中考英语高分作文秘诀.ppt

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1、学习目标学习目标 1.了解写作的篇章技巧，使文章具有整体性。 2.掌握常用的连接词或句型，令作文更有灵气 3.通过学和练提高写作的技巧和自信。作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。作文一律按档给分，与错误个数无直接关系。1 题目要求、内容要点；题目要求、内容要点；2 句子准确、通顺；句子准确、通顺；3 层次结构清晰；层次结构清晰；4 拼写、语法等错误；拼写、语法等错误；5 卷面整洁度；卷面整洁度； 我们把写作分我们把写作分4步。步。 第一步是第一步是审审（审题）。（审题）。 第二步是第二步是定定（定观点、定人称、定时态）。（定观点、定人称、定时态）。 第三步是第三步是连连（连词成句，连句成篇

2、。把自己想出的（连词成句，连句成篇。把自己想出的单词句子连起来，其中要用到过渡句型比如，单词句子连起来，其中要用到过渡句型比如，first of all , whats more, however, although 等等）。等等）。第四步是第四步是查查 （检查有没有拼写错误，标点错误）。（检查有没有拼写错误，标点错误）。*总之做到总之做到三审三审：体裁、时态、人称；：体裁、时态、人称；三思三思：词汇：词汇短语短语句式；句式；三查三查：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。：要点、拼写和语法、连贯。 文章分文章分3段：段：（1）综述：）综述：概括性强，最多概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；句话引入主题；（2）正

3、文）正文主要内容：主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开连接词。最多展开3个方面，每个方面最多个方面，每个方面最多2句话；句话；（3）结尾：）结尾：紧扣主题，紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。句话内结束，尽量升华。Revision 记叙文的写作要素记叙文的写作要素 议论文和说明文要素议论文和说明文要素 应用文写作要素应用文写作要素记叙文的写作要素： 5W 1H When Where Who What 开门见山，交待事情的. How Why 说明事情的经过，描述原因 What 总结议论文和说明文要素: 2W 1H What-提出观点 （文章的中心句） Why-

4、论述观点 （正面和反面或多方面） How如何做 （围绕观点，说明要求） What总结全文 （观点首尾呼应）Revision 记叙文的写作要素：记叙文的写作要素：5W 1H 议论文和说明文要素议论文和说明文要素: 2W 1H 应用文写作要素应用文写作要素: 基于5W 1H 根据具体要求来确定中考作文高分秘诀中考作文高分秘诀 1. 谋篇布局谋篇布局 写好篇章结构写好篇章结构 2. 运用连接词运用连接词 赋予语言灵气赋予语言灵气范文1： 在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务在日常生活中你主动帮助你的父母做家务活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇活吗？请你根据提示用英语写一篇80字左字左右的短文，右的短文，

5、描述描述你平时所做你平时所做家务家务以及你对以及你对家务的家务的看法看法。提示：提示：1.扔垃圾扔垃圾 2. 扫地扫地 3. 帮助妈妈做饭帮助妈妈做饭 4.洗衣服洗衣服 5. 为花浇水为花浇水 6. 饭后洗碗饭后洗碗要求：语句通畅，语法正确。要求：语句通畅，语法正确。 不得逐句翻译。不得逐句翻译。谋篇布局写好篇章结构满分作文满分作文 （10分）分） As we all know, its important to help parents do housework during our daily life. I often help them do housework. I throw th

6、e rubbish away and clean the floor in the morning. I help my mother cook lunch . After supper, I always wash dishes . I think it can make my parents feel more enjoyable after work. I always wash clothes for my family. Besides, watering the flowers is also my duty. I like them very much and take good

7、 care of them. In a word, the more housework I do, the happier my parents will be.（即总括又阐明看法）（即总括又阐明看法） 谋篇布局写好篇章结构 Middle 正文Ending 结尾concluding sentence 结论句-对全文的总结和概括。supporting sentences支持句-用例子、实事或数据围绕主题开展叙述、讨论topic sentence 主题句主题句 -说出文中的要点、核心问题Beginning开头开头Good beginning is half done.1. 仔细审题，提炼和归纳主

8、题句2. 开头万能句型：1) .plays an important part in the.2) As we all know, . becomes more and more.3) As everybody knows, .is one of the most.in . 4) Many people say that. But I dont think so.5) I will never forget the .Make a topic sentence.As everybody knows, smoking is bad for our health. 1、SmokingAs we a

9、ll know, smoking is a bad habit.Many students say smoking is fun, but I dontthink so. Make a topic sentence.Many people say that Christmas is more popular than the Spring Festival. But I dont think so. I will never forget the Spring Festival.The Spring Festival plays an important partin our life. 2.

10、 The Spring FestivalMake a topic sentence.As we all know, English becomes more and more popular/ important.Many people say its difficult to learn English.But I dont think so. 3. Learning EnglishMake a topic sentence.4. To be a volunteer for the Beijing Olympic 5. A School TripAs we all know, the Bei

11、jing Olympic Game is coming soon. I want to be a volunteer for it.A volunteer plays an important part in the games. I will never forget the school trip last week.1. 与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点与开头呼应，再次重申自己的观点, 注意避注意避免重复句式。免重复句式。2. 结尾经典词组、句型：结尾经典词组、句型： At last/ Finally . 最后 In a word, . 总而言之 In short, . 简言之 We ho

12、pe that 我们希望 Lets try our best to . I believe if we can., . will be . What a .! / How.!结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应结尾画龙点睛，首尾呼应Make a concluding sentenceKeeping healthyHelping others Lets try our best to keep healthy. In short, its important to have good habits and keep healthy.I believe if we can help others, the wo

13、rld will be more and more beautiful.Make a concluding sentenceBeijingTo be a green consumer Lets try our best to be a green consumer. In one word, its necessary for us to protect the environment.How beautiful Beijing is!Why not come to Beijing and enjoy yourself?范文范文2：2007年天津市书面表达考题年天津市书面表达考题 日前日前,由

14、教育部由教育部,国家体育总局国家体育总局,共青团中央联合共青团中央联合举办举办“全国亿万少年阳光体育运动全国亿万少年阳光体育运动” 启动仪式启动仪式,其影响巨大其影响巨大,意义深远意义深远.你你在本校在本校参加了此项活动参加了此项活动,请根据表格中所给请根据表格中所给信息信息写一篇英语短文写一篇英语短文.内容内容感想感想1.学校师生收看了启动仪式学校师生收看了启动仪式;2.开展了一个小时的集体体育开展了一个小时的集体体育活动活动,如如;跑步跑步,做操做操,打篮球等打篮球等1.锻炼有利于强健身锻炼有利于强健身体体;2. 运动使大脑休息运动使大脑休息,学习效率更高学习效率更高.3. 每天锻炼一小时

15、每天锻炼一小时,幸福生活一辈子幸福生活一辈子.注意注意:1.词数词数80100 个左右个左右.2.短文的开头已为你写好短文的开头已为你写好,不计入总词数不计入总词数.3.短文须包括所有内容要点短文须包括所有内容要点,但不要逐句翻译但不要逐句翻译,可适可适当加入细节当加入细节,可适度发挥可适度发挥,使短文通顺使短文通顺,连贯连贯.4. 文中不得使用真实姓名文中不得使用真实姓名,校名校名.参考词汇：参考词汇：the launching ceremony 启动仪式启动仪式build up ones body strength 强身健体强身健体More effective 效果更好效果更好 “Mill

16、ions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007.The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony . After that, all of us went to the playground. We had different kinds of sports for an hour. Some took part in running, some played ba

17、sketball and football, and some did exercises. We enjoyed doing sports so much that we all forgot the time. We really had a good time. 学生满分范文优秀范文讲评优秀范文讲评 l 该文结构严谨该文结构严谨, 思维清晰。思维清晰。l 在内容及感想间使用了不同的时态在内容及感想间使用了不同的时态:一般一般 过去时及一般现在时。过去时及一般现在时。l 发挥适度发挥适度,长句短句交叉使用长句短句交叉使用,句式赋于变句式赋于变化化,用词得体用词得体,有很强的可读性有很强的可

18、读性, 做到了做到了naturally and clearly.正文：语言简洁，层次分明正文：语言简洁，层次分明1. 长句短句交叉使用最好。长句短句交叉使用最好。2. 基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文基础一般的同学要尽量使用简单句，文章算不上完美，但很实用。章算不上完美，但很实用。3. 把握要点，层次清晰。把握要点，层次清晰。4. 注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，注意句子与句子、段与段之间过渡自然，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词，行文连贯，注意适当使用连词， 例如：例如：and ,so ,or, but, become等等。等等。正文：正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气1

19、）Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly 2）first, then/next, after that/ next, finally3) soon, suddenly, at that moment , as soon as, from now on, at the same time, not.until, before, after, when , while, duringnot only. but also, both. and, either .or, neither.nor，on (the) one handon the other hand1）for example

20、 2）besides / whats more/ whats worse however, but，although, instead of thanks to, because of，because as result (of) , so ，so.that, such.that, in order to, so that the same as, than, of all . Which sentence is better?1. I played football on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs. 2. When I was

21、playing football on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs. 正文：正文：巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气巧用连接词，赋予语言灵气( good)(better)句式富于变化句式富于变化1. We are good friends. We should help each other. 2.We are good friends and we should help each other. 3. As we are good friends , we should help each other. ( best)( good)(bet

22、ter)1. I was deeply moved and I couldnt say a word. (good )2. I was_ moved _ say a word. (better)句式富于变化句式富于变化too to写作训练写作训练 生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有有朋友的爱，有老师的爱朋友的爱，有老师的爱.请以请以“Love”为话题，简要描为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。述一件发生在你身边的事。要求：要求：1、语言规范，书写工整。、语言规范，书写工整。2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）个词左右（开头已给出

23、，不计入总词数）3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名 Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also means understanding._ Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love. Love also mean

24、s understanding. One day, I played football with my classmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “ We are good friends, we should help each other.” I was deeply moved.

25、I couldnt say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.范 文 There is a lot of love around us. One day, when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “ As we are good friends, we should help each other.” I was too moved to say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.