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1、考研英语作文:疯狂背诵30篇(30)Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should1) describe the drawing,2) give possible reasons for the phenomenon, and3) suggest possible solutions for the problem.You should write 160200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.审题:该文提纲可分为三个部分:描述图画;给出图画所表现的现象的原因
2、;给出解决问题的办法。这是一种非常常见的文章模式。在提纲中直接给出主题的情况不多,如果没有给出,就应该在第一段或第二段开头明确地点出来。图画题一般有两种情况,一种是平铺直叙,直接写图画反映的问题或现象;一种是含义深刻,简洁的图画中蕴涵着深刻的道理。一般来说,后者的难度较高。这里属于前一种情况。Sample:In the picture, we can see clearly that two small children are showing off their father s business cards. One says proudly, “My father is the mana
3、ger of his department.” And the other immediately laughs at him and utters, “Oh, that s nothing. My father is the CEO of a multinational corporation.”The reasons why such a worrying phenomenon arises, in my belief, are as follows. First, in the social transformation period, some people pay more and
4、more attention to wealth and status, and link success to such superficial factors, thus making a destructive compact on children. Second, today s media, to some extent, have actually aggravated such an unfavorable situation. In films and TV series a happy and ideal life is often depicted as a luxuri
5、ous one, which will inevitably have an adverse effect on young people who are still not mature enough to distinguish between right and wrong. Third, teachers, on many occasions, have not done a satisfactory job. The present education system sometimes attaches too much attention to the scores and gra
6、des of students and overlooks their personality development.To change the present unfavorable situation all of us must make immediate and substantial efforts. The government should try it best to create a social atmosphere in which people cherish diligence, conscience and simplicity. Teachers and sc
7、hools should make every effort to teach the students to grow up into responsible and enterprising citizens who are determined to contribute to the development of the community, the nation and the whole world. Parents should let students get in touch with the society, helping them know that a meaning
8、ful life is one that brings significance to others. Only in this way can we hope to solve such a disturbing problem and ensure the brilliant future of our nation.点评:该文共分三段。第一段描述图画。一般说来,先描述图画,后点明主题的情形比较多 这样写重在归纳,比较重视逻辑和事物发展的内部联系。而本文首句即点明主题,即本文所述的现象 孩子吹嘘父亲职位、相互攀比的现象 这样写开门见山,非常有力度。第二段写了该现象产生的原因。第一句话是段落
9、的主题句,而后分社会、媒体和老师三个方面来说。第三段写解决问题的办法,第一句话是主题句,之后分别写政府、老师和家长正确的做法。这里没有使用象first,second,third这样的连接词,但由于采用了平行的主语,仍达到了结构清晰的效果。最后一句话是结论句,使用了强势的倒装句,句中使用了连词and,前面写“解决问题”,正好与提纲相扣,后面写“保证国家的美好明天”,是升华的部分,请大家用心体会末句的写法。心得:第二段与第三段均分三点来写,其中两点严格呼应,另一点并未严格呼应(家长)。这是平行之间见变化的高级写法,即两点是显性呼应,一点是隐性呼应.考研英一大作文经典真题 简单说下作文模板,大、小作文都需要背诵,小作文背几篇,有手感就可以了,大作文则需 考研英一历年大作文真题大全 大作文就比较难,也是容易拉分的一项。在写的过程中一定要牢记同一句型绝对不要使用第 考研小作文英语二真题 词汇是英语学习的门槛,发现身边很多同学之所以对英语不感兴趣或者说是惧怕,就是因为 考研英语二小作文历年真题 背作文,建议大小作文各选十篇,作文话题就那么几个,20个足以应付。作文想得高分,要第 5 页 共 5 页
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