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1、 2009 高考英语书面表达专题 写作指导与训练写作指导与训练1. 内容部分审题内容部分审题 1）细审文体）细审文体 2）编拟提纲）编拟提纲 3）列出要点）列出要点2. 语言部分语言部分1）使用较复杂的语法结构）使用较复杂的语法结构 2）使用高级词汇替换普通词汇）使用高级词汇替换普通词汇3. 组织结构组织结构 使用连接词语句连接使用连接词语句连接作文分类作文分类1. 说明文：知识介绍说明文：知识介绍 商品介绍商品介绍 说明书说明书 内容提要内容提要2. 应用文应用文: 求职信求职信 通知通知 请假条请假条3. 记叙文记叙文: 日记日记 游记游记 传记传记 新闻通讯新闻通讯 演说演说 书信书信4

2、. 议论文议论文5. 图表类作文图表类作文 写作指导与训练写作指导与训练n内容部分审题内容部分审题- 细审文体细审文体训练训练1：下列作文分别属于哪一类文体确定作文的人称和时态：下列作文分别属于哪一类文体确定作文的人称和时态假设你是李华，在美国探亲。假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000年年2月月8日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。一份材料，报告当时所见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。 n内容部分审题内容部分审题-细审文体细审文体 写作指导与训练写作指导与训练训练训练2：下列作文分别属于哪一类文体：下列

3、作文分别属于哪一类文体 主要人称主要人称 和时态和时态）假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。）请你谈谈轿车大量进入家庭后，对家庭，环境和经济可能产生的影响。 赞成迁出： 反对迁出： 1游客多，交通堵塞2郊区环境好 1建于1906年，中外闻名2搬迁易造成动物死亡 写作指导与训练写作指导与训练n内容部分审题内容部分审题-细审文体细审文体 训练一：根据下面表格以训练一：根据下面表格以“Changes in Peoples Diet ”为题为题编拟提纲。编拟提纲。 19861987198819891990Gr

4、ain 49%47%46.5%45%45%Milk10%11%11%12%13%Meat17%20%22.5%23%21%Fruit and vegetables24%22%20%20%21%Total100% 100% 100%100% 100%编拟提纲：（1）state the changes in peoples diet in the past five years;（2）give possible reasons for the changes;（3）draw your own conclusions.写作指导与训练写作指导与训练n内容部分审题内容部分审题- 编拟提纲编拟提纲 写作指

5、导与训练写作指导与训练Diet is very important in peoples life. From 1986 to 1990, peoples diet changed a lot. Grain was no longer regarded as the main food. And as the proportion(比例) of fruit and vegetable declined, the consumption of milk and meat increased. What caused these changes? There are two reasons. On

6、e is that with the development of science, people began to realize the importance of maintaining a balanced diet. The other is that people had more money to spend and could afford more expensive food. They tried to change their low-priced diet into a more varied one. They were eager to build up a st

7、rong body by improving their living standards. With the development of our economy and improvement of our food supply, further changes will take place in peoples diet.写作指导与训练写作指导与训练n训练二：根据2003年的考题内容“ 你的好友因家庭一般而买不起名牌而闷闷不乐。 给他写封信， 谈谈你的看法和建议。”编写一个写作提纲提纲：一写信谈名牌二名牌吸引眼球但不切实际会加重家庭负担三除了名牌还有很多东西让你更受欢迎四千万不要追求

8、外表的东西 内容部分审题内容部分审题-列出要点列出要点 训练题：假设你是李越训练题：假设你是李越,你的加拿大笔友你的加拿大笔友Steve来信来信说说,他和他的一些同学正在学中文他和他的一些同学正在学中文,请你推荐两本学中文请你推荐两本学中文的词典，根据下表提供的信息的词典，根据下表提供的信息,请你给他写一封回信请你给他写一封回信.英汉英汉/汉英词典汉英词典新华字典新华字典 收词收词(字字) 18,000(英语英语) 20,000(汉语汉语) 10,000 价格价格 52元元 11元元 特点特点 大量例子、用法说明大量例子、用法说明,适合初适合初学者学者 中国最常用的汉中国最常用的汉语字典语字典

9、 写作指导与训练写作指导与训练 内容部分审题内容部分审题-列出要点列出要点1、这种英汉、汉英的方式使得学生能更方便地查找参照词。、这种英汉、汉英的方式使得学生能更方便地查找参照词。、这本字典实际上是、这本字典实际上是“双向双向”字典：一半是英汉，一半是汉英，字典：一半是英汉，一半是汉英，分别拥有分别拥有20,000个汉字和个汉字和18,000英语单词。英语单词。、这本字典大约有、这本字典大约有10,000字。字。、英汉部分的英语单词后面都有相对应的汉语。、英汉部分的英语单词后面都有相对应的汉语。、所有的汉字都有英语翻译，这些翻译有助于更精确地理解汉字。、所有的汉字都有英语翻译，这些翻译有助于更

10、精确地理解汉字。、尽管没有小本的、尽管没有小本的新华字典新华字典那样容易携带，那样容易携带，英汉英汉/汉英汉英字字典还是更受学生们的欢迎。典还是更受学生们的欢迎。、对于常见的单词来说，它还含有充足的例子。、对于常见的单词来说，它还含有充足的例子。、它提供了大量的用法注解。、它提供了大量的用法注解。写作指导与训练写作指导与训练9、它有相当多的例句和注解。、它有相当多的例句和注解。10、由于其易用和全面，我也经常使用这本字典。、由于其易用和全面，我也经常使用这本字典。11、我向所有中文学习者推荐这本字典。、我向所有中文学习者推荐这本字典。12、因为它拥有其他字典不曾拥有的东西，所以我说它很有用。、

11、因为它拥有其他字典不曾拥有的东西，所以我说它很有用。13、平均三个中国人就有一个拥有这本字典。、平均三个中国人就有一个拥有这本字典。14、总体上说，它特别有用，是本很有价值的字典。、总体上说，它特别有用，是本很有价值的字典。15、与其他字典相比，这本字典十分有用。、与其他字典相比，这本字典十分有用。16、总而言之，要选汉语字典，这是最好的选择之一。、总而言之，要选汉语字典，这是最好的选择之一。 内容部分审题内容部分审题-列出要点列出要点写作指导与训练写作指导与训练1、The English-Chinese, Chinese-English format makes it convenient

12、for students to cross-reference words.2、This dictionary is actually a two-way dictionary: one half is English/Chinese and the other half is Chinese/English, containing some 20,000 Chinese words and 18,000 English words.3、This dictionary has roughly 10,000 words.4、The E/C section has the English word

13、 followed by the Chinese equivalent.5、All Chinese characters are followed by English translation, which helps you understand the characters more accurately.6、While not as portable as the smaller XD, the E/C C/E was more warmly welcomed by my students.7、For common words it also includes efficient exa

14、mples.8、It provides lots of usage notes. 内容部分审题内容部分审题-列出要点列出要点写作指导与训练写作指导与训练9、It has a good number of example sentences with necessary usage notes.10、I use this dictionary a lot due to its ease of use and its completeness.11、I highly recommend this dictionary for all learners of mandarin Chinese lan

15、guage.12、I have found this dictionary to be very helpful because it has what many Chinese dictionaries do not have.13、On average, one in three Chinese own a copy of the dictionary.14、Overall, it is extremely useful and a good value.15、This dictionary is incredibly useful comparing to other ones. 16、

16、In short, its one of your best options for a Chinese dictionary. 内容部分审题内容部分审题-列出要点列出要点写作指导与训练写作指导与训练写作指导与训练写作指导与训练1. 内容部分审题内容部分审题 1）细审文体）细审文体 2）编拟提纲）编拟提纲 3）列出要点）列出要点2. 语言部分1）使用较复杂的语法结构 2）使用高级词汇替换普通词汇3. 组织结构组织结构 使用连接词语句连接使用连接词语句连接 1. 改变时态改变时态The bell is ringing now. (一般一般)There goes the bell. (There

17、goes the bell. (高级高级) )2. 改变语态改变语态People suggest that the conference be put off. (一般一般)It is suggested that the conference be put off.It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级高级) 语言部分语言部分-使用较复杂的语法结构使用较复杂的语法结构写作指导与训练写作指导与训练3. 使用不定式使用不定式He is so kind that he can help me. (一般一般)He is so kind

18、as to help me.He is so kind as to help me. (高级高级)4. 使用过去分词使用过去分词She walked out of the room and many students followed her. (一般一般)Followed by many students, she .Followed by many students, she . (高级高级) 语言部分语言部分-使用较复杂的语法结构使用较复杂的语法结构写作指导与训练写作指导与训练nWhen he arrives please give me an e-mail. (一般一般)5. 使用使用

19、v-ing形式形式If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow. (一般一般)On his arriving/ arrival, please give.On his arriving/ arrival, please give. (高级高级)Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow.Weather permitting, Ill come tomorrow. (高级高级) 语言部分语言部分-使用较复杂的语法结构使用较复杂的语法结构写作指导与训练写作指导与训练6. 使用名词性从句使用名词性从句It disappointed

20、 everybody that he didnt turn up. (一般一般)The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.everybody. (高级高级)To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things. (一般一般)What surprised him is that the girl.What surprised him is that the girl. (高级高级) 语言部分

21、语言部分-使用较复杂的语法结构使用较复杂的语法结构写作指导与训练写作指导与训练7. 使用状语从句使用状语从句If you come back before six oclock, you can go out. (一般一般)No matter what he says, I wont believe.No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高级高级)You can go out on condition that you come back You can go out on condition that you come back before.be

22、fore. (高级高级)I wont believe what he says. (一般一般) 语言部分语言部分-使用较复杂的语法结构使用较复杂的语法结构写作指导与训练写作指导与训练8. 8. 使用定语从句使用定语从句The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般一般)The girl whose composition was well written was The girl whose composition was well written was spoken highly of.spoken h

23、ighly of. (高级高级) 9. 使用虚拟语气使用虚拟语气I wasnt invited to the party, so I didnt attend it. (一般一般)If I had been invited to the party, I would have If I had been invited to the party, I would have attended it.attended it. (高级高级) 语言部分语言部分-使用较复杂的语法结构使用较复杂的语法结构写作指导与训练写作指导与训练10. 10. 使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句使用强调句、倒装句、感叹句Reg

24、ular radio broadcasts began in 1920. (一般一般)It was not until 1920 that regular radio.It was not until 1920 that regular radio. (高级高级)Weak as I am, Ill make the effort.Weak as I am, Ill make the effort. (高级高级)Though Im weak, I will make the effort. (一般一般)How glad we were to see the crops and.!How glad

25、 we were to see the crops and.! (高级高级)We were glad to see the crops and vegetables growing very well. (一般一般) 语言部分语言部分-使用较复杂的语法结构使用较复杂的语法结构写作指导与训练写作指导与训练1. Fireworks that light up the sky at night and crackers that _(be suitable for ) the crowds during the day are necessary for adults as well as chil

26、dren. 2. But they may also find some _ ( something to think about) in addition to entertainment. matchfood for thought 语言部分语言部分-使用使用较高级词汇使用使用较高级词汇写作指导与训练写作指导与训练3. “Humorist!” she cried _ (happily), jumping into a taxi. 4. The second half the 20th century saw great changes in the city. Skyscrapers _(

27、 have been built quickly); 5. They had the blush of an _ ( not having much experience of bad things) girl; they had the _ ( low and pleasant ) tone of an Italian landscape. merrilyhave sprung upinnocentrich 语言部分语言部分-使用使用较高级词汇使用使用较高级词汇写作指导与训练写作指导与训练6., it represents the _( highest level) of Chinese a

28、rchitecture, 7. We need the will and the wisdom to _ (use) tools. 8. Thus, the penguins were _ (rob) of their natural habitat. peakapplydeprived 语言部分语言部分-使用使用较高级词汇使用使用较高级词汇写作指导与训练写作指导与训练写作指导与训练写作指导与训练1. 内容部分审题内容部分审题 1）细审文体）细审文体 2）编拟提纲）编拟提纲 3）列出要点）列出要点2. 语言部分语言部分1）使用较复杂的语法结构）使用较复杂的语法结构 2）使用高级词汇替换普通词汇

29、）使用高级词汇替换普通词汇3. 组织结构组织结构1使用连接词语句连接使用连接词语句连接 1. 表示平行、对等或选择关系表示平行、对等或选择关系 and，bothand, as well as, together with, neithernor, also, not onlybut also, eitheror, as well.2. 表示转折关系表示转折关系 but, yet, however, nevertheless (然而然而), in spite of, although, otherwise, while, after all. 组织结构组织结构 恰当使用连接成分恰当使用连接成分写

30、作指导与训练写作指导与训练3. 表示对比关系表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand, just like, unlike, in the same way, at the same time4. 表示因果关系表示因果关系 so, for, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account (理由理由) of. 组织结构组织结构 恰当使用连接成分恰当使用连接成分写作指导与训练写作指导与训练n5. 表示时

31、间、顺序关系表示时间、顺序关系 shortly afterwards, first, second, then, next, finally, for one thing, for another, in the end, eventually(最后最后, 终于终于) 6. 表示递进、强调关系表示递进、强调关系 besides, furthermore (此外此外), whats more, in addition, moreover (而且而且), worse still, to make matters worse, indeed, certainly, surely, above all

32、 组织结构组织结构 恰当使用连接成分恰当使用连接成分写作指导与训练写作指导与训练7. 表示解释、说明关系表示解释、说明关系namely (也就是也就是), actually, such as, for example, for instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this8. 表示结论表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, in general, as you know, as far as I know, on the w

33、hole, in conclusion, at last, finally 组织结构组织结构 恰当使用连接成分恰当使用连接成分写作指导与训练写作指导与训练Summary: 小结 1） Read the instructions carefully and decide the style. 明审题明审题 2）Follow typical patterns 列提纲列提纲 List the key points. 列要点列要点 3）Put the key points into sentences. 选句型选句型 4）Develop the sentences into passage 妙联句妙联句 5）Check. 细复查细复查 Thank You for your attention!