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1、分值分值 评评 分分 标标 准准 5按照要求概括了按照要求概括了全部主要全部主要信息，信息，没有增加没有增加与原文与原文无关无关的信息，的信息，没有照抄没有照抄原子的句子。语言结构正确，行文原子的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。规范。 4基本基本按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关按照要求概括了主要信息，没有增加与原文无关的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语言结构正确，行文规范。规范。 3基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含基本按照要求概括了主要信息，但包含一些不相关一些不相关的的信息，有个别句子信息，有个别句子抄抄自原文。语言结构自原文。语言结构基本

2、正确基本正确，行，行文比较规范。文比较规范。 2不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含不能按照要求概括主要信息，包含较多不相关较多不相关的信息，的信息，有有较多的抄袭较多的抄袭。语言结构。语言结构不够准确不够准确，行文不够规范。，行文不够规范。 0-1没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，没有按照要求概括主要信息，基本是不相关的信息，大多数的句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不大多数的句子都抄自原文。语言结构不准确，行文不规范。规范。 A Good Summary Content1. cover all the main information2. not too brief, not to

3、o many details3. no comments of your own Language1. proper words, accurate sentence building2. dont copy the original sentences 熟悉各种文体的写作特点和框架。熟悉各种文体的写作特点和框架。记叙文：记叙文： 5W (what / who / when / where / how)议论文：议论文： opinion + argument / reasons 说明文：说明文： phenomenon +reason +solution2. 针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。针对某

4、个问题提出解决方法或措施。即即“问题问题+解决方法解决方法”The passage tells us.(问题问题), including.(方法方法1), .(方法方法2)and.(方法方法3). 3.描写某事物的性质功用。描写某事物的性质功用。即即“对象对象+功能功能+好处好处”：The writer introduces. (对象对象)to us, especially its.(性质或功用性质或功用), from which we know.(对象对象带来的利好带来的利好). 1.The passage is mainly about 本文本文/这个故事主要是关于这个故事主要是关于2.T

5、he author tells us a story about 作者告诉我们一个关于作者告诉我们一个关于的故事的故事3.The passage tells us that 本文是一个关于本文是一个关于的故事的故事记叙文可用以下开头语：记叙文可用以下开头语：2. The passage/author highlights the importance of 本文本文/作者强调了作者强调了的重要性。的重要性。3. The passage/author discusses the impact of 本文本文/作者讨论了作者讨论了的影响。的影响。1.The passage/author argue

6、s that 议论文可用以下开头语：议论文可用以下开头语：本文本文/作者主张作者主张Paragraph Structure 段落结构段落结构 Topic Sentence 主题句主题句 Supporting sentences 支撑句支撑句 Concluding sentence 结论句结论句1.It goes without saying that .不言不言而喻而喻 It goes without saying that practice makes perfect. 不言而喻熟能生巧。2. No one can deny the fact that .不可否不可否认这个事实认这个事实 N

7、o one can deny the fact that successful business lies in a healthy body and mind. 不可否认不可否认, 成功的关键成功的关键在于在于健康的身心。健康的身心。3. It is necessary/important/proper that S.(should)V. 是必要的是必要的/重要重要的的/适当的。适当的。 It is necessary that we master a foreign language. 我们掌握一门外语是必要的。我们掌握一门外语是必要的。 4)There is no doubt that.

8、 毫无疑问毫无疑问 There is no doubt that he will win the election. 毫无疑问，他将在竞选中获胜。毫无疑问，他将在竞选中获胜。 There is no doubt that this is a frightening moment . 毫无疑问，这是个令人恐惧的时刻。毫无疑问，这是个令人恐惧的时刻。 There is no doubt that nearsightedness is a serious problem among the youth of our country . 毫没有疑问问地近视在我国的年青人中是一个严重的问题。毫没有疑问问

9、地近视在我国的年青人中是一个严重的问题。 5. be of great importance 至关重要至关重要 Honesty is of great importance. Keeping ones promise is of great importance.围绕主题句，展开充分说理！(1) 你是否赞成体育入高考及原因：你是否赞成体育入高考及原因：Personally speaking, I speak against the idea that P.E. should be added into theGaokao. For one thing, taking physicalactiv

10、ities is an action due to our passion and natural love. The form of exam will surely cause decline of interest. For another thing, having more exams burdens students workload and causes more stress.递进式递进式的展开主题，从减弱兴趣到增加压力谈的展开主题，从减弱兴趣到增加压力谈对学生的影响对学生的影响 What caused this remarkable phenomenon? Personall

11、y, there are at least three factors contributing to it. To begin with, the government has been forwarding the policy to support private houses programs. Furthermore, the increased income resulting from economic growth plays a cardinal part in the changes. Finally, the authorities concerned have made

12、 proper regulations to protect private houses. （2 2）健康与学习的关系：）健康与学习的关系： There is no denying the fact that a healthy body benefits our study a lot. Without a healthy body, we cant concentrate on our study. Without a healthy body, we will easily get sick, and therefore, more time will be spent in hosp

13、ital. Without a healthy body, we cant study well. A healthy body promotes our memory as well as our ability of study. In a word, a healthy body plays an important role in our study.利用利用正反式正反式展开主题，段落看起来更为丰满，展开主题，段落看起来更为丰满，不单薄！不单薄！（3）你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高）你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高身体素质。身体素质。 As far as Im concerned

14、, I also have some beneficial ways to help students improve their health. First, schools are supposed to give us a platform to play sports such as sporty extracurricular classes. In addition, parents should encourage us to play sports or play sports with us. Last but not least, we should attach grea

15、t importance to physical health so that we can enjoy sports相关式相关式的主题展开，从学校的主题展开，从学校家长家长个人谈如何个人谈如何提高学生身体素质。提高学生身体素质。（3）你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高）你认为还有什么方式可以帮助学生提高身体素质。身体素质。 Besides Physical Education, the following things also contribute to improving students physical health. To start with, keeping optimisti

16、c attitude towards life is the most efficient way to improve ones health. Furthermore, enough sleep enables you to stay healthy. Last but not least, balanced diet is also of great importance to improving health. Do the things above, do exercise more, and you are sure to possess a healthy body.相关式相关式

17、的主题展开，从态度的主题展开，从态度睡眠睡眠饮食谈如何饮食谈如何提高学生身体素质。提高学生身体素质。 这类要点中常含有这类要点中常含有“怎么办怎么办”“”“如何如何/ /怎样做怎样做( (应对、处理、解决应对、处理、解决)” “)” “采取什采取什么措施么措施”“”“对解决对解决，你有什么建议，你有什么建议”等字眼。等字眼。1. 当谈到当谈到 我建议我建议 一则一则 二二则则 When it comes to I suggest that For one thing For another 2. 关于为什么关于为什么我能列出好些理由。首先我能列出好些理由。首先 其次其次 最后但同样重要的是最后

18、但同样重要的是When it comes to whyI can list a few reasons. To begin withBesidesLast but not least(1)All in all, it is the love and education from school that improve students behavior. 总而言之总而言之, 改善学生行为的是爱与教育。改善学生行为的是爱与教育。(2) To sum up, success results from hard work. 总之总之, 成功是艰苦努力的结果。成功是艰苦努力的结果。方法一方法一 重申观

19、点或概括内容重申观点或概括内容 方法二方法二 提出建议或进行呼吁提出建议或进行呼吁 若是反映社会现象或某种行为的文章若是反映社会现象或某种行为的文章, , 考生可对此提出积极的呼吁或建议。如：考生可对此提出积极的呼吁或建议。如：(1)Therefore, it is suggested that you should make friends with people who have different genders, characteristics or backgrounds. 因此因此, 建议你应当与不同性别、性格以及背建议你应当与不同性别、性格以及背景的人结朋友。景的人结朋友。(2)

20、 In conclusion, it is high time that visitors should stop taking photos with animals and take better care of them. 总之总之, 是我们该停止同动物拍照并更好地是我们该停止同动物拍照并更好地照料他们的时候了。照料他们的时候了。(2009广东广东) 方法三方法三 强调重要性强调重要性(1)To sum up, environmental protection is of great importance, which can make us live more comfortably

21、and more healthily.总之总之, 环境保护非常重要环境保护非常重要, 这会使我们生这会使我们生活得更舒适更健康。活得更舒适更健康。 方法四方法四 围绕主题表明决心或信心围绕主题表明决心或信心I am confident/convinced that I will make every effort to satisfy your demand of being brave and successful. 我相信我一定竭尽全力达到你的要求：我相信我一定竭尽全力达到你的要求：勇敢和成功。勇敢和成功。(2007年广东高考年广东高考) 总结全文时常用表总结性的词语总结全文时常用表总结性

22、的词语, ,如如to sum up, to conclude, to summarize, in brief, in conclusion, all in all等。此外等。此外, , 总结应简洁总结应简洁, ,建议只用一句话建议只用一句话, ,且使用且使用非非限制性定语从句限制性定语从句或状语从句使观点更充或状语从句使观点更充分。如下句中下划线部分能使句子显得分。如下句中下划线部分能使句子显得更有说服力。更有说服力。To summarize, over-parenting prevents children from developing in an all-rounded way, whi

23、ch should not be encouraged. 简而言之简而言之, 父母过份照顾孩子不利于孩子父母过份照顾孩子不利于孩子全面发展全面发展, 这不应该提倡这不应该提倡 。(2010广州一广州一模模)1. I am greatly convinced (that)我深我深信信 I am greatly convinced that prevention is better than cure. 我深信预防胜于治疗。我深信预防胜于治疗。2. Only with combined efforts, can we .唯有通力合作唯有通力合作, 我们才能我们才能 Only with combin

24、ed efforts, can we expect our hometown take on a new look in due course. 唯有通力合作唯有通力合作, 我们才能期望我们的家乡我们才能期望我们的家乡不久会有新的面貌。不久会有新的面貌。3. In conclusion, .=To sum up, .总而总而言之言之, In conclusion, a good citizen should observe traffic regulations. 总而言之总而言之, 好公民应该遵守交通规则。好公民应该遵守交通规则。4. We can, therefore, come to t

25、he conclusion (that).因此因此, 我们可以得出我们可以得出如下个结论如下个结论We can, therefore, come to the conclusion that nothing is so precious as peace in the world. 因此因此, 我们能下个结论我们能下个结论, 那就是世上和平那就是世上和平最珍贵。最珍贵。5. Therefore, we should realize (that).所以所以, 我们应该意识到我们应该意识到 Therefore, we should realize that in learning English we can not do without a dictionary. 所以所以, 我们应该意识到学英文不能没有我们应该意识到学英文不能没有词典。词典。