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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上上海高考英语题型训练：指导写作一， 一等文要求，1， 结构三段式：第一段：简单明了，开门见山。如我们想表达小强很强壮，直接说 XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，一句足矣。第二段：分析为什么他强壮。A. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday! 详举吃的是什么。B. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：结论，与第一段呼应，但不能完全照，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，How strong and robust XQ is! I hope to

2、be him one day!2，内容和要点：话题topic必须符合题意，提示的要点必须写全，一个都不能漏写。确定主题、要点是要发表观点，还是举出例子。如果有具体提示，写作就等于翻译，把提示内容变换句式翻译到位，全面切题。如果没有提示，自已提炼，找到主题, 跟主旨无关的话不要写。3，逻辑合理：递进：first, second, third, finally, to begin with, first of all, in addition, whats more, moreover, on the one hand, on the other hand, the last but not th

3、e least。转折：but, yet, however, as far as I am concerned, in the meantime。总结：in a word, all in all, in conclusion。4，语法和亮点：单词拼读和语法必须准确，不可以有错误。在此基础上，用几个有难度的词汇，编几个高级的句型。一般词汇和简单句型要限量用，不可占字太多。 二， 三段十句话：1，三段布局：高考作文题型多样, 有命题作文和材料作文。材料作文是根据给出的书面材料, 按要求作文。话题主要三方面：学生学习生活，学生日常生活，社会热点现象。无论哪种文体：记叙文、议论文，夹叙夹议文，应用文、说

4、明文、图片描述文都可以用三段法：引入，具体，结尾。记叙文：A. 背景介绍：时间、地点、人物、事件。B. 故事发展经过结果。C. 结局和感受。 议论文：A. 发表观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。图片文：A. 描述图片内容，提炼观点。B. 论据理由。C. 结论呼应论点。日记写法同一般记叙文或议论文。通知，书信，演讲稿在引入部分写话题，意图，主题；在具体部分写活动要求，具体内容，观点陈述；在结尾部分写活动时间、地点、联系方式、结语、总结、希望或号召。2， 十句成篇：Passage 1,1） Topic 话题2） Thesis 论点Passage 2,3） Transition 过渡句4）

5、Argument1 论据15） Detail 1 论据1的支持句6） Argument2 论据27） Detail 2 论据2 的支持句8） Argument3 论据39） Detail 3 论据3的支持句Passage 310） Conclusion 总结以上为议论文的三段十句结构。根据具体情况可调整加减。其它文体在此基础上略作修改即可。三， 具体各类题型写法：1， 描述图片类：P1图片描述, 图片主旨。P2 过渡句加论据和支持句。视字数调整论据和支持句个数。P3总结。2， 夹叙夹议文：写法1，P1 话题记叙或描述。P2 观点或感想，写2个论据和2个支持句。P3总结。写法2，P1 话题和观点

6、。P2 事件起因、经过、结果以证明论点。P3 总结说明事件，再次证明话题和论点。3, 两主旨议论文：有时需要写两个主旨，如第一个为什么喜欢读书，另一个喜欢读什么书。或第一个水为什么珍贵，另一个怎么节约水。可以分成两大部分写：P1 话题、一个论据和支持句。P2 过渡句、另一个论据和支持句。P3 总结4，建议型议论文：写法1，倾向建议：提出一个问题，简单说明该问题，并针对此问题给出多个建议：P1写信目的，一个问题。 P2 针对这个问题若干建议。P3总结希望。写法2，问题建议并重：提出两个问题，然后给出相应的两条建议：P1 写信目的。P2提两个问题并说明。P3针对两问题给两建议。写法3，倾向于问题：

7、提出一个问题，详细阐述问题并分析原因，结尾给出一个建议。P1写信目的。P2提出一个问题，原因及危害等。P3 建议、总结。5， 说明文和纯事实新闻报导：同纯记叙文，不涉及议论，只将起因、经过、结果写清即可。重事实轻情义。四， 写作四步骤：1， 审题：主题，体裁，人称，时态，内容要点。在试卷中画出要点。2， 框架：打草稿：一定要打草稿，正式写作再梳理锤炼。3， 成文：一要凝练，二要变化。使用过渡词、从句、不同句型和词组搭配。4，检查：内容要点，语法错误。名词查单复数和冠词，动词查时态语态和主谓一致。变换句式：不用过于简单的结构。总之：认真审题, 提炼要点; 紧扣主题, 扩词成句; 表述准确, 连句

8、成文; 通篇检查, 确保无误。五， 英文文章开头有两种可以选择：1，每段开头空两格，四或五个字符，段落之间不空行。2，每段开头顶格写，段落之间空行。两种都可以，但是空格与不空格不能混用，第一种用的比较Guided Writing Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.Unit 1, 假设你是启光中学的学生李跃华，你在学校公众号 (public platform) 上看到一张志愿者招募启事。请根据该启事的要求，写一

9、封邮件（邮件中不得提到自己的真实姓名和学校），就启事中的三个活动任选其一，申请一份志愿者工作。校园开放日期招募志愿者 学校将于2019年1月1日举办校园开放日，以增进家校沟通，宣传学校办学成果，现就活动方案招募志愿者。活动一：拓展课程（extensive course）介绍，活动二：社团(society)活动展示，活动三：学习经验分享。有意者请给校长室发邮件并告知：1) 你想报名参加的志愿活动，2）你参加这项志愿活动的理由，3) 你可以为该活动做些什么。联系方式： 2018年12月19日Dear Sir/ Madam,My name is Li Yuehua. Hearing that our

10、 school is about to hold the open day activity, Im writing to apply for the volunteer job for sharing my learning experience.Ive spent my 12 year being a student. Small as the number is, I always think it easy to learn every course. So Im going to share my methods with our mates, from which Im sure

11、they can benefit a lot. Three steps, I think, consist of my work. First of all, I will divide our subjects into 3 dimensions, according to the different learning methods, and Im telling our mates that there is a unique trait in every dimension. Moreover, Ill introduce the aids that I always use in m

12、y learning process, which may sharply improve our learning effect. Ultimately, with the Internet technology available in our life, I want to share some websites containing many useful documents, which can do good to our learning.Thanks for your consideration, and I would appreciate it very much if I

13、 could take the job. Yours, Li Yuehua Unit 2, 请结合图片内容，按要求用英语写作。要求：（1）简要描述图片内容； （2）结合生活实际，发表你的看法； （3）要紧扣图片，有明确的观点； As can be seen in the picture, a tall tree with a big heart-shaped crown is standing there, protecting her two kids, one of whom is rather small and the other has to bend over.(Asisshown

14、bythepicture/figure/percentageinthetable/graph/picture/chart;Aswhatisshowninthepicture; Asisvividly shown inthepicture; Asisportrayed / depic /described/illustratedinthepicture.)The picture tries to tell us that the mother tree, in name of love, leaves too limited space for her kids to grow up, whic

15、h is often the case in our social life. Some parents love and care their kids so much that they make every effort / spare no effort to protect them. In this way parents usually instruct their kids in every aspect and even control their lives, leaving no space for them to grow freely. In my perspecti

16、ve, children need more freedom to grow up, even if they will meet with failures or frustrations. So, parents, give more space to your kids if you really love them and want to protect them.Unit 3, 你是刘晓，你班本学期剩余一笔总额两千元的班费(class fee)结余。目前有两个使用方案：1，为教室添置一台空气净化器 (air cleaner)；2，为每位同学订阅一份英语周报(English Weekl

17、y)。给班委会(class committee)写一封信，谈谈你的看法。信中必须包括：你赞同的方案；你赞同方案的理由；你对于执行此方案的建议。Dear class committee,In response to choosing a feasible one from the two approaches / projects to consume / use the spare class fee, I lean towards / am in favour of the former, adding an air cleaner in the classroom.To begin wit

18、h, weather condition of Shanghai nowadays is getting worse than ever before. Not only should we hold on masks to prevent ourselves from heavy dust, but we are often unable to have our PE class outside. Whats more, the fear of being influenced by the bad weather can distract us from the class. We wor

19、ry about our health too much, which causes a negative psychological implication on ourselves. Therefore, its critical that we ought to utilize the air cleaner to build a better environment for study.Of course, we must be careful in several aspects. Firstly, since we have only 2000 yuan, the air clea

20、ner cant be too expensive to afford. And apparently, the supervision of the air cleaner is essential as well. I suggest assigning one student every day to check the electrical appliances and ensure that it has been closed before everyones leaving.To sum up, with our proper use of the machine, it can

21、 make great benefits in our study life. So I sincerely wish your taking my suggestion into consideration.YoursLiu XiaoUnit 4, 假设你是明启中学的高三学生王蕾。学校正在招募话剧团（ drama club）和机器人社团（ robot club）新成员。你在日记中表达获知该消息时的感受，做出选择，并阐述理由。On hearing that our school is recruiting new members of drama club and robot club, I

22、cant wait to join one of them. After deliberate thought about the advantages and disadvantages of both these two clubs, I decided to attend the drama club.On one hand, though, the robot club can show us the latest development of science and technology, I, as a girl, have little interest in science.

23、On the other hand, I have a fancy for literature and have kept writing plays since I was ten. The drama can provide a wonderful platform for me to show my talent. Whats more, as a shy girl . I am afraid of speaking in public. Without doubt, drama club has more chance to perform in front of the publi

24、c, which is a great chance to practice myself and overcome my shyness. Furthermore, joining the drama club can expose me to different friends sharing the same hobby. I am looking forward to beginning my journey in drama club!Unit 5, 假设你们学校正在向学生征询选修课（optional course）的有关事宜。请你写信给校长，提出你希望开设的选修课的名称，并简明说说

25、这门课应该涉及的主要内容以及开设这门选修课的意义。Dear Headmaster,Im quite glad to be informed that you are gathering ideas on Optional Courses next term. Personally, a course called English Appreciation will be a wise choice, which is certain to benefit us students a lot.I have come up with activities to be done in this co

26、urse. One is to read English classics recommended by both teachers and students and the other is to listen to some relaxing English songs. My reasons are listed as follows.In the first place, it goes without saying that under an exam-oriented education system, seldom do we have opportunities to expo

27、se ourselves to a pure English environment, which, however, can be made up for in this course. Besides, it can be said for sure that not only can this course help stimulate our interest in English learning, but they also play a vital role in relieving our heavy burden, thus enabling us to be more wi

28、lling to learn and to be more focused on our studies. Moreover, under no circumstance can we overlook the point that this course, without doubt, will help us a lot in improving our academic levels, thus leading to better performances in our studies.For the reasons above, I sincerely hope that you wi

29、ll take my advice into serious consideration. Yours, TinaUnit 6，尚华中学将举办英语周活动,学校正在向全体学生征集活动方案,题目是“My Favourite Programme”。假设你是尚华中学高三学生王云,请写一篇文章提出你的建议。内容如下: 推荐节目名称并简单介绍节目内容，具体介绍一下推荐节目的实施办法或注意事项。Dear sir,I am Wang Yun from Senior Three. I am very glad to know that our school will make a new round of En

30、glish activity and are collecting programmes from the senior high school students. As a student, I really want to recommend my favorite programme, an English speech competition. Taking part in the English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the English sp

31、eech competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, we should pay special attention to the following rules. First, we should finish every speech in five minutes each time. Second, we try our best to

32、express ourselves in English fluently according to a specific topic. Finally, we should have a good English pronunciationAll in all, I hope that the English speech competition will be accepted!Thank you Wang YunUnit 7， 很多高中生会利用课余时间进行知识拓展，现在有两种常见的授课方式可供选择：网络授课(online teaching) 和传统面授(face-to-face teac

33、hing)，你更倾向于那种授课形式呢? 请说说你的理由。Nowadays, most students would prefer to consolidate and develop their knowledge during their spare time by enrolling at some after-school tutoring classes. When it comes to selecting the teaching methods, students can have access to online teaching and face-to-face teachi

34、ng. As far as Im concerned, I would choose the former. There are three main reasons accounting for my choice. First and foremost, only by taking online teaching course can I learn it at my convenience. Apparently, in contrast with taking face-to-face teaching course, I can save a substantial amount

35、of time on the way back and forth. In addition, taking online teaching course, not only can I stay in my study comfortably but I can be free of unfamiliar environment as well. Moreover, the price of online education is much cheaper than face-to-face classes, which can save a lot of money for my fami

36、ly. Last but not least, there is no denying the fact that after downloading the online course, I have free access to watching it repeatedly at any time if necessary, which will contribute to my deep and comprehensive understanding of the course.From what Ive mentioned above, I am firmly convinced th

37、at I would make full use of the innovation brought about by the Internet and online teaching course would definitely be a good fit for me. Unit 8, 高考作文：假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参与了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：1.描述调研数据； 2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。Recently I have conduc

38、ted a survey about “whether parents are proud of their children” in my school. The result shows that 80% of parents are proud of their children while only 60% of children hold the same opinion. According to the survey, we can conclude that the number of parents who approved the idea is 20% more than

39、 of children.There seems to be two causes as we tried to figure out what led to this subtle difference. First, conservative Chinese parents are never accustomed to conveying directly how much they are proud of their children. This tendency to conceal feelings hardly helps children develop a strong s

40、ense of self-confidence. Second, the current education system excessively emphasizes the value of academic performance, thus forcing children to extensively believe that only by achieving excellent scores can they make their parents proud. This bias unfairly undermines the significance of talents fo

41、r art and sports, which easily frustrates children and renders them more likely to underestimate themselves.Without the genuine encouragement from parents and the reversal of exam-oriented educational methods, a kid would never end up with a positive grown-up.专题：图表说明文一，图表说明1，分类：数字表、函数关系图、曲线图(graph)；

42、表格(table)；几何图形(figure)； 图形表、饼状图(pie chart)；条状图、柱状图(bar chart)；平面图、示意图、外形图(diagram)。2，一般可分三个层次来写：按照题目要求描述图表反映的总情况，即概括大意。对数字进行仔细的比较，抓住特点进行分析、归纳并找出产生变化的原因。读图表后的想法、结论、评论或针对反映出的问题采取的解决措施。二表达方式：1，常用的描述句型 The table/chart/diagram/graph shows that .According to the table/chart/diagram/graph.As is shown in th

43、e table/chart/diagram/graph.As can be seen from the table/chart/diagram/graph/figures.We can see from the figures/statistics. It is clear/ apparent from the figures/statistics.2图表中数据(data)的具体表达法数据(data)在某一个时间段固定不变：fixed in time在一系列的时间段中转变：changes over time增加：increase/raise/rise/.减少：decrease/grow dow

44、n/drop/fall/decline稳定：remain stable3描写变化的形容词及副词rapid/rapidly，dramatic/dramatically，significant/significantly，sharp/sharplysteep/steeply，steady/steadily，gradual/gradually，slow/slowly，slight/slightly 三、写作模板As (is) shown/indicated by the figure/in the table/graph/pie chart/chart，_ has been increased/de

45、creased significantly/steadily from _ to_. From the sharp decline/rise in the chart，it goes without saying that_.There are at least two reasons accounting for / contributing to _. On the one hand, _ On the other hand, _. _is due to the fact that_. In addition，_is responsible for_. Maybe there are ot

46、her reasons to show. But it is generally believed that the above mentioned reasons are commonly convincing/persuasive.As far as I am concerned，I hold the view that_. I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded.四，作文范例1，最近你校对中学生的消费情况进行了调查。请根据调查表提供的信息写一篇英语短文，简要介绍调查结果并谈谈你对中学生消费的看法。 As can be se

47、en from the diagram above，nowadays middle school students spend most of their pocket money on snacks，clothes，things for entertainment and social communications. However，they seldom buy learning resources. Furthermore，some of them are free to buy whatever they like without considering the income of their family and their needs. In my opinion，its wrong of us stu