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1、托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：highschoolbuiltinyourcommunity托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：highschoolbuiltinyourcommunity时间：2020-09-04 16:06:40陈铃 1147为了避免大家直到考试当中才遭遇完全没思路不知道如何展开的困扰。今天小编给大家带来了托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文，希望能够给帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：high school built in your community托福写作难点话题一览Do you lik

2、e a new high school being built in your community?It has recently been announced that a new high school may be built in your community. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details in your answer.写作思路展开结构分析说到教育的话题一般以支持为主比较容易拓展思路。大家可以说教育是百年大计(a fundamental task crucial fo

3、r generations to come)，当然要同意。 社区的孩子就近上学很方便，减少了路上可能发生交通事故的可能性; 可以提高社区文化氛围(将有更多的书店，音像店); 进而促进社区经济繁荣;提高就业率等等。 尽管社区可能变得嘈杂一些，但是总体上还是应该支持的。本话题高分范文赏析The basic prerequisite of success for any community is the education of its citizens. Because the advantages of a high school education in my town are present

4、ly available to only a limited number of students every year, I wholeheartedly support the construction of a new school facility to serve our community. The competition to get into high school in my town is fierce. There are three middle schools in town, but only one high school. Because the number

5、of applicants to the single high school far exceeds the available spaces in the high school, only the richest and most qualified students are able to go to school. The skills taught in high school including advanced math, analysis, and high-level reading and writing are important to every citizen, n

6、o matter what profession they later choose. Even if they are manual laborers, the ability to critically analyze problems taught in high school will make them better and more highly skilled workers. Beyond teaching practical skills to more local children, another high school will give children more o

7、pportunity to attend college. Holding a college degree is almost the only way a person can be assured of getting a stable, high paying job. Even a degree from a two or three year junior college can mean the ability to make a salary thousands of yuan annually higher than a high school diploma. Becaus

8、e our current high school is so small, many bright children with promising college careers ahead of them have no way of even obtaining the high school diploma! We must make sure the road to higher education remains open for as many young people as possible. Finally, if we cannot afford to open this

9、high school, our town will have a serious problem with the number of unemployed youths who graduate from middle school with nothing to do. If they cannot find good jobs, they might be tempted to commit crimes, use drugs, or, if they are girls, engage in prostitution. Giving these children another op

10、tion would both save them and help society.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：human activity improve or damage the earth托福写作难点话题一览Does human activity improve or damage the earth?Some people believe that the Earth is being harmed (damaged) by human activity. Others feel that human activity makes the Earth a bette

11、r place to live. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析看完题目大家先不要急于选择。其实两种观点无论是哪个都过于含混。Human activity指的是什么? 比如饮食起居，东南亚地区把某种海豚(dolphin)吃得almost extinct;美国人养宠物鹦鹉(parrot)，导致南美洲很多稀有品种(rare species)濒临灭绝;又比如科学研究，好的例子很多，比如电的发明;不好的也很多，克隆(clone)技术、基因重组(gene e

12、ngineering) 技术，可能导致道德(moral value)的沦丧(deteriorated; ruined); 诺贝尔的发明(炸药explosive)究竟杀 了多少人?塑料袋(plastic bags)的发明，导致了多少white pollution? 战争：从来都是灾难。生化武器，比如炭疽病毒(anthrax) 所以比较合理的结论应该是：人类的行为对地球的影响，有好的，也有坏的。很难说哪一种更多。大家可以从这个角度来展开。本话题高分范文赏析The environment is usually changed to benefit human life. Cars and roads

13、 make transportation fast and easy, factories make products that make our lives more comfortable, public services in cities like water treatment, electricity, and waste disposal make our lives more convenient. All of these advances, however, come with a significant environmental cost.Human activity

14、does significant damage to the Earth. One of the main effects of human activity on an area is water pollution. Dumping waste materials from human activity into rivers and streams is popular because the waste seems to disappear downstream. The main sources of water pollution are factory waste, oil an

15、d gas runoff from highways, and untreated human waste. When this waste dumped into rivers, the water downstream becomes undrinkable and unusable for agriculture, and also kills plant and animal life in the rivers. Clean air and water is a prerequisite not only for human life, but also for all life o

16、n the planet. But air is now being polluted by modern transportation, notably gas-powered automobiles, as well as electrical generators that burn fossil fuels and pour polluting chemical waste into the air. This makes the air much less healthy to breathe. The air-borne pollution also falls back to t

17、he earth in the form of acid rain, which destroys plant life and human buildings. Another serious long-term effect of air pollution is global warming. For the past several decades scientists have noted a disturbing rise in the average temperature of the earth that caused by the rise of greenhouse ga

18、ses, air pollutants created by burning fossil fuels, in the atmosphere. Scientists believe that if humans continue to increase the amount of greenhouse gases in the atmosphere, the temperature of the earth will continue to rise. Eventually, this could melt the polar ice caps and cause devastating co

19、stal flooding all over the world. Major cities like Hong Kong, Shanghai, and Dalian might be totally destroyed.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：personal lives of famous people托福写作难点话题一览Is it true that media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people?Do you agree or disagree with the followin

20、g statement? Television, newspapers, magazines, and other media pay too much attention to the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. Use specific reasons and details to explain your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析这个观点是比较片面的，当中忽略了一个大众的需求问题，所以选择不能同意这个观点。 有些媒体(大众传媒mass media)表现得过于关注

21、名人。但是真正的起因(the real cause)却是大众(the public; the broad masses of the people)本身大众过于关注名人以及名人的私生活。媒体不过是在迎合大众(cater to the needs of customers; 过去几年里, 电视一直迎合大众的口味。In the past several years, television has been playing to the gallery.)，因为媒体也是商业机构(commercial organization)， 也要盈利(profit-driving)。 不是所有媒体都在一味迎合大

22、众，也不是所有的television program, newspaper column都在关注名人。本话题高分范文赏析It is true that television programs concerning personal lives of celebrities always receive the highest audience rating. It is also true that newspapers and magazines are constantly reporting stories, which are usually beyond confirmation,

23、about famous people, and that autobiographies written by public figures are always on the top 10 best-sellers list. It seems that we live in a world where a few individuals are drawing nearly all attentions. Nevertheless, it is not exactly precise to criticize the mass media, including television, n

24、ewspapers, magazines and so forth, for paying too much focus on the personal lives of famous people such as public figures and celebrities. In fact, it is the public, to a large extent, rather than mass media, that is paying too much attention on personal lives of celebrities.Most organizations of m

25、ass media industry, being inherently commercial, are driven by business motivations. Television program producers, as well as columnists and writers, are always aware of what the public want to see, therefore tend to pander to tastes of the public. To put in another way, the mass media is audience-o

26、riented, and the phenomenon is well interpreted and manipulated that when famous people such as actors, athletes and rock stars give their opinions, many people listen. It is the nature of the public, who are curious enough about personal lives of famous people, since they can never be famous.On the

27、 other hand, it is holistically detrimental for the society if the mass media pay too much focus on famous few so as to ignore the rest of the individuals. After all, the mission of the mass media is not merely to cater to the needs of customers, but has a much wider scope, such as to tell the truth

28、, to define what is good and what is bad; to promote cultural values, and the list could be endless. More popular science programs should be produced by television, more reports on poor rural lives should be publicized, more books concerning not famous but respectable people such as, nurses who are fighting SARS fearlessly, teachers who are performing their duties regardless of poverty of remote villages, journalists who publicize their pieces under political menace, and this is another endless list should be written.提升托福写作的终极秘诀是什么 提升托福写作的终极秘诀是什么?今天小编给大家带来了提升托福写作的终极秘诀 ,希望能 第 13 页 共 13 页