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1、托福独立写作高分范文赏析汇总为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，小编给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：what makes a good boss托福写作难点话题一览What makes a good boss?What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.写作思路展开结构分析这道题目给出

2、的范围很大，而且和实际生活密切相关，考虑到托福中国考生主要以学生为主，很多人可能对老板这个概念其实并不太熟悉，缺乏足够的实际认识。大家可以从一些具有和老板类似性质的职务上来寻找灵感，比如学校里的老师领导，或是同学中的课代表之类的角色，都能从中得到一些参考。小编整理的一些比较常见的思路是：慷慨大方，有明确的发展思路，善于和员工交流沟通等等。本话题高分范文赏析A good boss is imperative to a successful workplace. The best bosses are serious, creative, and flexible. If a boss lacks

3、 any of these qualities, problems are certain to arise in the workplace.While humor and kindness are important characteristics for bosses to have, work is a serious business, and must be approached with a serious attitude. A boss must be able to keep his/her employees working hard and on schedule. H

4、e/She must set down rules, enforce them, and also personally adhere to them. If the boss comes in late to work, leaves early, or spends all day joking with the co-workers, then the employees will neither respect nor work hard for him/her. A boss must have a serious and professional attitude that set

5、s an example for all of the employees in the workplace.To confront the countless problems that arise every day in the workplace, a boss must be extremely creative. If a client needs the company to meet a deadline earlier than expected, a boss must find ways to motivate employees to work faster and h

6、arder. A boss who lacks creativity might force his/her employees to work overtime. In this case, the employees might be very tired and upset; they might work slower or produce lower quality work as a result. A creative boss might spend a small amount of money, and treat everyone to dinner at the off

7、ice to encourage employees to stay late. In this way the company might meet the deadline, preserve quality, and keep employee morale high.Finally, the most important quality that a good boss must possess is flexibility. While needing to set serious, strict rules, he/she must also recognize that at t

8、imes the rules need to be bent or broken. For instance, a boss should strictly enforce attendance policies in the workplace. But if an employee with an excellent attendance record needs to take a day off for personal reasons, the boss should let him/her do it. In this way employees loyalty to the co

9、mpany will be strengthened, and they will be more happy and productive in the workplace.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：small town or big city托福写作难点话题一览Live in a small town or in a big city?Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in

10、? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.写作思路展开结构分析考生完全可以结合自己的实际情况来写。两种选择的优缺点其实都是比较明显的。具体来看，生活在大城市的优缺点是信息发达、工作机会多、生活设施完善但是人情淡薄;而生活在小城镇的优缺点是环境温馨，安静，空气好;人们相互了解、友善但是信息闭塞、没有好的工作发展机会等等。当然大家也可以采取 it depends 的策略，不同的阶段有不同的偏好来展开同样也是不错的写法思路。本话题高分范文赏析People seldom agree with each other even in

11、 such trivial issues as preference between a big city and a small town. It s a little bit haste to say that it is better to live in a big city than in a small town, or vice versa.Living in a big city has several benefits. First, there re more job opportunities readily available in big cities than in

12、 a small town. Moreover, not merely are there more job positions in big cities and the qualities of the position are much higher as well. In addition, the pay is more decent. Second, children are supposed to be able to receive an education with a higher quality compared with their counterparts who l

13、ive in a small town. For families,children s education is always put in the first place. Finally, living in a big city usually has a superior living standard to that in a small town. There are more commodities and services in city markets; there are more public utilities available in big cities; the

14、re are even much more television channels in big cities.However, living in a small town also has some advantages. People who live in a small town often have a much comfortable life style. Most of them do not have to suffer high working stress. Although the average pay is much less than that of big c

15、ities, the price of daily necessities, such as vegetables or meat, is usually less expensive. Instead of suffering loneliness which is prevalent in big cities, children might grow up more healthily because of harmonious relationship among residents in small town. People in a small town do not have t

16、o get up so early in the morning because there has been no traffic jam, and nobody drive so fast in a small town as to cause car accidents. They might have fewer channels in television, but they have more friends readily available to chat or entertain with.According to my current situation, although

17、 I am longing for the cozy atmosphere and relationship among neighbors and friends which almost only exist in small cities, I have chosen to live in one of the biggest cities in my countryBeijing, since I have found a pretty good job here, and a decent pay. I think I would prefer living in a small t

18、own when I get retired one day.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：luck or hard work托福写作难点话题一览Does luck have anything to do with success?“When people succeed, it is because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with success.” Do you agree or disagree with the quotation above? Use specific reasons and examples to e

19、xplain your position.写作思路展开结构分析首先题目里的nothing to do有点太过极端了。很明显是出题者给大家挖的坑，即使同意这个观点考生也不能太过武断，要避免观点太过绝对和偏颇。所以建议大家选择的态度是不能完全同意也不能完全不同意，如果要同意立场尽量维持在“很大程度上同意”会比较好。考生可以指出luck确实存在，然后展开说可能导致人们成功的若干原因：诚实、睿智、幽默;执著;肯于做不喜欢的事情等等。本话题高分范文赏析Here is a true story, a story about an African man called Cinque who slew a m

20、ost terrifying beast that any one has ever seen, a lion. His siblings in the village who know about this anecdote gave him great respect and call him the big man. However, he told the truth later. It had killed several people, even hunters among us. Everyone including me was afraid. I was lying down

21、 with my family, when out of nowhere it appeared. As it came for me, I picked up a big rock and I threw it. And that wasn t bravery, because any man would do the same to protect his family. But by some miracle, you see, I hit it. I don t know how that killed it, but it did. A rock, you see, a rock.

22、I received the gratitude of everyone in the village. I was given respect. They treated me as if I was a prince. They gave me the finest country cloth. All these things they gave me, I took them all. But I knew I didn t deserve it, for when I threw that rock at that beast, if I missed it, I wouldn t

23、be sitting here today trying to explain these things to you or somebody else, I d just be dead. I m not a big man, just a lucky one. You see, luck does exist. When it appears, mathematicians describe in such a way that something has an extremely small probability but it does happen. People often say

24、, one has to have an opportunity to succeed. In this case, luck is the opportunity, and to some extent is an indispensable factor to achieve success.When people say luck has nothing to do with success, I wonder it is not their intention to deny existence of luck, but to encourage. Because luck in fa

25、ct is a factor that one can not and should not count on, even though we know people who have succeeded have their own luck. It is somewhere, but nobody knows where. It happens sometime, but we don t know when. By contrast, hard work is something that everyone can count on, and as is often the case,

26、hard work might bring luck. Therefore, luck itself is of no hope, and lack of luck should not be an excuse to failure.托福独立写作难点话题思路解读和高分范文赏析：universities finance students托福写作难点话题一览Should universities finance students sports activities equally as libraries?Do you agree or disagree with the following s

27、tatement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students sports activities as they give to their university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.写作思路展开结构分析不能完全同意。 same 是一件做不到的事情。普通大学，应该或更多的钱在图书馆上;而体育专科大学，当然应该花更多的钱在体育设施上。资金分配的重要原则是产出应该大于投入，而大学的办学原则

28、是要better brains;也要better bodies.另外，从资金投入的角度来说，资金分配问题中关于资金的有效运用(efficiency of money allocation)的重要体现是投入产出比(input-output ratio)。即便是nonprofit-making organization也要保证资金的投入产出的平衡(balance of input and output)。本话题高分范文赏析The main responsibility of a university is to develop a student s academic ability. While

29、 physical health is an important prerequisite for mental health and academic achievement, sports should play a comparatively small role in college student s lives. Since a student s main activity outside of the classroom is studying, occupying from four to eight hours of their day, a peaceful studyi

30、ng environment plays an important role in a student s academic development. College dorm rooms can have up to eight students sleeping in one small room and are not good environments for students to study in. To provide excellent studying environments for their students, universities must build large

31、 libraries designed to accommodate students as well as books. Since sports should occupy a much smaller part of the student s time, perhaps only an hour a day, sports facilities need not be as extensive or well-equipped as libraries. In addition to the costs of building adequate library faculties, a

32、 university must also pay every year to keep its collection well organized and up-to-date. The goal of every university library should be to have the most current books and materials its students need in order to study and do cutting edge research. The larger the student body, the more comprehensive

33、 a library s collection must be. A well-trained staff must also care for the materials and help the students. Continuing costs for sports, on the other hand, are relatively low, requiring only a few part-time staff and maintenance routines. For the most part, students are happy to organize their own

34、 sporting events and exercise routines quite independently of the school. Although a student s health is critical to their academic success, the investment that a school needs to make to ensure a physically fit student body is relatively small. Considering that the main mission of the school is to d

35、evelop a student s mind and not their body, the school should put more of its resources into its libraries and not its sports activities.托福考试作文范文 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，小编给大家整理一些托福考试作文范文，下面小编就和大 托福写作高分满分范文 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，小编给大家整理了托福考试满分范文,下面小编就和大家 托福写作考试5个常见的语法失分点 托福写作考试5个常见的语法失分点有哪些?你有踩雷吗?快来一起看看吧，下面小编就和大 2020托福写作范文赏析TOEFL 为了让大家更好的准备托福考试，小编给大家整理一些托福写作范文，下面小编就和大家分 第 15 页 共 15 页