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1、精选优质文档-倾情为你奉上2013届高考英语二轮复习书面表达复习专题04 传统文化话题指导实例指导1欢度春节Dear Bob, Im glad to hear from you. You said that you are very interested in Chinese customs, especially the Spring Festival. Several days before it, people are busy shopping and cleaning. On the New Years Eve, the whole family usually get togeth

2、er to have dumplings, set off fireworks, and watch TV programs. On the New Years Day, people always get up early and put on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says Happy New Year to each other. Children can also get lucky money from their parents and other adults. When you take a walk in the stre

3、ets, you will be struck by the sight of beautiful decorations. Some doors are decorated with red lanterns. This is something about our Spring Festival. And welcome to our country some day. Best wishes.Yours, Li Ming教师点评:本文覆盖了写作任务中规定的所有内容,所使用的词汇和语法结构基本准确,语言连贯,结构完整,基本达到写作目的。但是仍有个别地方有所欠缺,有待修改和完善。1. 文章没

4、有段落,显得有些缭乱且思路不清。2. 本文大多是单纯的叙述和介绍,缺少作者本人的情感和一些带有人情味的语句,读起来给人感觉颇为生硬。成稿:Dear Bob,Ive received your letter, and Im glad to hear that you are very interested in our traditions, such as the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival is one of the most important traditional festivals in China. Both adults and ch

5、ildren look forward to this great day, just like Christmas Day in the West. Several days before it, people are busy shopping and cleaning. The night before, the whole family usually gets together to have dumplings, set off fire-works, and watch TV. On New Years Day, people always get up early and pu

6、t on new clothes. Everyone looks happy and says Happy new year to each other. I like the Spring Festival because I can get lucky money from my elders. Walking down the street, you will see many beautiful decorations. Many homes are decorated with red lanterns and other things. Isnt the Spring Festiv

7、al interesting? Im sure that you will love it. I hope you can join us during a Spring Festival. Best wishes. Yours, Li Ming实例指导2美国的节日习俗及文化写作任务:假设你是学校英语爱好者俱乐部的会员,近期此俱乐部即将筹备一场会员聚会,主题是了解美国的节日习俗及文化。你想让会员们了解一下即将到来的美国传统节日土拨鼠节。下面是你在网上查阅到的相关信息:DateFebruary 2ndPlaceCelebrated in America and CanadaOriginBegan

8、 in Germany in the 6th century; a traditional Christian festivalMeaningIf the groundhog comes out of its hole and sees its shadow, there will be 6 more weeks of winter; if it doesnt see its shadow, spring wont be far away.EventsA yearly festival is organized in Punxsutawney, Pennsylvania in the US.

9、The State was populated mainly by German settlers.5. 本文是供英语爱好者传阅,虽然是说明文,但是带有一定的宣传性质,因此语言力求简洁、明了、活泼,以吸引读者的注意力,让读者能够通过简短的内容获取最多的信息。Ground hog DayGround hog Day is celebrated on February 2nd. It is celebrated in America and Canada. It began in the 6th century in Germany and is an old festival with long

10、 history.What does Groundhog Day mean? People say that if the groundhog comes out of its hole and sees its shadow, there will be 6 more weeks of winter. If it doesnt see its shadow, spring wont be far away. I think its a very interesting festival.There are a lot of events held on this day and every

11、year a festival is organized in Punxsutawney, Pennsylvania in the US, a state that was mainly populated by German settlers. 教师点评:本习作内容没有偏离中心,表格中的内容都转化到了习作中,写作过程中也作了适当发挥。但是本文有一个表格写作类作文的通病:没有仔细分析表格,没有更好地组织文章内容,只是将表格内容照搬照抄到文中。另外,初稿的句子衔接不够流畅,句型使用单一。成稿将重点对这两个问题进行修改和完善。成稿:Happy Ground hog DayGroundhog Day

12、 is a traditional Christian festival which originated in Germany in the 6th century. Today it is celebrated in America and Canada on February 2nd. How does this festival relate to the groundhog? Here is the story. On this day, it is said if the groundhog comes out of its hole, sees its shadow, and r

13、eturns to its hole, it means there will be 6 more weeks of winter. But if it doesnt see its shadow and starts the life on the ground, it means spring wont be far away. The groundhog is like a weather forecaster and Groundhog Day is a day to forecast the weather, which shows that the people are eager

14、 for spring. A festival is organized in Punxsutawney, Pennsylvania in the US every year. The State was populated mainly by German settlers, which explains how the festival came to America.亮点提示:1. 第一段将表格中的日期,地点,来源三组信息用复合句流畅地整合到一起。2.How does this festival relate to the groundhog?承上启下,衔接两个自然段,使过渡自然流畅。3

15、. 文章最后一段用一个定语从句将节日活动的举办地同节日的来源衔接起来,前后呼应,表明作者深入地理解了该英文背景信息。 实例指导3介绍中国的传统文化 上面这篇书面表达可以说是考查了两个方面的内容。一是如何给笔友写信，另一个是考查如何介绍中国的传统文化元宵节。因此根据它的特点，我们写作时要注意以下几点： 1书信是人们在日常生活和工作中进行交际的工具，也是高考书面表达中常见的考试文体。由于民族语言和习惯上的差异，英语信件在书写格式及表达方式上与汉语不大一样，有些地方迥然不同。但是近几年我们主要是考查信的正文，因此只要掌握几点就可以了：1）称呼语称呼指的是信文开头的那种称呼，如Dear , Mr, U

16、ncle，各种称呼因人而异。在称呼后面一般是用逗号，但也有用冒号的。本文用Dear 就比较合适，注意要顶格写。 In the daytime, there are performance such as a dragonlantern dance, a landboat dance , walking on stilts and so on. At night , besides magnificent lanterns , fireworks form a beautiful scene.If you have any question about this, please write to

17、 me soon . Yours faithfullyLihua 实例指导4My FavouriteFestval【写作任务】我国有很多传统节日。请你以“My FavouriteFestval”为题目，写一篇120词左右的作文。内容包括： 1你最喜欢的节日； 2喜欢的原因。【写作指导】 本文是一篇陈述原因的亨理说明文。通过介绍事物，指出原由，解释事理，使人们对抽象事理了然于胸，并领会其精神实质。 内容指导要写好此类文章应该注意以下几点： 事理说明文的写作，首先要有明确的目的性，抓住事物的本质特征；还要使用准确、简明、生动的语言，对事物做客观、科学的介绍和缘由解释。总体结构一般采用三段论：引言段

18、、主体段、结论段。 a引言段：运用所提供的相关提示或背景知识对某一现象加以描述，引入讨论的话题，并缩小讨论范围，提出主题。引言要简练、自然、流畅。 b. 主体段：主体段要围绕主题，从不同的角度出发，通过巧妙运用举例法、对比分析、类比法等说明方法来支持自己的观点，阐明原因时要合理使用关联词，注意句子间的自然衔接。 c结论段：说明文的结论往往是对主题或中心思想进行重申，总结全文，提出某一问题的解决方柔，或得到的启发等。 相关表违SprmgFestival春节id-autumn Festival 中秋节Qingming Festival 清明节delicious food 美味食品set off f

19、ireworks 放烟火get together 聚会visit relatives and friends 走亲访友pocket money 零用钱look on . as . 把看作There are several masons why 有种种理由What is more important is that 更为重要的是 实例指导5Foreign Festivals VS Traditional Festivals写作任务:随着社会的发展,世界各国之间的联系日益增多,文化之间的传播也越来越多。受此影响,国内一些年轻人非常热衷过圣诞节、情人节等外国节日,而对一些传统节日则嗤之以鼻。你校的英

20、语校报开设的Opinions栏目本期就在讨论对这一现象的看法。请你写一篇130词左右的文章,向校报投稿。文章主要内容包括以下几个方面:1. 为什么很多中国人喜欢过外国节日；2. 你对传统节日的看法和观点；3. 你的做法。参考词汇:文化遗产cultural heritage分析:As society develops, many people celebrate foreign festivals in China. They believe its cool. At the same time, they dont think our traditional festivals are a b

21、ig deal. However, I disagree. I think we should pay more attention to our own festivals because our traditional festivals are a very important part of our cultural heritage. And our traditional festivals are just as interesting as many foreign festivals. As our country becomes stronger, the world wi

22、ll learn more about our culture and festivals. Maybe one day people in other countries will celebrate our Spring Festival as well. So, we should try our best to protect our own festivals and protect our cultural heritage as well.教师点评:1. 初稿基本完成了写作任务的要求,文章包含了提纲中给出的要点信息,从结构上看还是比较完整的。2. 存在的问题:1) 第二段中的第一

23、个理由我们的传统节日是文化遗产的一部分只用一句话带过,读起来很单薄,缺少说服力。2) 陈述的几条理由之间衔接不够紧密,条理不是很清楚。3) 结尾部分没有实质性的建议和内容。另外,在做总结时,用so是比较口语化的用法,在这里使用in conclusion或者all in all等短语会更好。成稿:As society develops, many people in China, especially young people, celebrate more and more foreign festivals instead of our traditional festivals. They

24、 believe it is cool or fashionable. At the same time, they consider celebrating Chinas festivals as out-dated. I dont think this is good for younger generations or for our country. Firstly, traditional festivals are an important part of Chinas cultural heritage. They are unique and are precious trea

25、sures from our ancestors. If we dont keep them, we will lose our own cultural characteristics. Secondly, our traditional festivals are, in fact, just as cool as a lot of foreign festivals. As our country becomes stronger, the world will learn much more about our culture and our festivals, just like

26、our language becomes more and more popular in other countries. In conclusion, I think its all right to receive some foreign cultures, but we should not ignore our own traditional festivals. We should learn more about them. As the Beijing Olympics approaches, we can introduce our festivals to our for

27、eign friends!Powerful sentences:1. While learning advanced techniques and gaining experience from foreign countries, we should also protect our own cultural heritage.2. If we lose our own culture, we no longer have anything unique.3. Only through protecting our own cultural heritage, will we be resp

28、ected by the world.Do we need to Fear the Popularity of Christmas?Nowadays Christmas Day is becoming more and more popular with Chinese youngsters. They celebrate and enjoy it in various ways. Meanwhile they dont know and dont care much about the traditional Chinese festivals. Some people are worryi

29、ng that the increasing popularity of Christmas might take peoples attention from traditional festivals in China.As far as Im concerned, there is no need to have fears over culture expansion. Youngsters are interested in new things, but it doesnt mean they are turning their backs on Chinese tradition

30、al culture.However, we should stay cool while celebrating western festivals. We should bear in mind the cultural valve of celebrating our own traditional festivals, for if we let our traditions disappear, there will be a cultural gap, which western values may fill.李明在给美国朋友Bob回信介绍了中国的春节后,又想了解西方除了圣诞节还

31、有什么节日备受欢迎,于是向Bob询问他最喜欢什么节日。假如你是Bob,请你给李明写一封120词左右的回信,向他介绍西方的万圣节(Halloween)。回信要包括以下要点:1. 万圣节的时间(10月31日)；2. 在南瓜上挖出脸形,里面放蜡烛,做成南瓜灯；穿戴稀奇古怪的面具和衣服；准备一个袋子。挑灯拿袋,挨家挨户讨要小奖赏,不然就会搞恶作剧。Bob请根据下表写一篇短文，向你的朋友Peter介绍中国公共假期的变化，并简述这样调整的原因。调整前 调整后 五一放假3天五一放假一天 清明节、端午节和中秋节不放假 清明节、端午节和中秋节各放假1天春节放假3天春节放假3天，但提前到除夕国庆节放假三天，元旦放

32、假一天国庆节放假三天，元旦放假一天注意：生词：清明节：Tomb-Sweeping Day； 端午节： Dragon-boat Festival ；中秋节：Mid Autumn Festival字数：120-150词开头已给出，不计入总词数。China makes 3 traditional festivals holidaysThe Chinese government on Sunday officially announced the scrapping of one of the countrys three golden week holidays and introduced thr

33、ee new one-day public holidays._A possible versionChina makes 3 traditional festivals holidaysThe Chinese government on Sunday officially announced the scrapping of one of the countrys three golden week holidays and introduced three new one-day public holidays.The new national public holiday plan ad

34、ds three traditional festivals - Tomb-Sweeping Day, Dragon-boat Festival and Mid Autumn Festival - to the list of public holidays.The plan, which comes into effect on Jan. 1, also increases the total number of national holidays from 10 to 11 days.Each of the three traditional festivals will be a one

35、-day holiday, The Spring Festival remains a three-day public holiday, but it will start one day earlier from the eve of the Lunar New Year, Chinas most important traditional festival.The May Day holiday is shortened from three days to one day, while the three-day National Day holiday and one-day New

36、 Year holiday remain unchanged.Recently, millions of Chinese traveling at the same time makes transport and tourist destinations very crowded. The new plan would uphold Chinese traditions, make public holidays better distributed and, with more people traveling on new public and paid holidays, ease o

37、vercrowding on the golden weeks.感恩节前夕,你用英语写了一篇题目为Live with Thankfulness的文章,向你校的校报英文随笔专栏投稿,号召大家学会感恩生活。(词数:120左右)1. 感谢大自然给你提供了生存环境。2. 感谢父母给了你生命,培育了你。3. 感谢老师教育你成才。4. 感谢朋友给你提供帮助。词数:120左右。Despite its name, Boxing Day has nothing to do with a boxing competition. Its a traditional British festival, which w

38、as first celebrated in England during the Middle Ages. It is celebrated on December 26, the day after Christmas, in Great Britain, and in other English-speaking countries including Canada, Australia, and New Zealand. Where did Boxing Day first come from? It is said that servants were once required t

39、o work on Christmas Day, but they could visit their families the next day, so as servants prepared to leave, their employers would give them boxes containing food and fruit, clothing, or money. Today, Boxing Day is spent with family and friends with lots of food and the sharing of friendship and lov

40、e. Its also a day for shopping reduced price gifts, cards and decorations. (Linda)刚结交的英国网友Nelson一直很想了解中国的文化和习俗,你打算写一封信向他简要介绍一下中国的习俗,下面是你想要向Nelson介绍的内容:1. greetings2. gift giving3. ways of talking请根据该提纲给Nelson回信,词数不少于130。Dear Nelson,Im happy to hear that you are interested in Chinese culture and cust

41、oms. There are many habits and customs that are particular to China and the Chinese people. Unlike Westerners, Chinese people do not usually greet people who they have not been introduced to or are not familiar with. It would seem odd if a person would offer a Hi or Hello when passing on the street.

42、 When we are invited to someones house for dinner, it is polite to bring a present some toys for the children, or flowers, wine or tea for the host or hostess. However, we dont usually give presents at the door and the host usually doesnt open the gift until the guest leaves. Conversation topics for

43、 people also differ from those of English speakers. In China it is not impolite to ask about a persons job, annual salary, dating status, or age. In fact, these issues which Westerners may find uncomfortable are quite common. Ill tell you more about them when I get the chance next time. Yours,Linda1997年12月3日,联合国教科文组织(UNESCO) 世界遗产委员会一致通过,将丽江古城列入世界遗产名录。请你根据下表内容,向要去丽江旅游的美国友人介绍丽江古城,词数不超过150。位置云南省丽江纳西族自治县的中心城市，海拔约2400米；历史始建于宋末元初，800多年历史；建筑依山傍水而建，为研究古代建筑提供了珍贵的范例；风俗传统民族文化和习俗、美丽的自然风景吸引着无数游客。专心-专注-专业