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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上英文记叙文写作模板第一部分记叙文题型作文写作步骤要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析，如：2003年6月四级作文、2003年9月四级作文、2004年6月六级作文。对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写：第一段、总结描述交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句第二段、具体描述具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果：起因经过结果第三段、对事件的分析分析句1 + 分析句2 + 分析3第二部分、记叙文题型写作练习实战演练directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes

2、to write a composition on the topic the day my classmate fell ill.1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况；2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的；3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是.写作模板：架构阶段第一段：开篇句：about _ oclock one evening in _, _.扩展句：_. (展开描述一下事件)第二段：主题句：without hesitation, _. it wasnt long before _.扩展句：1、one _. 2、another _. 3、our teacher _.第三段：结尾句：is _?

3、 who can tell ? but _.扩展句：1、when _ , people showed _ spirit regardless of _. 2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. 3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.写作模板：填充阶段第

4、一段：开篇句：about nine oclock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough.扩展句：his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5.第二段：主题句：without hesitation, i dialed 120. it wasnt lo

5、ng before an ambulance arrived.扩展句：1、one roommate brought a blanket for him. 2、another supported him in the ambulance.3、our teacher insisted on giving him some money.第三段：结尾句：is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we didt retreat.扩展句：1、when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fea

6、rless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health.2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice.3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.第三部分、范文about nine oclock one even

7、ing in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. his head was aching so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5. without hesitation, i dialed 120. it wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. one roommat

8、e brought a blanket for him. another supported him in the ambulance. our teacher insisted on giving him some money.is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we didt retreat. when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health. this kin

9、d of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world.Unit 14写作练习【习作一】【写作任务】 生活中一定有你难以忘记的人,作为初中即将毕业的你,肯定有某个老师在你的心目中记忆犹新,你将永远不会忘记他/她.请以 “The Teacher I Wil

10、l Never Forget”为题，结合自身经历，写一篇不少于90词的英语短文。【写作指导】1. 定基调 体裁：记叙文时态：以一般现在时和一般过去时为主人称：第一人称和第三人称2. 列提纲、写句子列提纲写句子开篇点题The teacher I will never forget is Ms. Qian, my junior high school English teacher.具体阐述介绍人物年龄Mr. Wang is 38 years old.外貌(1)_(钱老师中等身材，留着长发).喜好(2)_( 钱老师喜欢运动) and she is good at playing basketbal

11、l.性格(3)_( 钱老师非常有耐心，从不生我们的气).典型事例(4)I still remember _(一天上午当我正在抄同桌的数学作业时), Ms. Qian came into the classroom. I was so afraid that I didnt know what to do at that time. To my surprise, Ms. Wang wasnt angry with me. (5)Instead, Ms. Qian told me copying homework wasnt good for me and then _(她说如果我需要帮助的话，

12、她可以帮助我). (6)I was so moved that _(我决定再也不抄他人的作业了). From then on, I did my homework by myself. (7)_(并且在钱老师的帮助下，我在英语上取得了很大的进步).结束语I will never forget Ms. Qian. I hope Ms Qian will be happy and healthy in the future. 3. 巧衔接本文中体现了语义搭配这一通过词汇纽带来使上下文紧密连贯的衔接方式。如本文中的 . years old, of medium build, has . hair,

13、likes, is good at, patient, is never angry with, still remember, will never forget这些表达都与描写人物相关联，从而使文章成为一个有机统一体。4. 成篇章The teacher I will never forget答案2. 列提纲、写句子(1) Ms. Qian is of medium build and has long hair(2) Ms Qian likes / loves (playing) sports(3) Ms Qian is very patient and is never angry wi

14、th us(4) one morning while I was copying my deskmates math homework(5) she said she could help me if I needed help(6) I decided not to copy anyones homework any more(7) And with Ms Qians help, I made great / much progress in English4. 成篇章【高分范文】The teacher I will never forgetThe teacher I will never

15、forget is Ms Qian, my junior high school English teacher. Ms. Qian is 38 years old. She is of medium build and has long hair. She likes sports and she is good at playing basketball. She is very patient and is never angry with us.I still remember one morning while I was copying my deskmates English h

16、omework, Ms. Qian came into the classroom. I was so afraid that I didnt know what to do at that time. To my surprise, she wasnt angry with me. Instead, she told me copying homework wasnt good for me and then she said he could help me if I needed help. I was so moved that I decided not to copy anyone

17、s homework any more. From then on, I did my homework by myself. And with her help, I made great progress in English. I think Ms. Qian is the teacher I will never forget. I will never forget her. I hope she will be happy and healthy in the future.【写作练习二】假如你是李华，你的初中生活马上就要结束了，三年的初中生活给你留下了很多美好的回忆。请给你的英国

18、笔友Susan写一封电子邮件，给她讲一件发生在你和同学之间的难忘的事情。要求：词数100左右，注意电子邮件的格式。Dear Susan, How is it going these days? I have so many memories of my three years at junior high school. One of them impresses me very much. I still remember last year when a new student came to our class. His name is Liu Kun. He was very weak

19、 in English. He became less interested in it and almost gave up. As soon as I found he had a problem, I had a talk with him about how to learn English. Since then, Ive kept helping him and with my help, his English level has been improving little by little. He was very happy and thankful to me. From

20、 this, I learned we should try to help others when they are in trouble. Its really a good thing to help others.Best wishes!Yours, Li Hua 重点短语1.连续几次地in a row 2.弹琴play the keyboard3.暂停跑步take a break from running4.对有耐心be patient with5.算出；解决work out6.无论多难no matter how difficult7.投入；花费put in8.按时on time9.

21、交一些新朋友make some new friends10.为做准备prepare for11.弄得一团糟make a mess12.玩得开心have fun13.沉住气；保持冷静keep ones cool14.高中senior high school15.取得很糟糕的成绩get poor grades16.在某方面有困难have problems with sth.17.流逝go by 18.在年底at the end of the year 19.取得商业学位get a business degree20.信任；信赖；相信believe in21.接受邀请accept the invit

22、ation22.参加毕业典礼attend the graduation ceremony23.首先first of al 24.充满be full of 25.渴望；渴求be thirsty for26.处理；对付deal with27.长大grow up 28.为而骄傲/自豪be proud of29.没有一个none of30.的末尾/尽头the end of31.的开始the beginning of32.在前面; 领先；比更先进ahead of33.犯错误make mistakes34.向学习learn from35.放弃give up36.伴随着困难along with diffic

23、ulties37.等待某人wait for38.做出自己的选择make your own choices39.为负责be responsible for40.分道扬镳go your separate ways41.启程；出发；动身set out42.与分离separate from43.记得做过的事remember doing sth. 书面表达。(15分)假如你是王鹏，请你根据以下提示用英语写一封保护大象的倡议书。提示：陆地上最大的哺乳动物，可以活到80岁。目前数量在减少，因为：1. 人们砍伐森林，大象渐渐失去家园；2. 人们捕杀大象，获取象牙。3. 应如何保护它们(不少于三条)。要求：1. 恰当运用比较级和最高级；2. 80词左右。倡议书的结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：哺乳动物mammal; 象牙ivoryDear classmate s，_I believe everyones contribution (贡献) can make a big difference. Wang Peng专心-专注-专业