高考英语写作指导---感谢信.ppt

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1、命题原则：合理性、交际性和实用性高考英语书面表达一是体裁多样，提示灵活。记叙文、议论文、应用文、说明文，开放式作文。提示形式有提纲式、图表式、图画式、开放式，英语提示等。二是题材丰富，贴近生活。既适当关注社会热点及焦点关注社会热点及焦点，又注重考生实际生活。三是注重语用，考查能力。考验能否运用所学的英语知识和掌握的技能进行书面交际，对语言的驾驭和运用能力。这是一种命题趋势。特点：词汇词汇短语短语句型句型谋篇谋篇漂亮、地道漂亮、地道adj.令人惊奇的surprisingamazingastonishing词汇词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜词汇层面词汇层面adj. 聪明的、脑

2、筋好的cleversmartwisebrightintelligent短语层面短语层面 短语优先原则短语优先原则 电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. puters are of great importance in our life.句型层面句型层面 I had a good idea. A good idea occurred to / struck / hit

3、me. I came up with a good idea.在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用以下结构：灵活运用以下结构：倒装句倒装句强调句强调句主从复合句主从复合句分词状语分词状语With 复合结构复合结构写作五步骤写作五步骤1.审题审题-忌跑题忌跑题 2.列提纲列提纲/要点要点-忌漏点忌漏点3.造句造句-句型结构成分要完整句型结构成分要完整,忌表达单一忌表达单一, 忌冗言或逐句硬译，字词堆砌忌冗言或逐句硬译，字词堆砌 4.连句成文连句成文-添加过渡词添加过渡词, 忌句子松散忌句子松散 5.检查检查 应用文应用文 日记日记 书信（书信（ 信

4、函、电子邮件信函、电子邮件） 通知（通知（书面通知书面通知、口头通知）、口头通知） 便条便条 说明文说明文（事物，人物，地点）（事物，人物，地点） 记叙文记叙文 议论文议论文（观点、（观点、建议建议）常见体裁常见体裁 相当于中文的相当于中文的“敬启者敬启者”。 (直接给别人写信）直接给别人写信） a. l beg to inform you that b. l beg to take this opportunity to inform you that c. I have the honor to address you that. d. l write in a hurry to info

5、rm you that e. I have the pleasure to tell you that. f. I am very delighted to inform you that.书信开头语书信开头语 相当于中文的“接读某月某日来信，一切知悉”。 a. l thank you very much for your letter of May 20th b.Your letter of May 20th has been received with thanks. c. It gives me great pleasure to receive your kind letter of

6、May 20th. d. ln answer to your kind letter of May 20th, l deeply regret that e. l have received your kind letter of May 20th. f. Words cant express my delight on finding your favor of yesterday on my desk this morning. g. Your letter dated May 20th has been received. 结尾语结尾语 We are waiting for your g

7、ood news. I hope to receive your early reply. We look forward to your reply at your earliest convenience. Im looking forward to hearing from you soon. 1.生日贺信 2.圣诞节及新年贺信 3.感谢信 4.请求帮助信 5.申请信 6.道歉信信函分类信函分类 写作格式 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因； 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助； 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。Vocabulary：(感谢) v. thank, appreciate; n

8、. thanks, gratitude, appreciation;adj. thankful, grateful, appreciative, obliged adj. 感激的owe v. 欠债, 感激 短语：因而感激sb.1.thank you for 2.appreciate ones doing 3.be grateful/thankful to sb. for 4.many thanks for 5.express my thanks/gratitude for 6.owe sb. a lot for 第一段：表达感谢之情并说明原因； 常用句式 I am writing this l

9、etter to thank you for I am writing to express my sincere thanks for I would like to convey in this letter my heartfelt (adj. 衷心的) thanks to you for With deepest gratitude I write you this letter for I am obliged to you for. I owe you a great deal for 第二段：细述并赞赏对方给与的帮助； 常用句式 It was nice/kind/thoughtf

10、ul (adj. 考虑周到的) of you to. Thank you very much for your kind hospitality (n. 好客, 热情招待) and the honor you showed me during my visit It was your kind help that (强调句型) If it had not been for your (help/guidance/ assistance), I wouldnt have (won the prize) (虚拟语气) But for/Without 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。 常用句式

11、Thanks again for your generous help. I appreciate it more than I can say. My true gratitude is beyond the words description. Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget. Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me. 第三段：再次阐述谢意并表达回报愿望。 常用句式 Please do not hesitate to le

12、t me know if there is anything I could do to pay you back (回报). Please have no hesitation in writing to me should you want (虚拟语气倒装) me to do something for you Please do allow me to return your favor (报答) Best wishes for your health and every happiness.假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到在中国工作的假如你是一名失学儿童，名叫李华，你有幸得到

13、在中国工作的Mr. Brown的资助，可以重返校园。你给的资助，可以重返校园。你给Mr. Brown写了一封信，写了一封信，内容如下：内容如下： 收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激；收到钱和书后能重返校园，非常感激； 在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表在老师的帮助下，学习有了很大的进步，受到老师的表扬和鼓励；扬和鼓励； 决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步；决心更加努力学习，取得更大的进步； 盼望见到盼望见到Mr. Brown，希望他寄来一张照片。，希望他寄来一张照片。注意：注意：1. 书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行书信应包括以上所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

14、文连贯；2. 词数：词数：100左右左右 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。* * 表示感兴趣表示感兴趣* * 说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历说明优势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历* * 希望得到回复希望得到回复注意：注意：1 1词数：词数：100-120100-120左右左右2 2可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯Dear Mr. Brown，I am writing to expres

15、s my deepest gratitude for the money and books you sent me. I could not have returned to school without your help. Thank you so much. I have been working hard since I went back to school. I have made great progress in my studies with the help of my teachers. They often praise me and encourage me. Bu

16、t for your help, I might have left school and couldnt have got such a good education. I have made up my mind to study harder and make greater progress.How are you getting on with your life and work? I would like to meet you in person, but I have no opportunity to do so. Would you please send me a ph

17、oto of yourself? Thank you again for your generous help and best wishes!Yours Sincerely,Li HuaDear Sir or Madam, Im a student from Xinhua Middle School. Im glad tolearn that you want a few part-time English reporters. Imquite interested in it. I think Im fit for the job . As a student, Ive read a lo

18、t and have much knowledge in many fields. Im fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides,Im easy to get along with and enjoy working together withothers. Above all, I once worked as a reporter for myschool broadcasting station. So Im sure I can do the jobwell if I get the posit

19、ion. Im looking forward to your reply. Yours faithfully, Li Hua 通知通知 通知可分为通知可分为书面通知书面通知和和口头通知口头通知两种。两种。 书面通知书面通知可采用布告形式或书信形式可采用布告形式或书信形式; 口头通知口头通知要求比较灵活，语言简明扼要。要求比较灵活，语言简明扼要。【书面通知模板书面通知模板】 Notice An activity will be held (1)_.In order to (2)_.Everyone who is interested in it is welcomed. (3)_ (4)_ 模

20、板说明模板说明 （1）时间，）时间， 地点地点 （2）活动目的）活动目的 （3）通知发布单位）通知发布单位 （4）通知发布时间）通知发布时间书面通知常用的开头语有：书面通知常用的开头语有： All teachers and students will be required to(全体师生务必要) Notice is hereby given that(兹通知) Our school / The Student Union will / is going to hold A lecture will be given at 7:00 this evening in书面通知常用的结束语有：书面通

21、知常用的结束语有： Everybody is expected to attend it. Be sure to attend it on time. Please / Do be present on time. Dont miss the chance!【口头通知模板口头通知模板】 Ladies and gentlemen , May I have your attention , please . I have something to tell you .(1)_ Please remember : Time (2) Place (3)_ Thats all. Thank you fo

22、r listening . 模板说明（模板说明（1）具体内容）具体内容 （2）时间）时间 （3）地点）地点口头通知要求：(1) 要有称呼用语。如：在正式场合用的Ladies and gentlemen,对学生用的Boys and girls 等。 (2) 要有开头语。 (3) 时态：以一般将来时为主。 (4) 人称问题：第二人称 (5) 要有结束语。口头通知常用的开头语有： May I have your attention, please? Be quiet. There is something important I have to tell you. You need to know.

23、 I have something to tell you.口头通知常用的结束语有： Thats all. Thank you. Any questions? Does everyone understand?【经典例句】【经典例句】1. Ladies and gentlemen, may I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make.2. Everybody is welcome to be present at the contest.3. The Students Union has decided to or

24、ganize a music week.4. Please sign your name/ fill in a.form (at the Service Room).5. The first six winners will be given awards.6. Please listen carefully and well have a discussion in groups.7. Come to the great fun!8. The place for the activities will be announced later.9. Theres been a change in

25、 our time schedule this week. The meeting will be put off until next week.10. Dont forget to bring your gifts with you.11. Please confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.你校学生会举办义卖活动以资助贫困地区儿童上你校学生会举办义卖活动以资助贫困地区儿童上学。请你写一份通知：学。请你写一份通知：介绍活动的目的介绍活动的目的号召大家踊跃捐献不用物品，并参加义卖活动号召大家踊跃捐献不用物品，并参加义卖

26、活动义卖时间、地点：周六上午义卖时间、地点：周六上午9 9点，校阶梯教室点，校阶梯教室注意：注意：1. 1. 词数词数100100左右；左右；2 2 可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。参考词汇：义卖：参考词汇：义卖：Charity SaleCharity Sale； 阶梯教室：阶梯教室：lecture halllecture hall NOTICE/Notice The Students Union of our school is scheduled to hold a Charity Sale on Saturday to raise mone

27、y for children in the poverty-stricken area. The efforts to be made are to support these children to continue their school education. You are kindly asked to donate some of your items temporarily not used by you and that might be of some use to others, such as some school supplies and used textbooks

28、. At 9 a.m. this Saturday, the Charity Sale starts at the lecture hall of our school. We are expecting you to come and offer a helping hand. And remember all the money will go to the support of those needy children. The Students Union假如你是班长，根据下面的内容和提示，写一篇假如你是班长，根据下面的内容和提示，写一篇100100左左右的口头通知，以便向同学们宣布右

29、的口头通知，以便向同学们宣布 事由：欢迎澳大利亚学生来校参观。事由：欢迎澳大利亚学生来校参观。 参观时间：参观时间：6 6月月1515日上午日上午9:00-12:00. 9:00-12:00. 参观人数：约参观人数：约6060人。人。 活动安排：活动安排：1. 8:301. 8:30在校门口。在校门口。 2. 9:002. 9:00带客人到会议室开联欢会。带客人到会议室开联欢会。 3.3.领客人参观植物园、校办工厂。领客人参观植物园、校办工厂。 4.11:004.11:00在操场进行篮球比赛。在操场进行篮球比赛。 5.5.客人客人12:0012:00离校。离校。 注意事项：注意事项：1. 1.

30、 对客人要友好。对客人要友好。 2. 2. 要用英语交谈。要用英语交谈。 参考词汇：参考词汇：植物园植物园: botanical garden: botanical garden 校办工厂校办工厂:school-run factory:school-run factoryBoys and girls, May I have your attention, please? About sixtyAustralian students will come to visit our school on June 15.Well meet them at the school gate at 8:30

31、. Well take themto the meeting-room, where a get-together will be held. Afterthat, well show them around our botanical garden and the school-run factory. At11:00 there will be a basketball matchon the playground. Theyll leave our school at 12:00. Please be friendly to them. We must talk with them inEnglish. Thats all. Thank you.