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1、托福写作范文为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，小编给大家整理一些托福写作范文附思路解析，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 托福写作范文附思路解析16. What s your opinion on a new restaurant built in your neighborhood?It has recently been announced that a new restaurant may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and det

2、ails to support your answer.分析社区内的餐馆越多，竞争就越激烈，那么价钱就会更公道;可能会出现卫生问题;也可能有客人酗酒闹事(excessive drinking; get drunk and create a disturbance; make trouble after getting drunk.)。参见：5。范文Until recently our neighborhood hasn t had any restaurants. We have a local food market and several small convenience stores,

3、 and even several street side food stands, but no real restaurants. I m personally in favor of opening a new restaurant in our neighborhood, and believe it will make people s lives more convenient, support the local economy, and create a healthier community spirit. Cooking at home every night is tim

4、e-consuming and tiring for local families. After a long day at work, local people have to spend at least one hour to shop for groceries, and even more for cooking dinner, and cleaning up after the meal. By the time all is finished, they almost have no time to enjoy the company of their families. Eat

5、ing out would save time if there were a restaurant nearby, but the closest restaurant is a 30-minute walk away. If a restaurant opened in our neighborhood it would allow local people to relax for a night or two every week and enjoy more time with their families.A new restaurant would also help the l

6、ocal economy. Building the restaurant would require the labor of local carpenters, plumbers, and electricians. The new restaurant would need to buy a great deal of food and produce from local markets and supplies like furniture, cooking utensils, and everyday items from local merchants. It would als

7、o create jobs for waiters, managers, and chefs. Perhaps most importantly, a new restaurant could also potentially attract business from the surrounding neighborhoods, bringing more investment into our community.Finally, a new restaurant would give local people a public space to gather and talk in. O

8、ur community has few suitable open spaces for people to meet and have conversations. The streets and markets are too noisy, and the shops have no place to sit down. People who were once strangers could meet in this restaurant and become better acquainted with one another; new friendships could be fo

9、rged while old friendships could be strengthened. The benefits of a restaurant to community life are harder to measure than are its economic benefits, but in my opinion are sorely needed in our community.17. Learn by yourself or with a teacher?Some people think that they can learn better by themselv

10、es than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.分析不要急于选择哪一个观点。因为两个观点都有些片面。有老师的好处：系统的指导;提供疑难解答;更快、更有效率自学的必要性：自学能力应该是追求知识的过程中最重要的能力之一。任何科目都应该指导和自学相结合。不同的科目、不同的阶段有不同的选择。范文Whether we need a teacher or not de

11、pends on circumstances. The relationship between a teacher and a new subject is somewhat similar to that between a tour guide and an unknown city. When we come to an unknown city for the first time, we definitely need a tour guide. We might have a detailed map, but it is unlikely functionalit isn t

12、surprised that we can hardly interpret those mysterious symbols. Likewise, when we are beginners, it is wise to learn with teachers. They can tell us where to begin with, what we should do, and which reference we should choose. When we confront difficulties, we can ask them for help, and their advic

13、es will always be tremendously helpful. With teachers assistance, we might learn easier, faster, and more interestingly.After a period of time, we have learned a lot. We now know the city pretty well, even though there are still many places we haven t been to. It doesn t matter. Now that we are able

14、 to recognize those mysterious symbols on the map, what we need perhaps is not a tour guide but a more detailed map.Similarly, we need richer references for learning. Yes, there are still many fields unexplored; they are, nevertheless, no longer puzzling. The task is simple: we will explore them one

15、 by one, little by little. If we are working on a certain skill, practice more; if we are preparing a test, practice more; whatever we are learning, what is always to bear in mind is that, like people always say, practice makes perfect.After another period of time, we might have become others tour g

16、uide, but we still want to make out more.We want to know which restaurant is the most decent, which bookstore is the most professional, which coffee shop is the most classical. Even the most comprehensive map doesn t have adequate information. We again need experts.In learning, it s much the same. W

17、e need experts to consult for specific problems.Furthermore, the most beneficial merit of consulting experts is that we can not merely refer to them but even discuss with them in depth. As is often the case, a solution for a complex matter is not waiting for us right there and then, sometimes it com

18、es out of inspirations of discussion.In short, having a good teacher is always better than having none, but the importance of a teacher varies from period to period, and more often than not depends on different stage in which we are learning.18. What makes a good boss? What are some important qualit

19、ies of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.参见：15范文A good boss is imperative to a successful workplace. The best bosses are serious, creative, and flexible. If a boss lacks any of these qualities, problems are certain to arise in th

20、e workplace.While humor and kindness are important characteristics for bosses to have, work is a serious business, and must be approached with a serious attitude. A boss must be able to keep his/her employees working hard and on schedule. He/She must set down rules, enforce them, and also personally

21、 adhere to them. If the boss comes in late to work, leaves early, or spends all day joking with the co-workers, then the employees will neither respect nor work hard for him/her. A boss must have a serious and professional attitude that sets an example for all of the employees in the workplace.To co

22、nfront the countless problems that arise every day in the workplace, a boss must be extremely creative. If a client needs the company to meet a deadline earlier than expected, a boss must find ways to motivate employees to work faster and harder. A boss who lacks creativity might force his/her emplo

23、yees to work overtime. In this case, the employees might be very tired and upset; they might work slower or produce lower quality work as a result. A creative boss might spend a small amount of money, and treat everyone to dinner at the office to encourage employees to stay late. In this way the com

24、pany might meet the deadline, preserve quality, and keep employee morale high.Finally, the most important quality that a good boss must possess is flexibility. While needing to set serious, strict rules, he/she must also recognize that at times the rules need to be bent or broken. For instance, a bo

25、ss should strictly enforce attendance policies in the workplace. But if an employee with an excellent attendance record needs to take a day off for personal reasons, the boss should let him/her do it. In this way employees loyalty to the company will be strengthened, and they will be more happy and

26、productive in the workplace.托福写作范文附思路解析19. Highways or public transportation, which should be given preferentialfinancing?Should governments spend more money on improving roads and highways, or should governments spend more money on improving public transportation (buses, trains, subways)? Why? Use

27、specific reasons and details to develop your essay.分析资金运用的基本原则a higher input-output ratio is desirable。参见：11分析。政府也需要盈利高速公路，是有盈利的。并且有利于促进经济繁荣，进一步增加税收。公共交通，是政府开销。但是市政府的职责。结合我国情况选择立场。比如：可以认为目前要大力发展高速公路，而其收入可以用来开发公共交通。范文As China continues along the road of economic development, new demands are being put

28、 on the transportation infrastructure of the country. This is particularly evident in the cities, where daily traffic jams are unavoidable facts of life. Faced with a mounting traffic crisis, I believe the government should focus on improving public transportation instead of improving roads and high

29、ways. Public transportation is cheaper, better for the environment, and a better long-term solution for meeting the transportation demands of the future. The traffic crisis in large cities is mainly due to the increase in the number of private cars on the road. If 30 people each drive their own priv

30、ate cars to work in the morning, polluting emissions from these 30 cars pollute the air. Having 30 extra cars on the road not only means more traffic, it also means that all cars on the road will run their engines longer to produce more pollution while they idle in traffic jams. On the contrary, if

31、those same 30 people take the bus to work, there would be less traffic, and even less pollution.More bus and subway lines would also save much space now wasted on parking lots, which makes sense from both environmental and city-planning perspectives. Investment in public transportation also makes se

32、nse for the customer. The most expensive public transportation in the city costs about 5 yuan. Two trips across the city every day for a whole year would still be less than a fifth of the cost of a new car, not to mention the inevitable expenditure of maintaining a good performance of the car. Takin

33、g into account the considerable upkeep expenses of a car, gas, insurance, and repairs, owning a car is much less economic and convenient than is taking the bus or the subway.While some people would argue that investing money on highways is imperative for holistic benefits of our country, I personall

34、y believe the need for solving current traffic disasters that are prevalent in most such major cities as Beijing, Shanghai, and Guangzhou is more urgent. The problem has already become the biggest headache of local governments and their residents, and would cost even more if not handled promptly.20.

35、 Big city or countryside, which is better for children to grow up in?It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a big city. Do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.分析Page 23 of 201TOEFL.iBT 高分作文完美重排版Edited by Lost Lawyer不要急于同意或者不同意这个观点。因

36、为哪个回答都有些片面。地点并不是影响孩子成长的唯一因素，也不是众多因素中最重要的因素。生活在城市的优缺点生活在乡村的优缺点也可以用一系列“不一定”的事实来反驳题目中观点，比如：在乡村长大的孩子不一定比在城市长大的孩子淳朴(honest; simple; simple sentiments);在乡村长大的孩子不一定比在城市长大的孩子健康(healthy);不同的阶段有不同的选择：学龄前儿童，小学生在哪里都无所谓初中、高中就可能在大城市更好一点范文Having grown up in the country myself, I can say without a doubt that I want

37、 my own children to grow up in the city. Life in the city is incomparably better for children than life in the country. The city has better schools, health care, jobs, and more exposure to the outside world. The two most important things in any child s life are health and education. In the country,

38、if children get sick, there are no good hospitals to take them to. Families are often so poor that they can t afford to send all of their children to school, and the schools are usually of low quality anyway. In the cities, on the other hand, health care facilities and schools are of excellent quali

39、ty.Children from cities also have a much higher chance of getting into excellent universities. City universities have large numbers of spaces reserved for local residents while they have relatively fewer spaces for students from the countryside. If I want my child to have a good chance of getting in

40、to a good university, I would raise them in a city.City salaries are significantly higher than salaries in the country. Jobs in the city are also much easier, on average, than jobs in the country. A worker in the country might spend 14 hours a day laboring outdoors in the fields and make much less m

41、oney per month than the city worker who typically works only eight hours a day. I want my child to grow up and get a good, high-paying job. A better place to find those jobs is in a city.Finally, I want my children to grow up into a world that is larger than just their immediate surroundings. In a c

42、ity they will have a chance to meet people from all over the country and all over the world. They will have chances to absorb history and culture from the cities parks, theatres, and museums. Only in the city will they have the chance to be truly global citizens.托福写作范文附思路解析21. The causes of people s

43、 longevity todayIn general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay.分析现象描述：20世纪初全球平均年龄(life expectancy)大约45岁。到20世纪末，这个数字已经增长到70岁左右。人们越来越长寿的原因：越来越好的饮食条件，饮食卫生，越来越科学的饮食模式越来越发达的医疗技术、越来越完善的医疗保健系统经济稳定、社会稳定。极端的例子：前苏联(the pr

44、evious Soviet Union)解体(disintegration/breakup)后，俄罗斯的平均年龄大幅度下降范文Among various factors that contribute to today s longevity of people are three most obvious ones: the improvement of food conditions, the development of modern medical technology, and finally current stability of economy in our country.F

45、ood conditions are better than before and are still being developed with a rapid pace. First of all, foods are more hygienic. People today drink untainted mineral water, sterilized skim milk, which are cheaply supplied in supermarkets. Furthermore, foods are more nutrient. Not to mention various car

46、efully designed nutrient products. People can just ignore the possibility of being dystrophic, since they can keep nutrient balance by simply taking a cheap pill of vitamin compound every day. Another essential improvement that contributes to people s longevity is swiftly developing medical technolo

47、gy. Development of modern medical technology has always been amazing. Certain diseases such as tuberculosis, pneumonia, and dysentery are now easy to remedy with low expenses, but in the past, they are all probably lethal ones. The dental technology seems developed little except its exorbitantly cha

48、rged bill, yet the simplest technology contributes to people s longevity most. It is not difficult to imagine that if an individual who lived in the past got a toothache, without certain dental care which is common today, he was certainly in an awful prospect: he might even die of a toothache!Current societal and economic stabilization is also a very indispensable factor. People have less pressure in a more stable society, the less pressure they suffer, the healthier they are. Today s ideal stabilization even provides people an opportunity to