旅行主题写作典例精讲课件2021-2022学年人教版英语七年级下册.pptx

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1、七年级下册写作典例精讲七年级下册写作典例精讲旅行主题旅行主题如何写出高分作文审题列提纲谋篇布局头脑风暴旅行计划三步走高分写作演练词汇升级结构升级文章升级Step 1审题目审题目+列提纲列提纲假如你是 Linda, 你的好友 Tony 今年端午假期打算和家人去你的家乡温州游玩两天。请你做导游并帮他设计一份旅行计划。根据以下行程安排，写一封邮件给他。 Tonys plan to WenzhouJune 7Nanxi Rivergo boating; visit Furong Village; eat zongziJune 8Yandang Mountainclimb the mountain; e

2、at seafood注意 : 1. 行程安排必须包括表格所含主要内容，可以适当发挥； 2. 词数 80 左右，开头结尾已经写好，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不能出现真实的学校、班级和人名 Dear Tony, I am happy you will come to my hometown on the Dragon Boat Festival. Here is a plan for us. _This is our plan. What do you think of it? Yours, Linda审题目要点：人称：时态： 一般将来时第一人称（I, we） 第一天计划；第二天计划列提纲第一段总

3、：开门见山第二段分：第一天计划；第四段总：总结上文假如你是 Linda, 你的好友 Tony 今年端午假期打算和家人去你的家乡温州游玩两天。请你做导游并帮他设计一份旅行计划。根据以下行程安排，写一封邮件给他。 Tonys plan to WenzhouJune 7Nanxi Rivergo boating; visit Furong Village; eat zongziJune 8Yandang Mountainclimb the mountain; eat seafood第三段分：第二天计划；Step 1谋篇布局谋篇布局高分作文必备要素高分作文必备要素高分结构高分结构总分总总分总总：万能概

4、括句总：万能概括句分：分： 万能衔接词万能衔接词总：万能总结问句总：万能总结问句题目已给出题目已给出to begin with; after that 题目已给出题目已给出1. 去哪儿玩2. 做什么？4. 为啥去这3. 对旅行的总结、预期Step 2旅行计划三步走旅行计划三步走旅行计划如何构思？旅行计划如何构思？Step 1Step 2Step 3对行程的总结期待对行程的总结期待去哪里，为什么去哪里，为什么具体行程：做什么具体行程：做什么日期：日期：June 7地点：地点：Nanxi River事件：事件：go boating; visit Furong Village; eat zongzi

5、楠溪江旅行计划三步走楠溪江旅行计划三步走Step 1去哪里，为啥去去哪里，为啥去On the June 7th , its a good chance for us to experience the traditional culture around the Nanxi River because of the Dragon Boat Festival. 因为端午节到了要划船吃粽子！高分词汇：because of 由于高分句型：its a good chance for sb. to do 做某事对某人来说是一个好机会June 7Nanxi Rivergo boating; visit F

6、urong Village; eat zongziStep 2具体行程：做什么具体行程：做什么On June 7th, We are going to go boating in the river. We are going to visit Furong Village, too. We are going to eat zongzi there.June 7Nanxi Rivergo boating; visit Furong Village; eat zongzi一星一星 Level 1 直接罗列直接罗列Step 3文章升级文章升级Step 2具体行程：做什么具体行程：做什么We ar

7、e going to/will go boating. will/ be going toWe _ go boating. We _ go boating. Going boating will be a nice choice. can/may情态动词 动词词组 plan to 非谓语 初二plan toStep 2具体行程：做什么具体行程：做什么除了划船还可以做什么？除了划船还可以做什么？We are going to watch the dragon-boat race. 看龙舟比赛By holding the activity, people express the respect o

8、f Qu Yuan. 为什么会有龙舟比赛？为什么会有龙舟比赛？表达对屈原的尊敬Step 2具体行程：做什么具体行程：做什么For the reason that zongzi is the symbol of Dragon Boat Festival, we can eat zongzi there. 为什么要吃粽子？为什么要吃粽子？粽子是端午节的标志表达原因：表达原因： because because of for the reason that 初二原因状语从句初二原因状语从句Because zongzi is the symbol of Dragon Boat Festival, we

9、can eat zongzi there. We can eat zongzi there because of the Dragon Boat Festival. I am sure we will have a great time.我相信我们一定会玩得很开心。Step 2对行程的总结和期待对行程的总结和期待Step 3文章升级文章升级On June 7th, its a good chance for us to experience the traditional culture around Nanxi River because of the Dragon Boat Festiva

10、l. _, going boating in the river is a nice choice. _, we are going to watch the dragon-boat race. By holding the activity, people express the respect of Qu Yuan. _, we plan to visit Furong Village. For the reason that zongzi is the symbol of Dragon Boat Festival, we can eat zongzi there. I am sure w

11、e will have a great time.C. To begin withB. After thatA. In addition CBA想一想，填一填想一想，填一填Step 4高分写作演练高分写作演练日期：日期：June 8地点：地点： Yandang Mountain事件：事件： climb the mountain; eat seafood雁荡山执行计划三步走雁荡山执行计划三步走Step 1去哪里，为啥去去哪里，为啥去Yandang Mountain will be a fine place for us to enjoy the wonderful views of nature

12、. June 8Yandang Mountainclimb the mountain; eat seafood高分句型： will be a place for sb. to do. 对于某人将是做某事的地方。因为雁荡山美Step 2具体行程：做什么具体行程：做什么Level 2: We _ climb the mountain. Level 3: We _ eat some seafood there. 计划表达：will/ be going to情态动词 can/may动词词组 plan to 非谓语 初二We are going to climb the mountain. We are

13、 going to eat some seafood there. canplan toIts exciting to expect the wonderful trip during the holiday.期待假期精彩的旅行。Step 2对行程的总结和期待对行程的总结和期待Yandang Mountain will be a fine place for us to enjoy the wonderful views of nature. On June 8th, we can climb the mountain. _, we plan to eat some seafood. Its

14、exciting to expect the wonderful trip during the holiday.Whats more想一想，填一填想一想，填一填衔接词衔接词高分范文高分范文Dear Tony, I am happy you will come to my hometown on the Dragon Boat Festival. Here is a plan for us. On June 7th, its a good chance for us to experience the traditional culture around Nanxi River because

15、 of the Dragon Boat Festival. To begin with, going boating in the river is a nice choice. After that, we are going to watch the dragon-boat race. By holding the activity, people express the respect of Qu Yuan. In addition, we plan to visit Furong Village. For the reason that zongzi is the symbol of

16、Dragon Boat Festival, we can eat zongzi there. I am sure we will have a great time. Yandang Mountain will be a fine place for us to enjoy the wonderful views of nature. On June 8th, we can climb the mountain. Whats more, we plan to eat some seafood. Its exciting to expect the wonderful trip during t

17、he holiday. This is our plan. What do you think of it? Yours, Linda范文翻译范文翻译亲爱的托尼，我很高兴端午节你要来我的家乡。这是我们的一个计划。6月7日，因为正值端午节，去南溪河边对我们来说是一个体验传统文化的好机会。首先，去划船将是一个不错的选择。之后，我们打算去看龙舟比赛。人们通过这个活动来表达对屈原的尊敬。此外，我们计划参观芙蓉村。因为粽子是端午节的标志，所以我们可以在那里吃粽子。我相信我们会玩得非常开心。雁荡山对于我们将是一个欣赏自然美景的好地方。6月8日，我们可以去爬山。而且我们也打算在那里吃些海鲜。期待假期里精彩的

18、旅行太令人兴奋了。这就是我们的计划。你觉得怎么样? 琳达写作积累写作积累万能模板万能模板Dear xxx, I am happy you will come to my hometown xxx. Here is a plan for us. On xxx , its a good chance for us to xxx around xxx because of xxx. To begin with, xxx will be a nice choice. After that, we are going to xxx. By xxx, people express xxx. In addi

19、tion, we plan to xxx. For the reason that xxx, we can xxx there. I am sure we will have a great time. xxx will be a fine place for us to xxx. On xxx , we can xxx. Whats more, we plan to xxx. Its exciting to expect the wonderful trip during the holiday. This is our plan. What do you think of it? Your

20、s, xxxDear xxx, I am happy you will come to my hometown xxx. Here is a plan for us. On xxx , its a good chance for us to xxx around xxx because of xxx. To begin with, xxx will be a nice choice. After that, we are going to xxx. By xxx, people express xxx. In addition, we plan to xxx. For the reason that xxx, we can xxx there. I am sure we will have a great time. xxx will be a fine place for us to xxx. On xxx , we can xxx. Whats more, we plan to xxx. Its exciting to expect the wonderful trip during the holiday. This is our plan. What do you think of it? Yours, xxx