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1、精品名师归纳总结扩句的方法在学习扩句法之前， 先对同学进行五个简洁句句型，并列句和复合句的专项训练，打好基础。扩句是在基本句型的基础上，添 加各种修饰成分 ，使句子得到扩展，即依据表达的需求 增加定语，状语，同位语等成分，或者 举例子补充细节内容，或者 添加谚语俗语 等。1. We arrived in Sanya.- We arrived in Sanya,happily and excitedly. 添加副词2. I like to make friends with my classmates.- I like to make friends with my classmates,who

2、 have the same interest as mine. 添加定语从句 3. We were happy and returned home.-We were happyand returnedhome afterwe had finished collecting all the rubbish.添加状语从句 4. I like reading books.- I like reading books,such as novels, short stories, magazines and newspapers. 通过举例补充细节5. We should study hard.-As

3、 we all know, “ Practice makes perfect”S.o we should study hard.添加谚语6. I often join in many activities.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结-Ioftenjoininmanyactivitiesinordertocommunicate with other students and broaden my mind. 添加目的状语 三详细应用试题要求： 假设你是一名中同学， 请以 My colorful school life 为题，写一篇短文。要求 100个字左右。开头和结尾已经给

4、出，不计入总数。要点提示： 1：上课仔细听讲2：课后完成作业3：常常参与体育锤炼4：去图书馆阅读I ma highschool studentand I understandwhatI m studying for. I have been working hard.Maytherealways be colorfullifearoundmyschool.同学的习作：I ma highschool studentand I understandwhatI m可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结studying for. I have been working hard.I list

5、en to the teacher carefully. I finish my homework after class. I often take exercise. I often read in the school library.May there always be colorful life around myschool.点评： 该同学能完整的写出各个要点， 没有显现太大的语法错误，表达通顺，单词拼写无误。但是很明显字数不够，没有到达 100个字左右，字数不够是许多同学面临的共同问题。其次，句子的表达过于平淡无奇，没有句式多样化和使用高级词汇，固定搭配、固定短语等使表达的道。

6、而且，没有使用连接词，上下文的连接不够顺畅。改良方法：步骤一：列要点把要写的内容要点化，做到要点齐全。1: Listen to the teacher carefully 2: finish my homework3:take part in exercise4: often read in the library步骤二：造简洁句充分利用五个简洁句句型对各个要点进行补充，使可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结其变成一个完整的句子。 每个句子都要留意句子成分的完整性，语法是否正确，说法是否符合英语表达习惯。1: I listen to the teacher carefully in

7、 the class. 2: I finish my homework after class.3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates. 4: I do some reading in the school library.步骤三：扩展句子1: I listen to the teachers carefully in the class sothat I can understand what the teachers say.增加目的状语从句 2: Ifinishmy homeworkafterclass, whichis a

8、 piece of cake for me. 增加定语从句3: I often take part in exercise with my classmates,such as playing football, going swimming and playing badminton etc.举例说明4: I often do some readingin the school librarywhen I have nothing to do after class.增加时间状语从句步骤四：润色句子依据高考海南英语作文评分细就，第五档的要 求： 24-25分，至少有 3个复杂句， 2种从句形

9、式，语气自然， 敬语得体，无中式英语，语言基本功扎实，词汇丰富。这就要求我们在谴词造句方面下工夫。“润色句子包括词语的选可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结择与句型的运用。 ” 比方可以用高级词汇，短语和固定搭配来替换一般词汇。增加习惯表达句式，倒装句，it 当形式主语和形式宾语， 非谓语动词等， 使用多种句式， 使其多样化。1: It is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understand what the teachers say. 把第一句换成

10、it 当形式主语的用法， 使句式多样化。 2: I take homework seriously and finish it in time,which is a piece of cake for me.增加了 take seriously 和 in time 两个短语，是句子更加生动3: In order to strengthen my body, I often take partin differentkindsof exercises withmy classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playing ba

11、dminton etc.增加了 in order to do sth目的状语和 different kinds of使句子的意思更完整。 4: Interested in reading books, I develop the habit of going to the library and do some reading on my favouritebooks. 使用过去分词短语当状语，再添加短语develop thehabbit of使文章增加亮点步骤五：连句成篇“过渡词在文章中起着承上启下的作用，它好比一座桥梁，能将全文各句有机的联系在一起，从而使句子不再是可编辑资料 - - -

12、欢迎下载精品名师归纳总结孤立的独立的个体。”使用表示转折，并列，递进，因果关系等连词把句子连接起来，“有效的使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑 ”使上下文更加通顺，规律性更强。I ma highschool studentand I understandwhatI m studying for. I have been working hard.原文已给First of all过渡词 , it is necessary for me to listen to the teachers carefully in the class so that I can understandwhatth

13、eteacherssay.What s more 过 渡 词 ,Itake homework seriously and finish it in time, which is a piece ofcake for me. In addition过渡词 , In order to strengthen my body, I often take partin differentkindsof exercises with my classmates, such as playing footall, going swimming and playingbadmintonetc.Finally过 渡 词 ,Interestedinreading books, I develop the habit of going to the library anddo some reading on my favourite books.May there always be colorful life around my school.原文已给这篇习作要点齐全，字数符合要求，措辞精致，句式多样化，上下文连贯，符合规律和英语表达习惯。因此在写作中，我们可以适当的使用扩句法对同学进行写作训练， 提高同学的英语表达才能。可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载