything we can to reduce the haze.老师点评： 1.能依据现实情形点出雾霾的危害性，并建议大家重视环境爱护；欢迎下载精品学习资源2.能恰当运用所学词组或句型，做到学以致用；初三 14 郑 昊The Haze in ChinaHaze is a kind of air pol

33、lution.It s awful and unhealthy for us. The haze in china is more and more terrible now. The haze has affected many areas of China, especially in some developed cities such as Beijing, Tianjing and so on.“ Thehaze is a killer.so”me scientists said. As a matter of fact, the haze has caused manyproble

34、ms. First, the haze is harmful to our hearth, it can hurt our lungs a lot. Second, the haze can also cause some trafficaccidents because the drivers can stee anything clearly. Third,manypeople come from other countries don t want to visit China again because of the terrible haze. Ifwe can solve this

35、 problem, our country must be more popular around the world.Then, how to solve it. Quite a few people have different answers. Our government can disencourage factories polluting the environment. People should drive cars less. We can plant more trees. All the Chinese should pay attention to protectin

36、g our country from the haze.Stop the haze from hurting the environment. Let s do everything we can. I believe that Chinawill be more and more beautiful.老师点评：本文结构合理，紧扣主题；行文很有条理，过渡连接得好，表述清晰到位；要是能在多运用些有亮点的句子会更加完善；初三 15 班 黄诗洋The Haze in ChinaHaze is a kind of air pollution.The haze is more and more seri

37、ous in China, especially in northern areas.The haze does great harm to people, animals and plants. And it can cause breathing problemsand sore eyes. Many people in northern areas of China can t gohoauzteb. ecause of the The haze is very harmful to us. So we should try out best to reduce it. I have s

38、ome suggestions.First, we should go to school or work by bike. It s good for the environment. Second, we shouldnburn too much oil, coal or wood. Finally, we should stop the factories from producing terrible gas.I think if we do our best to reduce the haze, the environment will be better.老师点评： 1、本文条理

39、清晰，内容紧扣主题，结构合理；2、正确地使用了一些已学词组划线部分，做到学以致用；欢迎下载精品学习资源初三 17 班陈千红The Haze in ChinaAs we know, a kind of air pollution called haze is becoming worse and worse in China. It often appears in many big cities such as Beijing.Because of haze, people always breathe hardly and can t see anytchlienagrloyu. tIsti

40、des bad欢迎下载精品学习资源for people s healdthitan s dangerous for us to walk or divre on the street. Worst of all, haze can even cause cancer and some people may lose their lives.It really is a serious problem that we must deal with. First, we should reduce the terrible gas produced by cars and factories. S

41、econd, we had better ride bikes or walk instead of driving. Last, we should plant more trees.Now, our government is taking many measures to solve this problem. And I believe our欢迎下载精品学习资源environment will become better.老师点评：本文结构清晰，脉络分明，分段合理，语言流畅自然；2. 能够正确合适的使用所学的短语和定语从句，学以致用；初三 18 班 陈琳炟The Haze in Ch

42、inaThe haze is a kind of air pollution. The haze in China has become more and more terriblethese years. Many cities have the pollution. Especially in Beijing, it s very serious. It affects the欢迎下载精品学习资源traffic. People can hardly see the road. It does great harm to people problems.People havebsrehaet

43、hailnthg.欢迎下载精品学习资源So we must do something to improvethe situation. We should drivecars less. And the government should stop the chemical factories from producing too much terrible gas.It s my belief that if everyone can do everything he canth, e haze will be less and less.老师点评：作者依据要求客观地介绍中国雾霾的现状，雾霾

44、的危害以及如何削减雾霾，最终一句为点睛之笔，使用了包含了条件状语从句的主语从句；初三 22 班黄葵向The Haze in ChinaAs we know, the haze is a kindof terrible pollution.It often appears in big cities, such as Beijing, Shanghai and some cities with too many cars or chemical factories. The haze is becoming more and more serious in China.In fact, the

45、haze does great harm to us. For example, when the haze appears, we can t seeanything outside. It may cause terrible accidents. It hurts our lungs and may cause cancer. Besides, it makes plants grow slowly.Then, what can we do to reduce it. First, we should drive less and ride bikes instead. Although we may feel tired, it s healthier to uWs. hat s more, we should plant more trees in our free time because it makes the air fresh.L et s our best to protect the environmenot,ur lives depend on it. Please be kind to it.老师点评：脉络清晰， 现状 危害 削减，中心突出 , 观点鲜明，过渡自然；行文流畅充实；欢迎下载