高考英语写作复习：应用文：北京变化课件.pptx

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1、高考应用文复习-变化和感受 假设你是红星中学学生李华。你的英国笔友Jim在你的邮件中提到他想了解北京近几年发生了怎样的变化。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括： 1.变化 2.原因 3.感受 注意：1. 词数不少于50， 2. 开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。出现问题 原因和变化混到一块说，导致毫无逻辑 变化写了太多 过多注重今夕对比，大篇幅描述过去的不好 近几年的变化，鸟巢有点太老了 建议一个变化，三个原因 变化和原因要有思维高度（人口多了，因为进城打工的多了；空气好了，因为人少了） Change：sky becomes clearer Reason： environment awareness

2、of the citizens public transportation(sharing bikes) factories moved out of the urban areas变化 As for the changes, peoples awareness of environmental protection is an essential one. The greatest change is that we have entered a new era of online payment. Being able to bid farewell to the haze is one

3、of the most delightful changes.原因 Thanks to the boom of science and technology, we are able to shop without taking the wallet. I owe the crystal clear sky to the effort of the government, which put forward the policy of sustainable development. be credited to sb/sth The fresh air can be credited to

4、peoples growing awareness of environment production. due to. 感受 While enjoying the convenience the great changes in technology brings to us, I also felt a sense of pride surging all the way to my heart. I firmly believe more and more changes will take place in the near future, which will make the ci

5、ty modern and livable.Words & Sentences to use词汇 owing to Owing to the rain, the match was cancelled. owe sth to sb/sth 将某事物归因于某人物 He owes his success more to luck than to ability. 1. 知道你渴望了解北京近几年的变化，我现在写信告诉你。 Learning your eagerness to know about the changes of Beijing in recent years, I am droppin

6、g a few lines to introduce them to you. 2. 主要是由于政府的巨大努力。包括制定温室气体排放的严格规章，把重污染企业搬到郊区，在环保方面投更多钱。 It is mostly due to the great effort of the government, including laying down strict rules of the green gas emission, moving enterprises with heavy pollution to suburban areas, and spending more money in en

7、vironmental protection. 3. 另外，变化同样归功于市民日益增长的环境意识，他们的出行方式从用私家车辆转移到了公共交通。 Moreover, the change should also be credited to the citizens increasing environmental awareness, whose way of transportation shifted from private vehicles to public ones. 4. 由于社会各界的努力，我们能够见证北京的巨大变化。我坚信不就得将来会发生越来越多的变化，这将使城市更加现代化，

8、更宜居。 Thanks to all the efforts made by different parts of society, we are able to witness the great change in Beijing. I firmly believe more and more changes will take place in the near future, which will make the city modern and livable.范文赏析 Im very glad to know that you are interested in the chang

9、es in Beijing. Let me tell you some of the developments during the past few years. I have witnessed many great changes in my city. The most impressive one is the rapid development of transportation. In the past, people travelled mainly by bus. Nowadays, with more and more subway lines built, it is m

10、uch faster and more convenient for people to go almost everywhere. Additionally, the spread of public bikes helps people travel any distance more easily. All these couldnt have happened without the measures taken by the government and applications of new technology. I enjoy these conveniences every

11、day and feel proud of my city. I am confident that Beijing will become more liveable in the future. Just come and have a look yourself. Hows it going? Learning your eagerness to know about the changes of Beijing in recent years, I am dropping a few lines to introduce them to you. Among plenty of cha

12、nges, the most delightful one in Beijing is an increase in the number of “blue sky” days. It is mostly due to the great effort of the government, including laying down strict regulations/rules of the green gas emission, moving enterprieses/factories with heavy pollution to suburban areas, and spendi

13、ng more money in environmental protection. Moreover, the change should also be credited to the citizens increasing environmental awareness, whose way of transportation shifted from private vehicles to public ones. Besides, a bigger supply of green products from companies plays a role in improving th

14、e air condition. Great difference can be made by collective power. Thanks to all the efforts made by different parts of society, we are able to witness the great change in Beijing. I firmly believe more and more changes will take place in the near future, which will make the city more modern and livable. If you have any questions, please feel free to ask me. What about the changes in your city? Looking forward to your reply.