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1、读 后 续 写 技 能 -动 作 的 细 节 描 写1. 1. 我想到一个主意。我想到一个主意。2. 2. 我永远也不会忘记这次经历。我永远也不会忘记这次经历。3. 3. 夜幕降临，森林一片漆黑寂静。夜幕降临，森林一片漆黑寂静。Vivid 生动的生动的, create a clear pictureAn idea flashed through my mind. The experience will be carved in our mind forever.Night approaching, darkness ruled the forest and a great silence su

2、rrounded it. 动词是句子的灵魂！ 我们在写作时，应当精准地、贴切地运用动词进行动作等的描述，这样可以使不在场的读者时有强烈的画面感，如同身临其境一般。 要增添读后续写的表达效果，写出内容具体的续写，特别要注意避免使用泛泛而谈的抽象词，应该多使用具体词, 丰富、形象，使表达更加准确到位。动词的选择、动作描写是其中很重要的一项。描写与arm（手臂）有关的动作核心积累wave ones arms 挥动某人的双臂， fold ones arms 某人双臂交叉， take ones arm 挽住某人的胳膊， catch/grab ones arm 抓住某人的胳膊， pull sb. into

3、 ones arms 拉某人进怀， hold out/open ones arms 某人伸出/张开双臂， put/throw ones arms around sb. 搂住某人， keep sb. at arms length 同某人保持一定距离， with crossed arms 双臂交叉， with open arms 双臂张开(欢迎), arm in arm 手挽手描写与finger（手指）有关的动作 We were talking loudly when the teacher came in. He raised a warning finger, and we stopped t

4、alking. However, after a while, some students couldnt help talking in a whisper with fingers covering the mouth. Again, the teacher raised/held up a finger to his lips to ask for silence. Only after a few seconds, some began to talk again. Impatiently, he drummed his fingers on the blackboard. Point

5、ing an accusing finger at the students（who are） talking, he demanded of them to go outside the classroom. “How naughty you are！” cried the teacher, waving his finger. 描写与hand（手）有关的动作我想都没想就下了车，举起手不让卡车司机往前走，然后弯下腰去看那只蝴蝶。Without thinking I got out of my car, held my hand up so the truck driver wouldnt m

6、ove forward, and bent down to look at the butterfly. (动作描写)我俯下身，尽可能轻柔地将蝴蝶捧在手心。I reached down and cupped the butterfly in my hands as gently as I could. (动作描写)我托起它的腿。忽然间，它自由了。我张开双手，它朝明亮的太阳飞去。I lifted its leg up and suddenly it was free. I opened my hands and up it flew towards the shining sun. (动作描写)

7、 He was a man of medium height, with broad shoulders. One day, he was wandering aimlessly when he sensed something strange.He looked over his shoulder, only to find a young man following him closely. When he asked him why he did it, the young man just shrugged his shoulders and said nothing. So, he

8、tapped the young man on the shoulder, warning him not to follow him any longer. The young mans shoulders shook with a laugh, “Your wallet is lost.”描写与shoulder（肩膀）有关的动作 He struggled to run towards the finishing line, with his mouth dry and his legs trembling. All of a sudden, he fell over, flat on hi

9、s back with his legs wide. He rose to his feet on shaky legs. He crossed the finishing line on tired legs. With a sinking heart, he dragged his heavy legs back home, tired out. He returned home, crossed his legs and rested his chin on one fist, lost in deep thought.描写与leg有关的动作描写与描写与foot（脚）有关的动作（脚）有关

10、的动作核心积累put ones feet up 翘起脚休息jump/rise to ones feet 跳起来/站起来get/leap to ones feet 直起身来/跳起来 plant ones feet to the ground站着不动tap/stamp ones feet 跺脚，with ones feet kicking 脚乱踢drag ones feet 拖着脚步（磨蹭或不情愿） in bare foot 光着脚 barefoot adj.&adv. 赤脚的(地)walk他开始皱着眉头在房间里走来走去。He started walking up and down the roo

11、m with a frown on his face.走路walk的动作可以做到非常具体的表达 2. pace pesvi. 踱步，走来走去(由于焦虑或不耐烦而) 在踱步-If you pace a small area, you keep walking up and down it, because you are anxious or impatient. As they waited, Tom paced the room nervously.他们等的时候，Tom在屋里不安地踱来踱去。 3. wandervi. 游荡，漫游-to walk slowly around or to a p

12、lace, often without any particular sense of purpose or direction Henry wandered aimlessly around the streets.-百万英镑Henry在大街上漫无目的地到处游荡。 4. tiptoe tptvi. 踮着脚走；蹑手蹑脚地走 on tiptoe/tiptoes 踮着脚；蹑手蹑脚地 -to walk using tiptoes only, so that other people cannot hear you She slipped out of bed and tiptoed to the w

13、indow.她溜下床，蹑手蹑脚地走到窗户旁边。 5. sneak sni:k/slip vi 潜行;偷偷溜走;-to go somewhere secretly, trying to avoid being seen Sometimes he would sneak out of his house late at night to be with me.有时候，他会在深夜里偷偷溜出家与我相会。 6. slip slp 悄悄疾行；溜=slide-to go somewhere quickly and quietly, especially without being noticedShe sl

14、ipped out of the house before the others were awake.她趁别人还没醒，溜出了房子。 7. stagger stg vi. 蹒跚；摇摇晃晃地走-to walk with weak unsteady steps, as if you are about to fallhobble hbl 蹒跚;跛行;艰难地走-to walk with difficulty, especially because your feet or legs hurt He watched the old woman stagger out with a big bag an

15、d disappear. 他目送老妇人扛着一大包蹒跚而去。head to move in a particular directon (朝某个方向前行)With a pair of shoes in her hands,the little girl headed for the lonely island eagerly. rush r vi. 猛冲;赶紧离开If people rush to do something, they do it as soon as they can, because they are very eager to do it. I woke up early

16、and rushed out of the door in my eagerness to get to know my new school.我很早就醒了然后迫不及待的冲出门去看看我的新学校。The injured man was rushed/ raced to the hospital.The man dashed/rushed for the exit, and escaped with great panic. 男人向出口冲去，惊恐地逃走了。 flee r vi. 逃走(尤指害怕有危险而）逃避，逃跑escape because you are afraid of possible d

17、anger The elderly man fled away with great panic. 老人害怕地逃跑了。“看”的表达1. look ,look at2. see v. catch sight of. ; at the sight of. ; . within ones sight3.watch , look at sb/sth for a time, paying attention to what hapeens4. observe, to see or to notice, to watch carefully to learn more about them The pat

18、ients were observed over a period of several months.5. notice, to see or hear sb/ sth, to become aware of .6.spot, to see or notice sb /sth especially suddenly or when it is not easy7. recognize, to know sb/sth because you have seen or heard them before , similar to pick out1. stare at, to look at s

19、b /sth for a long time (stare into ones eyes)2. gaze at, to look steadily at sb/sth for a long time, because you are interested or surprised or you are thinking of sth else.3. glare at, look at sb/sth in an angry way4. glance/ glimpse at sb/ sth cast a glance/ glimpse at sb/ sth . look quickly at sb

20、/sth catch a glance/ glimpse of sb/sth5. eyes fall on. eyes widen”看“ 一动作的表达 1.Seeing no other people notice us，I placed the Christmas present down and pounded his door.2.I watched helplessly，as the woman felt more and more frustrated and hopeless.3.When he finished he raised/lifted his eyes and look

21、ed out of the window.4.She had spotted a man pacing up and down in the hall.5.The woman was staring eagerly at the girl，trying to make a conversation.6.We all gather in front of the television，praying to catch a glance/glimpse of his face.7.Her eyes fell on the photos of her and me at my fourth birt

22、hday party.8.Singing happily，she gazed at her surroundings with large innocent eyes.9.When the students stepped off the bus，Jamess eyes widened in surprise.10.We recognized/ picked out the famous comedian on his arrival.11.Swallowing hard，I stared into Meghans eyes for a long moment，wondering how I

23、could cope with it. (改编自改编自Unit Two Module Three: Healthy Eating) He smiled as he welcomed some customers warmly at the door but the smile left his face when he saw Yong Hui walking in. She did not look happy and glared at him. “ May I ask what you were doing in my restaurant the other day? I though

24、t you were a new customer and now I know that you only came to spy on me and my menu!” she said. “Please excuse me,” he calmly said, “I wanted to know where all my customers had gone last week. I followed one of them and found them in your restaurant. I don t want to upset you, but I found your menu

25、 was limited. Why dont you sit down and try a meal?” Yong Hui agreed to stay and soon they were both enjoying dumplings and breast of chicken cooked with garlic. When they were served the ice cream, Yong Hui began to look ill. “The food is too fat and heavy,” she said, “I miss my vegetables and frui

26、t.” Wang Peng was enjoying a second plate of dumplings so he sighed. “Yes,” he said, “ and I would miss my dumplings and fatty pork when I was in your restaurant. Dont you get tired quickly?” “Well, I do have to rest a lot,” said Yong Hui. “But dont you think it would be better if you were a bit thi

27、nner? Im sure you d feel much healthier.” shouted explained commented added admitted shout explain comment add admit说， 温和地说，补充道， 接着说，坚持说，抽泣着说，低声说，耳边轻声说，结结巴巴地说；saysay in a gentle wayaddcontinueinsistcry / say in tearswhisper whisper to ones earstammer参考答案：1.whisered to Mikes ear2.“You dont have to ru

28、sh. Just take your time.” I said in a gentle way.3.He continued,4. “No.” I sobbed. My vision was blurred by tears. “Its fine, really.” I cried, “ Take it.” 1. The house got really noisy at that time, with everybody hollering and shouting at the top of his voice. 2. “Here, Mum! Here!” Tom yelled out

29、as he ran to her side.3. My teammates were all screaming as I dashed toward the finish line. 4.“Its not fair!” exclaimed Sheldon. He felt so angry that he stormed out of the room, slamming the door furiously behind him.to shout louder 呼喊，大叫to shout loudly because you are frightened ,angry, or excite

30、d make a loud high noise with your voice 尖声大叫 to say sth suddenly and loudly because you are angry, or surprised 呼喊，惊叫1. It seemed as if Mary would be drowned(溺死溺死). At the moment, Henry happened to be passing by. Hearing the screams, _ _.Henry rushed to the riverside, threw off his coat and jumped

31、into water without thinking. quick action（听到尖叫声，亨利冲到河边冲到河边，扔掉外套扔掉外套， 立刻跳进水里。跳进水里。）2. Never had my mother received such a gift. _（她紧紧地紧紧地把我抱抱在怀里，眼泪涌了出来眼泪涌了出来。）She put her arms around me tightly, with tears welling up in her eyes.moved3. I walked slowly to the bridge, _Sensing my fear, my daughter _ a

32、nd my husband_ to give me encouragement.（我慢慢走向桥，腿发抖腿发抖，心都快跳出来心都快跳出来了。我女儿紧紧紧紧地握着地握着我的手手，我的丈夫轻轻地拍拍我的肩膀轻轻地拍拍我的肩膀给我鼓励。） with my legs trembling and my heart bumping nearly out of my chest. held my hand tightly patted on my shoulder gentlynervous encouragement4. I glanced through the audience off the stag

33、e, _ to calm down and began my speech. The moment I finished the speech, all my classmates _ The teacher_ . (我扫了一眼台下的观众，我扫了一眼台下的观众，深呼吸深呼吸，镇定下来，然后开始，镇定下来，然后开始我的演讲。完成演讲的那一瞬间，我所有的同学都我的演讲。完成演讲的那一瞬间，我所有的同学都为我欢为我欢呼呼，为我鼓掌为我鼓掌。老师。老师满意地点头满意地点头，对我，对我竖起大拇指竖起大拇指。) cheered up with wide eyes and burst into thunderous applause. nodded with satisfaction and thumbed up at mecalm downadmiration/satisfied took a deep breath Writing a story is like shooting a movie and lets try to show every scene like pictures. 写记叙文就像是拍电影， 所有场景都像画面一 样，一帧一帧地 呈现出来。