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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上2015年6月6日雅思写作 （一）题目类别society提问方式Discussion考试题目Some people prefer to provide help and support directly to those in their local community who need it. Others, however prefer to give money to national and international charitable organizations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.有人认为

2、给需要救助的人自己的帮助更加可取，有人认为给有需求的国家或国际援助组织提供经济援助更加重要，讨论两种观点，给出你的意见。Although people in industrialized countries lead a high standard of living, it is undeniable that there are still 1.2 billion people living below the poverty line. In order to solve poverty-related problems, I feel that all kinds of help sh

3、ould be encouraged and respected.Giving a helping hand to those who are in need in the local community seems reasonable. It is because even in the richest countries, there are still a lot of people, such as disabled people and orphanages, suffering from famine and extreme poverty. For this reason, i

4、t is easy and convenient for us to help our fellow citizens, such as donating food or clothing to them, so that we can see the result of our actions immediately. By contrast, it is rather difficult to track expenditure of international aids, which might result in corruption in some cases.Those who d

5、onate money to domestic and international charities believe that the collection of money has a tremendous effect on the poor countries compared with other forms of help. This is because few people are able to donate a large amount of money to construct schools, hospitals and roads in poor areas. Ins

6、tead, governments and charities can achieve this. International aids can also purchase vaccines which are available in developed countries by using the money raised worldwide and save millions childrens life.In my view, minor proportion of donated money and other sorts of help should be appreciated

7、equally as long as the money reaches to those who need it desperately. The government could run campaign and encourage door-to door help. At the same time, charitable organizations should make every penny count for donors.(word count：274)2015年6月6日雅思写作Developing countries require help offered by inte

8、rnational organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development. Some people think that financial aid is important. Others believe that practical aid and advice is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 有人认为经济援助之重要的，有人认为实际的帮助和建议重要，你的观点是什么?解析题目：2015年6月6日雅思考题中向有需要的国家

9、提供帮助指的是一些国家在遭遇自然灾害，经济危机的时候，应该给他们提供直接的援助，例如医疗队，救援组织或者志愿者。对立方观点经济援助指的是直接的捐助。本题为旧题重新，考察的是国家援助的方式。作家立场：发达国家应该承担对于发展中国家援助的责任。对比经济援助，直接的帮助更加可取可行。首段;背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场二段：反方观点的展开：三段：正方观点的展开：It is not rare to see that some well-to-do countries like to give financial aid or other forms of assistance to poor o

10、nes. Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not economic donation is the best effective means of assistance. Speaking for myself, those developed countries should assume the responsibility of helping those countries, which are still suffering from the agonies of popular disease, poor education and un

11、developed trade. However, financial aids have both its merits and demerits， other suitable ways of assistance should be considered.Indeed, some arguments could be explored to justify that those well-off countries ought to give a financial aid to the poverty-stricken nations charities. For a start, i

12、t is out of the reason of humanism and could benefit the straitened nations directly. More precisely, financial beneficence from the developed countries could help to accelerate the construction of infrastructure and establishing more houses. Also, when some rich countries donate large sums of money

13、 to those needy countries, more job opportunities could be created and thus living standards of the poor countries could be enhanced.Nonetheless, we should be alert to the possible risks of economic assistance. For one thing, it might make needy countries become over-dependent on the donors. For ano

14、ther, international aid might bright about possible political interference and economic exploitation. Apart from financial aids, there are still many other options available to assist the undeveloped nations. One way is by opening up trade barriers, which enables the poor countries to sell their goo

15、ds. Another way is to forgive economic debts so that the self-supporting ability of the poor nations could be promoted. Eventually, the teams of volunteer teachers and doctors from rich countries could be dispatched to the impoverished countries to take the responsibilities of educational and medica

16、l assistance.解析：It is not rare to see that 这一点很常见解析：Conflicting ideas clash in whether or not 关于是否应该，人们持有不同意见解析：Financial aids have both its merits and demerits 经济援助有利有弊解析：Indeed, some arguments could be explored to justify that 的确，为证明是合理的，我们是可以找到一些理由的解析：could benefit the straitened nations directly

17、 v可以使贫困国家直接受益解析：Living standards of the poor countries could be enhanced 贫困国家的生活水平可以被提高解析：It might make needy countries become over-dependent on the donors. 经济援助也许会使贫困国家对于援助国更加依赖解析：International aid might bright about possible political interference and economic exploitation. 国际援助也许会带来政治干预和经济掠夺解析：op

18、en up trade barriers v开发贸易壁垒解析：forgive economic debts v免除经济债务解析：The teams of volunteer teachers and doctors from rich countries could be dispatched to the impoverished countries 可以向贫困国家派驻教师和医生。2015年5月30日雅思写作（二）题目类别全球化，旅行提问方式Report 考试题目In some countries, people believe that international tourism is a

19、 bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? How to change their views.范文主体思路分析：原因一：外来游客的行为会激怒当地人，因为他们不遵守当地的习俗对策一：政府可以在当地做引导，设置文化小贴士原因二：外来游客的旅行本身也会带来他们的国家文化特征，对于种族意识的强烈的国家是一种伤害对策二：政府可以引导当地人改变想法，对这种行为持宽容态度。旅行更多的只是文化交流Travelling abroad has become a new lifestyle nowadays. However, comp

20、laints about the potential negative effects of international travel have been sparked among the public in recent years. This essay will outline two main reasons for these complaints and provide certain measures to change the opinion.First of all, it is a widespread phenomenon that foreign travellers

21、 might repel the local community because of their inappropriate languages and behaviour in some resorts. Due to the cultural differences, visitors behavior may break traditional rules in travel destinations sometimes. For example, a visitor will annoy an Indian when he passes food by his left hand.

22、For this reason, the local government can take actions to provide more specific travelling tips in popular scene spots for foreign travellers.In addition, more and more transnational travels will cause damage to the unique nature of a culture. Foreign visitors will bring not only tangible matters li

23、ke food and clothes but also something intangible, such as their festivals or customs. In other words, these visitors are assimilating their countrys culture while they are travelling abroad, which will be bound to cause antipathy in racist society. Germany is a case in point. For this reason, the g

24、overnment can encourage locals to hold a tolerant attitude toward foreign arrivals as they have no common knowledge of local conventions in most times. Travelling is for cultural communication instead of invasion.In conclusion, breaking conventions and cultural uniqueness are the two main factors le

25、ading to the bias regarding international tourism. Both governments and individuals should make an effort to change this phenomenon.2015年5月30日雅思写作Some people believe that international tourism have harmful effects. Why do they think so? How to change their views? 有人认为，国际游的影响是有害的，他们为何持有这种观点，如何改变他们的的观

26、点?点评：题目指令为分析原因和解决问题。本文为旧题改写，需要完成的任务是分析国家发展旅游业带来的弊端以及提出解决策略，帮助人们改变对于旅游业的消极态度。全文布局图：首段：背景介绍 + 作家立场二段：原因的展开：谈及为何一些人对于旅游业持有消极的的态度三段：策略的展开：谈及国际旅游业的利好去说服一些人对于旅游业的消极态度尾段：作家立场：支持旅游业，总结旅游业对于游客和相关国家的利好。首段：背景介绍 + 写作目的International tourism has been encouraged in many nations around the globe because it produces

27、 positive effects on economic growth and local government. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitudes toward international tourism. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of tourism and then present some recomme

28、ndations.二段： 原因的展开：(游客为何对于旅游业持有消极的态度)The reasons why some people hold indifferent attitudes toward international tourism are manifold. Here, some of them will be explored. First, a large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environment in those areas owing rich tourism re

29、sources. Further, some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，personal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. Eventually, even though sightseers might m

30、ake the locals purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas1. It produces positive effects on economic growth and local government 国际旅游对经济发展和地方政府有积极作用2. However，some problem inevitably ensue，which accounts for why some people hold negative attitude towa

31、rds international tourism.然而，一些问题不可避免地随着发生，这就解释了为何一些人对于国际旅游业持有消极的态度。3. This essay aims to explore the reasons why some people are not supportive of and then present some recommendations. 本文的写作目的是探究下为何一些人不支持，再提出相关的建议。4. A large flowing population many cause serious destruction of the natural environm

32、ent in those areas owing rich tourism resources.大批游客的涌入会对那些拥有旅游资源地区的自然环境造成严重的破坏5. Some visitors unconscious behaviors might be considered as disrespectable and unfriendly due to the cultural differences. 由于文化的差异，一些游客的行为也许会认作是不值得尊敬的，不够友善的。6. For instance，questions about religious beliefs， marriage，pe

33、rsonal income are considered as taboo for some westerners. 例如，有些西方人很忌讳别人打听他们的宗教信仰，婚姻状况，个人收入。7. Even though sightseers might make the locals purse heavy, they, at the same time, interfere with the peaceful current life in some areas. 尽管游客会增加地方人的收入，同时，他们也许会打扰一些地区一向平静的生活。2015年5月16日雅思写作（三）题目To improve t

34、he quality of education, people think that we should encourage our students to evaluate and criticise their teachers. Others believe that it will result in a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.话题教育题型双边讨论Nowadays, whether evaluating and criti

35、cising teachers should be supported in the classroom has become a controversial issue. From my perspective, evaluation and criticism of teachers are necessary for the improvement of education if they are objective and reasonable.On the one hand, proposing changes to teachers lesson content contribut

36、es to the improvement of teaching quality. Usually, it is difficult for teachers to realise the mistakes and slips in their teaching unless students remind them. Additionally, teachers may not clearly know what students have known and want to know when planning their lessons. If students can put for

37、ward their ideas and suggestions towards the lesson, it will be of great help for teachers to upgrade the teaching projects. Moreover, trying to evaluate teachers lesson is particularly beneficial for students academic and career development in the future. The modern education emphasises criticism a

38、nd innovation. Undoubtedly, it is an effective way for students to debate or discuss with teachers.On the other hand, the disruptive students will probably disturb the class and negatively affect both teaching and learning outcomes. When students voice their opinions in the classroom, it will be har

39、d to maintain the order and discipline and the teachers may feel disrespected. Also, students will suffer a loss in terms of knowledge and other learning content. This is because teachers always devote much to delivering knowledge and explaining theories. If they are disrupted, the teaching plan may

40、 not be able to be fulfilled. As a result, both teachers and students have to face a loss in the quality of education.To sum up, it can be recommended that students evaluate and criticise teachers in the classroom on the premise that they have decent manners without disturbing the learning atmospher

41、e. Only in this way will teachers and students achieve a win-win outcome in education.2015年5月16日雅思写作Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, schools should encourage students to evaluate and criticize their teachers. Other people, however, feel that will result in a loss

42、of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. 点评：两种观点讨论，考察教育方式。经典题目，原题重现。作家立场：学生评价老师是一场教育的革命，利大于弊。支持学生评价老师的理由：1. 学生反馈是对老师的教学评估，是检验教学的重要标准。学生评价老师使教育者可以及时地了解学生的需求，进而及时地调整和改善教学方法。同时，学生的鼓励可激发老师的教学热情，可以想象，学生的点赞会激励老师们专业上更加优秀。2. 从学生成长角度而言，鼓励学生评价老师也有利好。换言之，这可以培养成学

43、生们的批判思维，鼓励学生们的独立表达。3. 对于校方面而言，周期性地鼓励学生评估老师的教学可以淘汰那些不思进取，不受欢迎的教育者。老师们有了危机意识，才会不断地精进教学。反对学习评价老师的理由：1. 学生没有成熟到可以对老师和他们的教学作出理性的判断的程度。同时，有些学生可能会因为曾经被老师批评过对老师做出不负责任的评价。2. 鼓励学生评价老师，学生们可能会变得傲慢自大和目无尊长。首段：背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场二段： 正方观点展开：支持学生评价老师的理由三段：反方观点展开：反对学生评价老师的理由尾段：再次亮明观点 + (总结理由)Traditionally, to respect

44、educators and value education is considered as a kind of virtue of the students, however, many educationalists currently encourage learners to evaluate and criticize their teachers. This essay aims to prove that students should be allowed and motivated to comment on their teachers performance.Indeed

45、, it is commendable for students to make comments on their teachers performance. Firstly, it will exert a beneficial influence on enhancing the quality of teaching by eliminating those less competent and less popular teachers. Meanwhile, the encouragement from students will greatly conduce to teache

46、rs passion. Hence, the desire to gain the praise of students could stimulate teachers motivation to excel professionally. Secondly, it is easy for teachers to timely receive students feedback so that they could adjust and optimize their teaching methods. Lastly, it can perfect the quality of educati

47、on and pave a new way for achieving equality between teachers and students.Although the practice of evaluation of teachers is embraced by many people, still others remain suspicious of it merits. First, students may be not mature enough to make sound judgment upon their teachers academic performance

48、. Conversely, some negative comments might be randomly made only because teachers hairstyle, appearance or clothes are not their favorite. Further, some students are more likely to make irresponsible comments on their teachers simply because they are blamed by their teachers, therefore, teachers will be hurt innocently. Eventually, youngsters may become more disrespectful and arrogant if they are encouraged to criticize and evaluate their teachers.In closing， evaluation of