过去分词在写作中的应用 共36张PPT.ppt

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1、213 王婉冰王婉冰The (受伤的受伤的) man was sent to the hospital.injuredWhat happened?Jasper was very (delight) to take part in the TV program.delightedHow did the boy look?The little boy is having his hair . cutWhat is the little boy doing?Sample 1: Chaozhou is located in the east of China. It covers an area of

2、 3,679 square kilometers and has a population of more than 2.7 million. It is considered as one of the most energetic cities in our country. Sample 2: Located in the east of China, Chaozhou covers an area of 3,679 square kilometers. Considered as one of the most energetic cities in our country, it h

3、as a population of more than 2.7million. Compare the two paragraphs Located ConsideredThe sentences are more concise(简明的简明的) and varied(多变的多变的). Using Past Participles in Writing过去分词在写作中的应用过去分词在写作中的应用How to write with past participles? 1. 过去分词作定语过去分词作定语The glass was broken. I was hurt by the (打碎打碎的玻

4、璃杯的玻璃杯). broken glass This Chaozhou opera was called The Butterfly Lovers. I love this Chaozhou opera (call)the Butterfly Lovers. The Butterfly Loverscalled2. 过去分词作表语过去分词作表语After running a marathon race, they all felt (exhaust). exhausted 3. 过去分词作宾语补足语过去分词作宾语补足语Do you think the workers can get the j

5、ob (finish) on time?finished The criminal was taken away with her hands (tie) behind.tied Practice Translate the sentences1. 由古代人民建造的广济楼由古代人民建造的广济楼(Guangji Building)被保被保护得很好护得很好(be well preserved)。(过去分词作后置定语过去分词作后置定语)The Guangji Building built by the ancient people is quite well preserved.2. 我被这部名叫梁

6、祝的潮剧我被这部名叫梁祝的潮剧感动到了感动到了(be moved)。 (过去分词作表语过去分词作表语) I was moved by this Chaozhou opera called Liangzhu.3. 随着表演随着表演(performances)完成，完成，演员演员(performers)都感到放松都感到放松。(with+宾语宾语+过去分词作宾补过去分词作宾补)With the performances finished, the performers felt relaxed. Topic: Chaozhou Branch Venue in the CCTV 2018 Spring

7、 Festival drama partyHow do we write it with past participles?Xiangzi BridgeThe Butterfly LoversStep 1: list out the main pointsQuestion 1: Where is Chaozhou?What happened? be located in;become the branch venue(分分会场会场)；the CCTV 2018 Spring drama partyQuestion 2: How about the performances? What did

8、the audience think of them? the seecially-designed platform;the audience, satisfied;performers, relaxedStep 2: write them out in simple sentencesPlay a game:make a choice12453610 points1. Chaozhou; be located in; Chaozhou is located in the east of Guangdong Province.15 points2. Chaozhou; become the

9、branch venue(分会分会场场)；the CCTV 2018 Spring drama partyChaozhou became the branch venue in the CCTV 2018 Spring drama party.5 points3. the platform; specially-designedThe platform was specially-designed.30 points4. performances; the platform; in front of Guangji BuildingThere were many great performan

10、ces on the paltform in front of Guangji Building.2 points5.the audience, satisfied;The audience was satisfied.2 points6. performers, relaxedThe performers were relaxed when finishing their performances.1. Chaozhou is located in the east of Guangdong Province. 2. Chaozhou became the branch venue in t

11、he CCTv 2018 Spring drama party. Located in the east of Guandong Province, Chaozhou became the branch venue in the CCTv 2018 Spring drama party.1+2: 用过去用过去分词作状语分词作状语Step 3: use past participles to rewrite the sentences3.The platform was specially-designed.4. There were many great performances on the

12、 paltform in front of Guangji Building .3+4: 用过去用过去分词作定语分词作定语 There were many great performances on the specially-designed platform.5. The audience was satisfied.6. The performers were relaxed when finishing their performances.How to polish them? 5.After (享受了这场享受了这场戏曲晚会戏曲晚会)，the audience felt satisf

13、ied. 6. (随着表随着表演完成演完成:with+宾语宾语+过去分词作宾补过去分词作宾补)，the performers were relaxed.enjoying the drama partyWith the performances finishedSample Located in the east of Guandong Province, Chaozhou became the branch venue in the CCTV 2018 Spring drama party. There were many great performances on the specially

14、-designed platform in front of Guangji Building.After enjoying the drama party, the audience felt satisfied. With the performances finished，the performers were relaxed.Its your turn Writing:你是李华，你的笔友Sam来信咨询2018央视戏曲晚会潮州分会场的情况，并打算暑假来潮州一游。请根据以下要点回信告知：1. 时间(2017年12月29日)和地点2.节目内容：潮剧(如梁祝)，舞龙等3.印象最深刻的一个节目4.邀请Sam游名胜古迹(eg. Xiangzi Bridge湘子桥,Guangji Building广济楼),品尝特色饮食(eg. Beef balls),体验中国茶道。Summary 过去分词在句中可充当：过去分词在句中可充当： 定语、表语、状语和宾语补足语定语、表语、状语和宾语补足语 用过去分词写作的三个步骤：用过去分词写作的三个步骤： 列出要点列出要点 写成简单句写成简单句 用过去分词合并简单句用过去分词合并简单句Homework Rewrite the short passage by yourselfThank you for your listening!