高考英语写作之邀请信定.ppt

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1、基于高考范文指导下基于高考范文指导下 的写作训练专题的写作训练专题 邀请信邀请信 An invitation letter An invitation letter What does it What does it impress you?impress you?Why is writing so tough?Why is writing so tough?InputOutput2004-2012004-2015 5十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析十年高考全国卷作文体裁分析类类 型型次次 数数邀请信邀请信4 4介绍信介绍信3 3求助信求助信3 3咨询信咨询信2 2求职类、申请信求职类、申请信2 2

2、祝贺、感谢信祝贺、感谢信2 2建议信建议信1 1投诉信投诉信1 1招聘广告招聘广告 、通知类、通知类1 1便签、留言条便签、留言条1 1议论文议论文1 1想象类想象类1 1BrainstormingBrainstormingDefinition:YAn invitation letter is a type of letter that is to invite the receiver to take part in certain activity. YIt can be formal and informal.Y必备句型必备句型:Beginning 1. Its a great hono

3、r for me to invite you to2. I take the pleasure to invite you to 3. Im writing to invite you to4. Id like to invite you to5. May I ask you to consider coming to.?6. I think it would be a great idea if you could participate inY必备句型必备句型: Ending 1.Im looking forward to hearing from you. 2.We hope that

4、you would come and look forward to seeing you. 3. If you are able to come with us ,please let us know and we will wait for you.4. Would you please drop me a line to let me know if you can come?5.I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation.Model(模板模板)：Dear _， I would like to invite you to

5、 join us to _for_ (内容内容) on/at _ (时间时间)at/in _ (地点地点). We would be honored/delighted to have you there with us. The _(活动活动) will start at _ (具体时间具体时间). Its about_(主题主题).We will_.(活动具体内活动具体内容容) At around _ (时间时间), we will_ (具体具体安排安排) We would appreciate it very much if you could accept our invitation

6、. Looking forward to receiving your reply Yours sincerely， Li Ming Characteristics Beginning(Paragraph1)：Writing purpose.Body(Paragraph2)：Details of the activity, including the theme, time, place, and some requirements etc.Ending(Paragraph3)：Politely express the gratitude and expectation.Head (Aim)B

7、ody (Details)End(Expectation)揭开高考真题神秘面纱：揭开高考真题神秘面纱：20152015年全国卷年全国卷1 1 假定你是李华，你校英文报假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化外国文化”栏栏目拟刊登目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生活美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。的短文。请给美国朋友彼得请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿写信约稿，要点如下：，要点如下： 1.1.栏目介绍；栏目介绍； 2. 2.稿件内容；稿件内容； 3. 3.稿件长度：稿件长度：约约400400词汇词汇 4.4.交稿日期：交稿日期：6 6月月2828日前日前注意：注意： 1. 1.词数词数100100左右；左右； 2

8、. 2.可以可以适当增加细节适当增加细节，以使，以使行文连贯行文连贯； 3. 3.开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。提炼要点：提炼要点：1. 1.写信约稿写信约稿（目的）（目的）；2.2.“外国文化外国文化”栏目介绍；栏目介绍；3. 3.稿件内容稿件内容：美国节日风俗和中学生美国节日风俗和中学生 生活的短文生活的短文；4.4.稿件长度：约稿件长度：约400400词汇词汇 ；5. 5.交稿日期：交稿日期：6 6月月2828日前日前； （2-52-5：具体内容）：具体内容）6. 6.适当增加细节适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。，以使行文连贯。Appreciating（品味品味佳作佳作)要点提炼：要点

9、提炼：1.写信约稿写信约稿:2.“外国文化外国文化”栏栏目介绍目介绍: 3.稿件内容稿件内容：美国美国节日风俗和中学生节日风俗和中学生生活的短文生活的短文： 4.稿件长度：约稿件长度：约400词汇词汇 5.交稿日期：交稿日期：6月月28日前日前 6.适当增加细节适当增加细节，以使行文连贯以使行文连贯 25Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popul

10、ar among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and

11、the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua25ContentEverything needed included which is related to your

12、 view.(内容要完整内容要完整)Everything needed included which is related to your view.(内容要完整内容要完整)Good beginning and ending (好的开头结尾好的开头结尾)* Well organized and smoothly developed (结构合理结构合理,行文流畅行文流畅)* Proper linking words between sentencesEverything needed should be included. (内容完整）内容完整）Dear Peter, Id like to as

13、k you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part o

14、f the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before J

15、une 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li HuaStep1(head)：Writing purposeStep2 (body)：Well-organized, smoothly and clearly developed.Step 3(end)：Expectation Structure*GoodEverything needed included which is related tEeeEEEEEo your view.(内容要完整内容要完整)tween sentencesGood beginning and end

16、ing.（好的开头和结尾）（好的开头和结尾）Well organized and smoothly developed.（结构合理、行文流畅）（结构合理、行文流畅）Proper linking words between sentences.（恰当的连接词）（恰当的连接词）Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is very popular among us stud

17、ents.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of America

18、n high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Li Hua25 过去分词作过去分词作 后置定语后置定语 宾语从句宾语从句 高级词汇高级词汇 * With exactly used words and relatively

19、 changed sentence patterns. (词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化)* No Chinglish. (避免中文式英文避免中文式英文)* No Grammatical mistakes . (避免语法错误避免语法错误)Language 2010年全国卷1 英语书面表达（满分（满分25分）分） 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信. 英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00地点：501教室参

20、赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话484876655） 欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。Dear Ms.Smith,_ Best wishes, Li HuaDear Ms.Smith, I am LiHua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and a judge. The contest, the theme of it is “Man and

21、 Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 in the afternoon of June 15. Whats more, there will have ten students take part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone num

22、ber is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply. Best wishes, Li Hua 15 2010年全国卷1 英语书面表达（满分25分） 假设你是育才中学学生会主席李华.你校将举办一次英语演讲比赛（speech contest）,希望附近某大学的外籍教师Smith女士做评委,请参照以下比赛通知给她给写一封信. 英语演讲比赛主题：人与自然时间：6月15日下午2.00-5.00地点：501教室参赛选手：10名学生联系人：李华（电话484876655） 欢迎大家光临注意：词数100左右;开头已为你写好。Dear Ms.Sm

23、ith,_ Best wishes, Li HuaDear Ms.Smith, I am LiHua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincere hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge. The contest, the theme of it is “Man and Nature”, will be holding in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 i

24、n the afternoon of June 15. Whats more, there will have ten students take part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give we some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invite. My telephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to receive your reply.

25、Best wishes, Li Hua 【分析】基本表达清楚；时态运用恰当；采用了连接手法；内容连贯；准确性不够。 词的修饰关系错误 非限制性定语从句关系词错误 语态错误介词错误汉语式英语时态错误人称代词用错名词动词不分固定搭配用错15 A good essay should be1. complete （要点齐全）（要点齐全）2. coherent（行文连贯）（行文连贯）3. accurate（用词（用词准确准确）4. fluent/clear（表达流畅）（表达流畅）5. various (句式多样句式多样) 6. neat（书写工整）（书写工整）ConcludingStrike while

26、 the iron is hot.Y2015年全国卷年全国卷2书面表达书面表达 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老）陪老人们过重阳节（人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1.出发及返回时间；出发及返回时间； 2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。活动：包饺子、表演节目等。Y注意：注意： 1.词数词数100左右；左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结尾已为你写好。结尾已

27、为你写好。Strike while the iron is hot.Strike while the iron is hot.Y2015年全国卷年全国卷2书面表达书面表达 假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过重阳节（）陪老人们过重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：。请给外教露西写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括： 1.出发及返回时间；出发及返回时间； 2.活动：包饺子、表演节目等。活动：包饺子、表演节目等。Y注意：注意： 1.词数词数100左右；左右； 2.

28、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.结尾已为你写好。结尾已为你写好。YStep 1 analyze the requirements(认真审题认真审题) YStep 2 draw up an outline(谋篇布局谋篇布局)YStep 3 organize the sentences(联句成篇联句成篇)YStep 4 get the article polished up(锦上添花锦上添花)YStep 5 check the mistakes(查漏补缺查漏补缺)Five steps to write an English essayFive steps to

29、 write an English essay：Requirements：Genre： Invitation letterPerson： The first and second personTense： Future tense提炼要点：提炼要点：1. 1.邀请露西前往养老院陪老人过邀请露西前往养老院陪老人过重阳节（目重阳节（目的）的）；2.2.出发及返回时间：出发及返回时间：适当增加细节，具体时适当增加细节，具体时间、地点；间、地点；3. 3.活动：包饺子、表演节目等，活动：包饺子、表演节目等，意义何在意义何在；（2-32-3具体内容）具体内容）Outline：Paragraph 1. P

30、urpose of the invitation. 邀请露西前往养老院陪老人过邀请露西前往养老院陪老人过重阳节重阳节Outline Paragraph 2. 2.出发及返回时间出发及返回时间; 3.活动：包饺子、表演节目等活动：包饺子、表演节目等； What is the Double Ninth Festival? When? Where? Why? How? (活动具体内容和安排活动具体内容和安排,适当增加细节适当增加细节)OutlineParagraph 3. Appreciation and expectation (感激和期待感激和期待)Lets take action!Write the invitation letter in 15 minutes.Please learn to your compositionHomework：Correct , rewrite your articles and hand in tomorrow.