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1、读后续写读后续写一、评分原则（一）续写要求 读后续写包括阅读和写作两个阶段。阅读部分提供一篇 350词以内的语言材料，要求学生依据该材料内容、所给段落开 头语进行续写，将其发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文（150词左右）。（二）考查范围 读后续写要求将所给短文发展成一篇与所给材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文，语言运用要准确、丰富。做到行文流畅，可通过照应、替代、关联词、词汇复现等方法实现形式上的衔接和连贯，而隐形的意义上的连贯则通过对主题的把握来实现，围绕所给短文确定的主题展开续写，才能保证续写部分与所给短文意义上的连贯和完整。（三）评阅内容 1. 与所给短文及段落开头

2、语的衔接程度； 2. 创造了丰富合理的内容，富于逻辑性，续写完整，表达流畅，与原文情境融合度高； 3. 词汇与语法的多样性，恰当的词汇和语法结构，逻辑性强，语法错误很少，完全不影响理解； 4. 自然有效地使用了段落间、语句间的衔接词，全文结构清晰，前后呼应 全文连贯。（四）注意事项1. 词数少于120的，酌情扣分；2. 书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分；3. 单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 That night, I

3、 quarreled with my mother, then stormed out That night, I quarreled with my mother, then stormed out of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not of the house. While on the road, I remembered that I did not have any money in my pocket, I did not even take my cell have any money in my

4、 pocket, I did not even take my cell phone with me to make a call home. At the same time, I went phone with me to make a call home. At the same time, I went through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I through a noodle shop, and I suddenly felt very hungry. I wished for a bowl of noodle

5、s, but I had no money! The seller wished for a bowl of noodles, but I had no money! The seller saw me standing before the counter and asked, Hey little girl, saw me standing before the counter and asked, Hey little girl, you want to eat a bowl?” But but I do not carry money I you want to eat a bowl?

6、” But but I do not carry money I shyly replied. Okay, Ill treat you. the seller said, come in, I shyly replied. Okay, Ill treat you. the seller said, come in, I will cook you a bowl. ”A few minutes later the owner brought will cook you a bowl. ”A few minutes later the owner brought me a steaming bow

7、l of noodles. After eating some pieces, I me a steaming bowl of noodles. After eating some pieces, I cried.cried. What is it? He asked. Nothing. I am just touched by What is it? He asked. Nothing. I am just touched by your kindness! I said as I wiped my tears. Even a stranger on your kindness! I sai

8、d as I wiped my tears. Even a stranger on the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a the street gives me a bowl of noodles, and my mother, after a quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel!The seller quarrel, chased me out of the house. She is cruel!The seller sighed, Girl

9、, why did you think so? Think again. I only gave sighed, Girl, why did you think so? Think again. I only gave you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has you a bowl of noodles and you felt that way. Your mother has been taking care of you since you were little, why were you been tak

10、ing care of you since you were little, why were you not grateful and why did you hurt your mom?I was really not grateful and why did you hurt your mom?I was really surprised after hearing that. Why did I not think of that?A surprised after hearing that. Why did I not think of that?A bowl of noodles

11、from a stranger made me feel grateful, and bowl of noodles from a stranger made me feel grateful, and my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt my mother has raised me since I was little and I have never felt so, not even a little.so, not even a little.Paragraph 1:Paragraph 1:

12、 Just at that moment, many memories came back into Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind.my mind. Paragraph2: Paragraph2: When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired.dinner table, worried an

13、d tired.Paragraph 1: Just at that moment, many memories came back into my mind. When I was ill, she was always the one taking care of me. When I had trouble with my study, she never lost faith in me and encouraged me to keep going. When I arrived home during the weekend, she always prepared my favor

14、ite food. All her kindness came back to me. I should be grateful for all she had done for me. I realized I should go back home immediately and say sorry to my mother.Paragraph 2: When arriving home, I saw my mother sitting at the dinner table, worried and tired. She must have been looking for me eve

15、rywhere. I was ready for her anger and shouts. However, before I could apologize, my mother saw me and gently said, “Oh honey, thank God youre back！Come inside. You are probably very hungry. I cooked your favorite noodles, come and eat while they are still hot.” No longer able to control myself, I c

16、ried in her arms. “Im sorry, mom. Please forgive me.” I whispered to her through tears, extremely ashamed of myself. National FitnessAsasayinggoes,Sonationalfitnesshas.Onlywhenwehaveastrongbodycanweandservethesociety.Itpaystotakeimmediateaction.First of all,wecantoexerciseregularly.Next,wecanjogging

17、andhiking,which,ofcourse,benefitourhealthalot.Last but not least,morephysicalactivitiesaroundus.Remember,whatwedorightnowwillinthefuture.Letsworkouttogether!谚语谚语倒装倒装主语从句主语从句定语从句定语从句 David stood in front of the door and opened it hurriedly. He turned on without hesitation. was in order. was clean. wa

18、s neat. It seemed nothing special. David pushed and was eager to look for his mother. Still, he couldnt find her anywhere. There was no doubt that his mother was not at home right now. It was hard for him to control his nervous emotion. He ran to and began to make a phone call to his mother.Suddenly

19、, there was a knock on the door and came a familiar voice. It was his mother. He hurried to the door and opened it excitedly with a tremendous sense of relief. His mother , saying, I just want you to be independent. And I followed you along the way. You made it. I am proud of you. David hugged his mother tightly, that he would never worry her and he would become brave and spare no effort to maintain independence.THANKS