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1、精品名师归纳总结2021 年高三一模作文汇编1. 黄浦区2021 年已接近尾声，仍记得年初你为自己定下的小目标吗？不知你是否实现了你的小目标？发一个微信伴侣圈来回忆一下吧（文中请不要显现真实的校名人名）。你的伴侣圈文字内容需包括：1. 你的 2021 年度小目标。2. 你为实现年度小目标所作的努力。3. 你实现（或没有实现）年度小目标的体会总结。范文：My new year s resolution for 2021 was that I should be able to communicate with foreign people in English.To achieve this g

2、oal, I had asked my English teacher for help. According to her suggestions, I made up a plan.Firstly, I started with simplyreading English articles and found many pronunciation errors in my reading after listening to the video tape of its recording. Then, I tried to learn phonetics and practice one

3、syllable after another again and again. I started with a single word, then a phrase, a sentence, a paragraph and finally the whole passage. After3-monthpractice, Iwas able toread an articlefluentlywithoutmakinganymistakes in pronunciation. I felt happy. Next, I practiced my listening. By listening t

4、o a passage four times, I required myselfto take it down without spelling errors or any informationblank. Last but not least, I installed an app calledShanbei Oral English on my phone to practice both my listening and speaking. It s like having conve a robot. I had to understand what it said to me a

5、nd answer its questions accordingly. After practicing for almost 8months, I had my first talking session with an American teacher in our school. I was proud of myself.What I have learntfrom this experience is something as a saying goes: no pain no gain. Though the process of learning could be dull a

6、nd tiring, it s worth all the efforts after I achieved my goal. Even if I didn valuable part of my life.阅卷作文8+8+4=20The wonderfulyear of 2021 is drawing to an end. I remember that I set an annual goal to keep fit at the beginning of 2021, since staying healthy is crucial to ensuring my study, thus b

7、etter prepare myself for Gaokao.To achieve my goal of keeping fit, here are som e efforts I ve taken throughout the year. On the very first dayof 2021, I downloaded a fitness app called Keep. Following the fitness instructions the app offered, I exercisedevery other night before I go to bed. Also,I

8、did some research into the daily nutritionI need in order to stay healthy both physically and mentally, after which I devised a moderate dieting plan. Apart from the above, Iinvitedfamilymembers and friends to joinme so that we can encourage each other and exchange fitness experience.So far, the rec

9、ord shown on my fitness app shows that I ve done well this year, reaching a record high o training times in total. Although at times I felt like giving up because of too much study pressure and limited time,I mglad I have stuck to my plan. It seems to me that anything is possible if I throw in all o

10、f my energy and passion, and most of all, perseverance. Some rules apply to study. So I hope I will keep such passion and strength to do my best in the coming 2021. （ 237 words）点评：1. 文本结构段落清晰，符合作文题目要求。1） 第一段明确告知自己的年度小目标是什么。2） 其次段有总起句，段落中有清晰的标记词 如 also, apart from告知读者自己所做的努力，且努力的行为都特殊具体。3） 第三段对体会的总结可

11、以再和其次段的三个努力匹配些，a. 借助科技的力气 app。 b. 借助科学的力气（ did research into the daily nutrition ）。 c. 组团抗击惰性。2. 在语言表达才能比较强的基础上，可以考虑文字的进一步精炼。是否有“废话”？字数建议不超过200（此同学语言才能强，中等同学160 左右即可）。精练而精确的表达也是思维和表达功力的表达。7+8+4=19Greeting from the end of 2021. It s now the time to conclude our yearly goals again. On the new year s e

12、ve, I set up two goals for the year: to getter better grades and to lose weight and I m proud to announce that I ve accomplished the first one.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结To realize the goals, much efforthas been put in throughout the year. First of all, I changed my attitudes towards various subjects.

13、I ve spent more time on them, as you might already know, and try to find my own strength and weaknesses and strived hard to overcome my weak points. In addition,I ve found my own pace of studying, which I regard as the most precious reward of this years effort. Secondly, I began to take a more activ

14、e part in sports this year. I took every opportunityI have to exercise, and take sports lessons at a gym near my apartment. Though I haven t lose much weight, I feel myself much healthier than ever before.To conclude how I ve made these progress, here comes my years motto: no pains, no gains. No mat

15、ter howhard it might be, stick to the goal and never quit, and never dream of shortcuts to success. So if you want to achieve something, just try hard, no matter what the result might be, youre surely going to benefit from the process. Good luck everyone, and I wish you a happy, successful new year

16、in 2021. 241 words点评：1， 有读者意识，明确知晓是在伴侣圈发的年度总结，所以开头结尾很应景。2， 段落结构总体比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。1） 第一段告知了自己的两个年度目标。2） 其次段中有总体句、标记词（如：first of all, in addition ），便利读者阅读。但总体表达都比较含糊，建议可以更加清晰化具体化（转变的行为不具体是由于目标不具体导致的）。特殊是其次点， 假犹如学把目标定位，今年我要参加多少节健身课，或者我要完成多少公里的跑步，那么行为可以更具体，对是否可以达到自己年度目标的检测也可以更明确。3） 第三段的体会总结与之前努力的匹配度不高。假如要

17、写no pains, no gains，那么其次段里应当有具体的自己在遭受瓶颈或者难以坚持的时候是如何咬牙坚持下来的。4） Good luck 建议可以另起一段。3， 文本字数偏长。7+6+3=16At the beginning of this year, I have made up my mind to achieve a goal. That was I hoped that I could losemy weight. With the passing by, I have achieved my goal. The followingare some of my conclusio

18、n of this objective.To reach my objective, I worked out a series of plans. To begin with, I designed a healthy diet menu, whichexcluded unhealthy foods that I was fond of before. Thats the basic of losing weight. Secondly, I went to park or sporting places regularly to do various sports. As we all k

19、now, the more exercise you do, the more heats you will consume. Last but not least, I took an active part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life.From this experience, I conclude that once you have a goal, you should stick to every hardship so

20、 that you may reach the mountain top. The process may be full of difficulties and you are likely want to give up. Go ahead, and then you will find there is nothing can hit down you. 191 words点评：1， 段落结构比较清晰，符合作文题目要求。2， 其次段中的标记词（ to begin with, secondly, last but not least）不恰当。第三个努力的行为（ I took an acti

21、ve part in every kinds of school activity which can not only help me lose weight but also enrich my life. ） 的内容不恰当，部分与主题无关（如： enrich my life ）。3， 第三段的总结too general，基本与其次段的努力行为没有关系。依据其次段的内容，体会应当是：管住嘴，迈开腿。4， 字数偏多，建议 160 左右。5+6+2=13At the end of 2021, I can t help thinking the aim what I have set about

22、 making a great profess in math before the 2021 come.Math is a terrible for me to study well. To study math well, as I firmly believe, only by practicing more, can I gain a good mark. In order to realize this aim, I get up earlier everyday so that I can have more time to do themath exercise. I ask t

23、eacher many questions about the math. My mother always encourage me to study math when it comes to the problem of math. I always feel nervous, because I think it is very difficult for me to study mathwell. But being encouraged by the parents and teacher I have confidence. Finally, I realized it.I wa

24、nt to share my experience to the students which have the same problem as me. Practice makes perfect. If we want gain a good mark we should practice more.（162 words ）可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结点评：1， 涵盖了作文题目要求的三个部分。2， 其次段的内容需要重新梳理，做了三个努力：a.每天早起做数学题目。b. 有问题勤问老师。 c.心理焦虑时向妈妈倾诉（要说我做了什么，而不是文中My mother always

25、encourage me to study math when it comes to the problem of math. ）。3， 由此，第三段的体会总结是：a. practice makes perfect。 b. 多向他人求助4+4+1=9The year of 2021 will be over. I always think it is a year with my ambition. I still rember the day which is the first of 2021. On that day IpraiedI could get higher scores i

26、n the test. I made my plan to get close to the top of the rank.For the sake of good marks, what I must have is a serious attitude. It was the most important things for me to insist the plan. I decided to read books of English. It was the most difficult subject for me. I recited the words and vocabul

27、aryday by day. And the reading is an another problem.Because of the lack of vocabularyIcouldnt understand the passage clearly. I started reading the English lessons in every morning. That s good day for me that I could never forget.Although I still not get my plan, I still want to get higher score i

28、n next exam. It was my ambition, I believe I can do it next year. Even though the life is tough to me. 179 words点评：1， 结构性缺失，没有“体会总结” 。2， 其次段的内容需要重新梳理。a. 每天背多少单词。b. 每天早晨读多少时间英语。c. 每周（或每两周或每个月）读 1 本英语书。2. 普陀区学校图书馆漂亮的学习环境和丰富的文献资源为同学们综合素养的提升供应了良好的平台。为了进一步提高图书馆的服务水平，图书馆现向同学们征集建议。假如你是李华，写信给图书馆负责人对图书馆的现状进行

29、分析，并就此提出一些有用性的改进建议。Dear Sir,In response to your collectingsuggestions to furtherimprove our school library s service quality,I am writing to put forward my humble advice, hoping to be of some value.Our school library, with beautiful environment and a wide range of books and reference materials, serv

30、es asa golden platform to promote students overall ability. However, there are still some problems remaining unsolved. The available seats are always tight, some vacant ones are occupied by students with their personal stuff and to make things even worse, some of them do not appear in the library at

31、 all. Besides, sometimes it is noisy because the discussion area is not separated, which makes students while learning hard to concentrate. Also, the network in our lab doesn t work well that it s naovteeaacscyetsos hto it when we are collecting information online.For the above situation, I suggest

32、an exclusive room should be appointed as a meeting room where students areallowed to discuss. Moreover, rules should be made about the usage of the seats that if one person leaves his seat over 20 minutes, the seat can be available to others. And if possible, put some fund to update our existing net

33、work.I would be so glad if my advice is adopted. I appreciate your devotion to the construction of our library and may our library be better and better.Sincerely yoursLi Hua3. 徐汇区俗语说“万事开头难”（All things are difficult before they are easy.）。你是否同意这一说可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结法？请用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：1. 你对这句俗语的懂得。

34、2. 结合生活中一个具体事例加以说明。留意：请勿透露本人真实姓名和学校名称。范文 1【上中一模最高分20 分】As an old saying goes,“ All things are difficult before they are easy.” The widespread notion revea that we are likely to encounter setbacks when we start to do something but if we face them with perseverance anddetermination, we will find the r

35、est of the work easier.Personally,I am strongly in favour of the proverb and my own experience can well serve as case in point.When I was a Senior One student, I made up my mind to set up a science fiction community in our school.I thought it would be a piece of cake, but the first few weeks followi

36、ng my decision turned out tough. To my disappointment, few students showed interest in the community. Filled with the bitterness of failure, I was almost going to give up but the bottom of my heart urged me to keep calm and go on.After weeks of struggle and every possible means tried, I managed to f

37、ind several members and once we started to hold activities, more students became interested and joined our community.What can be learnt from my experience is that perseverance carries true weight in our pursuit of success. Life is never like those fairy tales and we in reality all tend to meet frust

38、rations and setbacks in our lives. Tricky as thesituation might seem in the beginning,we must always bearin mind that“ Every cloud has a silver lining” andefforts won tgo in vain. Nevertheless, if we give up halfway, chances are that we llnever see the easiness following the difficulties and he who

39、is easily beaten to the ground by hardship is certain to end up achieve nothing.To sum up, the saying“ Agsll athreindifficult before they are easy” us a perfect reminder that things all seetough at the beginning. Faced with difficulties, we should cheer up and work with perseverance. Thus, success i

40、s bound to be within arm s9r+ea9c+h.2 334 words范文 2It is said that: all things are difficultbefore they reeasy ”I , couldn agt ree with it more. Life is no plain sailing, nothing can be achieved with ease unless you have the quality of devotion and perseverance.Once I went fishing with my father. In

41、itially,I was very excited and full of confidence, figuring Fis how hard can it be. You just sit there and wait for the fish to bite. It s a piece of cake.I had sat there for almost one hour, yet I got nothing. Soon I was distraught and impatient. Just when I was aboutto quit, my father turned aroun

42、d and said,“ Be focused and wait.” Having nothing else to do, I did what h calmed myself down and re-concentrated on the pole. Two hours later, I gained my reward.The experience has indeed taught me something. That is all things are difficult before they you devote yourself and hang on, you ll succe

43、ed.范文 3The old saying goes like“ aallrtehidnigffsicult before they are easy,” which suggests that the hardest time one needs go through is the beginning of a task.As for me, I simply hold the opposite opinion. Personally. I believe that it s always easy to but hard to carry it out strictly. Because

44、of the common passion at the beginning, efforts are willinglymade.Nevertheless, it is perseverance that is needed to complete it.The topic naturally reminds me of the days when I struggled for physical examination, in which I need to get a high score to be addicted to my dreaming high school. I make

45、 up my mind firmly three months before the exam that I would go jogging every night and kept on doing so for one month. When the initial passion faded and thetiredness stroke me every evening. I was so eager to take a breath from the exhausted training and almost gave up the plan. It was the strong-

46、will power that kept me going on.This unforgettable experience taught me the importance of perseverance, which confirms me that things are especially difficult in the middle stage.范文 4可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结As the famous saying goes “All things are different before they are easy.”From my perspectiv

47、e, the proverb means that were all inexperienced and might meet numerous frustrations before handling the task well. There is no exception that we have to go through a certain period to familiarize ourselves with the practice, during whichthe perspective is most required.Take myself as an example, o

48、nce I was assigned to deliver a speech on my English learning method. Never had I got such experience before, I was totally overwhelmed by the task. Despite the shyness and lack in confidence, Iknowit clear that the capabilityof expressing oneself to the publicis of great importance in futurework. Therefore, I started to practice tryin