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1、英语书面表达指导英语书面表达指导 Beautify your CompositionBeautify your Composition高考作文的华丽变身高考作文的华丽变身遇难心不慌，遇难心不慌，遇易心更细。遇易心更细。 全国全国卷卷2012年作文（年作文（25分）分） 假定你是李华，从互联网(the Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营，欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。 内容主要包括: 1. 自我介绍(包括英语能力); 2. 参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家); 3. 希望获准。 注意: 1. 数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，

2、以使行文连贯; 3. 邮件开头和结尾已为你写好. Dear Sir or Madam, _ Regards, Li HuaDear Sir or Madam, Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China.I read the announcement of the summer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id li

3、ke to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10years, and speak fluent English. What is more, I ll be able to tell studentsfrom other countries about China and learn about their countries as well. Ihope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp. Looking forward to your reply! Regard

4、s, Li Hua评分原则评分原则 评分时先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。 评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 如书写较差以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。高考评分标准高考评分标准第五档（第五档（21-25） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达完全完成试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的，到了预期的写作目的，覆盖所有的内容要点

5、覆盖所有的内容要点，用了，用了丰富丰富的语法结构，语法与高级词汇的语法结构，语法与高级词汇有有少些错误，全篇，全篇流畅，流畅，连词使用较好连词使用较好。第四档（第四档（16-20） ： 完全完成试题规定的任务完全完成试题规定的任务，达到，达到了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，了预期的写作目的，写漏了一两个要点，语法和词汇基语法和词汇基本正确，本正确，有少些错误，主要是有少些错误，主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。子所致。第二档第二档 （6-10） ： 未适当完成试题规定的任务，未适当完成试题规定的任务，有要点，但表达不清晰，只有一些句子可读。有要点，但表达不清晰，只有

6、一些句子可读。第一档第一档 （1-5） ：未完成试题规定的任务，只：未完成试题规定的任务，只是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白是一些字词的堆积，不成句，让读者根本不明白写什么。写什么。0分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。分：空白，或者抄写一些无关的东西。第三档（第三档（11-15） ： 大错（时态、句子结构等）大错（时态、句子结构等）超过超过五六五六处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖处，不能及格，写漏了一些内容，但覆盖了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预了主要要点，基本上让人能够看懂，基本达到了预期目的。期目的。contentstructurelanguagefaithful

7、ness信信expressiveness达达elegance雅雅准确，完整紧凑，连贯高级，多变Content人称，时态，体裁人称，时态，体裁要点要点faithfulness准准确确完整完整Structure 三段式：总三段式：总-分分-总开头总开头-主体主体-结尾结尾段与段，句与句的衔接段与段，句与句的衔接expressiveness紧凑紧凑连贯连贯 Be thoughtful Being thoughtful(体谅人）simply means thinking of others before yourself. What you say or do will have an effect

8、on others._, it is important that you think before you say or do anything. _, you can avoid hurting others feelings. _, a thoughtless act or remark can spoil (损害)a perfect relationship. Remember these rules. If you dont have anything nice to say, dont say anything. If you think what you do will hurt

9、 others, dont do it. _, what goes around comes around.(种什么因，得什么果） _, we try to be a person who is thoughtful. therefore, in a word, moreover, in this way, after allThereforeIn this wayMoreoverAfter allIn a wordLanguage词汇词汇句式句式elegance高级高级多变多变词汇使用的原则词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装人靠衣装，文靠词装 1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则2、地道原则。、地道

10、原则。3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则4、后、后、高高、长原则长原则 后学到、较高级、较长词汇。后学到、较高级、较长词汇。四项原则四项原则1、词组优先原则、词组优先原则原文A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2、地道原则、地道原则原文Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge.修正Through traveling, I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.

11、4、后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇。原 词 替换词hard diligentlyvery rather extremelypay attention to attach importance tohappy delighted enjoyablemore and more the increasing number of3、避免重复原则、避免重复原则原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television.修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.

12、Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的聪明的、脑筋好的cleversmartwisebrightintelligent 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. puters are of great importance in our life.强调句强调句倒装句倒装句 with复合结构复合结构advancedsentences定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句非谓语动词非谓语动词常用谚语常用谚语被动句被动句一、一、

13、肯定不如双否好肯定不如双否好二、二、陈述不如倒装妙陈述不如倒装妙三、三、主动不如被动巧主动不如被动巧四、从句不如分词傲四、从句不如分词傲高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀 誊写规范不要少誊写规范不要少一、肯定不如双否好一、肯定不如双否好I couldnt have made so much progress in English without his help.I have made great progress in English with his help.The postman comes on time every da

14、y. . The postman never fails to come on time. 1.Only when we realize the importance of environmentalprotection can we solve the problem of pollution. 2. So precious is time that we cant afford to waste it.3.Diligent as he was, he failed in passing the exam. 4. By no means should teenagers get into t

15、he habit of smoking.二、陈述不如倒装妙二、陈述不如倒装妙每次可以借五本书最多借十天每次可以借五本书最多借十天.We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.哪种表达法分数会更高？哪种表达法分数会更高？三、主动不如被动巧三、主动不如被动巧几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成几乎所有的状语从句都可以变成独立主格独立主格或或分分词结构词结构，四

16、、从句不如分词傲四、从句不如分词傲主语一致就用分词结构，主语不一致就用独立主格结构。即(npron)+doingdone代替从句作状语。原文原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he heard the bad news.修正修正 Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.原文原文 If everything is taken into consideration, we ought to have another chance.修正修正 Everything taken int

17、o consideration, we ought to have another chance.Summarycontenta good essaystructurelanguagefaithfulnessexpressivenesselegance假如你是李明，你的加拿大网友John准备出国旅游，请根据以下要点给他写封信，希望对他的海外旅游有所帮助： 1.阅读旅游手册； 2.留意天气变化； 3.备好地图； 4.与家人或朋友保持联系。注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.参考词汇：guidebook旅游手册。Dear John,_ Yours sincerel

18、y, Li MingOn writing -词汇选择与衔接词运用Section 1:上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性一篇好的书面表达，应该行文一篇好的书面表达，应该行文连贯流畅连贯流畅，具有，具有“逻辑逻辑美美”。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接。使用恰当连接词，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧自然、紧凑凑，使文章更为，使文章更为地道地道，更具，更具“英语味英语味”。记得使用恰。记得使用恰当的连接词当的连接词,如以下的几类。如以下的几类。1。 表增加的过渡词： and then, in addition, furthermore, moreover, again, another, first, seco

19、nd 2. 表时间顺序的过渡词： afterwards, earlier, later, immediately, soon, next, suddenly, finally3. 表空间顺序的过渡词： near (to), far (from), in front of, behind, beside, beyond4. 表比较的过渡词： in the same way, just like, just as5. 表对照的过渡词： but, still, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, in spite of, even though6

20、. 表结果和原因： because, since, as a result, therefore, thus, hopefully, otherwise7. 表目的的过渡词：for this reason, for this purpose, so that8。 表强调的过渡词： in fact, in deed, surely, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, above all, the most important of all,9. 表解释说明的过渡词： for example, in this case, for i

21、nstance10. 表总结的过渡词： finally, at last, in conclusion, as I have shown, in other words, in brief, as has been stated above,1.We have been preparing for the past few years. We believe the 29th Olympics will be a great success.We have been preparing for the past few years. Hopefully, the 29th Olympics w

22、ill be a great success.2. He is running his own research company and he has served as a volunteer.He is running his own research company. In addition, he has served as a volunteer.3. The boy comes from a poor family. The boy does very well in his studies. The boy plans to work his way through colleg

23、e.Even though he comes from a poor family, the boy does very well in his studies; furthermore, he plans to work his way through college.4. Yao Ming is a successful basketball player and he is a commercial star.Yao Ming is a successful basketball player in addition to/apart from being a commercial st

24、ar.5. You will succeed in your training. You work hard and never give up.So long as you work hard, you will succeed in your training.6. Last night I had a dream. I was running on the track, competing with Liu Xiang. Last night I had a dream that/where I was running on the track, competing with Liu X

25、iang. 7. When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. He became a rich man.When he returned to the mountain, he found the gold. As a result, he became a rich man.8. A person without friends might be lonely and selfish. One who has a large number of friends must be warm-hearted and friendly.A

26、 person without friends might be lonely and selfish. On the contrary, one who has a large number of friends must be warmhearted and friendly.2. 适当利用短语取代单词1） We all think Chen Zhonghe is a great coach.We all _ Chen Zhonghe.2) The result of the Olympics will be good. The Olympics will _ to be a succes

27、sful one.3)I am going to Beijing to attend the opening ceremony. I am going to Beijing _ attending the opening ceremony. think highly of turn outfor the purpose of4).There are five rings representing five parts of the world.The Olympic Rings _ five rings representing five parts of the world.5)Sudden

28、ly I thought out a good idea.A good idea _ to me.A good idea suddenly_ me.Suddenly I _ with a good idea.consist ofoccurred struckcame up 6)Foreign athletes will find the way easily with the help of volunteers.Foreign athletes will _ finding the way with the help of volunteers.7)Everyone should do hi

29、s or her best.Everyone is _ do his or her best.have no troublesupposed to 8) For most foreigners answers in Chinese cannot be understood. For most foreigners answers in Chinese dont_ .9)What you do will be very important.What you do will _make a difference.make sense at allavailable, confusing, be l

30、ocated, think highly of, turn out, for the purpose of, consist of, occur to sb., strike sb., come up with, have no trouble in, be supposed to, make sense, solution, possess the same opportunity, explore, cheeks, treasure, get a flat tire, hang up the phone, make sense, make a difference, 逗号的作用：逗号的作用

31、： 凡逗号出现的场合无不体现英语的使用习惯凡逗号出现的场合无不体现英语的使用习惯或固定的表达方式或固定的表达方式, , 也与也与“为尽力使用较复杂为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇结构或较高级词汇, , 具有较强的语言运用能具有较强的语言运用能力力”, , 以及实现以及实现“上下文的连贯性上下文的连贯性, , 即有效地即有效地使用语句间的连接成分使用语句间的连接成分, , 全文结构紧凑全文结构紧凑, , 语言语言的得体性的得体性”这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号这些重要的考试要求相关。以逗号为主线为主线, , 研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式研读流畅、精采表达的各种方式, , 有有可能使得写作快速步上

32、新的台阶可能使得写作快速步上新的台阶, , 从而收到事从而收到事半功倍的效果。半功倍的效果。例句：例句： 1. It is, after all, due to his negligence.2. She is, as I have told you before, very fond of collecting stamps. 3. I am ,therefore, very careful when crossing the road. 4. They, Mr. and Mrs. White, will be there in Beijing tomorrow. 5. He is, to

33、be exact, sixteen years old and is not old enough to join the army. (task for section 2)一家宾馆新开业,希望在互联网上进行宣传，请你用英语为其写一篇文字介绍。主要内容应包括：1。地点：位于白山入口处500米。2。房间及价格：单人间（20间），100元/天 双人间（15间），150元/天3。餐饮：中西餐，茶，咖啡4。 游泳池：全天免费开放。5。欢迎预定 （book in advance) Baishan Mountain Hotel is now open for business Baishan Mount

34、ain Hotel is now open for business. Our hotel is located 500 meters away from the entrance to Baishan Mountain. It has 20 single rooms and 15 double rooms, all with hot showers. A single room is 100 yuan and a double room 150 yuan for one night. Chinese food and western food are both available. You can also enjoy yourself at the caf drinking tea or coffee in the evening. We also have a swimming pool, which is open all day and free of charge. Booking in advance is recommended. All are welcome!